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A Pot Of Gold (Poetry) - 1/8/2012 7:05:51 PM
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A Pot Of Gold (Poetry) - 5/31/2011 8:45:17 AM
Not bad for having writer's block! An interesting read, Thelma. What we think, we can also achieve ... our thoughts become things.
Robert
A Battle For Life (Poetry) - 3/17/2008 6:31:32 PM
A heartfelt sharing. I am so glad he beat the odds ..M
A War Never Ends (Poetry) - 12/29/2005 9:02:22 AM
This for me holds a powerful message war doesn't ever end. The loss is so overwhelming.
Jihad War Declared (Poetry) - 1/18/2005 10:40:00 PM
It appears there isn't much thinking on either side of this immoral war launched by Bush. Historically, religion has been at the root of much bloodshed; not much chance of that changing anytime soon.
Broken Promises (Poetry) - 4/29/2003 10:37:40 AM
Powerful and well written! I just love your use of words, they just seem to pull me inwards. I would love a visit and an honest review from you. Take care Thelma!
Broken Promises (Poetry) - 4/21/2003 12:07:10 PM
Thelma, very heartfelt.
Broken Promises (Poetry) - 4/21/2003 10:35:32 AM
Sad reality!!
Broken Promises (Poetry) - 4/21/2003 9:45:39 AM
Hi Thelma, so go the spoils of war. The gent up above blames us Christians. Yeah Right!!!!
Love yf
tony
Broken Promises (Poetry) - 4/21/2003 9:42:12 AM
powerful and heartwrenching write! :( (((HUGS)))
Broken Promises (Poetry) - 4/21/2003 6:25:32 AM
"We used our cluster bombs..."
and why am i not surprised?
Broken Promises (Poetry) - 4/21/2003 6:25:10 AM
There are many such stories, and they are all tragic, but the end result is that a people are now free, and life will get better for even him.
Windows And Walls (Poetry) - 4/5/2003 5:02:58 AM
Absolutes in this write. Superb ~Trish~
Windows And Walls (Poetry) - 4/4/2003 1:26:24 PM
wise words, my friend thelma...wise words. ((((HUGS)))) and thanks for this outstanding write! love, karla. :)
Windows And Walls (Poetry) - 4/4/2003 9:20:02 AM
This was very true! Love your message here!
Quite well done!
Reindeer
Windows And Walls (Poetry) - 4/4/2003 5:57:20 AM
Thelma, outstanding write. Without windows our minds and souls are closed to the beauty around us.
Windows And Walls (Poetry) - 4/4/2003 5:34:40 AM
There's truth in this poem!
Sandie Angel :o)
Jihad War Declared (Poetry) - 4/3/2003 12:34:38 PM
Not many rallying to it.
Good poem, though.
Jihad War Declared (Poetry) - 4/3/2003 8:15:29 AM
Exceptional write, Thelma.
Jihad War Declared (Poetry) - 4/3/2003 7:22:50 AM
Thelma have no fear...the Lord is here...and I wish saddams people would read the bible and not listen to the madman..great write..Floria
Jihad War Declared (Poetry) - 4/3/2003 5:34:27 AM
This is a good poem but, do the math, you don't need to worry. 1-1=0
Jihad War Declared (Poetry) - 4/3/2003 5:11:59 AM
Thelma, Loved your poem. How can one praise God and in the next breath take a life?
I Have A Plan (Poetry) - 4/2/2003 1:23:05 PM
(((HUGS))) thelma...couldn't have said it better meself. :) great job, great poem! ((((HUGS)))) and love, karla. :)
I Have A Plan (Poetry) - 4/2/2003 11:55:57 AM
Well done. Free verse doesn't rely on rhyme, but rather the choice of words and the ryhthm of the lines in realtionship to each other.
I Have A Plan (Poetry) - 4/2/2003 10:53:10 AM
Powerful write and so excellent Peg
I Have A Plan (Poetry) - 4/2/2003 10:38:37 AM
An excellent free verse. Well done.
I Have A Plan (Poetry) - 4/2/2003 10:27:11 AM
Thelma, your poem is very good. Great Job.
I Have A Plan (Poetry) - 4/2/2003 10:14:45 AM
This is powerful and excellent Thelma ....I love the poem and its content...as for the form..I am a rhymer but I also have done and sometimes do free verse..I think you pulled it off well....great poem..I love the repetitive line..Floria
Golden Picture Frame (Poetry) - 3/31/2003 6:27:35 PM
very lovely poem...
Golden Picture Frame (Poetry) - 3/31/2003 5:47:15 PM
I loved this Thelma! Very Nice!
Jack
Golden Picture Frame (Poetry) - 3/31/2003 4:22:33 PM
Thelma
another wonderful write.
Peggy
Golden Picture Frame (Poetry) - 3/31/2003 3:03:48 PM
Thelma, your mom is beaming with pride in heaven over this one. Great tribute!
Golden Picture Frame (Poetry) - 3/31/2003 1:31:24 PM
Beautiful !
Golden Picture Frame (Poetry) - 3/31/2003 1:03:01 PM
(((thelma))) beautiful! excellent tribute to your mom...she will never be forgotten, for she lives forever in your words...well done! ((((HUGS)))) and love, karla. :)
Golden Picture Frame (Poetry) - 3/31/2003 10:24:38 AM
Thelma, beautiful poem and tribute to your mom.
Golden Picture Frame (Poetry) - 3/31/2003 9:56:31 AM
Thelma, this is wonderful. ~Trish~
Golden Picture Frame (Poetry) - 3/31/2003 9:44:00 AM
terrific write, thelma! :) (((HUGS)))
Two Faces Of War (Poetry) - 3/31/2003 6:08:55 AM
Those that win and those that lose.
Two Faces Of War (Poetry) - 3/31/2003 4:29:57 AM
A powerful write Thelma.
Two Faces Of War (Poetry) - 3/30/2003 8:10:02 PM
we must support those who put their lives on the line, no matter what our beliefs on the war are... well done!
Two Faces Of War (Poetry) - 3/30/2003 6:28:22 PM
Wonderful message for "all" to support our troops regardless of their views on war.
Well done!
Allen
Two Faces Of War (Poetry) - 3/30/2003 5:23:28 PM
Thelma, This is a good write. And you are right there is always two sides to the war,,those that do, and those that don't. But we will support those troops,,no matter what! Lisa
Two Faces Of War (Poetry) - 3/30/2003 4:43:03 PM
Dear Thelma, Protesting is not the answer for our leaders sins. Support our young people of the military is! Wonderful poem, Thelma.
ty
tony
Our Weapons Of Destruction (Poetry) - 3/29/2003 1:26:06 PM
WOW, is right...let's hope this war ends soon...God have mercy on us all...powerful write, thelma...(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Our Weapons Of Destruction (Poetry) - 3/29/2003 9:57:39 AM
I respect your opinion I know what you have been through, I too hate war...but have to disagree with your premise. No one ever mentions the 400,000 children that died in Iraq last couple of years from malnutrituion while Saddam builds more castles and weapons.Hope you read my post. thank you...
Our Weapons Of Destruction (Poetry) - 3/29/2003 8:39:47 AM
hmmm....thought provoking write, but well done! love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)
Our Weapons Of Destruction (Poetry) - 3/29/2003 8:31:12 AM
LOL
a good write --
alas, too true---
when two forces start calling each other
EVIL
you can bet that they are both half right
good write
john+
Our Weapons Of Destruction (Poetry) - 3/29/2003 7:50:42 AM
Floria here again Thelma. I did read that poem of yours "A little soul" thank you for your wisdom and class in this matter...lets hope this dreadful war is over soon..God bless..Floria
A Little Soul (Poetry) - 3/29/2003 7:48:07 AM
"Both sides of this war to blame "
Thank you for your wisdom Thelma..floria
Our Weapons Of Destruction (Poetry) - 3/29/2003 7:28:29 AM
A strong, powerful write. ~Trish~
Our Weapons Of Destruction (Poetry) - 3/29/2003 7:07:56 AM
Thelma yes you have a right to voice your opinion in this great country..I respect that..I hate war..I am not FOR war...what I would like to request from you is that you write a poem about 'THEIR" weapons of mass destruction...and dont say it hasnt been proven that thye have it...what would it take to prove it? that many of our people die? be realistic at least...I do respect your opinion...and you have written a powerful poem...I pray for all people involved in this war and our country...Floria
Our Weapons Of Destruction (Poetry) - 3/29/2003 6:39:52 AM
wow!
A Little Soul (Poetry) - 3/27/2003 7:21:00 AM
Thelma, sad poem. The world cries with you.
A Little Soul (Poetry) - 3/27/2003 7:13:15 AM
Good Morning, Thelma
Unfortunately many more innocent Iraq?s will die. I and almost everyone else underestamated their military. We may have to drop a big one on them!
tony
A Little Soul (Poetry) - 3/27/2003 6:49:24 AM
This is why war cannot be accepted. Good write.
A Little Soul (Poetry) - 3/27/2003 6:46:31 AM
A truly sad, but exceptional write. ~Trish~
I SHALL PRAY (Poetry) - 3/25/2003 6:19:58 AM
Wonderful write, Thelma...~trish~
I SHALL PRAY (Poetry) - 3/24/2003 9:19:49 AM
heartfelt prayer, thelma! here's hoping you are feeling much better by the time you read this review! love, your texas friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :( please keep my daddy in ohio in your prayers; and check out my prose piece about him. it tells of what's going on.
I SHALL PRAY (Poetry) - 3/24/2003 8:53:59 AM
Thelma, lovely poem.
I SHALL PRAY (Poetry) - 3/24/2003 8:40:25 AM
Hearfelt write...BHUWAN
I SHALL PRAY (Poetry) - 3/24/2003 8:27:45 AM
Thank You, Thelma
We are all gratefull
for prayer.
tony
I SHALL PRAY (Poetry) - 3/24/2003 7:56:44 AM
While I don't agree with you about the necessity for this war, I applaud your lovely poem and your support of our troops through prayer. On that point we should all unite -- prayer for all involved. Thanks for sharing your poem!
I SHALL PRAY (Poetry) - 3/24/2003 7:56:14 AM
Your last line exhibits the most important thing of all--pray, pray, pray!!
Thoughtful and unprovoking way to state your viewpoint. Very good write, Thelma...
I SHALL PRAY (Poetry) - 3/24/2003 7:48:27 AM
Nice write Thelma!
Jack
A War Never Ends (Poetry) - 3/19/2003 4:22:27 PM
We live with pollution every day. The same atrocities are here in the good old USA. Just read a food lable.
This is a thoughtful work. Having 8 family members in the service, I can appreciate.
~E
A War Never Ends (Poetry) - 3/19/2003 1:36:26 PM
*STANDING OVATION* AMEN and AMEN...look what the service did for its veterans...abandoned them to the hellacious care VA hospitals provide...i'm a veteran, hurt my back twice, i get a little over $200.00 a month...have to work in order to survive...how's someone supposed to live on that??? what happened to the free medical care? have to have insurance now...or wait and wait and wait and HOPE you get a decent doctor...terrible. excellent, powerful write...send this one to mr. bush! (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :( PRAY FOR PEACE
A War Never Ends (Poetry) - 3/19/2003 11:49:43 AM
God bless you and your loved ones...this is an especially trying time for those who have suffered as you have from the results of war...Excellent write!
A War Never Ends (Poetry) - 3/19/2003 11:37:00 AM
Dear Thelma, This was a true and caring write. There are two out patient clinics I attend one is the VA hospital, the other is for mental illness. The Gulf war vets are unanimous in there thoughts. Look what that war did to me!!
Tony
A War Never Ends (Poetry) - 3/19/2003 10:37:07 AM
truer words were never spoken, especially for those who lived it. powerful, sad write! god help our nation and the world during this time.... >tears < love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :(
Pennies From Heaven (Poetry) - 3/15/2003 5:49:47 AM
A beautiful tribute and lovely memory.
Pennies From Heaven (Poetry) - 3/14/2003 12:25:25 PM
What a lovely memory and tribute.
Thoroughly enjoyed reading your work.
~E
Pennies From Heaven (Poetry) - 3/14/2003 11:49:24 AM
this was a beautifully wonderful tribute youare sucha nice person for this poem
Labeled A Traitor (Poetry) - 3/14/2003 10:14:56 AM
we need to turn to god; it seems our great nation has removed him from our lives! :(
Pennies From Heaven (Poetry) - 3/14/2003 10:14:00 AM
inspiring tribute! :) (((HUGS)))
Pennies From Heaven (Poetry) - 3/14/2003 9:28:55 AM
Thelma, A wonderful and well written tribute that should be cherished by the family so long as they have memories. Great write Thelma. Bill
Pennies From Heaven (Poetry) - 3/14/2003 8:01:11 AM
Thelma, beautiful poem. Sounds like a very special man. I'm sure he saw something special in everything and everyone.
Labeled A Traitor (Poetry) - 3/13/2003 4:49:09 PM
I can't imagine anyone wanting war..just to horrific..this was an excellent poem, expressing your views,
Reindeer
Labeled A Traitor (Poetry) - 3/13/2003 12:11:40 PM
good write!
Labeled A Traitor (Poetry) - 3/13/2003 8:17:26 AM
If you are a traitor, my dear, so am I, and a majority of Americans. Read my poem Bubba, the Not So Great, and you'll see what I mean. You keep praying and standing up for your beliefs, that what America's freedom is.
Labeled A Traitor (Poetry) - 3/13/2003 8:13:39 AM
You are not alone: Former US president Jimmy Carter, this year's Nobel Peace Prize winner, called Friday for DISARMAMENT BY THE UNITED STATES, which has taken the lead in urging such countries as North Korea and Iraq to destroy their weapons of mass destruction.
"One of the things that the United States government has not done is to try to comply with and enforce international efforts targeted to prohibit the arsenals of BIOLOGICAL WEAPONS THAT WE OURSELVES HAVE," Carter said. Will these uninformed critics now call a former President a Traitor, too?
Labeled A Traitor (Poetry) - 3/13/2003 6:44:31 AM
Dear Thelma, You are not a traitor by any means.Peace is always the way to go. Read the sermon on the mount. Jesus said it was so.
ty
tony
Labeled A Traitor (Poetry) - 3/13/2003 5:58:47 AM
good write!
one of the conscepts of British democracy that the American democracy never incorporated was that of "Her Majesty's Loyal Opposition". The existance of the Opposition in parliament reminds us that the loyal citizen may legitimately oppose the government w/o being called a "traitor".
this is a good write
john+
Labeled A Traitor (Poetry) - 3/13/2003 5:57:19 AM
lets hope and pray, Thelma that this war never materialises - wonderful write!
Labeled A Traitor (Poetry) - 3/13/2003 5:10:51 AM
I think a peaceful solution is the only solution. Great write.
Labeled A Traitor (Poetry) - 3/13/2003 5:10:23 AM
You keep praying Thelma. I do feel however only time will tell if this is a just war, if we are truly committed to liberating the Iraqi people, and we stay the course, you will see Iran's population liberate themselves from their religious leaders, and the could follow several others in the region. A very close friend of mine e mailed me that they have had to turn thousands of Iraqi soldiers back who tried to surrender even before the war has started, also, in Iran, that the people are armed and ready to take back their country. Pray for peace and freedom.
Labeled A Traitor (Poetry) - 3/13/2003 5:03:15 AM
Thelma, good write. I'm with you. Peace Not War. It is just great that we have the freedom to express our own opinions without reprocussions. Many are not afforded that priviledge.
Labeled A Traitor (Poetry) - 3/13/2003 4:53:45 AM
Seeking the best solution is always the way and trusting in God is absolutely the best way of all...
Wings Of A Dove (Poetry) - 3/12/2003 10:39:47 AM
Sweet one.
~E
Wings Of A Dove (Poetry) - 3/12/2003 9:08:13 AM
this was so sweet and a lovely tribute
Wings Of A Dove (Poetry) - 3/12/2003 7:59:08 AM
Excellent tribute...congratulations....BHUWAN
Wings Of A Dove (Poetry) - 3/12/2003 6:51:53 AM
Congrats! Thelma, May God grant you long life to see this new boy child's children.
Wings Of A Dove (Poetry) - 3/12/2003 6:01:15 AM
Lovely tribute. Congratulations Thelma
Chrissie
Wings Of A Dove (Poetry) - 3/12/2003 4:04:46 AM
Congratulations, Thelma...I agree babies are a blessing. Great tribute.
Wings Of A Dove (Poetry) - 3/12/2003 4:00:24 AM
Thelma, great tribute, and congratulations.
To Beg For Mercy (Poetry) - 3/11/2003 10:16:45 AM
Thelma upon your knees with your breath alone truly an inspiration of soul.
peggy
To Beg For Mercy (Poetry) - 3/11/2003 9:57:07 AM
praying for tony on bended knee. sad, heartbreaking write! :( >tears < with much love, and (((((((HUGS))))))) to you, thelma! your friend in texas, karen lynn. :(
To Beg For Mercy (Poetry) - 3/11/2003 7:39:55 AM
Well done Thelma.
Jack
To Beg For Mercy (Poetry) - 3/11/2003 7:27:49 AM
I'm with Tony too. Excellent poem.
To Beg For Mercy (Poetry) - 3/11/2003 7:19:41 AM
Praying for him.
To Beg For Mercy (Poetry) - 3/11/2003 6:50:51 AM
"On the news I heard yesterday
It may only be ten days or so
To my knees I shall go to pray
To Beg For Mercy for lost souls"
I do, as well--and I also agree with Tony...
To Beg For Mercy (Poetry) - 3/11/2003 6:09:02 AM
I agree with Tony here...cheers...love n luck...BHUWAN
To Beg For Mercy (Poetry) - 3/11/2003 5:06:58 AM
Dear Thelma, I will pray for your grand nephew, and his family. You know the media I think now is the culprit. I mean if it happens it really is beyond us. I pray for my people, and also the innocents on the other side. May God give us the wisdom to do what is right.
Your poem was excellent, Thelma.
ty
tony
A Care Free Tomorrow (Poetry) - 3/10/2003 3:17:28 PM
very nice tribute hope all is well you are such a caring soul
A Care Free Tomorrow (Poetry) - 3/10/2003 1:14:50 PM
Thelma, beautiful poem. I am happy to be able to read poems such as yours. You have a very caring heart. Be Blessed.
A Care Free Tomorrow (Poetry) - 3/10/2003 11:02:52 AM
I'll be praying.
Jack
A Care Free Tomorrow (Poetry) - 3/10/2003 10:45:20 AM
Lovely poem of love.
Blessings.
~E
A Care Free Tomorrow (Poetry) - 3/10/2003 10:36:30 AM
My blessings to your families. ~Trish~
A Care Free Tomorrow (Poetry) - 3/10/2003 10:30:09 AM
Thelma how very sad...all my prayers are with you and yours..God bless and take care of you all..floria
A Care Free Tomorrow (Poetry) - 3/10/2003 9:54:09 AM
beautiful, heartfelt write, thelma! may god heal the ones who need them! love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :(
A Care Free Tomorrow (Poetry) - 3/10/2003 9:34:23 AM
Thelma, this dedicated poem is so worthwhile. Faith can move mountains and I do believe that. And when you write in this vein I feel that you are motivated by God to do so. And in doing so ... you will give your words reality and make them come alive. God bless and heal the ones this is written for. Bill
Will Our Leaders Cry (Poetry) - 3/10/2003 7:52:51 AM
All declarations of war are signed by pens dipped in the ink of blood of the innocent mixed with old men's feelings impotance.
Will Our Leaders Cry (Poetry) - 3/10/2003 6:26:24 AM
Our worlds leaders have long since sold their souls to the devil!
And will defenantly be the last ones to shead a tear! Excellent write!
Will Our Leaders Cry (Poetry) - 3/10/2003 6:10:14 AM
Such a powerful poem, with excellent meaning.
This just says it all beautifully,
Reindeer
Will Our Leaders Cry (Poetry) - 3/10/2003 5:52:40 AM
I was a hawk back during the days of Nam. Protestors really got out of hand. So far I see no violience by todays protestors. Even though in the miniority Mr Bush seems like he will get his wish. I pray deeply for the dead and there loved ones.
Thelma this was a Great Write.
ty
tony
Will Our Leaders Cry (Poetry) - 3/10/2003 5:10:51 AM
Paul said it so well as did you.
Will Our Leaders Cry (Poetry) - 3/10/2003 4:48:51 AM
A deep, powerful write. Excellent.
Will Our Leaders Cry (Poetry) - 3/10/2003 4:29:55 AM
Thelma, excellent write. To answer your questions, I believe our leaders are sincere. It would take a heartless person not to have feelings and I don't believe they fit the bill. Don't get me wrong, I don't believe in war. Sometimes it is the only way to assure the safety of all.58,000 men and women gave their lives in the Viet Nam Conflict. This is a war that we should have never got involved in. I believe many deaths could have been avoided if there was a reason. " Where there is a reason there is a way." We will all pray that our leaders make the right decisions and that peace is found instead of war.
Will Our Leaders Cry (Poetry) - 3/10/2003 3:50:23 AM
Powerful and so profound. This one points fingers in ink.
Peg
Proud In God (Poetry) - 3/9/2003 2:27:18 PM
Great write Thelma, Well said!
Jack
Proud In God (Poetry) - 3/9/2003 12:48:05 PM
A powerful, strong, just write. Well done.
Proud In God (Poetry) - 3/9/2003 11:46:08 AM
very potent indeed for waht we write can not be taken back so we should be careful nice job on this
We Heard This Before (Poetry) - 3/9/2003 9:34:55 AM
Dear Thelma - sorry I missed this earlier - I just posted to your new work, including a reference to the "Indians." Bush snubs treaties galore - Kyoto, germ warfare, anti-ballistic, comprehensive test ban treaty, land mine treaty, and refuses to join an international court of justice, because the USA should be immune to criticism from the rest of the world !!! I hang my head in shame over this country's leadership.
Proud In God (Poetry) - 3/9/2003 9:28:00 AM
First, thanks for being a voice of reason. I watched the entire UN meeting on March 7, and the weapons inspectors found nothing of a threat to America - except that the documents used against Iraq (submitted by the UK/US intelligence) which were to prove that they pursued nuclear arms were FORGERIES ! They are being framed. They are damned if they do, and damned if they don't. The war of aggression has already started by US Marines inside the DMZ between Kuwait and Iraq, in violation of UN rules. For three days, allies have attacked Iraq, aiming to leave them more defenseless when the US/UK begin their illegal invasion in full. Just like in my youth, when watching the cowboys and Indians - my sympathies go out to the innocent victims in Iraq. This is an outrage that will not bring peace, safety, or security to the world. It will only help maintain the US lifestyle, which consumes 45 % of the world's nonrenewable resources. We are supposed to be proud of America (currently reigning god of weapons and money-backed bribes.)
Our Country`s Honor (Poetry) - 3/9/2003 9:24:56 AM
Thank you, Thelma, for being a true and brave patriot.
We Heard This Before (Poetry) - 3/9/2003 8:20:49 AM
An American commentator from the pro - war camp said on British TV this week "History never repeats itself." He is right in the way a lawyer twistying words is right. Those who do not learn from histoy's mistakes are condemned to repeat them. It wes our British govenment in 1918 that first messed up the area now called Iraq and set this whole thing in train. This is a fine anti-war poem
Proud In God (Poetry) - 3/9/2003 8:16:19 AM
once spoken, or written words cannot be unsaid, your warning is timely and much needed. Good job! Keep us on our toes!
Proud In God (Poetry) - 3/9/2003 7:52:13 AM
potent write!!!
Proud In God (Poetry) - 3/9/2003 7:04:21 AM
Very strong, powerful and true.......
Jill
Proud In God (Poetry) - 3/9/2003 6:48:00 AM
Very powerful write Thelma.
Powerful.
We Heard This Before (Poetry) - 3/8/2003 11:29:48 AM
This was very powerful I really love the way you put history repeats its self and it is so true
We Heard This Before (Poetry) - 3/8/2003 10:58:54 AM
very true history repeats over and over again it is so sad but so is the destruction of this eaarth
Shattered Dreams (Poetry) - 3/8/2003 9:43:38 AM
Gripping, emotional poem about an experience that had an impact on you. Wonderful way of capturing what you know. A poem for every woman to read.
We Heard This Before (Poetry) - 3/8/2003 7:37:40 AM
Powerful write....Great work.
We Heard This Before (Poetry) - 3/8/2003 6:15:55 AM
This is powerful write!!!
We Heard This Before (Poetry) - 3/8/2003 5:41:06 AM
It is not about oil, it is about Freedom, Freedoom from fearing a man like Saddam, a man like Hitler, a man like George Custer, a man like Crazy Horse, any man who does not respect mankind itself.
We Heard This Before (Poetry) - 3/8/2003 5:31:14 AM
Thelma another powerful versed poem.
We Heard This Before (Poetry) - 3/8/2003 5:22:59 AM
I am usually against war but feel as if we have no other way of ending the threat Iraq imposes against our country. However, I do respect your views stated here and think this poem is miraculously done.
Take care......
Jill
This War In My Mind (Poetry) - 3/7/2003 5:29:26 AM
Oh yes! I agree with every word you had to say here,
Excellent!
Reindeer
This War In My Mind (Poetry) - 3/7/2003 4:57:38 AM
Thelma, your poem brings fact to view please read my poem," Memoires " It is of my time spent in Viet Nam.
This War In My Mind (Poetry) - 3/7/2003 4:24:25 AM
Very well composed and painful to read, Thelma...
This War In My Mind (Poetry) - 3/7/2003 4:05:51 AM
Oh Thelma so much truth. Im telling my age I was to young for Kent state my cousin a few years older went there and she told me the tales of peac. This is excellent. War has been since the dawns time but I hate war and rebel at the thought of it. I'll get stoned for that one.
Hugs Peg
This War In My Mind (Poetry) - 3/7/2003 4:04:50 AM
Dear Thelma, I above anyone want no war. I made a pact with myself to let God handle it. What ever may be is, the Lords answer for me.
Your write was exceptional, and I know deeply felt.
ty
tony
This War In My Mind (Poetry) - 3/7/2003 4:02:22 AM
I agree with you on this. Good write indeed Thelma!
Sandie Angel :o)
Pray For Peace (Poetry) - 3/6/2003 11:06:10 PM
Well written piece, Thelma, it sings of inner convictions! :)
Pray For Peace (Poetry) - 3/6/2003 10:55:25 AM
"Let them drag my disabled soul
If they try to throw me into cell."
Wow - powerful! And so true! Thanks for sharing this heartfelt piece, Thelma!
Pray For Peace (Poetry) - 3/6/2003 9:40:51 AM
They are afraid of what they have always known. The People do have the final say and what the people want is Peace!
Pray For Peace (Poetry) - 3/6/2003 7:24:58 AM
I didnt see that Thelma...but some of our friends and loved ones have been shipped out..so...thanks for this..powerful write.like Tony said..prayers are powerful...floria
Pray For Peace (Poetry) - 3/6/2003 6:44:56 AM
THELMA AMEN THIS IS EXCELLETN AND MUCH NEEDED PEG
Pray For Peace (Poetry) - 3/6/2003 4:43:12 AM
I shall Thelma, and I do. I find praying is the answer, because if you dissent you are considered an angry one of human kind. Thank You for this wonderful write.
tony
Our Country`s Honor (Poetry) - 3/5/2003 10:39:19 AM
i was in the air force. i would gladly go to defend my country if i had to. given the chance, i wouldn't want to go...i think this was is immoral...why? because daddy bush didn't get his man, junior bush wants to take revenge..."revenge is mine," saith the Lord...outstanding sentiments, thelma...keep writing, maybe if enough of us write, and pray for peace, this war might not have to happen...(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(
Our Country`s Honor (Poetry) - 3/5/2003 9:28:58 AM
Hi Thelma,
You have raised many
good points here...
Great write...
Trixie :)
Our Country`s Honor (Poetry) - 3/5/2003 7:23:35 AM
Thelma, I could never call you un-American for sharing your doubts. We all have doubts
about the coming war. It is hard for me to take a stand. There are always two sides to every story. I am just riding the waves hoping we are doing the right thing. God bless you for expressing your opinion. Keep it up. Bill
Our Country`s Honor (Poetry) - 3/5/2003 6:50:21 AM
Nice piece of writing.
I am anti-war also. It seems our country has to always fight for someone else. WW2 against Germaney to help England and France. In korea it was there civil war. In Nam we covered the french's butts again. I have an idea if the war is not about oil. Why should not Isreal fight there own war. JMO
ty
tony
Our Country`s Honor (Poetry) - 3/5/2003 6:26:42 AM
Apparently the voice was heard and now the one man says to be quiet........Keep sharing your thoughts of peace! :-)
In Just One Year (Poetry) - 3/4/2003 12:20:58 PM
Amen! Thank you for sharing this great day with us...an anniversary that surpasses all other kinds, and should happen to
everyone;-)!All the best to you Thelma!
In Just One Year (Poetry) - 3/4/2003 10:41:04 AM
Beautifully expressed.
~E
In Just One Year (Poetry) - 3/4/2003 10:04:57 AM
happy anniversary, thelma! love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. so glad you came through your trial with flying colors! god is so good, isn't he? :) ((((HUGS))) :)
In Just One Year (Poetry) - 3/4/2003 6:56:34 AM
Thelma, they say time changes everything, now that you have found your rock of salvation. You know how different you feel from one year ago. Lovely write dear. I am so happy that you came through the crisis you faced. You courage will be rewarded. Bill
In Just One Year (Poetry) - 3/4/2003 6:46:00 AM
Happy Anniversary!
In Just One Year (Poetry) - 3/4/2003 6:43:43 AM
Sure can.
A Fire From Hell (Poetry) - 3/3/2003 10:43:52 PM
Good write...superb!!!!
A Fire From Hell (Poetry) - 3/3/2003 5:03:10 PM
Good write but that was surely a sad day for the living and those who lost their life.
Book Of Revelations (Poetry) - 3/3/2003 10:35:16 AM
yea, thats how war goes...but what we "do" is for a noble cause...
A Fire From Hell (Poetry) - 3/3/2003 9:42:42 AM
My greatest fear is to be burned to death but, those trapped and trambled had little time to react. Sad event; great poem.
Sandy
A Fire From Hell (Poetry) - 3/3/2003 9:16:22 AM
what a horrible thing to have happen! horrible event that should have never happened! good write, thelma! love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) >tears < :(
A Fire From Hell (Poetry) - 3/3/2003 7:32:01 AM
I heard of this and I rarely watch TV. So sad. So many hurt. Good write.
A Fire From Hell (Poetry) - 3/3/2003 6:38:21 AM
This was so sad. Well done Thelma!
Jack
A Fire From Hell (Poetry) - 3/3/2003 5:01:59 AM
A heartwrenching account of this terrible tragedy, Thelma.
Chrissie
A Fire From Hell (Poetry) - 3/3/2003 4:23:30 AM
Thelma, my thoughts and prayers go out to the families and the victim. It is an unprecedented tragedy. I live on the R.I./MA. border and know a few of the souls who were lost that day. May God be with them.
A Fire From Hell (Poetry) - 3/3/2003 3:50:32 AM
I agree with Bill. Good write Thelma!
Mary
A Fire From Hell (Poetry) - 3/3/2003 3:36:53 AM
I too dear Thelma have the same prayer. What a terrible fire, killing 97 and many serious injuries; apparently because the owners chose to purchase flamable material inside of the fire retardant kind, cause it cost more. Just a little more money and thoughts of their customers would have saved many lives. What a shame! Bill
No Mothers Tears (Poetry) - 3/2/2003 1:39:29 PM
*tears* well written, excellent, thought provoking message...(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(
No Mothers Tears (Poetry) - 3/2/2003 8:38:20 AM
Thelma, I'm not sure how we manage to write on subjects so close to the same all the time, but you do it so well! I thank you for your feedback on poetrypen. Keep writing,,,and I'll keep reading! You've managed to keep me well occupied in the last year! Another great one! Lisa
No Mothers Tears (Poetry) - 3/2/2003 7:25:02 AM
very sad thought about all the tears shed by the mothers who have lost, if only leaders would pay attention
No Mothers Tears (Poetry) - 3/2/2003 7:08:06 AM
A very good poem with a great message!
Sandie Angel :o)
No Mothers Tears (Poetry) - 3/2/2003 7:05:03 AM
Profound message and a great write!
No Mothers Tears (Poetry) - 3/2/2003 6:28:25 AM
Good write with excellent message
No Mothers Tears (Poetry) - 3/2/2003 4:44:46 AM
War makes no sense. I had five uncles and a father who served. I really wish there was another way. This is well written and thoughtful about a subject that tears people apart. You've done well.
~E
A Little Lighter (Poetry) - 2/19/2003 4:45:32 PM
beautiful reminder of what we truly need in life: the guidance and love of god! without god we are doomed! glad i have him in my life! love, your friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)
A Little Lighter (Poetry) - 2/19/2003 2:23:36 PM
Oh this is very good.
A Little Lighter (Poetry) - 2/19/2003 1:23:19 PM
we all need God's guidance every moment of every day...especially in these times. you go ahead, speak and write what's in your heart...don't be ashamed to write what you believe! perhaps you'll touch someone when they least expect it...or need it the most. you bless me in your poems, your comments, and your friendship...thank you! (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
A Pot Of Gold (Poetry) - 2/18/2003 3:21:01 PM
Writers block looks good on you. Great job.
A Pot Of Gold (Poetry) - 2/18/2003 12:31:00 PM
excellent write,
William
A Pot Of Gold (Poetry) - 2/18/2003 9:31:58 AM
beautiful write, thelma! love, your friend, karen lynn in texas. (((HUGS))) :)
A Pot Of Gold (Poetry) - 2/18/2003 9:15:07 AM
Very nice write Thelma! I liked this.
Jack
Book Of Revelations (Poetry) - 2/16/2003 1:36:48 PM
(((thelma))) here's hoping you're feeling much better, soon! you captured the uncertainty perfectly...but read the bible, it's all there...foretold thousands of years ago, it's all coming to pass. pray for peace...and pray for mercy. (((HUGS))) and thanks for sharing this...love, karla. :)
Book Of Revelations (Poetry) - 2/16/2003 9:49:49 AM
Excellent write Thelma!
Jack
Book Of Revelations (Poetry) - 2/16/2003 7:28:27 AM
Oh, Thelma, I have goosebumps the size of Mt. Everest! This is so true and extremely frightening.
Great job!
I pray you are feeling better.
Debbie :)
Book Of Revelations (Poetry) - 2/16/2003 7:12:37 AM
Let us pray for peace...Let us hope that peace will prevail...Cheers...BHUWAN
Can`t Take My Memories (Poetry) - 2/10/2003 9:16:06 AM
sweet! :) (((HUGS))) and love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. :)
Can`t Take My Memories (Poetry) - 2/10/2003 9:06:50 AM
No they can't take away one memory you shared with your lovely and beloved daughters. Isn't that great and these memories are worth much more than jewels.
Bill Murray
Can`t Take My Memories (Poetry) - 2/10/2003 6:37:11 AM
"When little they walk on our feet
Grown up they walk on our heart"
Powerful lines.
Can`t Take My Memories (Poetry) - 2/10/2003 6:12:52 AM
oh so sweet work.
Can`t Take My Memories (Poetry) - 2/10/2003 5:04:45 AM
Oh this is excellent.
peg
Shattered Dreams (Poetry) - 2/9/2003 9:51:54 PM
sad, effective poem...
Shattered Dreams (Poetry) - 2/9/2003 4:48:21 PM
Oh my Thelma this is indeed so very sad but also a great insightful piece of inspiration!
Gods and Goddesses Bless
~Nikki~
Shattered Dreams (Poetry) - 2/9/2003 3:57:31 PM
A heartbreak...
Shattered Dreams (Poetry) - 2/9/2003 3:57:19 PM
Very good write,though so sad.
Jack
Shattered Dreams (Poetry) - 2/9/2003 3:26:40 PM
So sad Thelma may God bless.
Shattered Dreams (Poetry) - 2/9/2003 3:18:04 PM
powerful write, thelma! it is so hard when someone has to give their child up for adoption and not knowing how they are going to turn out or if they will ever see them again! check out my one short story about a vietnamese woman writing a letter to her handicapped little girl and telling her that she still loved her, even though she now lives with another family in the united states! love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) >tears < :(
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