Recent Reviews for ZaKiYa Online
A Letter to a Friend (Book) - 10/16/2004 3:03:01 PM|
this book sounds like it is a good book to read. I try too approach my topics and writings in the same manner. My book revolves around personal responsibilty and understanding. Some people try to change society and others, which is harder, but they ignor or refuse to face their own inner being. They prefer to play the blame game. G
Muted Whispers (Book) - 3/8/2004 8:11:09 AM
Yes Muted Whispers is the title of my book
Muted Whispers (Book) - 4/22/2003 12:30:04 PM
it is title of ur book.
Muted Whispers (Book) - 4/22/2003 10:28:10 AM
On edge (Poetry) - 10/16/2004 2:48:57 PM
very interesting piece, I did one similar in topic quiet awhile ago. Some people don't know how close to the edge they are. l&p G
Truth (Poetry) - 8/4/2004 6:46:04 AM
Truth (Poetry) - 3/12/2004 1:54:17 PM
a very passionate poem ... i like the entire feel to this poem ...
Stone government (Poetry) - 3/8/2004 8:05:25 PM
- clever word usage and phrasing. Loved it ...
BRILLIANT!!! ===>>> Shadowed windows with stone government
And lo, the canine's upper lip did curl asunder
When in the course of horrid events
As the master ate from his bed of dishes,
a blunder co fuddled
Fit to be tied (Poetry) - 3/8/2004 8:01:17 PM
WoW - most excellent!
I agree with you totally!
Awesome! Great advise. We need more people to think like this!
Lazy Day (Poetry) - 3/8/2004 7:54:05 PM
Intriguing and very clever poem!
Truth (Poetry) - 3/8/2004 5:48:03 PM
Beautiful,deeply passioante love song/poem with excellent rhythmn and flow.
Lazy Day (Poetry) - 2/3/2004 10:23:59 AM
Drug of choice (Poetry) - 12/31/2003 11:21:03 AM
Very well said ! I look forward to reading more
Darkness Unnerved (Poetry) - 12/29/2003 5:31:07 AM
I too enjoyed this poem, it is unique!
SANCTUARY COVER (Poetry) - 12/29/2003 5:29:30 AM
Yes, I agree, your strength is within ....
No need to drown in shame, defeat, fear, doubt - rise up, rise up ...
you are a fortress of strength and courage!
Drug of choice (Poetry) - 12/29/2003 5:24:31 AM
You are doing the right thing. It reminds me of what my brother's wife told me about a black teacher telling her to NOT go to college, evemn though she was fairly good in high school. It is like a massive brainwashing thing in America, where even the blacks have been "trained" to discriminate against other blacks. And don't think it is just happening to blacks, although we are the drug of choice in America. It is pitiful, how people will try to hold you back, but you must be stronger than them and know your own mind. Don't let anyone define who you are (wise words to me from Eileen Waldron)because you are a mountain of "unused/unrealized/unfinished" strength.
Peace - write on!
A well said truth! Keep them coming.
Darkness Unnerved (Poetry) - 11/24/2003 5:03:39 AM
Enjoyed, well done and unique.
SANCTUARY COVER (Poetry) - 11/16/2003 1:01:06 AM
very coherent and well written...
SANCTUARY COVER (Poetry) - 11/14/2003 1:50:20 PM
I would be interested in the story behind this work. It provokes thought.
SANCTUARY COVER (Poetry) - 11/14/2003 9:42:02 AM
Insulting? Yo chick get over urself ! (Poetry) - 11/10/2003 5:49:30 PM
It is good to say what you feel. Keeping unhappy thoughts and feelings inside oneself can lead to the brewing of a nasty concoction. Good on you!
Insulting? Yo chick get over urself ! (Poetry) - 11/5/2003 10:53:46 AM
Excellant Rant my dear!!!!
I am Wiccan with a strong Native American background and influence and henceforth have a different religious belief BUT I let everyone know and my saying always is "Be proud of who you are, what you are and your beliefs and respect those around you for all the same!"
Insulting? Yo chick get over urself ! (Poetry) - 11/3/2003 8:11:18 PM
I always find to do a big rave helps to unload the frustration, of not knowing what the heck you did wrong, when someone hasnt the intestinal fortitude to confront you face to face, or write to you at least. Yep they need to come clean or get over themselves alrighty.
Take heart, I know you dont know me, but I know how you feel.
Insulting? Yo chick get over urself ! (Poetry) - 11/3/2003 3:21:06 PM
excellent write--let it out, let it out
(((HUGS))) and love,
Insulting? Yo chick get over urself ! (Poetry) - 11/3/2003 10:47:44 AM
You tell 'em, Zakiya! Well done vent; it sure helps to vent once in a while! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D
Insulting? Yo chick get over urself ! (Poetry) - 11/3/2003 8:27:57 AM
This is a great rant! I really enjoyed this. It needs a sign over the top that says: What you always wanted to say, and there is no time like the present to do so!
No rogues here (part 1) (Poetry) - 10/8/2003 9:30:02 AM
a strong poem of conviction. I feel the same way but some others have selfish motives and sexual motives. hook up with one of these type, get your seat belt on. nice write. G
Hate born out of love (part 1) (Poetry) - 10/4/2003 10:53:16 AM
Excellant approach to the point. Excellant write!
Hate born out of love (part 1) (Poetry) - 9/21/2003 8:10:13 AM
Very interesting. Good works!
Suffer the Children with love (Poetry) - 9/21/2003 8:06:27 AM
Great write ZakiYa!
Suffer the Children with love (Poetry) - 9/21/2003 7:56:23 AM
Exquisite rite..YES!! The children are our light..I have six and thank God for them..THEY are my best teachers...ty
Suffer the Children with love (Poetry) - 9/20/2003 2:57:06 PM
Beautiful, wise and excellant message!
Say What (Poetry) - 9/20/2003 2:21:58 PM
Well done! You have beautiful messages in your poems!
Suffer the Children with love (Poetry) - 9/20/2003 2:19:47 PM
That's an enlightening and beautiful message!
Suffer the Children with love (Poetry) - 9/19/2003 1:29:38 PM
AMEN! :) beautifully written!
(((HUGS))) and love,
Suffer the Children with love (Poetry) - 9/17/2003 9:19:12 PM
Hello, ZaKiYa, I could not read this piece. The yellow melts into the white to my oldish eyes... :)
How do I tell you Mother? (part 1) (Poetry) - 9/17/2003 12:07:43 PM
(((zakiya *love your name*)))
heartfelt, thought provoking write
"...because i still am the little girl that you used to tuck in bed
and say i love you don't let the bed bugs bite." my mom used to say the same thing to me...she's been dead 13 years, how i miss her.
(((HUGS))) and love,
25 years (Poetry) - 9/17/2003 11:35:17 AM
heartwrenching write, zakiya; very well done! :( (((HUGS))) and love, your texas friend, karen lynn. >tears <
Hate born out of love (part 1) (Poetry) - 7/1/2003 7:34:16 PM
Without love, we're nothing but a tinkling cymbal. Thanks for exploring love with words.
Hate born out of love (part 1) (Poetry) - 6/3/2003 6:50:58 AM
I like it.... It will make people think....
Hate born out of love (part 1) (Poetry) - 4/29/2003 7:41:51 AM
I love the way you expess yourself. Keep up the good work.
Hate born out of love (part 1) (Poetry) - 4/22/2003 4:32:03 PM
(((zakiya))) first of all, welcome to authorsden.com! i hope you will enjoy it here. secondly, i really like this poem! it says so much...we all desire love...(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :) well done!
Hate born out of love (part 1) (Poetry) - 4/22/2003 1:11:52 PM
This is great! I really like what your getting across. Great job putting it into a poem!
- J -
Death at Heart (Poetry) - 4/22/2003 11:43:34 AM
i dont undestand this ward travesty?
Hate born out of love (part 1) (Poetry) - 4/22/2003 11:39:12 AM
good expressive write! well done! :) ((HUGS))
Hate born out of love (part 1) (Poetry) - 4/22/2003 11:25:44 AM
This was different and I liked it. Very good job in expression. Teresa
Untitled (as of yet) (Poetry) - 4/22/2003 11:08:48 AM
good write! :) (((HUGS))) welcome to the den; we are so glad you are here! love, a new friend in texas, karen lynn. :)
Untitled (as of yet) (Poetry) - 4/22/2003 10:25:58 AM
I've fallen in love with the flow of this poem.