Recent Reviews for William P.J Hine
For want of a better name the Bully (Poetry) - 1/30/2003 2:14:34 PM|
You took me back so completly to a time and place that still effects who I am......beautifully written Will.
Dreams and Dreamers (Poetry) - 1/18/2003 8:07:00 PM
happiness is also where you are not...
Dreams and Dreamers (Poetry) - 1/18/2003 7:51:47 PM
Beautiful dream, never let go.
For want of a better name the Bully (Poetry) - 1/9/2003 1:25:32 PM
Wow this is brilliant really good
The Grandfather Clock (Poetry) - 1/9/2003 1:24:01 PM
grooovy keep going will hale !! get me...
The Grandfather Clock (Poetry) - 11/20/2002 11:23:09 AM
William Good write and an intersting take here.
"Tick one moment,
The old man and the boy,
All in a tick and a tock"
For want of a better name the Bully (Poetry) - 11/19/2002 10:29:42 AM
beautiful and sad, luvly so pretty and true and terrible, damn u why arent u on msn right now?
The art of war (Poetry) - 11/16/2002 8:58:42 AM
WOW!! What power you capture here. Fantastic.
Dirty Hands (Poetry) - 11/16/2002 8:57:08 AM
Wiiliam, This is wonderful, pure teen angst. How many times have we all felt this undeserving. Great write.
The art of war (Poetry) - 11/14/2002 7:15:38 AM
Very deep. Particulaly relavent now.
Dirty Hands (Poetry) - 11/14/2002 7:04:24 AM
Who could this be about. Oh wait I know.
Dirty Hands (Poetry) - 11/13/2002 6:36:31 PM
It's all you need...Hope that is
Hubris (Poetry) - 11/13/2002 1:51:23 PM
Hmmmm sooo cool, its very gud exactly how i feel sometimes, i luv alll ur poems...ur beautiful
Hubris (Poetry) - 11/13/2002 3:57:42 AM
"They lecture but they don't teach,
They shout but never listen"
This is so true. humanity rants and raves but cannot hear. They preach but haven't the knowledge to actually convey a message. Well written.
To The End (Poetry) - 11/12/2002 4:09:56 PM
Nahhhhh never be sorry for sharing your thoughts....This is wonderful, really!....and I hope it helped. Thanks, Dani
To The End (Poetry) - 11/12/2002 2:33:07 PM
i wouldn't have known you were depressed when i read this; what a beautiful message in this write! i know how it is with depression; i have it myself, but i try to go on despite it! i also write, which helps a LOT (as does praying)! hang in there; i will be keeping you in my thoughts and prayers!
love, your friend, karen lynn. (((((((((HUGS)))))))))) :)
Blood Feud (Poetry) - 11/12/2002 11:41:38 AM
Blood Feud (Poetry) - 11/12/2002 11:18:59 AM
welcome to the den, william! we are glad to have you! and as for this write, it is intense and emotional! great write!! love, your new friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)
Blood Feud (Poetry) - 11/12/2002 10:53:06 AM
Willaim first off welcome to the Den. This is a very intense write here. I really like this part
'Deep red blood,
It's running out,
Surely it must end soon,
So it does,'
Excellent u se of words here. Thanx for sharing this and look forward to seeing more of your work.