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Arlene's Passing (Short Story) - 5/21/2011 1:18:03 PM
A fine tribute as well as a testimonial of faith, Deborah. Thank you for sharing your respectful and meaningful account. Love and blessings to you, Regis

Arlene's Passing (Short Story) - 3/11/2004 7:05:37 PM
lovely tribute

Arlene's Passing (Short Story) - 4/3/2003 6:31:02 PM
"Arlene's Passing" is a very touching story. A friendship that stood the test of time, felt the last sigh and reborn in the psychobiology of a friend's heart. I have learned a lesson of togetherness and love. I Salute the Author of "Arlene's Passing". Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Arlene's Passing (Short Story) - 2/6/2003 3:39:04 PM
This is a beautiful tribute for your friend, Arlene. i know just how you felt. I took my friend Jo's pulse for the last time and called the doctor to tell him she had gone home to be with Jesus. About twelve hours before, she had called me to her bedside and asked, " Can you see them? There are Pa, Mother, Marg, Helen, Don and Jim. They're all dressed up and ready for the party. They are waiting for me to join the." These were her parents, sister and brother who were alreay in Heaven. It are less that twelve hours later that she did join them and I felt the fluttering of the angels wings are they guided her home to Heaven. Emily Foster

Arlene's Passing (Short Story) - 1/13/2003 9:24:08 PM
This is an amazingly beautiful write! God Bless ~Michelle~

Arlene's Passing (Short Story) - 11/25/2002 6:40:28 AM
Deborah, This is such a beautiful though sad story. Arlene was very blessed in this life to have a friend like you. Jack

Arlene's Passing (Short Story) - 11/24/2002 2:27:02 PM
Deborah, Precious, precious testimony! I realize the truth of your experience--I have had similar ones, and am left in pure awe. The beauty of it is, more people are sharing their stories freely now--now is a time for all Spiritual revealings of the heart, I believe. Love Vicky

Music, Music (Poetry) - 3/6/2011 7:03:07 PM
The powerful beauty of music can never be underestimated, Deborah. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes to you, Regis

One Saviour (Poetry) - 10/27/2010 2:20:45 PM
Nice expression of your faith which I share.

One Saviour (Poetry) - 10/19/2010 6:11:50 PM
"When this life is through and my lessons are learned, it is Jesus who will take me home." Amen - Well done good and faithful one!

Return Me To Light (Poetry) - 9/23/2010 12:42:01 PM
You very effectively bring your theme from the depth of darkness to heavenly light via your verses, Deborah. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes to you, Regis

Skagit's Splendor (Poetry) - 9/23/2010 12:40:37 PM
Ah yes, Deborah. I've camped there as well but it was in August and a long time ago. Nevertheless I recall the scents, the stillness, the encompassing beauty of it all. Nicely done. Love and peace to you, Regis

Magnolia, My Dear (Poetry) - 9/23/2010 12:39:13 PM
A wonderful ode to a beautiful tree, Deborah. Your soul sings via your verses here. Love and best wishes, Regis

One Saviour (Poetry) - 9/23/2010 12:38:04 PM
A fine testimonial of your faith, Deborah. Thank you foe sharing it. Love and blessings to you, Regis

This Path I Tread (Poetry) - 9/5/2010 4:11:11 AM
This touches my heart to tears. I deeply relate to where your heart is, Deborah.

Music, Music (Poetry) - 8/31/2010 3:53:18 AM
Love this musical poem. It reminds me how I flet when I played and sang my own songs. I need do more of that.

One Saviour (Poetry) - 8/31/2010 3:51:36 AM
Amen. A wonderful ode to Light/Love.

One Saviour (Poetry) - 7/28/2010 5:10:06 PM
"heavenly choir sings in this heart" That's obvious in this precious poem. Connie

One Saviour (Poetry) - 7/28/2010 4:29:12 PM
Deborah, This is precious. I too carry Jesus in my heart every day I live. I love this! Many blessings+ ~Linda

One Saviour (Poetry) - 7/28/2010 1:08:16 PM
Wow, this is a truly beautiful poem and soul. What a treasure ~ Blessings, Christine

Magnolia, My Dear (Poetry) - 7/22/2010 11:35:05 AM
You asked "does she speak" and she does in your voice and descriptive wrting...lovely.

Skagit's Splendor (Poetry) - 6/29/2010 2:03:34 PM
I have visited the Rockies and been amazed at the raw majestic beauty that I found there... fee

Skagit's Splendor (Poetry) - 6/29/2010 12:46:28 PM
Flowing ~ Wow, it must be beautiful there like your poem! Blessings, Christine

Return Me To Light (Poetry) - 5/31/2010 7:28:38 AM
The love of a kitten . . what else is there! :-) Poetry is a wonderful way to express yourself. Thank you.

Return Me To Light (Poetry) - 5/30/2010 4:25:12 PM
To be able to find comfort, as you have done, even in the midst of pain is a great gift. I enjoyed your poem! Blessings, Christine

Choices (Poetry) - 5/30/2010 1:28:07 PM
sound advice and lots to think about in this one Deb, very nice fee

Music, Music (Poetry) - 5/30/2010 1:26:50 PM
yes music is as much a part of our world as the air we breath and I think you show that in your beautiful poem... fee

Return Me To Light (Poetry) - 5/30/2010 1:25:08 PM
Lovely indeed and so much to be thankful for...well done. fee

Return Me To Light (Poetry) - 5/30/2010 11:39:43 AM
Very nice poem.

Those Who Might Say (Poetry) - 1/24/2010 1:35:17 AM
In any relationships that falter and come to an end there is always a sense of loss and often anger. This could be directed at the partner, at themselves of at the world. Sad thing is the best we can hope for is to give them time to come around and accept that we are not the enemy You captured this well... fee

Tribute To Michael Jackson: A Mortal Legacy (Poetry) - 8/28/2009 4:26:40 PM
A tribute truly worthy of a "King of Pop." Not at all hard to imagine him setting these lines to music and dancing with the poet across a brilliantly shining rainbow. Thank you for the great read. Aberjhani

No Longer Do Broken Wings Fly (Poetry) - 2/10/2009 4:50:30 AM
An excellent poem with a great message,take care Edwin

This Path I Tread (Poetry) - 2/10/2009 4:48:10 AM
Fabulous poem,Excellent and great work,I enjoy reading it,take care Edwin

God's Greatest Gift This Christmas (Poetry) - 12/20/2008 6:02:45 AM
An inspirational work of poem...to see past the commercialized holidays is to know the true meaning of Christmas... nice thoughts... Art Sun...

God's Greatest Gift This Christmas (Poetry) - 12/18/2008 6:04:57 AM
Deborah this is a beatiful prayer from a heart of gratitude...May your Christmas be Merry! Christine

Judge Me Not (Poetry) - 12/12/2008 5:13:41 AM
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Judge Me Not (Poetry) - 12/11/2008 3:09:11 PM
A wonderful blessed message to be shared with all... Be always safe, Karen

No Longer Do Broken Wings Fly (Poetry) - 11/5/2008 6:15:44 AM
Masterly done Deb and a treasure to read and savor. Fee

No Longer Do Broken Wings Fly (Poetry) - 11/5/2008 4:46:59 AM
A strong poem on how we must overcome the curves life throws at us and seek a better tomorrow.

No Longer Do Broken Wings Fly (Poetry) - 11/5/2008 2:52:05 AM
Beautiful, very beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

My Best Friend (Poetry) - 6/11/2008 7:44:46 PM
Simply beautiful Deborah, we become so close to our animal friends, I will post shortly my tribute to "My Mate" Thank you Deborah. Dave.

Auburn Of Autumn (Poetry) - 3/31/2008 2:45:46 PM
There is a real feeling of magic and fairy tale in this that is delightful! I am not sure if you caught the typo, but it should be "bare" arms. The picture is as beautiful as your poem :) Blessings, Michelle

Auburn Of Autumn (Poetry) - 3/28/2008 1:01:50 PM
Interesting photograph! So beautiful with offerings of hope everlasting around every corner.... Be always safe, Karen

Auburn Of Autumn (Poetry) - 3/28/2008 6:59:29 AM
Interesting write,take care...Hugsssss

The Corporate Machine (Poetry) - 11/9/2007 11:23:10 PM
Corporate greed merely feeds my angst...one example after another of the green they covet above humanity. Beautifully written, Deborah.

The Corporate Machine (Poetry) - 8/10/2007 10:02:36 PM
The Almighty Dollar has become the new God for many today I am sad to say. Too much greed and not enough compassion and good will. Fantastic write..... Be safe, Karen

The Corporate Machine (Poetry) - 8/10/2007 7:26:07 PM
Yea, corporate ka-ka, well said.

The Corporate Machine (Poetry) - 8/10/2007 12:50:27 PM
So very true, and big government is a prime candidate of this, my own Canadian gov't that I spent working for 30 years when my health failed and they forced me to take early retirement when over payments and taxation threatened to bamnkrupt me the girl who called said sell your home. Cold voice of automation. Fee

Star Shine (Concrete) (Poetry) - 6/19/2007 4:44:58 AM
So lovely and impressive form!

Star Shine (Concrete) (Poetry) - 6/16/2007 10:30:20 AM
Angelic offering!! Love Tinka

Star Shine (Concrete) (Poetry) - 6/15/2007 11:15:39 PM
I can hear angels sing in your poetry.Enjoyed

The Ripper (Poetry) - 5/9/2007 4:48:31 AM
This was very good! Eerie and dark. Perfect rhyme and flow also. Nice job!

The Ripper (Poetry) - 5/9/2007 3:12:38 AM
Wow! What a write! Powerful and thought provoking indeed! Hadn't thought about this character in a while! Well written about an evil that seems to exist with much of mankind today...can't turn the news on without some horrible incident being broadcasted from all over the world! Enjoyed, great write! Blessings, Joyce Bowling

The Ripper (Poetry) - 5/7/2007 11:31:28 AM
Ditto Paul on this one!! Love Tinka

The Ripper (Poetry) - 5/7/2007 3:45:06 AM
Deb, There is a little of Jack The Ripper associated with all evil. Excellent write.

The Ripper (Poetry) - 5/7/2007 3:32:54 AM
Enjoyed

The Ripper (Poetry) - 5/7/2007 2:49:44 AM
Strong accounting and perspective on a name that will always be associated with evil against women. Fee

My Best Friend (Poetry) - 5/5/2007 3:04:11 PM
Such a heartfelt offering, full of comapassion and beautiful as well as heart wrenching memories...it is hard when we loose our friends, and pets can be the best friends of all! Wonderful tribute! Blessings, Joyce Bowling

My Best Friend (Poetry) - 5/3/2007 11:17:50 PM
Your poetry brings tears to my eyes! Never easy is it? The pain lessens over time, but never really goes away. You have written a beautiful tribute to your friend BJ and hope it eases the hurt in your heart. Be safe, Karen

My Best Friend (Poetry) - 5/3/2007 4:58:42 PM
It's sad to lose a furry friend. Somehow though they always remain in our hearts and thoughts.

My Best Friend (Poetry) - 5/3/2007 4:58:10 PM
It is so hard to lose a precious pet. They are little friends given by God. Connie

My Best Friend (Poetry) - 5/3/2007 11:50:16 AM
Heartfelt offering!! Love Tinka

Love Lost (Poetry) - 4/26/2007 8:21:04 PM
Awwwwww, the poor dragon, so all alone now. Good write, enjoyed. Be safe, Karen

Love Lost (Poetry) - 4/26/2007 5:02:21 PM
Enjoyed this poetic tale...well written my friend! Blessings, Joyce Bowling

Love Lost (Poetry) - 4/26/2007 2:49:40 PM
Well written!! Love Tinka

Beguiled In Darkness (Poetry) - 4/26/2007 5:49:28 AM
Nice work....your view of the beginning and the ending of this spiritual journey of man is a very nicely written expression through poetry....nice enjoyed.....Art Sun...

Love Lost (Poetry) - 4/26/2007 5:46:51 AM
Nice poetic story, the dreams of Dragons are as many as the dreams of ours, a nice work of thought through poetry.... enjoyed.....Art Sun...

Love Lost (Poetry) - 4/26/2007 3:24:29 AM
Debs, Realization is an awefully powerful tool.

House (diamante) (Poetry) - 4/18/2007 12:06:37 PM
Well done!! Love Tinka

House (diamante) (Poetry) - 4/17/2007 10:01:00 PM
House of diamonds falling apart, neglected. Such a shame. Be safe, Karen

House (diamante) (Poetry) - 4/17/2007 6:12:02 PM
you've captured it well ...

Beguiled In Darkness (Poetry) - 3/20/2007 1:52:08 PM
"when all shall utter peace." What a beautiful day that will be Deborah! Bill

Beguiled In Darkness (Poetry) - 3/11/2007 3:52:17 AM
Truth masterfully penned!! Love Tinka

Beguiled In Darkness (Poetry) - 3/11/2007 1:01:51 AM
Copula of truth. I really enjoyed this.

His Guiding Hands (Poetry) - 3/7/2007 7:13:54 PM
An inspirational and "faithful" write, Deborah. Thank you. Love and peace, Regis

Nature's Riches (Haiku) (Poetry) - 3/7/2007 7:11:56 PM
A fine ode to nature's beauties in haiku form, Deborah. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you, Regis

Pennies From Heaven (senryu) (Poetry) - 3/7/2007 7:10:44 PM
I do love haiku, Deborah; and I love this one. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace, Regis

Nature's Riches (Haiku) (Poetry) - 1/30/2007 10:35:45 AM
Beautiful write my friend! Blessings, Joyce Bowling

Nature's Riches (Haiku) (Poetry) - 1/29/2007 8:20:07 PM
Very beautiful picture of nature. Your haiku is superb!

His Guiding Hands (Poetry) - 1/28/2007 12:09:10 PM
Most outstanding write...well done!! Love Tinka

His Guiding Hands (Poetry) - 1/28/2007 4:40:40 AM
Stunning write my friend, beautiful...our hands hold much power when doubled for the right reason, God does guide us through this life, if we only allow him and listen to that still small voice. Enjoyed this very much, glad I stopped by! Blessings, Joyce Bowling

Life's Sweet Blessings (Poetry) - 1/11/2007 5:47:25 PM
A very profoundly wonderful write...Best Wishes...] Sam

A Faeried Reality (Poetry) - 1/2/2007 3:24:34 PM
Absolutely gorgeous! I loved this piece, it speaks to ones soul in a magickal way.

Life's Sweet Blessings (Poetry) - 11/14/2006 4:25:01 PM
Beautiful write...enjoyed, and very inspiring. Blessings, Joyce Bowling

Life's Sweet Blessings (Poetry) - 11/14/2006 5:07:29 AM
Most beautiful offering Debs!! love Tinka

Lifted Unto Heaven (Poetry) - 10/7/2006 6:45:51 PM
Thank you for sharing the beauty of these verses, Deborah. Love and peace to you, Regis

Lifted Unto Heaven (Poetry) - 9/13/2006 4:10:53 AM
I can only say that this was beautiful. Stunningly done!

Lifted Unto Heaven (Poetry) - 9/8/2006 1:25:28 PM
Beautiful offering!! love Tinka

Lifted Unto Heaven (Poetry) - 9/8/2006 1:24:31 AM
enjoyed this, very nice!

Yet To Be Told (Poetry) - 8/17/2006 10:21:17 AM
Outstanding write!! Thanks for sharing!! Love Tinka

Glorious & Free (Poetry) - 8/12/2006 1:55:08 PM
~~Deborah~~great poem..always a pleasure to read your poetry~~ ~~martin~~

Glorious & Free (Poetry) - 8/12/2006 3:49:45 AM
If only Mister Prime Minister could read this too...!! A honest olea straight from your heart!! Love Tinka

Glorious & Free (Poetry) - 8/10/2006 8:51:26 PM
An open and honest plea for peace, Deborah. The illustration depicts each and every word in Glorious & Free. You would think the color of blood would be more valuable to these leaders than the color of money. I have missed you. Check in every once in awhile, let us know how you are. Blessed Be. Sage

Chorus Of Peace (Poetry) - 6/30/2006 5:22:50 PM
~~Deborah~~beautiful..wonderful treat to find your poem~~ ~~martin~~

Chorus Of Peace (Poetry) - 6/30/2006 12:13:42 PM
Absolutely most outstanding work!! Love Tinka

Propensity For Truth (Poetry) - 6/26/2006 12:04:00 PM
Well done!! Love Tinka

It's Not About Changing Who You Are (Poetry) - 4/7/2006 9:56:00 AM
Beautiful poetry!! Love Tinka

It's Not About Changing Who You Are (Poetry) - 4/7/2006 3:31:57 AM
Lines laced with excellant thoughts

It's Not About Changing Who You Are (Poetry) - 4/6/2006 9:26:45 PM
Dear Deborah, This is beautiful poetry by a beautiful poet! I love the words you spirit and the well from which you write! One needs to celebrate Divinity!! "...Oh, sing that you are whole and free; and dance that your eyes are able to seeclearly and without bias this love before you..." It's all beautiful!! Love & friendship Suzie :-D

His Merciful Existence (Poetry) - 3/21/2006 2:23:57 AM
A beautiful offering Deborah!! thanks for sharing my friend!! Love Tinka

Breath Of My Heart (Poetry) - 3/12/2006 7:32:24 PM
A soul-reaching creative offering most appreciated, Deborah. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace, Regis

I Will Still Smile (Poetry) - 3/12/2006 7:31:11 PM
Upbeat and positive; a fine offering, Deborah. Thank you! Love and peace to you, Regis

Elemental Requirements (Poetry) - 3/12/2006 7:30:08 PM
A reverent portrayal and affirmation of faith. Thank you for sharing it, Deborah. Love and peace, Regis

Dawn Of Spring (Poetry) - 3/12/2006 7:28:53 PM
So sweetly beautiful a creation as there can be, Deborah! Thank you for sharing your gift. Love and peace to you, Regis

Dawn Of Spring (Poetry) - 3/11/2006 2:50:38 AM
Beautiful offering Deborah!! Love Tinka

Dawn Of Spring (Poetry) - 3/10/2006 5:48:00 AM
~~Deborah~~beautiful poem~simple and tender~~ ~~martin~~

Dawn Of Spring (Poetry) - 3/10/2006 2:56:44 AM
The blowing of kisses is tantamount to wishing the recepient good things, in that vein, I accept. Good.

Dawn Of Spring (Poetry) - 3/9/2006 11:27:01 PM
It's just a marvelous thought, this poem Dawn of Spring. The picture is such a jovial entrance into spring. The flute player rat gnome for a hat, has a pinecone on his head, the air swirling between the layers, fertilizing new adventures, lifting the kiss and floating it to whomever it is intended. Lovely spring poetry, Deborah. Nice to see you posting again. Blessed Be. Sage

Elemental Requirements (Poetry) - 3/8/2006 11:51:03 PM
The Light does more than fulfill our deepest desires and wishes, because It is capable of seeing if they concur with our paths through space and time. So whether we think we've been heard or not depends on the nature of our prayers and gradually we learn to distinguish the trivia from the meaningful. Each soul according to its measure of advancement, is given or denied whatever fits into his or her scope of awareness, all of which is done from the compassionate heart of the Light, which is Love. RAge

Elemental Requirements (Poetry) - 3/4/2006 3:54:48 PM
When you can compose words which flow so well and give the reader a good sense of what you are about, you have succeeded in the art of poetry, and when you combine this talent with your faith, you give us a sermon without preaching. These things you did here and I enjoyed reading your words.

Elemental Requirements (Poetry) - 2/22/2006 5:30:01 AM
What a lovely inpirational poem. Thank you for sharing. Karen

Elemental Requirements (Poetry) - 2/21/2006 3:50:16 AM
an inspiring and wise write.

Elemental Requirements (Poetry) - 2/15/2006 9:21:54 AM
What a beautiful offering!! Thanks for sharing!! Love Tinka

The Raven I, II & III (Poetry) - 2/15/2006 3:31:51 AM
~~Deborah~i will carry the spirit if this poem~~ ~~martin~~

Elemental Requirements (Poetry) - 2/15/2006 3:22:32 AM
~~Deborah~very beautiful poem~~ ~~martin~~

I Will Still Smile (Poetry) - 1/8/2006 9:05:43 AM
good attitude in this poem ...

I Will Still Smile (Poetry) - 1/7/2006 10:00:37 AM
Brava...wonderful offering!! Love Tinka

I Will Still Smile (Poetry) - 1/7/2006 7:49:54 AM
Wonderful power! Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

I Will Still Smile (Poetry) - 1/7/2006 5:11:20 AM
You've described the midway point in life with the proper attitude.Nice pen

Breath Of My Heart (Poetry) - 12/4/2005 10:14:36 AM
Such a beautiful and heartfelt poem. Very touching. Love & Light, Joseph

Breath Of My Heart (Poetry) - 12/4/2005 9:49:24 AM
This writing takes flight. It is three-dimensional where the wings give it balance and natural alignment with the sky, held together by faith and heart, blending with spiritual overtones. Deeply moving, Deborah. Sage

Breath Of My Heart (Poetry) - 12/4/2005 5:55:03 AM
It is indeed an outstanding and inspiring write. Well-done, Deborah! Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Breath Of My Heart (Poetry) - 12/4/2005 5:10:26 AM
Oh this is well written!! Thanks for sharing!! Love Tinka

Heart's Desire (Poetry) - 12/4/2005 2:56:22 AM
Wonderful.... Bravo!

Breath Of My Heart (Poetry) - 12/4/2005 2:55:59 AM
Very well written!

Into The Rainbow (Poetry) - 11/30/2005 9:44:09 AM
A rainbow blooms and then fades within moments ... something truly precious to experience. Love & Light, Joseph

Into The Rainbow (Poetry) - 11/25/2005 6:22:14 PM
The easel is poised and beckoning you to paint it, Deborah. Beautiful word canvas! Sage

Into The Rainbow (Poetry) - 11/25/2005 9:32:13 AM
Awesome....this has the touch of SOmeone beyond!! Love Tinka

Guide Me Through (A Prayer) (Poetry) - 11/22/2005 11:08:59 AM
Beautiful deep touching prayer!! Thanks for sharing!! Love Tinka

Guide Me Through (A Prayer) (Poetry) - 11/22/2005 3:30:26 AM
Deborah, This is a beautiful little prayer. I'm sure with all the sincerity you show here that He is definitely listening. It is always so easy to fall and so difficult to rise up again. Blessings Always, Paul

Guide Me Through (A Prayer) (Poetry) - 11/21/2005 7:46:59 PM
You will stand up again, on your own two feet. The Lord will hold your hand in His. He will lead you out from the darkness, emerge you into the light. With Him holding your hand, You will bravely proceed! Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

To Never Risk, Is To Never Love (Poetry) - 11/21/2005 3:50:58 PM
A beautiful wish. Great love takes two and ignores minor diferences. Your next love will be better for the experience. Ron

It Shall Be Opened (Poetry) - 11/21/2005 6:45:13 AM
Oh how deeply poignant this poem is, so very well expressed and written, just really hit me this morning, excellent. Reindeer

It Shall Be Opened (Poetry) - 11/21/2005 5:38:49 AM
A POwerful prayer, almost a spiritual chant, I'm sure the answer lies within the extent of this poem, coming as a reminder to perceive our present hour. Metaphysics interplay with natural theology here. Thanks Deborah. Sage

It Shall Be Opened (Poetry) - 11/21/2005 4:30:51 AM
Deborah: This prayer have so many layers: The love. The longings, The desires, The faith. All the above packed into this wonderfully-written poem. I applaud this! Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

It Shall Be Opened (Poetry) - 11/21/2005 3:00:18 AM
Deborah, Beautiful longing write. He gives us the tools and the means but lets us make our own decisions. The freedom of choice, if you will. I hope I have not missed your point here. I like the poem but love those opening lines. Will you ever, my angel, see the soft and caring heart within? All you seem to see is the shell of denial you have placed yourself in.

The Raven I, II & III (Poetry) - 11/16/2005 9:01:47 AM
Marvelous. So creative!! 'Pea' <3

The Raven I, II & III (Poetry) - 11/14/2005 6:49:07 PM
The three parts to this is very wise. I love how it is divided into three parts, strength, intelligence, and freedom. The author is very perceptive of what she saw of Raven. This is personal for me, and I accept this as a Buddhist trilogy, as in a non-ego centeredness, instead nature's path of enlightment. Why this is personal to me is that I am a wolf keeper and raven leads wolf to food, and in kind return for this, wolf leaves raven leftovers. This is why you see pictures of ravens feeding on a still meaty carcass and the wolves are in close company. Both the Raven and the Wolf, through literary tales have been portrayed as evil. Perhaps that is why they look out after one another. There is a fusion of intelligence and enlightment here, giving this poem its strength. Sending my Goddess prayer back to you on the calm glide of a raven's feather, Deborah. "An it harm none, do what ye will." Blessed be. The five points of the pentacle; air, earth, fire, water, and spirit. Sage

The Raven I, II & III (Poetry) - 11/14/2005 3:37:32 AM
Deborah, I enjoyed your poems. I think it's high time the raven stops taking the bad wrap. In life we all serve One and we all serve a purpose.

The Shadow Of A Suicide (Poetry) - 9/29/2005 3:13:37 AM
Deborah, Very sad poem. I agree with you, suicide is indeed a selfish act. It truly robs ones potentiality. How can one justify taking their own life when there are many terminally ill people who would give anything for more time. Very well written poem.

The Shadow Of A Suicide (Poetry) - 9/28/2005 5:06:31 PM
Heartfelt write. Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

The Shadow Of A Suicide (Poetry) - 9/28/2005 2:18:57 PM
Profound, moving..Great talent

Feathers (Poetry) - 9/23/2005 1:04:18 PM
I LOVE feathers!! I have studied them for my writing projects. The primary flight feathers intrigue me, and then the contour, and then the downy ones which insulate. I love feather boas. I write with a feather-quill pen I made dipped in India ink. There is quite a heartfelt story of a damaged loon from an oil spill in my novel The Buckskin Skirt Oar Traveler. And I learned from studying the flamingo that their feathers are pink because of their algae-based diet. Yes, a lot can be learned from feathers. They are dynamically spiritual! Sage

Feathers (Poetry) - 9/23/2005 6:01:12 AM
Deborah, Wonderful read. I had no idea there was so much emotion in feathers.

Full Circle (Poetry) - 9/15/2005 6:21:00 PM
I believe in destiny. I do not believe in coincidence. I have THE CAROUSEL tarot card which says to come full circle. This is when two hearts do join. Looks like you've made it Deborah. Great illustration to compliment this very simple, constructive poem. Thanks! Sage

His Beautiful Heart (Poetry) - 9/14/2005 3:44:49 AM
Deborah, Love definitely leaves a lasting impression. Well written.

His Beautiful Heart (Poetry) - 9/13/2005 8:19:24 AM
Very beautiful piece! Touching!

His Beautiful Heart (Poetry) - 9/13/2005 5:57:57 AM
You already are. He is speaking sometimes we need to take time out to hear...

His Beautiful Heart (Poetry) - 9/13/2005 4:10:15 AM
Love and frustrations. They go hand-in-hand. Heartfelt write! Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

His Beautiful Heart (Poetry) - 9/13/2005 12:41:22 AM
Beautiful and very touching....

I Still See Beauty (Poetry) - 9/12/2005 10:15:17 AM
There is no doubt about the yearning of love expressed in your verses, Deborah. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace to you. Regis

I Still See Beauty (Poetry) - 9/11/2005 2:50:57 PM
Beautifully romantic!

Daydream (Poetry) - 9/11/2005 9:16:02 AM
Very nice!

I Still See Beauty (Poetry) - 9/11/2005 9:15:38 AM
Lovely!

I Still See Beauty (Poetry) - 9/10/2005 10:20:15 PM
a most lovely romantic poem ...

I Still See Beauty (Poetry) - 9/10/2005 3:43:00 PM
Beautiful romantic write!

I Still See Beauty (Poetry) - 9/10/2005 3:03:49 PM
"Life is full of hopes and dreams; it's one's gateway to the future." - my very first poem written some years ago. Your wonderful poem has just reminded me of what I first wrote as a poem. Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Those Danged Emotions (Poetry) - 9/10/2005 1:05:27 PM
Original and thus captivating, Deborah. Well done! Thank you. Love and peace. Regis

The Hues Of Healing (Poetry) - 9/10/2005 1:04:07 PM
A prayerful testimonial of your faith, Deborah. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you. Regis

The Hues Of Healing (Poetry) - 9/7/2005 6:17:54 PM
Beautiful and soothing write. -- Jeff

The Hues Of Healing (Poetry) - 9/7/2005 12:29:25 PM
Beautiful composition to praise Nature and its Creator. "The Hues Of Healing" inspires and stimulates the heart to pump beauty and sing love. Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

The Hues Of Healing (Poetry) - 9/7/2005 1:33:50 AM
This is a masterpiece! Thanks for sharing!

Those Danged Emotions (Poetry) - 9/4/2005 5:24:39 PM
somtimes the best is to move on ... fine poem!

Those Danged Emotions (Poetry) - 9/3/2005 10:30:01 PM
A fine write.

Those Danged Emotions (Poetry) - 8/28/2005 10:58:43 PM
Sincerity and embarassment did the right thing. A fine revelation about the inner angst and negativity that cause mans slide into dispair..

Hope Remains (Poetry) - 8/18/2005 9:19:24 PM
The emotions are very powerfully expressed. Nicely done.

This Mortal Skin (Poetry) - 7/22/2005 10:49:55 PM
BRILLIANT. You've said it all here..

This Mortal Skin (Poetry) - 7/22/2005 9:20:29 PM
Beautiful spiritual and inspirational write! You have made my day, Deborah! God bless, Sandie.

This Mortal Skin (Poetry) - 7/22/2005 7:41:18 PM
wish i wrote this!!! i am so impressed......this is wonderful

This Mortal Skin (Poetry) - 7/22/2005 5:31:44 PM
Deborah this is awesome! I sincerly admire the gift our great God has given you.This internal struggle is what every Christian goes through as you have captured in these words. Praise be to our Jesus Christ and thank you for blessing me with your words. Tim

Three Steps From Faith (Poetry) - 7/14/2005 9:15:35 AM
A powerful testimonial of faith. I was born in Peace River, Alberta so I can relate to your take on the north country. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace. Regis

Ignorance Among Kings (Poetry) - 7/14/2005 9:13:16 AM
Thought-provoking and worthy of more than one reading. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace. Regis

Ignorance Among Kings (Poetry) - 7/12/2005 8:01:02 PM
It is possible he is content with himself.

My Weary Heart (Poetry) - 6/4/2005 3:42:26 PM
Lean not.... This is the day that..... Fabo poem.

Three Steps From Faith (Poetry) - 6/4/2005 3:38:52 PM
Brilliant. Anyone from a place called Churchill I thought must be fab. Great didactic poem. How many times we upset Him, by wrongly using our free will.

Three Steps From Faith (Poetry) - 6/4/2005 12:43:05 PM
Thank you, Deborah, I'm saving this one to reference to when I am feeling less than low. Well done! Instructions for life. :) (((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

My Weary Heart (Poetry) - 5/25/2005 7:20:52 PM
Thanks Deb for this contribution to the poetry of the new millenium. Excellent work. "My sorrow won’t cry her tears for you, my lonely heart tries not to notice you are gone..." a wonderfully fresh and original line.

Mists Of Deceit (Poetry) - 5/21/2005 6:43:43 PM
Yeah. Good wisdom in these verses. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis

Mists Of Deceit (Poetry) - 5/10/2005 4:54:26 PM
Great write!

Mists Of Deceit (Poetry) - 5/8/2005 5:44:50 PM
Soulfull lament, well done poem. Henry

My Muse Cried (Poetry) - 4/22/2005 12:57:38 PM
Powerfully poignant and beautifully penned, with excellent message! (((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(

My Muse Cried (Poetry) - 4/21/2005 6:02:11 PM
as the door to the heart opens much will follow its lead ... wonderful poetry ...

My Muse Cried (Poetry) - 4/21/2005 10:16:20 AM
good advice

My Muse Cried (Poetry) - 4/21/2005 3:40:49 AM
Hi Deborah: This was inspiring. Sandie Angel :o)

My Muse Cried (Poetry) - 4/21/2005 1:26:59 AM
that is a beautiful inspiring love letter from a heart that cares :)

Daydream (Poetry) - 4/12/2005 9:09:54 PM
wonderful poetry ... enjoyed experiencing you moving words and sentiments ...

Daydream (Poetry) - 4/11/2005 7:08:56 PM
Lovely, Deborah, You painted a vivid picture here. Also a nice relaxing feeling. Nice piece. Love, Bonnie

Daydream (Poetry) - 4/11/2005 4:08:00 PM
Deborah, Very nice poem, I enjoyed the read and found it very entertaining... Sam

Daydream (Poetry) - 4/11/2005 3:38:20 PM
nicely done

Daydream (Poetry) - 4/11/2005 2:17:32 PM
lovely imagery, deborah; very nice! well done! :) (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

He Comes (Poetry) - 4/2/2005 7:52:37 AM
Beauty, knowledge, experienced sperituality; Faith and Hope expressed throught this poetic grand. Healthy Life, Poet! Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

He Shall Give To You (Poetry) - 3/26/2005 9:47:09 AM
Excellent, Wonderful..... beautiful glorious~~~~~~

He Shall Give To You (Poetry) - 3/23/2005 4:43:35 PM
Beautiful poem and presentation. Henry

He Shall Give To You (Poetry) - 3/23/2005 12:49:05 PM
Deborah, A refreshing breath of Spring air, this write--thank you. :) Most beautiful! (((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Someone Awaits (Poetry) - 3/12/2005 1:59:47 PM
Inspirationally moving and meaningful, Deborah. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis

Someone Awaits (Poetry) - 3/10/2005 6:05:41 PM
the realization to move on is sometimes unavoidable ... very moving poem ...

Someone Awaits (Poetry) - 3/10/2005 2:34:48 PM
very passionate write "i cry, for i am not allowed to stay here; I must go on..... Someone awaits." exactly what i'm going throught right now........ you got the feelings coined here

From Yesterday's Tears (Poetry) - 3/9/2005 1:51:12 PM
perfect.

Someone Awaits (Poetry) - 3/9/2005 1:49:15 PM
I relate to this all to well; very well written. Thank you for this.

Someone Awaits (Poetry) - 3/9/2005 7:15:25 AM
This is really a good one Deborah and so inspirational. There is a great deal to like about this one.

Forever Begins Today (Poetry) - 3/7/2005 9:43:50 AM
beautiful,excellent write

Forever Begins Today (Poetry) - 3/3/2005 10:58:43 AM
True love penned at its finast

Forever Begins Today (Poetry) - 3/3/2005 10:17:14 AM
lovely poem..instauration..a new word for me, at least in this form

Forever Begins Today (Poetry) - 3/3/2005 4:37:10 AM
I like tht string analygy Deb, ya know I play violin, and strings have found a way of meaning something to me, the violin is a toy string box that is nieve, and will believe anything you tell her. Strings placed up and ocean like gitz of varish, the waves are there too, if one tilts to see and she always too bash full to fully smile, Al

Little Bird - Part III (Poetry) - 2/27/2005 10:46:37 PM
wonderful ....very very wonderful write...love n luck....BHUWAN!!!!

Little Bird - Part III (Poetry) - 2/27/2005 3:09:48 PM
Oh yes this is really sweet and before long I will be putting babies back in their nests. The cardinals are checking out the nest box next to the fence and I have another one to put up.

Little Bird - Part III (Poetry) - 2/27/2005 1:37:08 PM
A very wonderful, and slight piece, I thought Deb. I could feel the shade of the tree, and the familiarity with which the bird must had experienced, there with a neat lawn, and also tender words of welcome, spoken, somehow that rang still for him to listen, to understand. The tree additionally represented a nice symbol, al

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