Recent Reviews for William Bonilla
A Journey To The Other Side (Short Story) - 8/8/2013 5:04:29 AM|
wonderful write very enjoyable to read
A Journey To The Other Side (Short Story) - 8/7/2013 5:22:39 AM
A great write William. I have read many books on the subject and recently had a friend who visited heaven and had a glimpse of hell. I will post a story about it this week.
Stay well brother,
A Journey To The Other Side (Short Story) - 8/4/2013 6:14:03 AM
God still had work for you to do here. It just wasn't your time. Keep witnessing.
Have You Ever Seen A Ghost? (Short Story) - 7/1/2013 5:01:28 PM
okay, I have one for you, we rented a beach house on the Cape. There were two bedrooms upstairs. One for the kids, one for us. we had to move a dresser out of the room to fit the crib for my daughter and my son would sleep in the single bed. That night the crib would just shake violently and scratch across the floor, I went into the room and the crib would be still and she would be sleeping.(she wouldn't be strong enough to do that anyway) My son, who was a toddler at the time, was asleep as well. I Went back to bed. Same thing. This went on for two nights. The third night we put the dresser back in the room and moved her and my son downstairs.!!! After we left and talked with the owners they admitted that in the basement the previous renters couldn't get the lights to turn off. That is the last house we have ever rented!
The Shortest Story Ever Told (Short Story) - 7/1/2013 4:45:19 PM
I think it's being noticed how bad we the people are being walked on , not sure how it's all going to stop though. nicely done in RED. Happy fourth to you.
The Unforgiving (Short Story) - 6/20/2013 7:41:49 PM
Thank you for sharing such an intimate and vividly scarring childhood memory. I too can recall some ugly memories growing up but I have learned to make peace with them through the grace of my Lord Jesus Christ. The self respect, dignity and self love that has resulted through this divine grace and guidance has allowed victory over these trials and tribulations.
At the end of the day, I ask myself was that person's shortcomings/narrowness of mind/unloving actions/personal insecurity/twisted upbringing/emptiness/satanic influence etc.. worth my present and future peace of mind and heart condition that channels God's love and strength? Answer:NO! So I pray, forgive and give it to God. On the day of judgement, we will all give an account so better to keep the slate clean. God bless you today and always..Thank you again.
The Shortest Story Ever Told (Short Story) - 1/26/2013 11:08:18 AM
Salutations to Poet William Bonilla.
You have delivered the key to ignite the engine of political awareness.
I did enjoy the reading of "The Shortest Story Ever Told", and leave it in good company of Abraham Lincoln words: "This country, with its institutions, belongs to the people who inhabit it. Whenever they shall grow weary of the existing government, they can exercise their constitutional right of amending it, or their revolutionary right to dismember it or overthrow it. ¯ Abraham Lincoln"
In respect and admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
The Shortest Story Ever Told (Short Story) - 10/10/2012 4:16:45 AM
Someone, Mr. Bonilla, should dissent from this 'love fest' and it might as well be me. Your story is too short. It needs the rest of the sentence. "We the People of the United States, in order to form a more perfect union", etc. and that other important part about our 'common good' ... So odd that we would be doing the Oligarch's will as if we were Hessian mercenaries. 'Big' government is just a front for the monied class and our founding fathers warned us against a) corporations b) political parties c) standing armies - even so, I admire your passion - I just think it misdirected against
We The People, who are (supposed to be) the government. Thus our passion and frustration are used against ourselves. Best ...
The Shortest Story Ever Told (Short Story) - 5/28/2011 6:49:29 AM
Here Here and Amen!
Short, sweet, to the point.
The Shortest Story Ever Told (Short Story) - 1/20/2011 2:22:37 PM
Short and sweet and to the point!..BRAVO...M
The Unforgiving (Short Story) - 1/10/2011 2:16:18 PM
Oh! I can feel your pain as it triggers my own. I had two sisters who treated me like that. My innocence cried more times than not. But they must have harbored more pain than I, to have behaved with such viciousness, which they harbor still. Sometimes I feel sorry for them and think I have forgiven them. But sometimes my pain resurfaces and I feel angry again. I think it is extremely hard to completely forgive when the abuser has not yet grown into remorse.
The Shortest Story Ever Told (Short Story) - 11/28/2010 4:16:06 PM
Succinct and to the point, William. Love and peace to you,
Teddy The Horse (Short Story) - 10/19/2010 4:15:02 PM
WELL DONE...EVERYTHING WAS FULLY EXPLAINED AND I CAN ONLY IMAGINE THE SOURCE OF PRIDE THAT HER PARENTS FELT AT HER WIN. AND YOU, WILLIAM, I KNOW YOU KNEW ALL ALONG THAT SHE WAS A 'WINNER', WITH OR WITHOUT THE AWARD...DIDN'T YOU? (SMILE). THANKS FOR SHARING...I ENJOYED THIS READ. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
The Shortest Story Ever Told (Short Story) - 9/17/2010 12:03:13 AM
Sorry Mate, I can't make a sensible comment.
Aussie is too far from everyday USA.
But we certainly join in your horror of recent catastrophies.
The Shortest Story Ever Told (Short Story) - 3/31/2010 1:31:51 AM
The Shortest Story Ever Told (Short Story) - 3/22/2010 8:55:48 PM
The Shortest Story Ever Told (Short Story) - 3/22/2010 4:34:40 AM
If that's for Putin you have my vote, but if you are referring to that Iranian Am-a-nut-job fellow you have my bullets!
The Shortest Story Ever Told (Short Story) - 3/21/2010 6:21:05 PM
In Christs Love
The Shortest Story Ever Told (Short Story) - 3/21/2010 2:51:31 PM
Have You Ever Seen A Ghost? (Short Story) - 1/31/2010 7:52:11 AM
must a ghost have to once been alive to be a ghost, or can there be a spirit that was never a human form? "met" a native American shaman spirit one night in Upstate NY. Not sure he ever physically walked the Iroquois territory. Your story is intriguing. Kathy
Have You Ever Seen A Ghost? (Short Story) - 1/6/2010 11:02:50 AM
I believe you William, because a supernatural occurrence happened to my brother. In fact I have the full story on Authorsden, titled, A true story of the supernatural.
Anyway, I enjoyed this piece. However, I personally would have been out of there in about two seconds had I witnessed it. But as I say, If they are there, then there surely must be little doubt of Gods existence.
The Unforgiving (Short Story) - 12/12/2009 6:28:53 AM
Maybe an experience that led to your career choice? Sounds like she would make a great bi-polar villain in a children's book or any book really.
Still Searching (Short Story) - 12/10/2009 5:48:13 PM
William I really enjoyed reading "Still Searching" and found it rather interesting! I am glad that I stopped by! be encouraged.
Have You Ever Seen A Ghost? (Short Story) - 12/7/2009 2:05:59 PM
I love your story, it is so filled with passion, that from the beginning I knew that you were not afraid. It captured me as I read, I felt as if I was there. You see, I live with ghosts as well, although I am not sure who they are. I have believed since I was a little girl and a gentleman helped me find my way out of the woods. I am 58 years old now, and my friends are still with me, some new ones as well.
Have You Ever Seen A Ghost? (Short Story) - 7/21/2009 1:06:07 PM
I really liked the thrown-together style of this piece--very Beat, and reminds me of Kerouac, or at least how Kerouac wanted to be. I, right now, am struggling with whether my first impressions are better for their clumsiness or whether it is better that I meticulously rewrite each tale word by word. Something tells me that there's genius in "typing, not writing," as Capote once said about Jack K., that gets erased when we pore over our work too heavily.
A Cold Silent Night (Poetry) - 12/21/2013 6:36:09 AM
Crisp and clear just like the ending hymn.
All is calm, all is bright.
A Cold Silent Night (Poetry) - 12/21/2013 4:06:22 AM
A soft melody and a marvelous poem. And Merry Christmas to you and yours.
A Cold Silent Night (Poetry) - 12/20/2013 12:28:48 PM
A story so long ago yet heard again and again every year.
Love's hand reaches through time to tell it over and over so that all may know God gave this son to us all to have an eternal life one day with him.
My imagination tries to invision what heaven is going to be like, verses days and times now.
Joy unspeakable and full of glory came in the form of a man so long ago in a manger.
Praise God that he created something so simple to confound the wise to the point they are given a chance at choice. We alone must choose.
God Bless you and Merry Christmas William!
A Cold Silent Night (Poetry) - 12/20/2013 8:41:53 AM
How lovely and heart warming. We have certainly been blessed!
A Cold Silent Night (Poetry) - 12/20/2013 7:40:00 AM
Star of wonder star of bright, star of this well written poem.
Have a meaningful Christmas.
A Cold Silent Night (Poetry) - 12/20/2013 7:13:18 AM
Lovely!!! And a very Merry Christmas to you and yours with all the best for the new year!!!
A Cold Silent Night (Poetry) - 12/20/2013 7:08:48 AM
Very nicely done and craftily brought in Silent Night. I have a feeling this told the tale much more honestly than that other version.
Can't Breathe (Poetry) - 12/19/2013 6:35:07 AM
It's always tomorrow. On such nights I put the radio on and if it's something interesting, then it's zzzzzzz
Can't Breathe (Poetry) - 12/19/2013 6:21:10 AM
wonderful visions painted here by your words
Can't Breathe (Poetry) - 12/19/2013 4:00:21 AM
a colorful way to start the day after a night of tumultuous slumber ,,,
Can't Breathe (Poetry) - 12/17/2013 5:55:00 PM
Perhaps your writing friend from the east can help with that insomnia!
Call or text me next time u are unable to sleep i am always up till 1am
Love your descriptive verses especially the line
"I crave for the orange hues to paint the heavens of the horizon east"
Much peace love and light
Can't Breathe (Poetry) - 12/17/2013 9:59:13 AM
Everything seems better in the morning. All of the thoughts that keep one awake at night seem to run and hide from the sun. Great write!
Can't Breathe (Poetry) - 12/17/2013 9:54:03 AM
Can so relate, William. I have had a pattern of staying awake all night for no particular reason and get that sinking feeling when I know that 'ping', the switch in the brain, that means it's going to happen. Great physical and evocative descriptions and the mood clearly conveyed. Perhaps now you're feeling sleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeepy... xx
Can't Breathe (Poetry) - 12/17/2013 8:49:30 AM
It's only when I eat late, when I have something on my mind that is troubling me, or I'm too hot or too cold, that I can't sleep. So I can't comment.
Can't Breathe (Poetry) - 12/17/2013 6:14:07 AM
Full moons bring, sleep troubles sometimes,
Change in seasons and moody minds.
Hope your tossing and turning will stop,
Soothe your stomach with ice cream and pop.
Sit in your rocking chair and look to the east,
Those beautiful skies will give you great peace!
Enjoyed this one William!
Can't Breathe (Poetry) - 12/17/2013 5:08:27 AM
Sounds like a tossing and turning night without end, but never without desires. It is bright and sunny here in the swamp this morning. Hope it is the same where you are.
Can't Breathe (Poetry) - 12/16/2013 9:42:36 PM
beautiful expressions, A worthy wait, what more we want in life, but for a sunny tomorrow.
Where Did Time Go? (Poetry) - 12/16/2013 10:38:14 AM
I LOVE THE DESCRIPTIVE PHRASES HERE...I SAW EVERYTHING SO CLEARLY! TIME AND TIDE WAITS FOR NO MAN...IT PASSES ON, VERY QUICKLY. AND I THINK OF THOSE THAT WAKE EACH DAY AND FINDS THEY HAVE NO CHILDREN, NO GRANDCHILDREN, NO MEMORIES OF A BEAUTIFUL LOVE & SPOUSE. I THINK OF THOSE SO UNLIKE YOU WHO ARE UNABLE TO MOVE THEMSELVES TO LOOK INTO A MIRROR AND THOSE THAT CANNOT WALK AND BREATH WITHOUT BEING ATTACHED TO A MACHINE. SO THEN, WHEN ONE THINKS ON THESE THINGS, THEY CAN BE THANKFUL FOR THE NUMEROUS BLESSINGS OF THE PRESENT...WITHOUT LAMENTING OVER THE PAST. AND IT'S THE 'GOLD' FOUND WITHIN THE BEAUTY OF THE 'ASHES' THAT IS SO APPRECIATED. THANKS FOR SHARING, WILLIAM. WE MUST REFUSE TO LET ANYTHING...OR...ANYONE DULL THE LUSTER OF 'HIS' GOLD IN OUR LIVES. DON'T WORRY ABOUT TIME, JUST LIVE ONE DAY AT A TIME AND ACCEPTS WHAT HE ALLOWS. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
The Super Star (Poetry) - 12/16/2013 10:11:59 AM
THIS POEM INSTANTLY BROUGHT TO MIND MY SON'S POEM(FORGOTTEN STARS-asa d seeley)HERE ON EBAY. I MEAN...AREN'T WE ALL 'STARS' WITH STRENGHTS AND WEAKNESSES? ONLY WHEN WE THINK OF OURSELVES AS ANYTHING LESS, DO WE FIND 'STARS' IRRITATING. THANKS FOR THE SHARE. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Where Did Time Go? (Poetry) - 12/11/2013 1:03:10 AM
Oh! this's Fantastic
Where Did Time Go? (Poetry) - 12/6/2013 5:45:16 PM
Dedar William, I like your poem, but life is half in our hand and half is in other hands.
Let's enjoy what is ours
and let go of what is sour
Where Did Time Go? (Poetry) - 12/6/2013 6:59:30 AM
Beautifully stated. In Afrikaans we used to say 'Brill & Pill' - spectacles and pills!
Where Did Time Go? (Poetry) - 12/5/2013 2:44:58 PM
Whole IDEA Is:
To Make Best Of What You Got Left!
Or You Can Always TEMPT Hands Of FATE!
Your Friend, TRASK....
Where Did Time Go? (Poetry) - 12/5/2013 4:32:42 AM
In the blink of an eye, it passes us all by.
Where Did Time Go? (Poetry) - 12/4/2013 8:21:25 PM
time never went anywhere, it's life that moves on ...
really nice philosophical visualization ...
Where Did Time Go? (Poetry) - 12/4/2013 8:58:37 AM
We have all lived long enough to see it happen. I wonder what we did before inhalers? We just croaked?
Where Did Time Go? (Poetry) - 12/4/2013 8:22:27 AM
As long as we are here, we must serve a purpose. Helping others is mine I believe. Sure, time flies. We must make the most of every moment in some way.
Where Did Time Go? (Poetry) - 12/4/2013 6:08:47 AM
Giggle...and it goes by just that fast! Loved your take on how quickly time flies, William...
Where Did Time Go? (Poetry) - 12/4/2013 5:19:54 AM
"How did it ever get to this
Overweight walking slow
Searching my pockets
For an inhaler"
Yes indeed, I can sadly relate, and I have moved on to a nebulizer. Still, I am upright, I have my senses about me, still a recent death has given me insight on what I should have done with my life. Too late, too late.
Where Did Time Go? (Poetry) - 12/4/2013 4:59:18 AM
We are all there, especially after the turkey day. But today I made riding my bike or walking at least 30 min every day a priority. Yes, if we don't use it we lose it.
Blessings my friend,
Where Did Time Go? (Poetry) - 12/4/2013 4:10:26 AM
we all live this, it is better than the alternative
Where Did Time Go? (Poetry) - 12/4/2013 3:48:04 AM
One step forward, two steps back. 16 pills then back to bed.
It's a losing game. Push up, push out, push on!
You said it better.
Where Did Time Go? (Poetry) - 12/4/2013 12:10:08 AM
I don't know!! It did fly by, but even in my vanity I don't miss those hormonal and vanity filled days. I for one think you look great.
Prisoner Of Passionate Desires (Poetry) - 11/26/2013 11:30:06 AM
With grace and elegance
you write, William, for
all who can relate
The Super Star (Poetry) - 11/25/2013 3:32:28 AM
very well said and true
The Super Star (Poetry) - 11/24/2013 8:54:22 PM
Very True! Find me a real hero! Even in a church, there are probably less than 5% of the men who would really take a bullet for Jesus. Get real people!
The Super Star (Poetry) - 11/24/2013 4:27:46 PM
Lest Reviews Excellent Analogy
Of Present Day Political Oblivion!!
The Super Star (Poetry) - 11/24/2013 2:17:03 PM
....applicable in business as well.
The Super Star (Poetry) - 11/24/2013 9:58:57 AM
We wouldn't be referring to a certain president, would we?
I find it hard to criticize a president without walking in his or her shoes.
The Super Star (Poetry) - 11/24/2013 8:29:43 AM
People are strange........the way they can turn things around is unbelievable!
The Super Star (Poetry) - 11/24/2013 7:39:25 AM
Spin. Spin. Spin. SPIN! I'm sick of it. Spin is everywhere you go.
Prisoner Of Passionate Desires (Poetry) - 11/22/2013 2:46:21 PM
You Really Are Romantic!!
Read My Poem Esp For Phyllis:
As Not Just Any Poem Will Come Back To Haunt You...
July 11, 2003...
Prisoner Of Passionate Desires (Poetry) - 11/20/2013 11:49:26 AM
How many times that has happened when two souls lust for one another but never have a chance to consummate that thought.
Prisoner Of Passionate Desires (Poetry) - 11/20/2013 9:32:07 AM
William, you still are that silver tongued devil...love this one!
Prisoner Of Passionate Desires (Poetry) - 11/19/2013 6:54:15 PM
those fleeting moments, captured right here in your poem!
Prisoner Of Passionate Desires (Poetry) - 11/19/2013 5:18:06 PM
This is another lovely romantic poem that stimulates the emotions of
someone who is madly in love and somehow has lost touch but is desiring to be with that love so bad. I love this poem, good write.
Prisoner Of Passionate Desires (Poetry) - 11/19/2013 12:46:02 PM
Now this is the old William...such passionate poetry, where's the nearest prison??? lol
Peace, love and light,
Prisoner Of Passionate Desires (Poetry) - 11/19/2013 8:23:25 AM
You are certainly a victim of love being smitten so! Ya just never know! Perhaps someday.................
Prisoner Of Passionate Desires (Poetry) - 11/19/2013 7:26:33 AM
i really enjoyed this one
Prisoner Of Passionate Desires (Poetry) - 11/19/2013 6:59:13 AM
Eh . . . That happened to me once. It was frustrating. She was supposed to be out of my reach society-wise. Untouchable as it were. Still, passion overcame my reluctance, and I walked up to her and said, "I have to have you." She smiled sweetly and said, "I expected you were going to say that you had fallen desperately in love with me. I like what you said rather that what I thought you were going to say." She hooked her arm around mine and we walked off to the sounds of a full orchestra in my ears. We were a hot idem for almost a year, and we still communicate with one another.
Prisoner Of Passionate Desires (Poetry) - 11/19/2013 5:57:49 AM
Beautiful as the chemistry drew you both together...
everything you soul desired in her beauty is here for
she captured you...
Love and Light,
The Love Letter (Poetry) - 11/15/2013 11:45:54 AM
A beautiful love letter to the woman of your dreams, she should
feel good and blessed about it, to know her man loves and adore her
so. Good write.
The Love Letter (Poetry) - 11/15/2013 10:30:04 AM
A tender love letter, my friend...D'Artagnan rides again
Liar (Poetry) - 11/14/2013 9:26:38 PM
Oh what a tangled web
you write with cleverness
The Love Letter (Poetry) - 11/14/2013 7:24:26 PM
LOvely are the words in love,William so nice-roseline
The Love Letter (Poetry) - 11/14/2013 10:06:32 AM
You ended this love letter with…? The color of her hair and her eyes leaves most women out. I hope they aren't too upset.
The Love Letter (Poetry) - 11/14/2013 8:27:06 AM
Nicely done, William...short and sweet...with so much between the lines...
The Love Letter (Poetry) - 11/14/2013 4:38:32 AM
very well said
The Love Letter (Poetry) - 11/14/2013 3:55:42 AM
Dats a Lv Letter! Dats for sure! Well done William!
The Love Letter (Poetry) - 11/14/2013 2:46:42 AM
Oh, yeah! This is a good one! Beautiful, in fact.
The Love Letter (Poetry) - 11/14/2013 2:29:08 AM
Lovely love letter, am sure...she'll swoon with delight !!
Liar (Poetry) - 11/13/2013 4:41:07 PM
So true and sadly, in many walks of life linger the liars, William. Love and peace, friend,
The Love Letter (Poetry) - 11/13/2013 4:40:08 PM
Lovely, loving, romantic... ...I can completely relate with this. Thank you for sharing, William. Love and peace to you,
The Love Letter (Poetry) - 11/13/2013 4:39:29 PM
Now that is a love letter, William bravo
When Eyes Meet (Poetry) - 11/11/2013 6:45:06 PM
I was drawn to your site by the title you chose for this offering. Oh so romantic and intense. I love the pace you have set for this poetic gem... slow, soft, ripe with sensuality unknown. Yet, a casual wink and you walk away. A very classy post.
Joy L. Hale
Liar (Poetry) - 11/11/2013 4:14:14 PM
I guess this is an American political poem?
Yet, it relates to Cameron, too.
Liar (Poetry) - 11/9/2013 11:38:52 AM
It seems the moment that ones lips are moving...another lie spouts. Great write
Liar (Poetry) - 11/9/2013 3:59:47 AM
Most “Mythomaniac” successful people know how to make their lies work throughout their lives. Every day they begin with a new lie and eventually their lies kill their conscience and life becomes a dream.
Liar (Poetry) - 11/7/2013 8:25:57 PM
I remembered that nursery rhythm also, and yes unfortunately,
your poem reflects that liars are still doing their thing, lying.
(smile) I enjoyed reading your poem today.
The Mirror's Image (Poetry) - 11/7/2013 4:04:28 PM
Getting older!I thank for this day for being able to read this great poem of yours which stands first in the popular list today and I have become your fan! Better late than never. The most handsome face that i recently appreciated and closely watched , it is imprinted freshly in my mind is the face of my poet uncle who recenly passed away at 97. ( read my poem on him .The Grand old man fell silent)
Liar (Poetry) - 11/7/2013 11:44:59 AM
Hanging from a telephone wire? Plenty of them going around these days… But then, there is always been liars, trying to get away with it.
Liar (Poetry) - 11/6/2013 6:18:49 PM
If liars won't lie than whatz the fun being a liar !!! And how then we gonna learn and enjoy...liar,liar...pants on fire !!!!
Liar (Poetry) - 11/6/2013 2:17:43 PM
Lies like a rug, that liar does!
Liar (Poetry) - 11/6/2013 2:14:24 PM
A balled faced liar at that...but his staff lies so much it's a JOKE!!!!
Liar (Poetry) - 11/6/2013 1:59:54 PM
Reminds me of a certain Toronto mayor...
Liar (Poetry) - 11/6/2013 12:34:39 PM
Methinks I know the number one liar you are speaking of, and I hear you loud and clear.
Liar (Poetry) - 11/6/2013 9:10:17 AM
Was just a thought (Poetry) - 11/5/2013 10:07:08 AM
Beautiful thoughts gone awry
fleeting to forever be..
Was just a thought (Poetry) - 11/5/2013 3:26:34 AM
well done William
Was just a thought (Poetry) - 11/4/2013 5:54:23 PM
her barrage of benign
soft negative words
that sounds hurtful and the way you phrased it even more so. I want to cringe back underneath it all as well. ~ Morgan
Was just a thought (Poetry) - 11/4/2013 9:02:56 AM
Too bad, it sounded so perfect in translation. I think you meant, "From the past."
It takes two to tango. That cliché has applied to me too often. It's probably more common in marriage than one would think. You brought it out so eloquently.
Was just a thought (Poetry) - 11/4/2013 7:31:07 AM
Oh, those sensuous moments from the past. How they do "get us going"! It's the rejection that would be the hardest to take.
Was just a thought (Poetry) - 11/4/2013 4:56:06 AM
Just a thought suspended. Passion remembered. Dulled by rejection.
The Mirror's Image (Poetry) - 11/3/2013 8:53:39 PM
No regrets getting older..
It's a privilege denied
A Wonderful Day (Poetry) - 11/3/2013 1:09:08 PM
Angels appearing as needed
The Mirror's Image (Poetry) - 11/2/2013 8:15:29 AM
William, Aaah, we all are getting older, but much wiser, hopefully.
The Mirror's Image (Poetry) - 10/31/2013 5:56:34 PM
Published Books Wrote Momma Poem...
Of Growing Old Gracefully...
Momma Died Old Lady' Home(Miserably)Pittsburgh-
Asshole Brothers Lied -1 Paid Her Funeral-Money$
Came Out Her Own Estate- Bury In Free Tomb Next
My Bastard Daddy-Inwhile Other Brother Took My Bastard
Daddy (Beat Me To Death Twice) In Winters
Let Momma Die Old Lady' Home Pittsburgh!Why?
He Collects His Money$,Stock$,Bond$,
$1,000's Worth Tools--Brother Evil SOB Dead!
Death Isn't End When I Get To Holy Hell He Isn't
There As Daddy--I Find Them Beat Them To 2nd Deaths
Throw Them In Head 1st.....REVENGE Is SWEET...
Why'd I Write This Like I Told
Momma Poem(I'll Post Again )You
Mr Bonilla White Beard Getting
Old Or Not:
GROW OLD GRACEFULLY...
We All Will Die (Death Is Inevitable) It Is
Where You Go (End Up At)Whence Death Arrives!!
I Thank (God) For Nothing Other Than:
My 2 Hands,Brain,Intelligence,Wit Carry It Off,
Muscle And Brawn To Back It Up!!
Find Something Do With Your 2 Hands...
The Mirror's Image (Poetry) - 10/31/2013 12:29:18 PM
The beauty of a portrait is that it never ages.
I had 1,744 of them...at last count. :)
The Mirror's Image (Poetry) - 10/31/2013 12:27:14 PM
It sure does creep up on us, doesn't it? Well expressed by the man in the mirror.
The Mirror's Image (Poetry) - 10/31/2013 7:30:50 AM
It seems to creep up on us slowly at first and then "bang", the image in the mirror is not the person we see inside. Well done, William.
The Mirror's Image (Poetry) - 10/31/2013 2:36:29 AM
we all ask this as you have well penned
The Mirror's Image (Poetry) - 10/31/2013 12:49:11 AM
Thats the way to live...brilliantly..not knowing...
gliding the life. Nicely expressed.
The Mirror's Image (Poetry) - 10/30/2013 10:38:41 PM
When you start spending to much time gazing into the mirror
and not spending enough time with those who are dearer.
Yesterdays become too far in the past, todays go by so fast and tomorrows, well they never come. We just leave our imprint on the glass.
The Mirror's Image (Poetry) - 10/30/2013 8:58:21 PM
Excellent reflective thoughts in this poem William. I am involved in a youth ministry for troubled teens. These kids appreciate us old dudes visiting them and spending time serving them lunch and sharing with them some wisdom from the Bible or from our troubled past. What they do not know is how much we are blessed by being able to help out. It also helps us to feel like kids again. Do you think they care about our wrinkles or gray hair? Most of these kids have no parents at all or they have parents with a drug addition. Well that's what helps me forget about myself because I am too busy helping others. It's not for everyone but it's a blessing for some.
The Mirror's Image (Poetry) - 10/30/2013 8:57:41 PM
Never! You never get "old". New walks, new discoveries ergo a bug you've never seen before.........a fossil. Now, darling, you never get "old".
The Mirror's Image (Poetry) - 10/30/2013 2:44:44 PM
Yep. I comes on slow, until one day BAM! you have wrinkles, wattle, muscle going soft . . . And you are old. Not a happy day.
A Wonderful Day (Poetry) - 10/29/2013 4:37:38 AM
Wonderful write. I will strive to be this old lady, if I have it in me.
The Weed (Poetry) - 10/27/2013 4:05:26 PM
Beautiful. You are truly kindhearted.
What? (Poetry) - 10/27/2013 12:52:32 AM
Beautifully expressed. But the feeling is common to a number of countries these days not just yours. Time is out of joint.
My very best to you.
A Wonderful Day (Poetry) - 10/26/2013 5:54:53 PM
Work L A Poverty Agency 70s I Met
Beautiful Stunning Puerto Rican Girl
Ask OWNER Restaurant Diner Bar To
Introduce Her To Me!
Sadly Married,1 Kid,Marital Problems--
We Really Hit It Off- Had Come To End--
Name Myrna...She Gave Me Plaque--
Poem Got Trashed Losing My Home
Via Pains Fraudulent Foreclosure--
I'll Post Poem I Gave Her In
My Published Books For You
KOOL Write Right On Irma...
Etal: (God) Be Damned Other Is
Always In Control Of Yes, Women
You Meet Sadly End Up With--
Why I Live Alone...
A Wonderful Day (Poetry) - 10/25/2013 6:26:26 AM
I found this very touching. What a pleasant memory you were blessed with.
A Wonderful Day (Poetry) - 10/25/2013 3:43:12 AM
Aw! Sweet imagery...you have captured a beautiful moment forever; glad you wrote it down to share. Nicely done, William.
A Wonderful Day (Poetry) - 10/25/2013 2:40:31 AM
We should all cherish our 'wonderful days' as you do.
A Wonderful Day (Poetry) - 10/24/2013 6:55:31 AM
Such are the beautiful memories . . .
A Wonderful Day (Poetry) - 10/24/2013 2:18:13 AM
all days should be this way
A Wonderful Day (Poetry) - 10/23/2013 9:20:58 PM
Nice write, thank you for sharing "A Wonderful Day". You were visited by an Angel my friend. God Bless You!
A Wonderful Day (Poetry) - 10/23/2013 6:32:53 PM
I believe this is what is meant by "stopping to smell the roses." Thanks for the reminder and for the beautiful thought.
The Weed (Poetry) - 10/23/2013 11:23:43 AM
Richly deserving of dewdrops, William
The Weed (Poetry) - 10/22/2013 7:28:10 AM
Everything in this world and life has a purpose...not all of it is readily apparent but much of it is. Superb write.
The Weed (Poetry) - 10/21/2013 3:45:29 PM
I like the definition of a weed that merely says "an unwanted plant."
Clearly you did not see a weed.
Very well stated.
The Weed (Poetry) - 10/21/2013 5:42:56 AM
It's so true that what many deem to be weeds are actually beautiful natural plants. There's nothing "natural" about a vibrant green lawn with not a weed on it...sure wouldn't let my grandchild play on one...nicely done, William...love your point of view.
The Weed (Poetry) - 10/21/2013 2:24:13 AM
let all of nature live and thrive
The Weed (Poetry) - 10/20/2013 4:42:17 PM
Nice write William! Good for you! Why kill a nice looking plant? I find myself becoming very selective these days with weeds. If it's not hurting another plant than just let it live. Amen...
Peace be with you,
The Weed (Poetry) - 10/20/2013 4:12:09 PM
"Live and let live..." Nicely expressed, William. Love and peace,
What? (Poetry) - 10/20/2013 4:11:23 PM
A most apt and timely write, William; and a sad commentary on so-called "leaders." Love and peace to you,
The Weed (Poetry) - 10/20/2013 3:52:50 PM
The Weed (Poetry) - 10/20/2013 1:04:16 PM
Weeds are plants, too. They often grow where nothing else will. A good metaphor for how to treat other humans.
The Weed (Poetry) - 10/20/2013 7:11:33 AM
Could be a divine perspective! God must share this outlook.
The Weed (Poetry) - 10/20/2013 5:16:38 AM
It doesn't look ugly to me. It looks green and vibrant. Wise choice.
The Weed (Poetry) - 10/20/2013 3:51:25 AM
Good for you! They have a beauty all their own.
Beauty Of A moment (Poetry) - 10/18/2013 7:16:13 AM
Soaking in all the beautty that surrounds us, it's what makes life truly magical. Well written!
When Eyes Meet (Poetry) - 10/17/2013 9:53:33 AM
instant communication of so many true and imagined emotions...nice nice write
Beauty Of A moment (Poetry) - 10/17/2013 7:41:55 AM
a very well written piece
Beauty Of A moment (Poetry) - 10/16/2013 10:56:15 AM
Black and White assessment,
becoming of Grays..moments
to treasure, William
Beauty Of A moment (Poetry) - 10/16/2013 8:07:09 AM
Cloud formations can certainly be inspiring... this one inspired you.
Beauty Of A moment (Poetry) - 10/16/2013 3:18:48 AM
Beauty Of A moment (Poetry) - 10/15/2013 6:20:07 PM
Beautiful... loved this painting
Beauty Of A moment (Poetry) - 10/15/2013 3:34:31 PM
Such an image I can actually see it...wish I could sit by that pool...but its getting a bit brisk up this way...e
Beauty Of A moment (Poetry) - 10/15/2013 1:44:23 PM
I love the way you described the white on white and the dabs and brush strokes......I dabble in painting and, yup! That's the way it's done when it's done right.
Beauty Of A moment (Poetry) - 10/15/2013 8:30:28 AM
Yeaaa! You finally got it to "take" for ya!
. . . and then there were clouds and streaks of white with the dark outline of trees and houses over looking a . . . swimming pool? The Master of the Masters was clairvoyant.
What? (Poetry) - 10/15/2013 7:46:02 AM
Right On, William!
What? (Poetry) - 10/14/2013 5:00:30 PM
SIMPLE:Its All About Control-Extermination
To Point They (Powers To Be)
I Name Em--I'm Called Racist-
They Want You, Me, Us Dead
Starting With Homeless Little Children!
Psycho El Presidente Obamma Mania War Monger$
Said Syria Then 429 Children Were Gassed!?
Do You Even Stop Think Abortions
How Many Babies Are **GASSED In WOMB
Approx 4 Million Month!
** FEMA Concentration Camps 2014!
Rest Perverts Child Molesters Rape,
Maim,Kill Choke Sodomize Children To Death
Then Sell Body Parts Highest Bidder$
Corrupt Evil Medical Doctors Yes,
Right here In This F--ked Up
EVIL USA Country..
Can't **Believe It-Huh!?
**Illiterate (All Believe They're Infallible)People
So-Called Caring USA Humans Gone Brain Dead
Sucking On Cell Phones-Its Better Than Normal Sex-
Who Needs IMPLANTED COMPUTER CHIPS In You Brain!!
What? (Poetry) - 10/14/2013 7:53:53 AM
I do not believe many like this direction and most of it is scary. The government uas originally for the people and by the people but I have failed to see that in all my life.
What? (Poetry) - 10/14/2013 7:46:36 AM
Congress no longer knows how to congress, only to sneak graft honoring bills into a quandary of one upmanship, all the while making sure that their pay and benefits continue along with all of the back door benefits of siding with their benefactors.
Let's all elect Mr. Smith back to Congress along with a few Ms. Smiths to soften the mix and make things more “equal.”
What? (Poetry) - 10/14/2013 1:20:42 AM
thought provoking read
What? (Poetry) - 10/13/2013 9:01:04 PM
It's always been a joke. A BAD one at that.
I am doing some WWII research for Veterans Day.
Back in the 1940's the US rationed gas, They had coupons that ranged from A to X.
A coupons were the lowest and you would get 8 gal. per week.
Z were the highest with unlimited miles used by doctors in emergencies.
Guess who forged 200 Coupon books? The members of US Congress.
However - the cry babies GOT CAUGHT with their pants down.
THE US PUBLIC was mad like hell and would NOT put up with that crap.
We all need to get MAD LIKE HELL and demand the Congress cry babies and our executive branch DO THEIR JOBS or else fire the bastards.
That's about all i got to say about that...
What? (Poetry) - 10/13/2013 2:32:56 PM
Deceiving faces of politics and religion hanging on the wall of carnage. Wrinkles in their forehead counting corruption and greed...when the masks come off, men behind the dirt sink in their own muck and mire...history took care of it before and so will these times. Nostradamus is shaking his head...look at his lips moving "I told you so." Topical poetry, William...
What? (Poetry) - 10/13/2013 9:51:24 AM
Your NYPD retirement isn't affected I hope.
But me, on the other hand am 100% disabled Vet.
I have been too stressed by all this.
What? (Poetry) - 10/13/2013 6:29:53 AM
Yes! They are like a bunch of children fighting on a playground and they all need to be expelled!
What? (Poetry) - 10/13/2013 5:30:36 AM
Oh there is change alright. Much change and none of it to my liking.
When Eyes Meet (Poetry) - 10/12/2013 8:21:36 PM
in thought and illustration
When Eyes Meet (Poetry) - 10/11/2013 5:25:12 PM
Its a Kool Romantic Write Right On!
Silence Will (Does)Prevail,i.e. I
Have Childish Girl Stalking Me From Past-
On My Answering Machine (She Calls Daily)Answers
To Rock N Roll Group Lyrics:
....I Wonder Whose Crying Now!
When Eyes Meet (Poetry) - 10/11/2013 8:13:47 AM
Could be either just displaying happiness. More likely flirting without any consequence.
When Eyes Meet (Poetry) - 10/10/2013 10:32:57 AM
This reminded me of special eyes.
When Eyes Meet (Poetry) - 10/10/2013 6:53:43 AM
Nice, but a bit sad....."As you walk away"
When Eyes Meet (Poetry) - 10/10/2013 5:38:11 AM
for sure, yes
When Eyes Meet (Poetry) - 10/10/2013 5:37:31 AM
When Eyes Meet (Poetry) - 10/10/2013 4:41:19 AM
We used to coin the phrase "groovy" back in the sixties; beginning of the political correct nation we have become, and it seems to fit as a one word descriptive of this cool poem.
When Eyes Meet (Poetry) - 10/10/2013 4:08:03 AM
Sometimes words aren't at all necessary...nicely done, William...
When Eyes Meet (Poetry) - 10/10/2013 3:52:14 AM
Awesome body language!
When Eyes Meet (Poetry) - 10/10/2013 3:38:01 AM
Eyes can be very captivating. They speak without words!
Peace love and light
Inspiration Of The Past (Poetry) - 10/9/2013 2:57:04 PM
an excellent way to be inspired and find new energy!
Inspiration Of The Past (Poetry) - 10/8/2013 5:26:40 PM
I am quite intimate with nature but I do not have any grandchildren... ...perhaps I never will; it's up to my children. Nonetheless, your verses are meaningful to me and thank you, William. Love and peace to you,
Inspiration Of The Past (Poetry) - 10/8/2013 4:19:46 AM
The Beauty of Nature and Grandchildren are both wonderful places to find inspiration.
Inspiration Of The Past (Poetry) - 10/7/2013 7:39:23 PM
Excellent write, William
Inspiration Of The Past (Poetry) - 10/7/2013 5:29:12 AM
I SO get this, William...very nicely done!
Inspiration Of The Past (Poetry) - 10/7/2013 2:22:25 AM
very well written for sure with so much to say
Inspiration Of The Past (Poetry) - 10/6/2013 7:57:42 PM
of it's best
Inspiration Of The Past (Poetry) - 10/6/2013 5:38:02 PM
There is nothing like the great outdoors for a great re-charge. We not only enjoy what mother nature provides us but meet the most interesting people who sometimes say that one thing that gives our imaginations wings!
Inspiration Of The Past (Poetry) - 10/6/2013 11:12:12 AM
Nicely expressed poetic piece.
The easiest way is to find some inspiration go outside and walk, then write, then read it over out loud and write it over a bit clearer once more. If all else fails take off for the great outdoors once more...
Blessings of inspiration be with you,
John Michael Domino
Inspiration Of The Past (Poetry) - 10/6/2013 10:06:50 AM
As poets, all we can hope for is that the right words will fall into the right place at the right time.
Inspiration Of The Past (Poetry) - 10/6/2013 6:03:36 AM
You have begun your quest of "all will fall into place" with this well constructed poem, William. I have not the slightest doubt that the rest will follow suit. But you are correct, we all need from time to time to recharge our batteries.
She Fell In Love (Poetry) - 10/4/2013 7:44:39 AM
nothin like being loved
Course Of Time (Poetry) - 10/4/2013 7:43:20 AM
love gone, not fun or nice loneliness gets me. buy gives me some hope reading this
Lonely As Purity (AD Poetry Contest) (Poetry) - 10/4/2013 7:40:52 AM
I'm into loneliness t9day hate itk but like this poem.
tells a good message.
Paranoia (Poetry) - 10/4/2013 7:39:23 AM
i was looking for a panic poem written here by you, came across this instead. not what i was looking for.
Depressed (Poetry) - 10/4/2013 7:37:44 AM
been thru it, lonely now, panic attack, not feeling up to par, but this read helps. i just want to sleep it off. but cannot.
The lonely princess (Poetry) - 10/4/2013 7:36:19 AM
Down And Out (Poetry) - 10/4/2013 7:35:10 AM
a panic attack has me down don;t care where i live could give it all up
Down And Out (Poetry) - 9/30/2013 4:51:48 PM
Until You Are Live Sleep In Streets
Become ONE Of Millions USA Homeless
All You Can Do Is Write About It...
I Give You Grace For Attempt!
Being Homeless Hasn't Dam Do With
(God)---Like All Rest A D & USA
Assholes They Truly Believe Think They
The lonely princess (Poetry) - 9/28/2013 1:16:43 PM
WHEN LOVE CALLS...IT JUST HAPPENS! SWEET. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Down And Out (Poetry) - 9/28/2013 1:08:31 PM
I CAN ONLY TELL YOU WHAT BEING WITHOUT MY OWN ROOF OVER MY HEAD DID FOR ME...I SAW GOD CLEARER. I HAD TO...HE WAS THE ONLY TRUE FRIEND I HAD AND HE STILL IS. BEING DOWN AND OUT...CAN BRING THE SPIRIT UP AND INTO A CLOSER RELATIONSHIP WITH CHRIST. I GET A 'FREE' QUARTERLY BOOK FROM www.rbc.org, ENTITLED THE DAILY BREAD AND ONE OF THE QUOTES FROM IT SAID IT LIKE THIS; IT'S BETTER TO SAIL ON ROUGH WATERS WITH JESUS, THEN TO SAIL ON SMOOTH WATERS WITHOUT HIM. CERTAINLY, LAWMAKERS SHOULD BE MORE CONSCIOUS OF AND SYMPATHETIC TO THE HOMELESS IN THIS COUNTRY, BUT UNTIL THIS HAPPENS WE CAN ONLY TRY AND HELP THEM TO TRUST IN GOD AND ASSIST THEM WHEN AND HOW WE CAN. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Down And Out (Poetry) - 9/27/2013 10:55:00 PM
Good write William - very descriptive. I was homeless for a spell in NY in Greenwich Village. Slept on an old mattress in an abandon basement, it was raining and rain leaked through the windows. Good thing I had a girl to keep me warm but it was my girl's best friend. Well, that didn't go over too well and that abandon basement gave me shelter when I was down and out...
Down And Out (Poetry) - 9/27/2013 3:25:25 AM
Far too many Down and Out souls out there today, and far too few that even care - especially our so called 'leaders.'
Down And Out (Poetry) - 9/25/2013 10:38:48 PM
A retired police officer
Strong as a bull. Articulate,
Not my idea of a homeless person.
But a good writer just the same.
Down And Out (Poetry) - 9/25/2013 8:27:00 PM
No one is safe!! Only two
house payments away from
"Down and Out"
Down And Out (Poetry) - 9/25/2013 9:44:20 AM
What this person is lacking the most of is confidence. I've always thought that if two homeless people would get jobs, say, at McDonald's as janitors or something or any kind of job, they could rent a room together for starters. That would be better than living on the streets. Plus, they could have a cup of coffee in the morning.
Down And Out (Poetry) - 9/25/2013 8:11:52 AM
In the twenty first century, no one should be “down and out.” There's enough wealth to go around and everyone should have enough to eat and a comfortable place to sleep at night.
And the politicians are not to blame. We are to blame for not insisting that the hierarchy be torn down in favor of a more favorable way of living for all. Communism is not necessary or desirable, but community is.
Down And Out (Poetry) - 9/24/2013 1:38:00 PM
Quite an intense write my friend! Always so good to read your work!
Peace love and light,
Down And Out (Poetry) - 9/24/2013 10:46:13 AM
I was on the streets for two decades and I know this, except for the mentally ill those so-called homeless people are there because they WANT to be.
Down And Out (Poetry) - 9/24/2013 6:34:46 AM
Many years ago I lived in a box on the streets, now I live in a big box but with all the amenities...not sure if I have progressed or not...e
Down And Out (Poetry) - 9/24/2013 3:38:16 AM
So sad...and so true. How can this be ignored like it is...
Down And Out (Poetry) - 9/24/2013 3:27:52 AM
Down And Out (Poetry) - 9/24/2013 2:18:14 AM
so sad but so true for so many
Down And Out (Poetry) - 9/23/2013 5:53:20 PM
I wonder if they ever think about fellow citizens who live, or rather survive with no fixed abode.
The lonely princess (Poetry) - 9/17/2013 12:10:15 PM
Kiss the frog, marry a Prince
..loneliness no more
The lonely princess (Poetry) - 9/16/2013 6:08:15 PM
Great write and love the photo
The lonely princess (Poetry) - 9/16/2013 4:34:50 PM
The lonely princess (Poetry) - 9/16/2013 2:28:21 AM
just enough words for this beautiful thought
The lonely princess (Poetry) - 9/15/2013 2:09:07 PM
We don't seem to have toads/frogs around here in Joisey...must be the pollution in the air...;-) e
The lonely princess (Poetry) - 9/15/2013 8:16:27 AM
Love this poem, and the photo is exquisite.
The lonely princess (Poetry) - 9/15/2013 7:36:50 AM
I never really fell in love with Princess and frog stories. However, this little tree toad it is kind of cute. I love it when they get to chirping at night. Evenings wouldn't be the same without them.
The lonely princess (Poetry) - 9/15/2013 6:33:26 AM
Oh, how I enjoyed this work of your, so tender! This looks like the (I called it a toad(?) )that my little grandson took of on a big ol' mushroom that inspired me to self publish "Toad On a Toadstool"!!!!!! He's so cute.
The lonely princess (Poetry) - 9/15/2013 2:13:09 AM
Reading this poem without looking the picture changes everything. Then looking at the little green lizard, ya kinda feel sorry for the squirt. Very good poetic tale that leave much for the imagination...
Clowns II (Poetry) - 9/10/2013 10:45:14 PM
Not until the fat lady sings?
Clowns II (Poetry) - 9/10/2013 5:29:02 PM
Turn your TV to any political channel or news channel, then you will see the clowns that run/ruin this country at work...e
Clowns II (Poetry) - 9/10/2013 8:06:47 AM
They all died of overdoses except for Jerry Lewis?
Syrially, I find them still alive and well on SNL… Just tune in on any Saturday night and you will see clowns at work.
Clowns II (Poetry) - 9/10/2013 5:54:04 AM
"........so bring in the clowns. Don't bother they're here."
Clowns II (Poetry) - 9/10/2013 5:18:21 AM
Bring back John Wayne. He was no clown.
Clowns II (Poetry) - 9/10/2013 5:02:17 AM
great question, get any true answers