Recent Reviews for Deborah L Logan
A Prayer (Article) - 12/11/2002 10:38:07 PM|
a beautiful prayer. makes me wonder if ppl pray that for me--hope someone does.
To You (Poetry) - 5/12/2003 2:02:45 PM
To You (Poetry) - 5/12/2003 12:20:50 PM
let it out, girl,
scream, shout, throw things,
(soft things), swear, swear off
reationships.become a recluse . . .
other wise you could end up carrying a torch
for forty years for a creep who is not
worth two tears...
trust me, been there got the tourch burns ...
your expression is good
clearly expressing your
state of mind . . . . .
Hideous (Poetry) - 5/6/2003 10:38:00 AM
Ever read the tell-tale heart by Poe? A Lot of this comes from that story. I wont tell you what this is referring to, I will let you get your own meaning from it.
Hideous (Poetry) - 5/5/2003 9:35:15 AM
Deborah, I don't know what it is all about but it is very well written. I've read it four time and I'm getting four different meanings. I'll have to read it a few more.
Something (Poetry) - 4/28/2003 5:56:26 PM
Something (Poetry) - 4/28/2003 11:23:55 AM
Oh wow, such strong words, I know the feelings...
Very well-written and expressive piece :)
Something (Poetry) - 4/28/2003 10:14:05 AM
Agree with the expression thing :) Woooh! Well said. Teresa
Important (Poetry) - 4/24/2003 5:01:00 PM
Bittersweet excellance that I to can feel kindred with!
Important (Poetry) - 4/24/2003 1:16:56 PM
Sweetly done, in spite of being bittersweet.
Important (Poetry) - 4/24/2003 12:40:42 PM
Important (Poetry) - 4/24/2003 10:10:47 AM
...Emotions that lighted a heart to reasoning,
and to poemize their meaning as they came...
"Important"... They were to be poetized with
words and become a true poem.
I Salute the Author of "Important".
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben_YEHU
Jesus (Poetry) - 4/15/2003 8:47:47 AM
wow! outstanding! i am so glad i accepted jesus as my lord and saviour! :) (((HUGS)))
Jesus (Poetry) - 4/15/2003 8:16:32 AM
Lost (Poetry) - 2/14/2003 10:13:53 AM
Deborah, so much pain inside of you. I guess this day only increse the pain you
feel inside. Bill Murray
Lost (Poetry) - 2/14/2003 9:51:51 AM
So much pain and sadness and on a day dedicated to love. Still well written.
Deeply (Poetry) - 2/12/2003 12:31:37 PM
oO Deep and good. ^_^ I should read your old poems more often.
Door (Poetry) - 2/12/2003 12:26:12 PM
Hey, I like this one Debbs. It's short but still nice and angsty. ^_~
Lights (Poetry) - 2/5/2003 10:19:36 AM
Yes so much in love and so beautiful. Bill Murray
Lights (Poetry) - 2/5/2003 9:25:44 AM
Sweet sensational!!! clap clap clap...cheers...love n luck...BHUWAN
Lights (Poetry) - 2/5/2003 8:44:30 AM
Oh this is so beautiful and in love.
Eyes (Poetry) - 1/6/2003 6:25:22 PM
Eyes (Poetry) - 1/6/2003 10:01:59 AM
Great write Deborah. What is it about the eyes that makes us want to write. I myself just posted a short story entitled "Eyes". Keep on writing.
Music (Poetry) - 12/16/2002 8:22:59 AM
I like this Deborah and could feel the emotions of song. Bill Murray
Music (Poetry) - 12/15/2002 2:38:41 PM
Very well done, Deborah. The words you speak of love will always remain true. It is odd how we as humans can treasure that emotion above all others. It has such curative power. Glad to see you put it into poetry to share.
The Truth (Poetry) - 12/11/2002 10:27:32 PM
Lost Faith (Poetry) - 12/11/2002 10:24:01 PM
when i feel mad at God or jsut really confused about stuff that "shouldn't" be happening to me, i like to listen to Rich Mullens' song "Hard to Get". It's not one of those silly, preachy Christian songs (don't those get REALLY annoying??). Some really good lyrics are "Did You forget about us after You had flown away? Well, I memorized every word You said. Still I'm so scared I'm holdin' my breath, while You're up there just playing hard to get."
Ink (Poetry) - 12/11/2002 10:17:52 PM
i've felt like that too. but sometimes i forget to write and that is worse.
Ink (Poetry) - 12/6/2002 6:32:36 PM
Too perfect.. too true. Your heart writes of words that can never be spoken my dear. I love you. *~Ashes~*
Ink (Poetry) - 12/3/2002 9:44:03 AM
excellent portrayal of emotions
To Everyone That I Love (revised) (Poetry) - 11/27/2002 11:42:43 AM
This writing is like an expose of your Soul.
How great I think it is. I will have to read it more than once. There us too much for my old brain to digest at one time. You are indeed a writer dear. Bill
To Everyone That I Love (revised) (Poetry) - 11/27/2002 11:10:38 AM
*insert moan of .. well you know .. here*
To Everyone That I Love (revised) (Poetry) - 11/27/2002 8:52:37 AM
this is awesome, the flow the imagry, just great. let it out, let it flow, keep at it, you have touched my soul, and I for one approve. well done
Words (Poetry) - 11/26/2002 7:07:11 AM
Very good write,,,Lisa
Storytime (Poetry) - 11/25/2002 9:58:32 AM
What can I say... all is well in La La Land. Forever yours, *~Ashes~*
Storytime (Poetry) - 11/25/2002 8:40:17 AM
Sometimes we find the whole story written between the lines. And the surface meaningless and unworthy of remembering. You and I am other feel this same thing. So
it can't be bad can it? Bill
Storytime (Poetry) - 11/25/2002 7:21:08 AM
More often than not reading between the lines will strengthen both parties. But first the reader must understand the reason. Great write!
Storytime (Poetry) - 11/25/2002 7:04:14 AM
emotion very nicely portraid
Lost Faith (Poetry) - 11/22/2002 12:38:51 PM
(((DEBORAH))) God loves you, NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE OR WHAT YOU MAY HAVE DONE!! he loves YOU. end of statement. i am sorry you don't feel worthy of His Love, but HE LOVES ALL MAN!! GOOD OR BAD, HE LOVES EVERYONE!! you are in my prayers!! love, and (((MANY HUGS))), your friend, karen lynn. >tears <
Lost Faith (Poetry) - 11/22/2002 11:58:29 AM
ohhhh, (((deborah))) God loves you for you, no matte what you are or what you did...He loves YOU. i'm sorry you're feeling worthless...He loved even me. (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(
A Tale of Us (Poetry) - 11/22/2002 6:34:01 AM
Very well spun tale indeed.
A Tale of Us (Poetry) - 11/22/2002 6:26:29 AM
it is a complicated tale
a tale spun many times
but never this well told
Caught Between Lovers (Poetry) - 11/21/2002 10:07:20 AM
your writing is amazing
Escape (Poetry) - 11/21/2002 10:05:18 AM
i know how you feel... i was thinking the same thing just the other day...
Escape (Poetry) - 11/21/2002 8:55:45 AM
I am with David on this. It is very powerful and I hope only a view of things you imagine.
Escape (Poetry) - 11/21/2002 8:17:54 AM
Powerful. I felt the despair. I hope it's not literal.
How? (Poetry) - 11/19/2002 11:13:48 AM
The painful days you describe should not ever happen, no matter what the good days bring. Don't foster a relationship with a sadistic animal in any way. Doing so drags you done to his level and makes you less than human. And that is the objective. Bill
How? (Poetry) - 11/19/2002 8:14:42 AM
Deb, excellent question here and one needs to know which in this relationship which one happens more often. Never let the painful out number the good days. Nice write.
Caught Between Lovers (Poetry) - 11/18/2002 11:11:29 AM
"Donít hold me if you donít want my heart
And if I cant have yours I will turn away,"
I loved these lines. Please don't play with my heart! Right. What a truthful statement you make here. I really hope you have better luck in life than I have had. Bill
Caught Between Lovers (Poetry) - 11/18/2002 5:58:14 AM
Rocky Road (Poetry) - 11/13/2002 9:48:54 AM
ohhhhhhhh...this one's a heart-tugger...excellent write! (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Rocky Road (Poetry) - 11/13/2002 9:25:08 AM
comforting, heartfelt write!
Rocky Road (Poetry) - 11/13/2002 9:07:00 AM
Endearing beyond words. bill
Rocky Road (Poetry) - 11/13/2002 7:12:11 AM
Ashes (Poetry) - 11/12/2002 4:14:00 PM
yeah, your right Ashely is a very special person and she can offer you the world.... if youll accept it.
When Words Arent Enough (Poetry) - 11/12/2002 4:11:37 PM
beautifull..sounds like you found someone special.
When Words Arent Enough (Poetry) - 11/12/2002 4:02:04 AM
Lovely heartfelt write. I think he is the lucky one here.
When Words Arent Enough (Poetry) - 11/11/2002 7:21:43 PM
Wow, what a beautiful write, comes from your heart.
When Words Arent Enough (Poetry) - 11/11/2002 1:39:13 PM
beautiful write, deborah! love, your friend, karen lynn. ((((HUGS)))) :)
Used To Be (Poetry) - 11/8/2002 1:19:37 PM
thought provoking write! well done! love, your friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)
Not Good Enough (Poetry) - 11/8/2002 9:51:26 AM
whatever has happened to you to cause such anguish is done and over. you are good enough for love, whoever or however you come to believe otherwise is wrong.
Used To Be (Poetry) - 11/8/2002 9:48:54 AM
i sometimes wonder if losing oneself for love is worth it hmmm
thought provoking piece
Not Good Enough (Poetry) - 11/8/2002 5:17:31 AM
Okay, I'm gonna tell you this one more time... YOU DO DESERVE IT. you deserve so much Deb. Tell me *why* you don't deserve it... what have you done that was so bad? Your a wonderful person, beautiful, both inside and out.. now stop fucking around. He'll be fine, and so will you. I love you. Sorry this is kinda harsh.. I'm just sick of hearing you say your not good enough. YOU ARE!
Not Good Enough (Poetry) - 11/6/2002 12:41:39 PM
this will happen one day when you least expect it
no cruel experiment - the real thing
Ashes (Poetry) - 11/6/2002 10:37:30 AM
Thanks dear, I love you and as many times as I get angry and appear to leave.. I'll always come back to you and I will never leave you to be alone. Forever yours, *~Ashes~*
Sense (Poetry) - 11/6/2002 10:35:34 AM
Wonderfully written dear, full of emotion. Love you baby, *~Ashes~*
Tell Me (Poetry) - 11/4/2002 5:46:37 PM
Powerful write and full of emotion. Excellent!
Sense (Poetry) - 11/4/2002 5:00:50 PM
Tell Me (Poetry) - 11/4/2002 10:02:32 AM
Sometimes you have to take a chance, if you dont you will never know.
Ashes (Poetry) - 11/4/2002 3:40:39 AM
Yes dear, endearing...but please don't push this one away. Sounds like he is a keeper. Bill
Ashes (Poetry) - 11/3/2002 8:35:48 PM
lovely, endearing poem...
Even Then (Poetry) - 11/3/2002 5:51:46 AM
I love this one sweetie. Perfectly described emotions. *~Ashes~*
Compleatly Empty (Poetry) - 11/1/2002 8:46:24 PM
Great write! Very emotional
Even Then (Poetry) - 11/1/2002 11:32:35 AM
When you are gone
Even then will you hold me
What a wonderful note to end this piece on. Great write.
Even Then (Poetry) - 11/1/2002 6:44:12 AM
very nicely done
Compleatly Empty (Poetry) - 10/31/2002 6:39:54 AM
Sometimes you save others and do not take care of yourself. When it all comes down to it, there is only you. Look out for #1...good write
Down Upon (Poetry) - 10/31/2002 5:56:45 AM
What more can I really say. The power of your words is unbelievable.
I (Poetry) - 10/31/2002 5:41:00 AM
I am not sure how i missed your incredible voice. This is a tremendous statement. Great write.
Compleatly Empty (Poetry) - 10/31/2002 5:38:44 AM
I feel as though I have just been out in an emotional hurricane. Great venting write.
Compleatly Empty (Poetry) - 10/30/2002 10:30:57 AM
well written sweetheart. your writing is almost as beautiful as you. love you. *~Ashes~*
Still (Poetry) - 10/30/2002 9:04:01 AM
A trembling kiss, nice.
Step - Father (Poetry) - 10/25/2002 5:19:14 PM
So sad and emotional
I am so sorry you
had to endure this pain.
Exceelnet expression from one that knows...
Step - Father (Poetry) - 10/25/2002 3:19:06 PM
I had one of those, Grrrrrrrrr. Check out my 'Articles' section. It's all true and it sux! Hang in there, you're better than him and were born for a reason. BTW, you are legitimate. Love, Janet xoxoxoxo
Step - Father (Poetry) - 10/25/2002 10:31:58 AM
sad, intense write...(((HUGS))). i don't know what this is like...i had both my parents growing up...my mom died after i'd moved south, dad remarried, my step-mom's cool, love her very much, even though she'll never replace mom. dad's blessed...most men only find love once, dad found it twice...i'm happy for him. (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(