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Recent Reviews for Quest of myself
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Wolves (Article) - 4/6/2003 1:52:56 PM
well i think u r right infcat u rhiding the fact what u wan say perticularly but it is truth and even it coneys the message and i have got it and no doubt there many wolves that doesnt care about ur body they dont eat ur body but the simply wan ur soull fot to make it toy. and they used to paly with that ! they are dangreious so we should be care ful from them. thanks for informing me.
Jungle of Life (Article) - 11/24/2002 11:19:48 PM
Very keen and deep view of the human life...It is all about around us...the author compare our society like the Jungle.. and I am appreaciating this article, which is very close to our mind and soul.
Prince of Desire!
Jungle of Life (Article) - 11/24/2002 8:20:58 AM
This is a very good start. You have the germ of a great piece. It just needs to be fleshed out a little more.
A lot of people, especially those who have never experienced poverty or worked on a farm or hunted for food, refuse to think of life as a "jungle." They get things so easily that the "jungle" analogy doesn't seem to apply, but their perceptions are flawed. Their cheap fruit & vegetables are picked by people who earn less than subsistance wages (undocumented migrant workers or illegal aliens), and in restaurants, their food is delivered and their tables bused by people earning less than minimum wage and getting by on tips.
Life doesn't seem like a "jungle" to them because they are the lions and crocs...even the toughest jungle must seem peaceful to the top predators.
Anyway, like I said, you have the idea for a great article here - you could easily expand this into a very detailed piece.
Good luck with this and fine writing as far as this goes.
Temporary Death (Poetry) - 4/13/2003 5:52:02 AM
The poem seems to the voice of every heart who feels the light of LOVE. The great words n appropriate placing shows the depth of "Quest of Myself"
SENSES (Poetry) - 4/6/2003 2:21:22 PM
wow! weill thast better to remain away and keep ur self in dreams and use ur sixth sense but i would say that just open us eyes u have reached that limit where one can even clearly see hsi beloved. and therefore i would say that just open ur beautiful eyes and u will fine ur love before u. and i personally believe that it has always been with u for ever and ever for ur rest of life! make sure!
Temporary Death (Poetry) - 4/6/2003 2:05:43 PM
hi! infcat love is a thing that steel all ur passions away from u in that situation u cant even sleep well. thats is called love and in that situation i would say that its is blessings of love that makes u alive thorugh his agony, and through its different nature and we must thx to love. that keep us alive.
Temporary Death (Poetry) - 4/2/2003 8:23:07 PM
death is fleeting... life endures...
Temporary Death (Poetry) - 4/2/2003 4:51:53 PM
OOPS Lady Peg tip toes and blunders sorry QUEST FORMYSELF...
This reminded me of Bobbies tales.
It was so excellent.
Peggy
Temporary Death (Poetry) - 4/2/2003 4:50:06 PM
Bobbie,
I sleep to see you'
Oh dear this brings him so near.
Excellent Bowing now To Potress ..
Peggy
Temporary Death (Poetry) - 4/2/2003 4:40:47 PM
I sleep to see you, WOW, I love this. I have done this very thing myself. Very nice.
JC xoxoxo
Temporary Death (Poetry) - 4/2/2003 12:43:15 PM
it shows the real inner feelings,and thoughts of some one who really touches life so nearly.........
nice work keep it up
hussain
Temporary Death (Poetry) - 4/2/2003 12:27:08 PM
Well the tought described in this poem has made me write comments whic I havent done before
ITS a MASTER PIECE and I dont know that any on ever has descibed this feelin of this TEMPORARY DEATH....
"Your love is the only thing that keeps me alive "
wow simply WOW
I Love myself because Love you me (Poetry) - 4/2/2003 12:18:00 PM
well! i would say that though world may percieve it as imaturity or some thing unusual but i personally can feel that how could u do that and how well u might have brought some smile on others faces and on ur own because i know the truth that when you make some one happy or when u make some one to take a good smile it return on ur face because u r person which finds her smile in the smile of others and that is call and art of life which u know very well i like it. and i think u feel ur self very relex when u make some one happy but there is one nother truth as well that this can be an attempt of digusing ur own agonies and obsolenece and dont forget other can do it as well. so what is real.
Temporary Death (Poetry) - 4/2/2003 12:14:12 PM
Fantasy....isn't it great?
Well done.
YOU MAY IF YOU CAN (Poetry) - 4/2/2003 12:02:36 PM
Hi! i know on can not love with some one else because love always happenes once in his or her life and it leaves many signs and symbols on the herats and faces of both. and i personally believe that one always returns to his or her first love and i m sure that he will be of urs! and i feel that u understand the love more than me and more than any body else! because we have seen the pleasent momnets but u have gone through even his vally of agony! i pray that may ALLAH give u such a passions to accept the reality of life! AAMIN
SENSES (Poetry) - 4/2/2003 11:39:20 AM
good one! :) (((HUGS)))
I Love myself because Love you me (Poetry) - 2/4/2003 4:20:03 AM
Good and dedicated work
I Love myself because Love you me (Poetry) - 11/25/2002 10:19:56 PM
Beautiful poem and Best Work! What a imagination of the poet...I love this poem
prince of desire
Where am I? (Poetry) - 11/25/2002 11:17:25 AM
outstanding write! and a gorgeous photo! it fits this poem perfectly! love, your new friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)
I Love myself because Love you me (Poetry) - 11/25/2002 11:16:16 AM
first of all, welcome to our happy family; and second of all, great write! love, a new friend in texas, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)
I Love myself because Love you me (Poetry) - 11/25/2002 8:12:41 AM
A beauty of a write!!! Onederful!
Where am I? (Poetry) - 11/23/2002 4:25:36 AM
hi its amazing unbelieveable! i have not seen such a great poetry ever in my life cause i have remaind unaware of thispaious feelings and i have kept my self away from such a great emotions cause i have not been given such great exposure oflove feelings up tillnow.. whats so ever this is griffe that is written by an autherr that i know personally who has got a great experience and eagle eye to see in the depth of love and feel the love at the hight of sky.. and i m just wishing her that she may spread and lighten the world with her great experience oflove!
Where am I? (Poetry) - 11/23/2002 3:07:04 AM
Wow its great work saira....good keep it up...i want to hear more of u...its a QUEST OF MY LIFE
Where am I? (Poetry) - 11/22/2002 9:29:05 PM
It is deep thinking of the poet, in which he/she express the feelings! Best Work! I hope Author will be continue.......this version of poetry.
Where am I? (Poetry) - 11/22/2002 6:09:40 AM
Awareness to see what is before us, to hear what is truly being spoken to understand the dreams of others. Here and now!!!! Well written my friend!
Where am I? (Poetry) - 11/22/2002 3:56:48 AM
you can't see dreams buti see beautifull dreams .
i hope now you see dreams i pray for you.
ok good by from:your friends
Where am I? (Poetry) - 11/22/2002 2:35:51 AM
this da cutiest and most romantic piece of poetry i have ever read.... this writer seems ta be showered by heavenly blessings
Where am I? (Poetry) - 11/22/2002 12:12:47 AM
Welcome to the Den.
Very good write!!!!
Look forward to many more
Peggy
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