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Recent Reviews for Poetry by Deborah
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Arlene's Passing (Short Story) - 3/11/2004 7:05:37 PM
lovely tribute
Arlene's Passing (Short Story) - 4/3/2003 6:31:02 PM
"Arlene's Passing" is a very touching story. A friendship that stood the test of time, felt the last sigh and reborn in the psychobiology of a friend's heart.
I have learned a lesson of togetherness and love.
I Salute the Author of "Arlene's Passing".
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Arlene's Passing (Short Story) - 2/6/2003 3:39:04 PM
This is a beautiful tribute for your friend, Arlene. i know just how you felt. I took my friend Jo's pulse for the last time and called the doctor to tell him she had gone home to be with Jesus. About twelve hours before, she had called me to her bedside and asked, " Can you see them? There are Pa, Mother, Marg, Helen, Don and Jim. They're all dressed up and ready for the party. They are waiting for me to join the." These were her parents, sister and brother who were alreay in Heaven. It are less that twelve hours later that she did join them and I felt the fluttering of the angels wings are they guided her home to Heaven.
Emily Foster
Arlene's Passing (Short Story) - 1/13/2003 9:24:08 PM
This is an amazingly beautiful write!
God Bless
~Michelle~
Arlene's Passing (Short Story) - 11/25/2002 6:40:28 AM
Deborah,
This is such a beautiful though sad story. Arlene was very blessed in this life to have a friend like you.
Jack
Arlene's Passing (Short Story) - 11/24/2002 2:27:02 PM
Deborah,
Precious, precious testimony! I realize the truth of your experience--I have had similar ones, and am left in pure awe. The beauty of it is, more people are sharing their stories freely now--now is a time for all Spiritual revealings of the heart, I believe. Love Vicky
Tribute To Michael Jackson: A Mortal Legacy (Poetry) - 8/28/2009 4:26:40 PM
A tribute truly worthy of a "King of Pop." Not at all hard to imagine him setting these lines to music and dancing with the poet across a brilliantly shining rainbow. Thank you for the great read.
Aberjhani
No Longer Do Broken Wings Fly (Poetry) - 2/10/2009 4:50:30 AM
An excellent poem with a great message,take care
Edwin
This Path I Tread (Poetry) - 2/10/2009 4:48:10 AM
Fabulous poem,Excellent and great work,I enjoy reading it,take care
Edwin
God's Greatest Gift This Christmas (Poetry) - 12/20/2008 6:02:45 AM
An inspirational work of poem...to see past the commercialized holidays is to know the true meaning of Christmas...
nice thoughts...
Art Sun...
God's Greatest Gift This Christmas (Poetry) - 12/18/2008 6:04:57 AM
Deborah this is a beatiful prayer from a heart of gratitude...May your Christmas be Merry!
Christine
Judge Me Not (Poetry) - 12/12/2008 5:13:41 AM
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Judge Me Not (Poetry) - 12/11/2008 3:09:11 PM
A wonderful blessed message to be shared with all...
Be always safe,
Karen
No Longer Do Broken Wings Fly (Poetry) - 11/5/2008 6:15:44 AM
Masterly done Deb and a treasure to read and savor.
Fee
No Longer Do Broken Wings Fly (Poetry) - 11/5/2008 4:46:59 AM
A strong poem on how we must overcome the curves life throws at us and seek a better tomorrow.
No Longer Do Broken Wings Fly (Poetry) - 11/5/2008 2:52:05 AM
Beautiful, very beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
My Best Friend (Poetry) - 6/11/2008 7:44:46 PM
Simply beautiful Deborah, we become so close to our animal friends, I will post shortly my tribute to "My Mate"
Thank you Deborah.
Dave.
Auburn Of Autumn (Poetry) - 3/31/2008 2:45:46 PM
There is a real feeling of magic and fairy tale in this that is delightful! I am not sure if you caught the typo, but it should be "bare" arms. The picture is as beautiful as your poem :) Blessings, Michelle
Auburn Of Autumn (Poetry) - 3/28/2008 1:01:50 PM
Interesting photograph! So beautiful with offerings of hope everlasting around every corner....
Be always safe,
Karen
Auburn Of Autumn (Poetry) - 3/28/2008 6:59:29 AM
Interesting write,take care...Hugsssss
The Corporate Machine (Poetry) - 11/9/2007 11:23:10 PM
Corporate greed merely feeds my angst...one example after another of the green they covet above humanity. Beautifully written, Deborah.
The Corporate Machine (Poetry) - 8/10/2007 10:02:36 PM
The Almighty Dollar has become the new God for many today I am sad to say. Too much greed and not enough compassion and good will. Fantastic write.....
Be safe,
Karen
The Corporate Machine (Poetry) - 8/10/2007 7:26:07 PM
Yea, corporate ka-ka, well said.
The Corporate Machine (Poetry) - 8/10/2007 12:50:27 PM
So very true, and big government is a prime candidate of this, my own Canadian gov't that I spent working for 30 years when my health failed and they forced me to take early retirement when over payments and taxation threatened to bamnkrupt me the girl who called said sell your home.
Cold voice of automation.
Fee
Star Shine (Concrete) (Poetry) - 6/19/2007 4:44:58 AM
So lovely and impressive form!
Star Shine (Concrete) (Poetry) - 6/16/2007 10:30:20 AM
Angelic offering!!
Love Tinka
Star Shine (Concrete) (Poetry) - 6/15/2007 11:15:39 PM
I can hear angels sing in your poetry.Enjoyed
The Ripper (Poetry) - 5/9/2007 4:48:31 AM
This was very good! Eerie and dark. Perfect rhyme and flow also. Nice job!
The Ripper (Poetry) - 5/9/2007 3:12:38 AM
Wow! What a write! Powerful and thought provoking indeed! Hadn't thought about this character in a while! Well written about an evil that seems to exist with much of mankind today...can't turn the news on without some horrible incident being broadcasted from all over the world! Enjoyed, great write!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
The Ripper (Poetry) - 5/7/2007 11:31:28 AM
Ditto Paul on this one!!
Love Tinka
The Ripper (Poetry) - 5/7/2007 3:45:06 AM
Deb,
There is a little of Jack The Ripper associated with all evil. Excellent write.
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