Recent Reviews for Mistress Nataku
Prince of Despair: Chapter One (Short Story) - 3/4/2006 5:22:37 PM|
this is quite interesting and keeps the reader in the mood to read more . keep it up
Prince of Despair: Chapter One (Short Story) - 4/29/2003 6:52:00 PM
That is a great start there! Keep going!
Prince of Despair: Chapter One (Short Story) - 4/29/2003 5:46:55 PM
That was great!^_^ I love these kind of stories, keep it up and show me everytime you add a chapter!!
Prince of Despair: Chapter One (Short Story) - 4/27/2003 11:56:24 AM
Absolutly wonderful! Just needs a bit of editing but that's not really an issue. Loved it. gimmie more!
Prince of Despair: Chapter One (Short Story) - 4/25/2003 3:02:24 AM
you got yourself a good start here -- keep it up.
Prince of Despair: Chapter One (Short Story) - 4/21/2003 3:23:38 PM
Excellent! Hurry and give us chapter 2. I can't wait!
Prince of Despair: Chapter One (Short Story) - 4/21/2003 12:40:07 PM
I love this sort of stuff, and this looks promising.
Keep up the good work JK!
Unlucky (Poetry) - 1/18/2004 8:06:27 AM
Forever there is hope
..indeed there is..poignant line..love it!!
Unlucky (Poetry) - 8/31/2003 1:45:24 AM
Mistress ... join the crowd ... I am a fool to love also. A big fool! Good poetry. Bill Murray
Unlucky (Poetry) - 8/29/2003 7:44:28 PM
is to be stupid.
To be stupid
is to be a fool once.
To be a fool
is to be at a place
where bigger fools are wiser.
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
A Love Fit for Royalty (Poetry) - 8/19/2003 7:21:23 PM
This is a very lovely write indeed!
A Love Fit for Royalty (Poetry) - 8/19/2003 2:54:00 PM
pretty write! :D (((HUGS))) and love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. :)
Stars (Poetry) - 8/16/2003 6:18:39 PM
Stars (Poetry) - 8/16/2003 4:24:58 PM
Such exquisite verses leading to a BEAUTIFUL PIECE OF POETRY!
Stars (Poetry) - 8/16/2003 4:17:10 AM
Beautiful, beautiful poetry.
I'll live for a while in the sigh you have given me.
Stars (Poetry) - 8/16/2003 1:02:07 AM
Summer (Poetry) - 7/31/2003 3:17:14 PM
Wow, the verses so significant is the pain and sorrow...a most excellant write!!!!
Forgive Me (Poetry) - 7/30/2003 6:14:41 PM
i forgive you with all my heart
Forgive Me (Poetry) - 7/24/2003 8:40:06 PM
Sad, and full of emotion and passion. Well done.
Forgive Me (Poetry) - 7/24/2003 7:14:11 PM
This is a wonderful write of the melting pot of sorrow ladden emotions!
Forgive Me (Poetry) - 7/24/2003 5:11:36 PM
AmEn............ this really hit home with me.. haha, No Use For a Name - Let me down, and poetry isn't the best thing for an already bruised heart... Be careful. ;) But yet again, wonderful write. I enjoyed. :)
Falling Anticipation (Poetry) - 7/21/2003 9:49:20 AM
Angel (Poetry) - 7/19/2003 6:00:17 PM
An elusive mystical work. Well done.
Angel (Poetry) - 7/19/2003 5:42:50 PM
very bittersweet, but hopeful;-)Nicely done!
Arms (Poetry) - 7/16/2003 11:38:29 PM
Sad but true write....BHUWAN
Passerby (Poetry) - 7/16/2003 2:19:59 PM
This perfectly describes the frustration and confusion of waiting for love. It also reassures that when it arrives, you will know!
Set Me Free (Poetry) - 7/16/2003 2:17:51 PM
So, beautiful, so dream like. Your time will arrive and probably sooner than you think :) Hang in there!
Arms (Poetry) - 7/16/2003 2:15:18 PM
You clearly convey the sadness and disappointment when awakening from a dream that felt like reality. Sad, yet beautiful!
Soul's Song (Poetry) - 7/16/2003 2:13:33 PM
Soul mate (Poetry) - 7/16/2003 2:11:35 PM
This made me smile :)
Arms (Poetry) - 7/16/2003 1:18:36 PM
i felt the pain of lonliness in this one
((((HUGS)))) and love,
karla. :( *tears*
Set Me Free (Poetry) - 7/15/2003 2:19:13 PM
o, i've felt like THIS before
powerful, haunting write--well done
(((HUGS))) and love,
let. me. out. NOWWWWWWWWW
Set Me Free (Poetry) - 7/15/2003 2:03:32 AM
Can the key holder hear your calls, if so he must surely come.
Soul mate (Poetry) - 7/10/2003 5:35:02 PM
Soul mate (Poetry) - 7/10/2003 4:16:40 PM
A most lovely piece...enjoyed much!
Soul mate (Poetry) - 7/10/2003 11:00:56 AM
Lovely write, a pleasure to read.
Soul mate (Poetry) - 7/10/2003 8:21:49 AM
Soul mate (Poetry) - 7/10/2003 1:51:03 AM
VERY NICE POEM
Soul mate (Poetry) - 7/9/2003 11:02:06 PM
Passerby (Poetry) - 7/9/2003 8:13:04 PM
This is such an Awesome write!! Love it.
Passerby (Poetry) - 7/9/2003 8:12:58 PM
A whirlwind of an organised confusion. A writing very well done, Nataku!
Be Mine (Poetry) - 7/5/2003 10:09:44 AM
i've missed you and your poems
this one is outstanding...i'm going to save this to my library to savor again and again
(((HUGS))) and love,
i love your illustrations to your poetry, too...love anime
Be Mine (Poetry) - 7/5/2003 1:04:51 AM
as we mature, things are always seen from another perspective... excellent write!
Be Mine (Poetry) - 7/4/2003 10:13:41 PM
Opps, sorry...meant Nataku, and it came out Tinka.
Be Mine (Poetry) - 7/4/2003 10:11:54 PM
Absolutely beautiful, Tinka. Print this out and tuck it under his pillow.
New Age Dream (Poetry) - 6/17/2003 2:37:30 PM
wow, just wow.........
Freedom in Starlight (Poetry) - 6/2/2003 2:51:41 PM
An enchanting piece ... I love the stars!
The Music Man (Poetry) - 6/1/2003 7:41:35 PM
Your words prove that music keeps us alive inside. Excellent write.
Worthless (Poetry) - 5/18/2003 8:02:26 PM
Aww... how I can relate... wonderful write.. DITCH THE LOSER! I know what you're going thru, and it's hard, but for the best.
don't let him come back.. remember, no guy is worth your tears, and the one who is won't spend yours.
Worthless (Poetry) - 5/18/2003 12:30:14 PM
Sounds worthless too. Bravo. Well done.
Worthless (Poetry) - 5/18/2003 12:22:24 PM
So powerful and intense, I loved this, excellent, love that spirit of the wolf,
Worthless (Poetry) - 5/18/2003 12:21:28 PM
When they keep saying,"I'm sorry" they usually are.
New Age Dream (Poetry) - 4/30/2003 7:31:16 PM
no doubt, a very lovely journey...
New Age Dream (Poetry) - 4/30/2003 5:37:09 PM
simply a great poem
New Age Dream (Poetry) - 4/30/2003 1:27:16 PM
you took me there with this outstanding, beautiful write...well done, mistress! (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
I Remember (Poetry) - 4/14/2003 3:33:53 PM
*tears* thank God i still have my daddy...it's my mother that i no longer have...daddy just had open heart surgery, THANK GOD he's doing okay...he faces back surgery to remove a tumor from his spine...PRAY FOR HIM...this is a beautiful tribute to him...i bet he'd be proud if he could see this...((((((HUGS)))))) and love, and domo arigato, karla. :(
Adoring Your Silence (Poetry) - 4/14/2003 3:31:15 PM
beautiful! domo arigato! :) (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Freedom in Starlight (Poetry) - 4/13/2003 3:43:20 PM
Another wonderful piece work JK!
You should be proud of yourself.
Freedom in Starlight (Poetry) - 4/10/2003 6:38:07 PM
Freedom in Starlight (Poetry) - 4/10/2003 6:17:53 PM
"...And live for our season, the Spring
The time of rebirth
Where your heart can shed it's skin
Drink this moment
It will beome part of you forever..."
Beautiful lines. Well done.
[You can go to your original document posting and correct. Just click on the poem title and it will open the doc for you.]
Freedom in Starlight (Poetry) - 4/10/2003 5:54:03 PM
The word up there is supposed to be elixar....sorry ^_^0
Final Wish (Poetry) - 3/25/2003 2:14:53 PM
Sad, but well written.
Glad I stopped by for this one.
Soul's Song (Poetry) - 3/23/2003 6:09:05 PM
excelent write! even with the spelling errors. after all. to err is human...aw you know the rest! awsome poem.
Soul's Song (Poetry) - 3/23/2003 11:41:32 AM
Wonderful little poem..flows beautifully and so sad..floria
Soul's Song (Poetry) - 3/23/2003 10:51:30 AM
This is a nice work.
I like your sense of humour.
Soul's Song (Poetry) - 3/23/2003 10:50:00 AM
Sorry about the spelling errors! I just remembered that I forgot to spell check ^_^0
Gentle Phoenix (Poetry) - 2/22/2003 3:02:27 PM
Nice free-verse. Beautiful message. I enjoyed it thoroughly.
Gentle Phoenix (Poetry) - 2/21/2003 6:08:26 PM
free flow of verse....excellent!!!
Gentle Phoenix (Poetry) - 2/21/2003 4:50:43 PM
Very good write.
Gentle Phoenix (Poetry) - 2/21/2003 3:40:49 PM
wow, nice poetry
Gentle Love (Poetry) - 2/21/2003 3:16:50 PM
Ah, I love it. It makes me feel tired...
Gentle Phoenix (Poetry) - 2/21/2003 3:06:16 PM
Be-yoo-tee-full, but what else can I expect from such a kickass writer! I love the first line... I have a thing for calling people "darling." Keep it up, darling!
Gentle Phoenix (Poetry) - 2/21/2003 3:04:59 PM
Very good free verse...my favorite form.
Wake My Soul (Poetry) - 2/17/2003 7:05:58 AM
Nataku, this is a beautiful presentation including the touching picture you include. Bill
Wake My Soul (Poetry) - 2/17/2003 6:42:16 AM
This is excellent write...sad but true...cheers...love n luck...BHUWAN
Gentle Love (Poetry) - 2/14/2003 5:51:05 AM
Mistress, it seems someone must be playiing the wrong instrumemts. Bill Murray
Gentle Love (Poetry) - 2/13/2003 6:36:51 PM
Sad poem, powerful emotion, says volume.....Great write!!!!!
Sandie Angel :o)
Your Warmth Waltzing with My Tears (Poetry) - 12/19/2002 3:54:58 PM
Your Warmth Waltzing with My Tears (Poetry) - 12/16/2002 5:34:08 PM
Awsomely beautiful peace. Very heartfelt.
Your Warmth Waltzing with My Tears (Poetry) - 12/16/2002 5:23:20 PM
Very well done. Good flow... lot of emotion there. Very well done, indeed.
Your Warmth Waltzing with My Tears (Poetry) - 12/16/2002 3:29:05 PM
Beautiful! I wept.
Peaceful Misery Verse One (Poetry) - 12/3/2002 4:55:00 AM
I'm looking forward to the rest of it.
Crashing Heart (Poetry) - 12/3/2002 4:44:58 AM
When it is time, your heart will tell to so.
Peaceful Misery Verse One (Poetry) - 12/2/2002 9:31:30 PM
Yep, Life Is Pain & Misery,i.e. Life Does Suck__
But, Too Those & There $$$Millions$$ It Is Great Until They Do Lose It All,i.e.
In Name Of Greed___ They Do Committ Suicide!
TRASK PS : You Got To Make Best Of what You Have Got!
Peaceful Misery Verse One (Poetry) - 12/2/2002 6:38:42 PM
coolness. a bit sad but i guess it's fitting for your current mood.
Peaceful Misery Verse One (Poetry) - 12/2/2002 6:00:29 PM
think it's a nice song... hope you complete/finished the song soon and share with us.. =)
Crashing Heart (Poetry) - 12/2/2002 2:58:57 PM
Wonderful poetic truth.
Crashing Heart (Poetry) - 12/2/2002 2:18:33 PM
To You, My Fair People (Poetry) - 11/24/2002 6:49:37 AM
Better to vent the anger than to suppress it. It helped me alot. Nice write!
To You, My Fair People (Poetry) - 11/24/2002 5:00:25 AM
Anger is a part of the human condition. Enjoy it. It proves that you're alive.
I Told You (Poetry) - 11/23/2002 5:14:53 AM
Not only is this well written, it is also well reasoned out. You are 100% right in your conclusion.
The Music Man (Poetry) - 11/20/2002 5:54:25 PM
Well done, JK. And I fully relate. My music was and is my lifeline as well.
The Music Man (Poetry) - 11/20/2002 5:45:40 PM
I take it you were listening to SG again, huh? ;^) good write!
The Music Man (Poetry) - 11/20/2002 4:48:35 PM
I've got good news for you. The older you get the more music you have to fall back on. Thank you for reminding me.
Lestat (Poetry) - 11/16/2002 6:12:07 PM
Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$
Lestat (Poetry) - 11/16/2002 3:07:08 PM
Lestat could not have said it any better. (Of course he would have put it to a Goth tune.)
Adoring Your Silence (Poetry) - 11/16/2002 7:45:10 AM
i agree with roger
Adoring Your Silence (Poetry) - 11/16/2002 4:33:46 AM
Great ending. Sweet and wistful.
Definition of our Love (Poetry) - 11/14/2002 4:43:16 AM
Very beautiful in its simplicity. Just like love can be when we allow it. Lovely work!
Legacy of the Unkown (Poetry) - 11/14/2002 4:41:18 AM
What price fame? I think that you might have it covered. There is also a difference between fame and talent. So many have the talent yet don't achieve or need to achieve the fame to be appreciated. Very well done!
You Never Loved Me Anyway (Poetry) - 11/14/2002 4:38:24 AM
You've learned so well! What a beautiful job! Profound
I Remember (Poetry) - 11/14/2002 4:36:55 AM
Amazing how what you remember can come together - Daddy is so proud of you now as he always was then. I love you!
Goodbye (Poetry) - 11/14/2002 4:33:10 AM
Very touching, from both a writer's and a parent's perspective! Wonderful work, my Child!
Legacy of the Unkown (Poetry) - 11/13/2002 1:38:12 PM
Courtney Love is your generation's Yoko Ono.
Goodbye (Poetry) - 11/13/2002 1:35:59 PM
1.) Don't trust people who can't spell "schmaltzy".
2.) The ability to project into someone different from you is a requirement for good poetry and fine acting. - Go for it.
3.) My sympathy on your move to New Hampshire. Don't freeze.
Goodbye (Poetry) - 11/13/2002 1:26:04 PM
a bit shmaltsy but good any how
Definition of our Love (Poetry) - 11/9/2002 11:29:51 PM
Gosh this was so lovely. First nighters. Great. Brings back pleasant memories. Bill
Definition of our Love (Poetry) - 11/9/2002 5:10:41 PM
A very heartwarming and idyllic image. It makes me wish I could find a girl like this.
Legacy of the Unkown (Poetry) - 11/9/2002 12:42:47 PM
Spiffy. ^_^ Good job, Taco-chan.
Legacy of the Unkown (Poetry) - 11/9/2002 12:28:39 PM
cool. )goes off to contemplate navel(
Definition of our Love (Poetry) - 11/9/2002 12:25:06 PM
I sence that this was a Jon inspired poem. Perhaps?
You Never Loved Me Anyway (Poetry) - 11/9/2002 11:49:15 AM
for one so young, you write as though you are much older. well done!
Legacy of the Unkown (Poetry) - 11/9/2002 11:48:17 AM
sad write, but something that can happen to a great many celebs. thought provoking and powerful!
Definition of our Love (Poetry) - 11/9/2002 11:47:17 AM
Definition of our Love (Poetry) - 11/9/2002 11:46:54 AM
absolutely beatiful images. Your poem is vivid and full of bliss. Loved every line.
You write well.
Legacy of the Unkown (Poetry) - 11/9/2002 11:19:07 AM
Fame can lead to tragedy and destruction of one's personal life. Very well expressed.
You Never Loved Me Anyway (Poetry) - 11/8/2002 5:02:22 AM
Hoping that all your heartbreak turns into happiness. bill
I Remember (Poetry) - 11/7/2002 10:03:00 PM
As someone who lost a precious Dad on the eve of my forteenth birthday, this really touched me. You have a great strength and talent, young lady.
You Never Loved Me Anyway (Poetry) - 11/7/2002 9:57:11 PM
Hi JK. Wow! You took me back to those teen years. To write so well so young, you have a great future.
You Never Loved Me Anyway (Poetry) - 11/7/2002 8:03:58 PM
great poem jakes.
I Remember (Poetry) - 11/4/2002 8:55:31 AM
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! very well done. and yes i know who you are. do you know who I am? (deserves more than ten but....)
I Remember (Poetry) - 11/3/2002 10:01:06 AM
memories to treasure and cherish......
just loved it, so precious.
I Remember (Poetry) - 11/3/2002 4:59:52 AM
What great memories you are blessed with. Bill
I Remember (Poetry) - 11/2/2002 9:40:26 PM
Well done, JK. Beautiful tribute.
I Remember (Poetry) - 11/2/2002 7:24:36 PM
I Remember (Poetry) - 11/2/2002 4:33:16 PM
I lost my dad when I was young, too, JK. I wish I would have written something like this back then. Cherish the memories, I wrote a piece called, "I Want My Daddy Back" I'll post on here soon.
My maiden name is Kelly, Erin Kelly, and I would love to go to Ireland. A friend of mine went so I asked him to bring me a rock, and he brought me a small piece from the Giant's Causeway! I was so thrilled! Have fun and write while you're there!
Erin ailish o' callaigh'
gaelic for Erin Elizabeth Kelly,
isn't that lovely, a friend of mine told
I Remember (Poetry) - 11/2/2002 11:41:05 AM
nice tribute to your daddy. i am sure you must miss him horribly. i still miss my mom, and it's been 12 years since she died. love, your new friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) p.s.: have fun in *ireland*!! lucky dog, you!! :)