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Recent Reviews for Brittany Renée
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Shadows of a Heart (Book) - 1/12/2008 5:46:54 AM
16 and on her way, your style of writing is superb! You have a special way of touching the heart with the words you chose to say/write Brittany! I want your book!
It amazes me that so young and yet so profound! a deep thinker too!
Warmed in the Spirit, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxoo
STay Positive!
Shadows of a Heart (Book) - 5/19/2004 5:22:46 AM
Brittany
Can you get back to me at ppaton{.} btconnect.com
Peter Paton
Author's Den
Shadows of a Heart (Book) - 11/5/2003 11:06:48 PM
Brit,
As I said I would, I'm buying your book as I write (kind of). Hope you sell a lot of copies, your poetry will sell itself. J.
Shadows of a Heart (Book) - 10/27/2003 11:29:51 PM
I will be buying a copy of this book soon...
God Bless
~Michelle~
Shadows of a Heart (Book) - 9/7/2003 7:00:41 PM
Congrats on the Publish America deal, Brittany. I won't be too far behind you, hopefully, since my book is in production right now. I'll buy a copy, next pay day Keep up the great work and don't ever let go of your dreams.
Jill :)
Whispers (Book) - 5/3/2003 7:45:42 AM
Sounds very interesting Brit. good luck. GEM
Whispers (Book) - 4/12/2003 8:02:12 PM
Deep and thought provoking...
Secrets, Secrets (Short Story) - 1/11/2008 4:10:40 PM
Nicely done, Brittany. You have captured my attention. Thank you. Love and peace,
Regis
Secrets, Secrets (Short Story) - 1/11/2008 9:22:01 AM
Not bad for your first story, Brittany; very well penned! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Secrets, Secrets (Short Story) - 1/11/2008 7:21:25 AM
The secret was that the anti-depressants she had been taking since age 30 were making everything in her life seem extremely rosy. In her world, since age 30, she felt no sadness or pain; for seeing through drug-induced eyes blurred her harsh reality. And the reality was that she was in love with Nick, her tennis coach for the past year. She never understood this "fatal attraction," for she knew that she loved her husband deeply...
Okay, I'm just goofing around. I really did like your characterizations. As you move along, you should give the characters more depth and description (physical as well as psychological descriptors - moods, hair color, eyes - things like that). Make them as multi-dimensional as possible. Currently, you have been somewhat descriptive, but is Lily tall, with dark hair and a penchant for being the 'sensible' one? Is Wallace well-built and typically the "life of the party?" You're on the right track, and I love what you've done so far; but also make it more intriguing - make us WANT to know what the secret might be - tantalize us with some more details - make them slightly vague, with juicy "leading" tid-bits. -- Jeff
Secrets, Secrets (Short Story) - 1/11/2008 6:46:25 AM
Interesting opening story, the hints of the secret could be a little clearer or introduced a little earlier in the chapter. The descriptive phrases are great though although some may need a little more elaboration...
Example: Presidencey of cloud nine...love the phrase but what does it mean in relation to the watching of the tourists for months
Also if this is to be ashort story the secret should be revealed a little more...why was there relationship secret...was he waiting for divorce, promotion or taking ownership of the company etc.
Other than that it is a great write and I think it has lots of potential.
Lool forward to reading more of your work Britt
hugs
Fee
Secrets, Secrets (Short Story) - 1/10/2008 11:52:31 PM
Wow I wish my first attempt were that good, it seems to me you are doing great with this, I hope to read more of your short stories
God Bless
Michelle~
What is a Woman? (Article) - 12/29/2007 11:56:29 PM
Well said Brittany. Willie
What is a Woman? (Article) - 3/5/2007 10:49:03 PM
My parents thought for sure that I would be a girl since they already had two boys. They even had a girl's name picked for me. It matters not. I must say that I am a huge fan of "woman" and I do love what you wrote here, Brittany Renée. Merci. Amour et paix,
moi (Régis)
What is a Woman? (Article) - 11/21/2006 4:05:45 AM
Women are all and nothing, light and dark.
We are what we are and always beautiful xx
What is a Woman? (Article) - 10/4/2005 7:14:09 AM
You bring up many important points:what is feminity;is it subscribing to beauty magazines or a fragrance ..I think being a female is about being happy and feeling complete ,not burdenned by society or "the dogmas" it sends out : such as "You have to manicure, You have to exercice,You have to let your hair down at a party,You have to be motherly towards X..Age can also be a factor :a woman of forty will have a stronger character and more self-assurance than a teenager on the brink of womanhood.I really enjoyed your article and you're right.In this day and age, numerous questions have to be brought to light..Anne pawlak.
What is a Woman? (Article) - 1/24/2004 5:52:44 PM
You've touched on some fundamental questions about what is true female and what is true male. Or is there a difference other than in our perceptions of roles for each? I enjoyed this, but would also love to see you expand on the subject. Maybe even go on to What is a man? You ask all the right questions, maybe doing the man right after the woman would bring into stark awareness the issue of who has the right to answer these questions.
Carol
Under the Influence (Article) - 8/28/2003 10:08:39 PM
Understanding this! I use to have a friend that drank a lot. So I drank a lot with him. Then he would use this expression, "uh rah," and then hesitate for a second or two before he started talking again. He would say something like this, "I was out last night and uh rah............... I got drunk as hell." After hanging with this friend so long I started speaking the same way. Brit you are a very good writer uh rah................maybe you should write another book. This was way back when I was uh rah..........a very young man. Uh rah........I don't drink anymore or use uh rah.hugs G
Make the Future (Article) - 8/28/2003 9:50:12 PM
Hello Brit, Every day for awhile I've been trying to get to your site. Finally I'm here and I glad I aM. This piece is very good motivationally. I am an artist, painter, sculptor etc. I have been for years but for some reason, other than selling some of my work, being an artist has never really worked out that well. I haven't painted a painting in years. Anyway I did almost exactly what you stated here. I went off in an entirely different direction. something has always called me to write so one day back several years ago this is exactly what I decided to do. As you stated, it's best to try rather than doing nothing, then end up regretting or not knowing what would have ever happened. So now I'm a published author. I'm still trying to get the same motivation on writing my second book. I know eventually it will happen with good advice like you have written here and some of my own knowledge. Thanks for being a wise young motivator. hugs GEMorrison
What is a Woman? (Article) - 7/21/2003 2:04:26 PM
Yes, it is a fascinating question. I enjoyed reading your essay.
I must say, though, that it would be much stronger without the line about women being able to outwit most men. To me, that doesn't come across as strong and self-respecting. It comes across as defensive and insecure.
Or maybe I am just oversensitive. :)
Keep writing!
What is a Woman? (Article) - 6/19/2003 9:17:58 AM
It's up to us to change the view people have of women. Including how women see other women. I like this piece but it seems somewhat fragmented. I think it would be great to expand on it and correct the spacing and spelling errors so that it is easier to read. Great potential. Please keep writing about this issue.
Under the Influence (Article) - 6/4/2003 2:37:26 AM
well done
What is a Woman? (Article) - 6/4/2003 2:31:03 AM
well done
What is a Woman? (Article) - 6/3/2003 8:44:40 AM
Brittany, Nice question. This is a question that I have been asked to ponder in several classes now (especially the American Female Writers class that I'm currently in). You bring up a lot of good points and I would say that a lot of what our society views as a "woman" would really be what our society has determined what a woman should be. We see in the present that the traditional roles of both women and men are changing and likewise I think that what will constitute a "woman" in society's eyes will change with it, although that overall perception may take some time to adapt. Nice article and I like how you leave the question open as if to open up the subject for discussion and leave the options of viewpoint up to the reader. Nice work. J.
What is a Woman? (Article) - 6/2/2003 6:05:17 PM
I have always felt that a woman is a woman not from the form of her figure, but the core of her being. Thank you for this article.
Under the Influence (Article) - 6/2/2003 5:59:06 PM
Saved to my library. Thank you.
Support (Article) - 4/25/2003 4:18:53 AM
Very practical advice indeed. Nice job. We all do need help now and again. J.
Peace (Poetry) - 1/2/2009 6:43:18 PM
What a poem!
True to the bone!
Peace comes with a price.
Amen!
JMD
Faith (Poetry) - 8/16/2008 12:58:18 PM
You have God given talent and a heart of GOLD.
I Pray for YOUR Success!
Always,
John Michael
Catching the Moments (Poetry) - 7/11/2008 9:55:57 PM
Appreciating the "Moments" as time ticks on, or rather as the cosmos continues to turn like a clock. Numbers measuring the moments. Some great turns in your expressions. J.
Celestial Caress (Poetry) - 7/11/2008 9:49:55 PM
I'm guessing moonlight. J.
Celestial Caress (Poetry) - 6/13/2008 1:58:58 PM
I love the imagery and the feelings that are born from it. Thank you for sharing this gift Brittany Renée. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Catching the Moments (Poetry) - 6/12/2008 2:32:16 PM
This is wonderful,keep up the good work
Edwin
Celestial Caress (Poetry) - 6/12/2008 2:30:40 PM
What a lovely poem.This is divine :-)
Edwin
Celestial Caress (Poetry) - 6/12/2008 2:37:49 AM
To me, this poem sounds like the ethereal touch of the Gods. Lot of thoughts in this poem that could be interpreted differently--depending on the reader.
Celestial Caress (Poetry) - 6/11/2008 11:20:05 PM
Beautifully written and very heartfelt....
Be always safe,
Karen
Princess of Sin (Poetry) - 6/11/2008 7:41:31 PM
Powerful
God Bless
Michelle~
Celestial Caress (Poetry) - 6/11/2008 7:40:51 PM
Beautiful, thank you for sharing
God Bless
Michelle~
Catching the Moments (Poetry) - 6/11/2008 6:39:27 PM
My favorite line: "Too blind for the signs." Most of us have been there! Wonderfully seeing a posting from you! -- Jeff
Catching the Moments (Poetry) - 6/11/2008 6:37:16 PM
Brittnany havent read your works in awhile, you seem to improve more and mroe with time and you were great to start with
God Bless
Michelle~
Catching the Moments (Poetry) - 6/11/2008 6:14:01 PM
Love that first stanza, Brittany. And
working in "centrifugally" ain't bad either.
- gene.
Princess of Sin (Poetry) - 5/5/2008 1:11:57 PM
It seems to me, this has much to do with choice. It could apply to a lot of situations in life. Thank you, Brittany. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Princess of Sin (Poetry) - 5/5/2008 10:57:23 AM
Unusual but I like the way it makes one wonder about this Princess and who she really is. Is she evil by design or designed by evil. Anyway I enjoyed...well done.
hugs
Fee
Princess of Sin (Poetry) - 5/5/2008 4:26:26 AM
Life can be very simple - or very complicated - it's your choice !
Nice play on words to convey the disparity in life.
Princess of Sin (Poetry) - 5/4/2008 9:07:31 PM
Leaving the last line at six syllables really stresses your point. Well put together points. Find the last line of stanza two a tad bit cumbersome. However, your way of speaking to the corruption of the internet on people grabs the attention of the reader. "sign in sin" and "porn and scorn" are great turns. J.
Princess of Sin (Poetry) - 5/4/2008 8:31:48 PM
Britanny, I'm glad you found this one...and posted it. Gene.
Abandoned (Poetry) - 2/17/2008 6:05:01 PM
Hi Brittany, I haven't received an e-mail from you in awhile, I pray all is well. take care, simply rita
When Will They Hear My Voice? (Poetry) - 2/14/2008 7:22:04 AM
This is beautiful... and one that so many can relate to.
Cryssa
Snow Globe (Poetry) - 2/1/2008 5:04:04 PM
lovely
Collide (Poetry) - 2/1/2008 5:03:11 PM
very cosmic and erotic
well written
Frustration (Poetry) - 1/17/2008 3:34:23 PM
"Harlequin precipitation"; "Moss and vine foundation" -- fantastic imagery (and I mean fantastic in both senses of the word: fantasy-like and wonderful). A terrific piece. Beautifully written.
Collide (Poetry) - 1/16/2008 5:54:58 PM
This is so light, yet powerful!
blessin's Brittany Renee,
cynth'ya lewis reed
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