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Recent Reviews for Don Wheeler
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The Journal (Short Story) - 6/14/2010 8:33:54 AM
A compelling and meaningful story, Don. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Danny's First Adventure part 4 (Short Story) - 12/14/2009 8:21:10 PM
Dear Don,
This was my favorite part--it was just great!! I think you could stop here and maybe do a series of Danny stories. This has it all--,even a moral. Definitely don't stop.
all my best,
Micki peluso
Danny's First Adventure part 3 (Short Story) - 12/7/2009 7:58:30 PM
Hi Don,
This story is coming along nicely. I'm enjoying every bit of it. Go back in and check for a few errors before you move on to the next issue--can't wait!!
All the best,
Micki
The Journal (Short Story) - 12/5/2009 8:48:08 PM
Don, That was beautiful!!
Micki
Danny's First Adventure part 2 (Short Story) - 12/5/2009 8:44:13 PM
Hi Don-- I loved part two of the story. Is this the end or is there more? It could end here or it could continue with conflict for Danny as he faces his fears!! Either way, a really nice story.
Micki
Danny's First Adventure part 1 (Short Story) - 12/4/2009 8:18:53 PM
Dear don,
Very nice story with a good feeling of warmth running throughout it. I can't wait to see the next part.
All the best,
Micki Peluso
David's Story (Short Story) - 12/3/2009 7:39:12 PM
Dear don,
This story is a wonderful slice of life story, delving into the innermost feelings of a family suffering great loss. Well written. I hope to read more of you work.
all my best,
Micki Peluso
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