Recent Reviews for Dominican Diva
Make a Decision (Poetry) - 1/18/2004 11:25:50 AM|
This is a wonderful emotive write! You definitely have much talent I do agree!
Make a Decision (Poetry) - 1/14/2004 11:31:02 PM
Sometimes those decisions are so hard to make. Full of emotion.
Make a Decision (Poetry) - 1/14/2004 9:29:37 PM
This is absoluetly wonderful in everway, I can so relate to this. You have much talent and I respect that girl. :)
What are you going to do about it? (Poetry) - 11/17/2003 12:28:16 PM
Great write! People really should make a change if they are unhappy and you gave them that little push that was needed.
What are you going to do about it? (Poetry) - 11/4/2003 6:49:38 PM
Excellant work and wisdom!
What are you going to do about it? (Poetry) - 11/3/2003 2:51:34 AM
What are you going to do about it? (Poetry) - 11/2/2003 8:20:23 PM
I'm going to stand tall and
not give depression the power
to control my life! Thats what
I'm doing about it..
One year has passed (Poetry) - 9/15/2003 8:20:12 PM
Very Sad and touching, even made me cry though I can't feel your same pain, I will still be your friend thru the good and bad. We'll make it thru together.
One year has passed (Poetry) - 9/15/2003 10:10:50 AM
you are in my prayers, sweetie! heartwrenching write! :( (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. >tears < have courage....
One year has passed (Poetry) - 9/15/2003 12:13:02 AM
very sad write...stay strong my friend!!!!
Sick and Tired (Poetry) - 7/7/2003 5:22:33 AM
Glad you got that out of your system! Great write.
I'm the girl (Poetry) - 6/21/2003 11:56:23 PM
"I'm the girl that believes in God and has alot of faith." ... So long as you believe this way and stand steadfast in your belief, everything is going to be all right.
I'm the girl (Poetry) - 6/21/2003 2:03:17 PM
Ya Ya Ya Mujeres rule...go girl and tell 'em like it is!!!!
I'm the girl (Poetry) - 6/21/2003 9:03:07 AM
you tell 'em, gurlfriend! ROCKIN' good write! :) (((HUGS))) and love, your texas friend, karen lynn.
I'm the girl (Poetry) - 6/21/2003 12:58:59 AM
"you go girl".....
and excellent wtire Diva
I'm the girl (Poetry) - 6/20/2003 11:26:24 PM
THIS IS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING AND SO SO TRUE, Girl I loved this sooooo much. RIGHT ON!!! :)
I wonder sometimes (Poetry) - 6/19/2003 5:43:28 AM
So emotive and well penned.
I wonder sometimes (Poetry) - 6/19/2003 12:11:10 AM
Beautiful sentiments and thoughts. Love it.
I wonder sometimes (Poetry) - 6/18/2003 11:27:20 PM
You Know what? This Poem is the BOMB!!! you will be missed a lot by your friends that love u very much and thats a fact, but girl u aint going no where! lol
I wonder sometimes (Poetry) - 6/18/2003 11:17:00 PM
I liked your poem because it evokes a saddness that I have felt as well. The idea of separation from a loved one can be very sad indeed. I liked the way you moved the idea along in the poem, and talking about friends being forever and a day.
I believe our spirits live forever, but the pain we feel as humans can be very poignant at times.
Thanks for the sobering reminder to love one another here and now.
God's peace to you
I wonder sometimes (Poetry) - 6/18/2003 8:19:24 PM
This one reaches deep.
Just Listen (Poetry) - 6/13/2003 10:04:49 AM
I hope things get better for you, you know i'm here if u need to talk Girl, thats what friends are for and we will get through whatever it is together.
Just Listen (Poetry) - 6/12/2003 11:09:25 PM
I'm listening. Opppssss, who let Frasier in. [smiles] Nice poem. Sad.
Just Listen (Poetry) - 6/12/2003 10:06:44 PM
This is very very fantastic write...BHUWAN
Just Listen (Poetry) - 6/12/2003 8:30:59 PM
kool write .. Dive
Lines (Poetry) - 5/30/2003 10:44:16 AM
THIS PEOM IS HOT LIKE I SAID GREAT WORK. SOMEONE NEEDS TOY SAY CUZ I'M TRIED OF ALL THOSE WACK LINES THAT BOYS SAY.
Lines (Poetry) - 5/29/2003 11:27:45 PM
Lines (Poetry) - 5/29/2003 1:45:01 PM
This is nice it's funny but true .KEEP ON WRITING you got talent
Lines (Poetry) - 5/29/2003 12:50:09 PM
Every once in a while I hear a good one. At my age it is flattering. [smiles] Good rant.
Lines (Poetry) - 5/29/2003 12:05:36 PM
WOW THIS WAS MAD GOOD!!! AND MAD FUNNY!!! GIRL YOU GOT SKILLS... LOL
If I Should.... (Poetry) - 5/23/2003 8:19:05 PM
I really Loved this... Keep it up!
If I Should.... (Poetry) - 5/23/2003 12:46:27 PM
A fine poem, pretty lady.
If I Should.... (Poetry) - 5/22/2003 11:15:10 PM
Should you write more like this it will be fab...
If I Should.... (Poetry) - 5/22/2003 8:29:57 PM
Excellent, creative write!
If I Should.... (Poetry) - 5/22/2003 8:03:56 PM
I love it !!! Bravo
If I Should.... (Poetry) - 5/22/2003 7:46:05 PM
THIS IS FANTASTIC, OUTSTANDING AND EVERYTHING ELSE...LOL I REALLY REALLY LOVED THIS TRUELY.
Sick and Tired (Poetry) - 5/21/2003 10:44:54 PM
This was a very powerful write. I liked it much.
Sick and Tired (Poetry) - 5/20/2003 5:06:21 PM
I really liked this one, it was very well written and may relate to some people's real life experiences... lol
Sick and Tired (Poetry) - 5/19/2003 11:30:43 AM
Loser. Good write.
Sick and Tired (Poetry) - 5/19/2003 10:50:46 AM
Hi Diva, I loved your country when I was there in 84. I am a first time reader of yours. I lik this write! But it is time to bid him adeu! IMHO
Sick and Tired (Poetry) - 5/19/2003 6:49:00 AM
You should read one of mine I wrote a long long time ago called "hate complex" i think you will relate to it.
I had to tell him (Poetry) - 5/6/2003 2:09:46 PM
I Like this.
You're Inlove With Me (Poetry) - 5/6/2003 2:08:53 PM
Very well written and upfront.
You're Inlove With Me (Poetry) - 5/6/2003 2:30:17 AM
You're Inlove With Me (Poetry) - 5/5/2003 7:32:05 PM
A beautiful write Diva
You're Inlove With Me (Poetry) - 5/5/2003 2:53:19 PM
THIS IS GREAT :D LOVE IT!!
You're Inlove With Me (Poetry) - 5/5/2003 2:52:06 PM
This is really a nice poem, Diva.
[Your, should be spelled 'you're' for you are.]
I had to tell him (Poetry) - 5/1/2003 12:08:35 PM
I LOVE IT LOVE IT :) and whats chill supposed to mean? Its the BOMB no questions asked forget all haters.
I had to tell him (Poetry) - 5/1/2003 8:11:34 AM
nothing like laying the cards on the table
I had to tell him (Poetry) - 5/1/2003 5:41:44 AM
a great poem
I had to tell him (Poetry) - 5/1/2003 3:47:06 AM
Enjoyed this write...BHUWAN
I had to tell him (Poetry) - 4/30/2003 9:46:39 PM
No more... (Poetry) - 4/30/2003 7:05:15 AM
it is a beginning no?
No more... (Poetry) - 4/30/2003 6:08:16 AM
Great Write, Diva
No more... (Poetry) - 4/30/2003 2:54:12 AM
Excellent like a well sounding rant.
No more... (Poetry) - 4/29/2003 8:08:37 PM
YOU TELL HIM GIRL LOL I loved this much!!! short and to the point :)Love Angie
Hey Girl... (Poetry) - 4/22/2003 7:44:38 AM
ahhh i remember this one, and it moves me the same as the first time i read it through
Hey Girl... (Poetry) - 4/21/2003 11:58:38 PM
Hey girl, this makes my blood boil to know men as such do exist, the poem drew me right in, could hear you saying it, simply superb....
Hey Girl... (Poetry) - 4/21/2003 10:59:47 PM
Love it ! What a story !!!
Guilty (Poetry) - 4/16/2003 8:41:00 PM
Guilty ( Remix) (Poetry) - 4/16/2003 8:40:04 PM
I care :)
Hazel Eyes (Poetry) - 4/16/2003 8:38:45 PM
Aww Now thats so sweet babe... lol
Crush (Poetry) - 4/16/2003 8:37:45 PM
Very Very Nice.
Hazel Eyes (Poetry) - 4/14/2003 8:04:48 PM
AWWWW Que Lindos LOL, Way to go on this one.
Guilty (Poetry) - 4/14/2003 8:03:37 PM
LOVE IT :)
Crush (Poetry) - 4/14/2003 8:02:37 PM
WOW GIRL This was the BOMB, You really got me into this :) You are a True Poet from the heart i mean that. LOVED IT A++
Love Always your Best Friend and Partner in Crime LOL
Crush (Poetry) - 4/14/2003 4:47:51 PM
I fell in love with "Annette Funachello," when I was a kid, before I met my firs puppy love girl friend, at 12
Crush (Poetry) - 4/14/2003 1:00:05 PM
Ricky Nelson. Was madly in love with him.[smiles] Well done.
Hazel Eyes (Poetry) - 4/14/2003 10:06:22 AM
D.D. nice poem. I got hazel eyes also. ( lol )
Hazel Eyes (Poetry) - 4/14/2003 9:54:22 AM
This is sweet. Reminds me of that unspoken silence when you just know. Teresa
Hazel Eyes (Poetry) - 4/14/2003 9:45:21 AM
nice! :) (((HUGS)))
I'm Over (Poetry) - 4/11/2003 5:59:42 PM
Nice write, but yet again interesting...
He Said I Love You (Poetry) - 4/11/2003 5:58:52 PM
Hmmm very interesting and well put. You have a way with words. ;)
But I'm Not Sorry Dad That... (Poetry) - 4/11/2003 5:57:04 PM
Wow, This one was touching and might i add very well spoken and nicely written. Bravo.
Love Romeo ;)
An Assignment for English Class (Poetry) - 4/11/2003 5:53:29 PM
I give u a standing ovation on this one, Time to let those poor fools know that this is U and thats it :)
I'm Over (Poetry) - 4/11/2003 5:51:45 PM
Very Good write, time to let him know that. lol.
He Said I Love You (Poetry) - 4/11/2003 5:49:36 PM
Very Nicely put. I liked this one alot.
But I'm Not Sorry Dad That... (Poetry) - 4/11/2003 5:48:37 PM
Girl, you have been very strong and u made it through. God has him now and soon enough we will be there right along with our families and friends as well. I'm here for u, because that is what best friends are for. Magnificent poem.
But I'm Not Sorry Dad That... (Poetry) - 4/9/2003 7:02:37 AM
But I'm Not Sorry Dad That... (Poetry) - 4/8/2003 7:49:21 PM
But I'm Not Sorry Dad That... (Poetry) - 4/8/2003 7:11:24 PM
Awesome tribute to your Dad..
I have empathy for you. I lost
my Father also.
He Said I Love You (Poetry) - 4/8/2003 2:07:35 PM
I love your style, Diva.
He Said I Love You (Poetry) - 4/8/2003 12:46:09 PM
good write! :) (((HUGS)))
An Assignment for English Class (Poetry) - 4/8/2003 12:45:10 PM
well said, but in lieu of elizabeth's comment about texas folk and liking salsa...i live in texas, but i HATE salsa! in fact, i dislike most mexican foods! SORry! give me some cajun food anyday! :) now THAT is good eatin'! :P love, a new friend in texas, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)
I'm Over (Poetry) - 4/8/2003 12:43:01 PM
good write! :) (((HUGS)))
An Assignment for English Class (Poetry) - 4/8/2003 12:41:21 PM
I've traveled all over the world. It isn't just black and white...every country and region has its prejudices and some reasons for them are quite comical.
Thoughtful work and very well done, Diva.
And I can tell you, if you are Texan, you DO like salsa. [smiles]
[p.s. believe is i before e]
I'm Over (Poetry) - 4/8/2003 12:37:23 PM
them him off!!!
he will probably come back, ya know?
An Assignment for English Class (Poetry) - 4/8/2003 8:17:21 AM
love (Poetry) - 12/12/2002 12:29:27 PM
I agree Erneris this is beautiful as well as true!
love (Poetry) - 12/12/2002 2:11:27 AM
Everything you describe is ok. But it can be a lot more things and I am sure that you are aware of it. It can feel good, but can hurt very much if not reciprocated. Bill Murray
love (Poetry) - 12/11/2002 9:34:02 PM
Very Beautiful and touching and let me mention completely true.
Your Best Friend