Stillborn (Poetry) - 3/28/2010 4:01:12 AM
I hope you buy that joy back
And let tears cut a healing track.
Dolphin Whistle (Poetry) - 3/4/2010 7:04:12 PM
Very well put into words, I feel heavy when I read this, does that make sense?
Cock Ring (Poetry) - 1/10/2010 9:08:27 PM
Intense-the build up was perfect for that ending.
Cock Ring (Poetry) - 1/9/2010 3:42:14 AM
Excellent poem.A well written piece.take care
Cock Ring (Poetry) - 1/8/2010 6:19:57 PM
LIfe itself, in a COCK RING"...Very dangerous. Ty
Ch'erie
I Should Have Kissed You (Poetry) - 1/3/2010 1:29:50 PM
This has good movement and runs right down the page- it would be good for an open mike performance.
I Should Have Kissed You (Poetry) - 1/1/2010 9:08:18 PM
Excellent poem but so sad. You have great wealth to offer and I hope you take your kind words into your own heart for yourself that you lovingly passed on to another.