Recent Reviews for Jacqueline M. Baker
First Date (Poetry) - 11/17/2007 11:32:10 PM|
Vampire? Werewolf? Rapist?
GOD? (Poetry) - 1/18/2005 3:00:52 AM
It appears that humanity's god is a farce, Jacqueline...
Here it is Jan 17, 2005 and the blood still runs in Central Asia. And, Bush talks to "God"!
Peace be with you,
First Date (Poetry) - 5/8/2003 4:52:27 PM
i think that the poem was ok even tho i didnt get it because im mentally retarded and i dont have n e friends!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
First Date (Poetry) - 3/24/2003 5:46:08 PM
Hey wutz up sissy great job luv ya bye!!!
First Date (Poetry) - 2/24/2003 11:48:38 AM
LOL.. Very good.. A definate smile.. and i will have to watch out for men like you..lol
First Date (Poetry) - 2/24/2003 9:32:42 AM
Jacqueline, that was quite well done!
I actually thought it to be the woman who would ensnare the man, at first . . . until it was apparent that the man uses his charm as a tool to feed off from naïve young women, a user, a player, a succubus . . . feeding off from the emotions and passions of women . . . all to selfishly feed himself, leaving them wounded and hurt . . . another casualty left in his wake.
First Date (Poetry) - 2/24/2003 8:56:22 AM
I actually thought it was going to be the woman that ensnared the man from time to time until it was aparent that the man uses hi charm as a tool to feed off from women, a player, a sucubus . . . feeding off from the emotions and passions of women . . . all to selfishly feed himself, leaving them wounded and hurt.
First Date (Poetry) - 2/24/2003 8:44:07 AM
Very nice. I like the rhyme!
First Date (Poetry) - 2/24/2003 4:31:25 AM
Yikes!! All that cholesterol. I liked this,ty.
First Date (Poetry) - 2/23/2003 11:25:38 PM
First Date (Poetry) - 2/23/2003 9:53:48 PM
First Date (Poetry) - 2/23/2003 9:39:12 PM
You have it all planned out really well, haven't you? Good luck to you!
Sandie Angel :o)
Epiphany of Twilight (Poetry) - 2/22/2003 7:15:08 AM
This is excellent write...perfect!!!!
Epiphany of Twilight (Poetry) - 2/22/2003 5:20:11 AM
Unusual and very good.
I Was Wrong (Poetry) - 1/20/2003 11:21:04 AM
Jacqueline, I am sorry it is ending this way. And I can't say much cause I do not know your circumstance. But it is usual to get out of a relationship that cuases too much pain. Bill Murray
I Was Wrong (Poetry) - 1/20/2003 4:53:10 AM
A sad and heartfelt write!
I wish you all the best.
Stay strong and take care.
I Was Wrong (Poetry) - 1/20/2003 3:05:35 AM
When it hurts....get out...good poem best wishes from
I Was Wrong (Poetry) - 1/20/2003 1:57:47 AM
You deserve to have
better and not the pain
To Brandon (Poetry) - 12/31/2002 3:29:44 AM
Jacqueline.....you poured out your emotions on paper for us at AD. You can do no less now for Brandon. In fact if I were that lucky and you didn't tell me I would be pissed off. But what do you have to lose?
At the worst he will be flattered and at the best you will get what you want out of the relationship. SO DAM IT DO IT! Tell him or get a good butt whipping. Do it Jacqueline!
Do it now! And let me know what happens! Ok? Cross your heart and hope to die? Bill Murray
To Brandon (Poetry) - 12/31/2002 3:12:12 AM
Tell him... Nice poetry.
Being With You (Poetry) - 12/20/2002 6:21:31 AM
This is excellent!!!
Being With You (Poetry) - 12/20/2002 3:09:35 AM
What a sweet offering to him. He is a lucky man to taste the joy of your love. Lay it on him girl and it will come home to you with rewards undreamed and untold. Bill Murray
Stop Playing Pretend (Poetry) - 12/12/2002 3:17:41 PM
Well these are your feelings at the moment.
We will have to wait to see what happens. If you want advice it is hard to plan ahead to help you. But we surely want to. Bill Murray.
Stop Playing Pretend (Poetry) - 12/12/2002 1:49:32 PM
good write ---
sometimes pretefing not to care is a defence against caring too much ---
good luck -- j +
Heart (Poetry) - 12/9/2002 9:13:59 AM
It is wonderful. A heart with agony and pain wanting to be a heart of love and life and hope ... just needing the right touch to bring it alive. Bill Murray
September Eleventh 2002 a one year marker (Poetry) - 12/6/2002 12:06:05 PM
Very gud poem
WAR SHUD END!!!!!!
Am i the only oen who has commented :S
Blood (Poetry) - 12/6/2002 12:03:13 PM
Really good i luv things 2 to do with death
Beauty (Poetry) - 12/6/2002 4:39:51 AM
It would be good
but ripped and torn
by thorns of hate
into shadows of night
and magic believing
becomes a river
It would be love
but the face before
the mirror of its mind
rejects the self
it cannot bear to see
and unhinged by fear
pits of hell.
It would be kind
but as softness falls
upon wings of heart
and dreams urge
It would have life
chords of lust
brings the death
it can't escape.
Dying Hopes and Dreams (Poetry) - 12/6/2002 4:34:35 AM
Sometimes dear, nothing ever works out like we hope or plan. Do not be discourage. Bill Murray P.S. Drawing is neat.
Coming Home to You (Poetry) - 12/5/2002 3:09:53 AM
Yes I can see Jacqueline feelings in the here and now coming through to me. Not tomorrow or yesterday, but now. And it is good to express your wants and needs with a visceral presentation. I enjoyed it. Bill Murray
Dying Hopes and Dreams (Poetry) - 12/3/2002 9:59:19 PM
Longing and hope...
Dying Hopes and Dreams (Poetry) - 12/3/2002 9:36:49 PM
sad..so sad.. but do regain some hopes and dreams..ok?
For These Last Two Months (Poetry) - 12/2/2002 4:27:18 AM
Yes, latch on to what you have and hold on!
Choose love or lust over nothingness. Right
now I guess, I feel I am in that state of nothingness. And it ain't a good feeling.
Hugs .......... Bill Murrray
For These Last Two Months (Poetry) - 11/30/2002 7:08:47 AM
Very sensual and longing write!
For These Last Two Months (Poetry) - 11/30/2002 4:45:51 AM
Creature (Poetry) - 11/28/2002 9:27:02 PM
Freddie Kruger???? (joking) Intimidating poem.....hope it's not out to get me!
When (Poetry) - 11/28/2002 9:21:53 PM
You're awesome! I love your words!
Thorns (Poetry) - 11/28/2002 9:18:05 PM
I undrestand and can TOTALLY relate to this. So much meaning is so few words. EXCELLENT!
Tender Tears (Poetry) - 11/25/2002 10:01:10 AM
Me too! And I am an intellectual poet who is a natural man. Bill
Tender Tears (Poetry) - 11/25/2002 6:56:16 AM
Tender Tears (Poetry) - 11/24/2002 10:54:31 PM
VERY moving and heartfelt write.
I could feel your pain in each
Hopeless (Poetry) - 11/24/2002 7:15:56 AM
The things some do for that extra bit of money. It's their life, however they want to 'live' it is up to them. Great write!
Hopeless (Poetry) - 11/24/2002 6:07:35 AM
Hopeless (Poetry) - 11/24/2002 5:52:21 AM
Very poignant and riddled with truth. Very good write! ~ Dee
Blood (Poetry) - 11/24/2002 1:51:55 AM
Hopeless (Poetry) - 11/24/2002 1:50:20 AM
YOU ARE AWESOME! Your writing has so much meaning. I can relate to a lot of what you say. You shure don't suger coat that shit and I admire your writing VERY MUCH!!!!
Emotions (Poetry) - 11/22/2002 8:47:58 AM
Nice work and look forward to more.
Emotions (Poetry) - 11/22/2002 5:51:36 AM
Welcome to the Den
and thankyou for sharing this poem So nice of you.
Look forward to more.