Shadow (Poetry) - 9/21/2009 7:25:52 AM
Interesting indeed..great writing...stay safe and well..Hugss
Shadow (Poetry) - 9/21/2009 7:15:30 AM
I like the Ideal,and feeling but i would and it's just my sugestion
distill it down to bare bones...i think it needs to be edited down less words...but it's good enouhg to stand alone either way
Shadow (Poetry) - 9/21/2009 6:03:42 AM
A very unique pen, thought provoking.