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Home > Jacqueline M. Baker

Recent Reviews for Jacqueline M. Baker

First Date (Poetry) - 11/17/2007 11:32:10 PM
Vampire? Werewolf? Rapist?

GOD? (Poetry) - 1/18/2005 3:00:52 AM
It appears that humanity's god is a farce, Jacqueline... Here it is Jan 17, 2005 and the blood still runs in Central Asia. And, Bush talks to "God"! Peace be with you, Carolyn

First Date (Poetry) - 5/8/2003 4:52:27 PM
i think that the poem was ok even tho i didnt get it because im mentally retarded and i dont have n e friends!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

First Date (Poetry) - 3/24/2003 5:46:08 PM
Hey wutz up sissy great job luv ya bye!!!

First Date (Poetry) - 2/24/2003 11:48:38 AM
LOL.. Very good.. A definate smile.. and i will have to watch out for men like

First Date (Poetry) - 2/24/2003 9:32:42 AM
Jacqueline, that was quite well done! I actually thought it to be the woman who would ensnare the man, at first . . . until it was apparent that the man uses his charm as a tool to feed off from nave young women, a user, a player, a succubus . . . feeding off from the emotions and passions of women . . . all to selfishly feed himself, leaving them wounded and hurt . . . another casualty left in his wake.

First Date (Poetry) - 2/24/2003 8:56:22 AM
I actually thought it was going to be the woman that ensnared the man from time to time until it was aparent that the man uses hi charm as a tool to feed off from women, a player, a sucubus . . . feeding off from the emotions and passions of women . . . all to selfishly feed himself, leaving them wounded and hurt.

First Date (Poetry) - 2/24/2003 8:44:07 AM
Very nice. I like the rhyme! Jack

First Date (Poetry) - 2/24/2003 4:31:25 AM
Yikes!! All that cholesterol. I liked this,ty. Tony

First Date (Poetry) - 2/23/2003 11:25:38 PM
Nice write.

First Date (Poetry) - 2/23/2003 9:53:48 PM
Very good.

First Date (Poetry) - 2/23/2003 9:39:12 PM
You have it all planned out really well, haven't you? Good luck to you! Sandie Angel :o)

Epiphany of Twilight (Poetry) - 2/22/2003 7:15:08 AM
This is excellent write...perfect!!!!

Epiphany of Twilight (Poetry) - 2/22/2003 5:20:11 AM
Unusual and very good.

I Was Wrong (Poetry) - 1/20/2003 11:21:04 AM
Jacqueline, I am sorry it is ending this way. And I can't say much cause I do not know your circumstance. But it is usual to get out of a relationship that cuases too much pain. Bill Murray

I Was Wrong (Poetry) - 1/20/2003 4:53:10 AM
A sad and heartfelt write! I wish you all the best. Stay strong and take care. Glenna

I Was Wrong (Poetry) - 1/20/2003 3:05:35 AM
When it hurts....get out...good poem best wishes from KAY

I Was Wrong (Poetry) - 1/20/2003 1:57:47 AM
Jaquenne, You deserve to have better and not the pain Good write. Peggy

To Brandon (Poetry) - 12/31/2002 3:29:44 AM poured out your emotions on paper for us at AD. You can do no less now for Brandon. In fact if I were that lucky and you didn't tell me I would be pissed off. But what do you have to lose? At the worst he will be flattered and at the best you will get what you want out of the relationship. SO DAM IT DO IT! Tell him or get a good butt whipping. Do it Jacqueline! Do it now! And let me know what happens! Ok? Cross your heart and hope to die? Bill Murray

To Brandon (Poetry) - 12/31/2002 3:12:12 AM
Tell him... Nice poetry.

Being With You (Poetry) - 12/20/2002 6:21:31 AM
This is excellent!!!

Being With You (Poetry) - 12/20/2002 3:09:35 AM
What a sweet offering to him. He is a lucky man to taste the joy of your love. Lay it on him girl and it will come home to you with rewards undreamed and untold. Bill Murray

Stop Playing Pretend (Poetry) - 12/12/2002 3:17:41 PM
Well these are your feelings at the moment. We will have to wait to see what happens. If you want advice it is hard to plan ahead to help you. But we surely want to. Bill Murray.

Stop Playing Pretend (Poetry) - 12/12/2002 1:49:32 PM
good write --- sometimes pretefing not to care is a defence against caring too much --- good luck -- j +

Heart (Poetry) - 12/9/2002 9:13:59 AM
It is wonderful. A heart with agony and pain wanting to be a heart of love and life and hope ... just needing the right touch to bring it alive. Bill Murray

September Eleventh 2002 a one year marker (Poetry) - 12/6/2002 12:06:05 PM
Hi, Very gud poem WAR SHUD END!!!!!! Am i the only oen who has commented :S

Blood (Poetry) - 12/6/2002 12:03:13 PM
Really good i luv things 2 to do with death

Beauty (Poetry) - 12/6/2002 4:39:51 AM
"Beast" It would be good but ripped and torn by thorns of hate soul disintegrates into shadows of night and magic believing becomes a river of darkness. It would be love but the face before the mirror of its mind rejects the self it cannot bear to see and unhinged by fear tumbles into pits of hell. It would be kind but as softness falls upon wings of heart and dreams urge finer things despair chokes its world with lumps of agony. It would have life full, ecstatic, joyful life but passions' chords of lust are touched and yearning brings the death it can't escape. For it is BEAST and must remain what it is...............

Dying Hopes and Dreams (Poetry) - 12/6/2002 4:34:35 AM
Sometimes dear, nothing ever works out like we hope or plan. Do not be discourage. Bill Murray P.S. Drawing is neat.

Coming Home to You (Poetry) - 12/5/2002 3:09:53 AM
Yes I can see Jacqueline feelings in the here and now coming through to me. Not tomorrow or yesterday, but now. And it is good to express your wants and needs with a visceral presentation. I enjoyed it. Bill Murray

Dying Hopes and Dreams (Poetry) - 12/3/2002 9:59:19 PM
Longing and hope... Excellent poem Jaqueline.

Dying Hopes and Dreams (Poetry) - 12/3/2002 9:36:49 PM sad.. but do regain some hopes and dreams..ok? nice write.

For These Last Two Months (Poetry) - 12/2/2002 4:27:18 AM
Yes, latch on to what you have and hold on! Choose love or lust over nothingness. Right now I guess, I feel I am in that state of nothingness. And it ain't a good feeling. Hugs .......... Bill Murrray

For These Last Two Months (Poetry) - 11/30/2002 7:08:47 AM
Very sensual and longing write!

For These Last Two Months (Poetry) - 11/30/2002 4:45:51 AM
Very nice

Creature (Poetry) - 11/28/2002 9:27:02 PM
Freddie Kruger???? (joking) Intimidating poem.....hope it's not out to get me!

When (Poetry) - 11/28/2002 9:21:53 PM
You're awesome! I love your words!

Thorns (Poetry) - 11/28/2002 9:18:05 PM
I undrestand and can TOTALLY relate to this. So much meaning is so few words. EXCELLENT!

Tender Tears (Poetry) - 11/25/2002 10:01:10 AM
Me too! And I am an intellectual poet who is a natural man. Bill

Tender Tears (Poetry) - 11/25/2002 6:56:16 AM
Well done.

Tender Tears (Poetry) - 11/24/2002 10:54:31 PM
VERY moving and heartfelt write. I could feel your pain in each word. EXCELLENT!!!!!!

Hopeless (Poetry) - 11/24/2002 7:15:56 AM
The things some do for that extra bit of money. It's their life, however they want to 'live' it is up to them. Great write! Cheers, Tim

Hopeless (Poetry) - 11/24/2002 6:07:35 AM
very sad

Hopeless (Poetry) - 11/24/2002 5:52:21 AM
Very poignant and riddled with truth. Very good write! ~ Dee

Blood (Poetry) - 11/24/2002 1:51:55 AM
hi again

Hopeless (Poetry) - 11/24/2002 1:50:20 AM
YOU ARE AWESOME! Your writing has so much meaning. I can relate to a lot of what you say. You shure don't suger coat that shit and I admire your writing VERY MUCH!!!!

Emotions (Poetry) - 11/22/2002 8:47:58 AM
Nice work and look forward to more.

Emotions (Poetry) - 11/22/2002 5:51:36 AM
Welcome to the Den and thankyou for sharing this poem So nice of you. Look forward to more. Peggy

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