He Comes Before Night (Book) - 10/29/2009 11:15:09 AM
This sounds like it's a very good book. Keep your head up and continuing writing from your heart. This is how you will succeed.
The Monster (Poetry) - 10/29/2009 1:45:45 AM
Intriguing and compelling poem.I have enjoyed reading your works.I hope you can post more poems in the future.You have God given talent.Just continue to stay true to yourself.take care
Helpless Virgin (Poetry) - 10/29/2009 1:43:14 AM
Sometimes teenagers can be very cruel,stupid and ignorant.They always want to make fun of someone who hasn't done it yet as a way to make them feel less of something.The reality is that it happens all the time.
Momma's Choice (Poetry) - 10/29/2009 1:39:34 AM
This is a deep and powerful poem.You definitely know how to write dark and expressive poetry which is very impressing.
Make-Up (Poetry) - 10/29/2009 1:36:49 AM
An interesting and well written poem.You are a very talented writer.Keep up the great work and be proud of the gift that you share with readers and other people.take care
Into the Life of a Lost Teen (Poetry) - 10/29/2009 1:33:55 AM
A sad and moving poem.Unfortunately a lot of girls would experience and feel the pain of not being loved.Welcome to the den.take care