Recent Reviews for . Oakling
Dismantlement of Desire (Poetry) - 2/24/2006 1:13:54 PM|
If you want the world to change for the better, you have to be prepared to expend and invest your own personal energy and power into the dream, and create your own reality !
My Master (Poetry) - 3/5/2005 4:05:48 PM
Extracted from the obvious view of personal experience, these words become greater than life. Projected onto humanity as a whole, the slave race we are, created for the conveinience of higher beings whose evil imagination matches the power of their minds, these words become greater than death. Less than eight years away from another encounter there is plenty of reason to fear. Yet death can free us from all that. I wonder where you've gone.
The Cradle Shall Fall (Poetry) - 2/20/2005 3:40:43 AM
There are few in this site (or anywhere else for that matter) capable of grasping these words unto their essence. Less than eight years before calendars end. Thought of a rock group know by a name bearing resemblance to what was written here (probably for entirely different reasons), but to each curse there is a blessing and vice versa. Bitter times await before the bow breaks. And the heavens will fall. I've always wondered why this particular place you chose to observe. Or perhaps it is merely an accident of life, as life is an accident in space and time. Take care,
Flaws and All (Poetry) - 3/6/2004 8:02:28 PM
This was so well written, and very lovely,
Flaws and All (Poetry) - 3/4/2004 3:18:40 AM
Everything contains flaws..the ones that love us tend to be blinded from most of them. Well said Oakling...Lisa
To Sit Upon a Shelf (Poetry) - 1/9/2004 9:05:17 AM
This is exactly why I like to write. I can leave home anytime I like, and go anywhere I like..and never have to pack or unpack. Thanks for allowing me on your trip! Lisa
To Sit Upon a Shelf (Poetry) - 1/9/2004 7:33:18 AM
To Sit Upon a Shelf (Poetry) - 1/9/2004 1:06:47 AM
You've created a world, a place where comfort is the temptation. Thanks, Oakling.
To Sit Upon a Shelf (Poetry) - 1/8/2004 11:38:55 PM
Thank you for sharing "To Sit Upon a Shelf"
here at the den.
Continue sharing here at the den, wishing
all the best to you in your writing.
Amidst Cosmic Dust (Poetry) - 1/7/2004 5:11:00 PM
Creative in thought and imagery. Well done. Thank you for this offering. Love and peace, Regis.
Amidst Cosmic Dust (Poetry) - 1/4/2004 10:56:40 AM
Oakling this is fantastic writing and imagery!
I really enjoyed this one!
Happy New Year
Amidst Cosmic Dust (Poetry) - 1/4/2004 2:24:04 AM
WOW! now this has imagery! Wonderfully written. Lisa
The Cradle Shall Fall (Poetry) - 11/16/2003 9:21:04 PM
The Cradle Shall Fall (Poetry) - 11/16/2003 7:12:14 PM
Yes indeed a very strong message so well written.
The Cradle Shall Fall (Poetry) - 11/16/2003 6:30:24 PM
This is a most excellent write...a very strong message.
Open Seas (Poetry) - 11/13/2003 7:30:31 PM
we are all on the vessel of life
wandering in the brezzes:
the ones we choose and those we are are willed by...
really good write with some superb imagery...
Open Seas (Poetry) - 11/13/2003 12:36:38 PM
Itís how you sail the open seas
And what you do with the breeze
Great poem, I esp. love this line.
Choices Made (Poetry) - 9/28/2003 9:52:50 AM
Wonderful message we always have choices.
Choices Made (Poetry) - 9/28/2003 8:14:15 AM
I love this message and relate to it!
Secrets Hushed (Poetry) - 8/22/2003 6:46:45 PM
This is truly EXQUISITE!
The ryhme and the flow so perfect!
Secrets Hushed (Poetry) - 8/22/2003 10:40:19 AM
I agree. Exquisite.
Lillith's Moon (Poetry) - 7/25/2003 3:03:53 PM
Beautifully written, lovely and so dark, I love it,
Lillith's Moon (Poetry) - 7/24/2003 6:44:52 PM
I love it...
Possibly (Poetry) - 6/22/2003 5:03:36 AM
Hmmmm Steve this is such a image filled write of thoughts with much to wonder and ponder upon, <sigh> we can never wonder and ponder to much you know! ;O) It is also very well crafted too...I like...yes I do!! :O)
Possibly (Poetry) - 6/21/2003 8:24:04 PM
well designed stream of thoughts...
For Mother's Day (Poetry) - 5/11/2003 6:55:38 PM
beautifully done glitches and all
For Mother's Day (Poetry) - 5/11/2003 6:49:49 PM
This is a beautiful poem, with good rhyme.
For Mother's Day (Poetry) - 5/11/2003 2:25:17 PM
This is awesome indeed. You have here made all of us remember what it was like to be a kid again and look up to our mothers thru our eyes of innocense!
For Mother's Day (Poetry) - 5/11/2003 1:55:10 PM
beautiful write, oakling! happy mother's day, sweetie! :) (((HUGS)))
For Mother's Day (Poetry) - 5/11/2003 5:10:20 AM
You bring one back to childhood...
Iím always here
To hold them steady
In bitter anger
Or anguish heavy
Let life be grand
But lessons many
And love as colored as the sky
With rainbow, storm or snowflake high
I let loose the line that holds them near
A little more with each passing year
Be good I say
Be sweet too
Love you mommy
And I love you.
For Mother's Day (Poetry) - 5/11/2003 4:19:26 AM
I'm confused about the glitches, otherwise, whoever wrote this is terrific!
For Mother's Day (Poetry) - 5/10/2003 11:13:46 PM
This is the craziest place. But this is a super poem.
For Mother's Day (Poetry) - 5/10/2003 8:25:20 PM
Yes glitches! Thank you...Oakling
For Mother's Day (Poetry) - 5/10/2003 8:09:06 PM
My Mom Long Gone Dead!
Glitches . Authorsden Again!????
Twilight Blooms (Poetry) - 5/10/2003 5:34:03 PM
Thanks for the nice words. This poem is mine...for some reason my name is getting left off much of my work ...hmmm. Thanks again...O
Twilight Blooms (Poetry) - 5/10/2003 4:52:06 PM
It is a beautiful poem,
Twilight Blooms (Poetry) - 5/10/2003 11:19:52 AM
Yes it is a lovely poem.
Twilight Blooms (Poetry) - 5/10/2003 9:41:10 AM
beautiful write! :) (((HUGS)))
Twilight Blooms (Poetry) - 5/10/2003 4:45:54 AM
Strange happenings? Was surprised to see you posting two at a time.......
Are you sure you do not want to claim this? Its beautiful!
Twilight Blooms (Poetry) - 5/10/2003 3:56:56 AM
I didn't write this and have no idea how my name got on it! But it is a lovely poem.
Bitter Irony (Poetry) - 4/17/2003 11:06:44 PM
glad you do! though-provoking write...
Bitter Irony (Poetry) - 4/13/2003 12:48:02 PM
Bitter Irony (Poetry) - 4/13/2003 11:17:54 AM
"...Getting in my own way..."
Sure is a killer to a productive life, yet I see it so often in my practice. This is a very thoughtful work. Bravo.
Bitter Irony (Poetry) - 4/13/2003 10:52:32 AM
Very good thankyou!
Consciousness (Poetry) - 4/11/2003 12:21:55 PM
Consciousness (Poetry) - 4/11/2003 7:26:30 AM
Oh yes, consciousness! I could spend hours and hours comtemplating these questions. Thanks for stirring my consciousness!
Consciousness (Poetry) - 4/11/2003 7:21:44 AM
Loved this.......it read as great poetry should....Ty, Dani
Perfect (Poetry) - 4/10/2003 1:18:10 PM
absence makes the heart grow "perfect"
Perfect (Poetry) - 4/10/2003 12:22:46 PM
Beautifully said...thank you;-)
Perfect (Poetry) - 4/10/2003 9:22:24 AM
Perfect (Poetry) - 4/10/2003 6:19:03 AM
This poem is perfection as well!
Soul's Cradle (Poetry) - 4/9/2003 2:04:48 PM
Rock a bye baby.... This is sweetly passionate. Teresa
Soul's Cradle (Poetry) - 4/9/2003 12:28:31 PM
Soul's Cradle (Poetry) - 4/9/2003 8:18:49 AM
"Sometimes my words are all Iíve got ... " I felt this one, deeply.
Soul's Cradle (Poetry) - 4/9/2003 6:43:50 AM
This is just peaceful and beautiful
Murmured Words (Poetry) - 4/4/2003 9:44:04 AM
Murmured Words (Poetry) - 4/4/2003 6:40:24 AM
I love this
Murmured Words (Poetry) - 4/4/2003 4:33:55 AM
Beautiful in flow and imagery, enjoyed this very much.
The Rite (Poetry) - 3/28/2003 9:52:20 PM
Ahhh, I do like this. Otherworldly quality to it. Nicely done.
Spirit Unbind (Poetry) - 3/28/2003 11:57:46 AM
nice! :) (((HUGS)))
Spirit Unbind (Poetry) - 3/28/2003 11:42:11 AM
Marvelous rhythm to this work.
The Route (Poetry) - 3/27/2003 7:33:02 PM
Excellent!! Please keep writing. Thank you...CL
The Route (Poetry) - 3/27/2003 7:22:55 PM
Excellent write...every twist and turn is a lesson learned usually directed by the creator,you'll be okay as long as you know your way back;-)
The Route (Poetry) - 3/27/2003 6:41:39 PM
Wow, this is a deep one. Never be afraid of taking the twists and turns in a road. Makes for some intereting side trips.
Edge of the Earth (Poetry) - 3/27/2003 7:46:35 AM
Has a neat rhythm.
My Hands (Poetry) - 3/20/2003 9:19:31 AM
Ahhh these hands are full.. These hands offe love and peace.. Love those hands
My Hands (Poetry) - 3/19/2003 11:53:34 PM
Empty hands that are full of love! Very good!
My Hands (Poetry) - 3/19/2003 10:53:40 PM
Play I Will (Poetry) - 3/16/2003 10:34:13 AM
creative and unique...excellent
Play I Will (Poetry) - 3/16/2003 8:12:56 AM
And you will thoroughly enjoy it.
Play I Will (Poetry) - 3/16/2003 1:46:45 AM
This one is a very interesting one.
Mutiny (Poetry) - 3/12/2003 11:51:21 AM
Very interesting well done
Mutiny (Poetry) - 3/11/2003 1:32:58 PM
Your words paint a fantastic image
you took me there!!!
Mutiny (Poetry) - 3/7/2003 11:07:10 AM
Mutiny (Poetry) - 3/7/2003 4:53:35 AM
Oakling, excellent poem. very profound and professionally written.
Mutiny (Poetry) - 3/7/2003 4:14:01 AM
Wow, this reverberates, Oakling! Cool write! :)
Mutiny (Poetry) - 3/7/2003 4:01:06 AM
Great write! I could almost hear the beat on the drums...
Sandie Angel :o)
Something Wretched Lonely Sits (Poetry) - 3/6/2003 7:17:26 PM
This was so moving! Very touching,
Liked it quite a bit,
Something Wretched Lonely Sits (Poetry) - 3/4/2003 11:59:12 PM
Wretched is a good title. It is full of gloom and doom. bill
Something Wretched Lonely Sits (Poetry) - 3/4/2003 11:57:59 PM
what a deep sense of lonliness...
Something Wretched Lonely Sits (Poetry) - 3/4/2003 7:39:36 PM
Love the imagery of this...great mood piece.
Something Wretched Lonely Sits (Poetry) - 3/4/2003 6:54:50 PM
Yes, this is very, very, good--touches the soul.
Something Wretched Lonely Sits (Poetry) - 3/4/2003 5:26:23 PM
Nice. You are really cranking them out today, and everyone is good, good, good.
Chambers (Poetry) - 3/4/2003 10:58:47 AM
enjoyed reading this, knowing a hint of the depths...also, drawn to the name "oakling."
Chambers (Poetry) - 3/4/2003 3:36:33 AM
Loved your poem.
Chambers (Poetry) - 3/4/2003 1:01:30 AM
Beautiful free verse.
Flows well. The secret of free verse.
10,000 Years (Poetry) - 3/3/2003 8:20:23 PM
Now this is deep.
10,000 Years (Poetry) - 3/3/2003 7:55:18 PM
The Garden (Poetry) - 2/12/2003 9:31:40 AM
Lucky Valentine to have a romantic like you! So sweet! God bless! Love, Beth
The Garden (Poetry) - 2/12/2003 8:39:03 AM
Just beautiful lucky one to have you
"Where the heart growsÖso shall the mind follow. "
The Garden (Poetry) - 2/12/2003 7:06:29 AM
Great! Brilliant! Bill Murray
The Garden (Poetry) - 2/12/2003 6:12:47 AM
So Entwined (Poetry) - 2/11/2003 9:29:01 AM
This is beautiful. Words to be guided by.
So Entwined (Poetry) - 2/11/2003 8:36:47 AM
So Entwined (Poetry) - 2/11/2003 7:34:52 AM
Yes Oakling, growth will come, usually as a natural progression. Bill Murray
So Entwined (Poetry) - 2/10/2003 10:20:03 PM
Beautiful rhyme here, very nice!
So Entwined (Poetry) - 2/10/2003 9:01:31 PM
So Inclined Is More Like So Entwined To Be...
The Crone (Poetry) - 2/10/2003 8:30:17 AM
Awesome writing here.
The Crone (Poetry) - 2/10/2003 7:45:32 AM
This is very good writing...Floria
The Crone (Poetry) - 2/10/2003 7:40:22 AM
Goddess Beg (Poetry) - 11/24/2002 5:58:05 PM
Fantastic...Very depthful writing..Thanks, Dani
Do You Know (Poetry) - 11/17/2002 5:04:08 PM
As All Human Beings Born Beautiful,i.e. as They Do Become Ugly In (Greed) Sin...
Whilst on Your Journey (Poetry) - 11/17/2002 3:44:32 PM
Wonderful words of truth!!!!
Apprehension (Poetry) - 11/17/2002 3:29:33 PM
This is most beautiful and speaks well of the journey towards Oneness!!! Good job!
Balance (Poetry) - 11/17/2002 3:21:59 PM
To see perfection in the appearances of good and bad, the crown appears! Very good!!!
Do You Know (Poetry) - 11/17/2002 3:05:18 PM
Do You Know (Poetry) - 11/17/2002 8:48:31 AM
They will. Nice write.
Whilst on Your Journey (Poetry) - 11/16/2002 10:30:27 AM
Oh, I like this one also!!! I often have deeper conversations with the trees then I do with humans!
Apprehension (Poetry) - 11/16/2002 10:24:55 AM
Oh God, this is so beautiful!
"She moves closer
Till I see the reflection
She opens Her mouth to speak
Only my voice is heard"
Apprehension (Poetry) - 11/16/2002 5:04:15 AM
Wonderful write. Very good!!
Her Creature (Poetry) - 11/15/2002 10:16:40 PM
Miss Not A Word (Poetry) - 11/14/2002 9:55:52 AM
This is gorgeous!!!! I look forward to reading more of your work.