Recent Reviews for B'klyn OG
Step Father (Short Story) - 4/11/2012 4:13:09 PM|
As I stated on 1/28/12 this work is undone and was not ready to be published !
But the way the world is at this space and time, if a person only has a email address, you will be put on line for the world to see.
This short story comes from times in my childhood that were not very nice and those hard years caused me to miss out on postive years with my childen, for god knows, I never knew true love. MLA 4/11/12
The Lesson (Poetry) - 1/28/2012 2:03:16 PM
This work of mine is very deep, written some years ago and in all reality it's so sad to say....this drug is still among us all as a people, destroying lives,individuals and family's.
I pray this year and day 1/28/12 that my poem gets out there for the world to read and most importantly touch and help someone overcome this monster that feeds on us all,in one way or another.
With the lives I have touched over the years from "Muhammad Ali" to "Run DMC" on down, I know there is someone out there that will help me get "The Lesson" out there. MLA
The Lesson (Poetry) - 10/21/2011 10:16:03 PM
This is one of my works, I hope all that read it will learn something.
"Crack" is a very serious drug, put and developed on this earth to "Take us Out !" Read these words and take "Heed" hopefully you will gain some insight into this monster in our midst ! Be well... and most of all learn from a brother with wisdom, knowledge and understanding. Peace a father and parent............"Bklyn OG"
Pain (Poetry) - 11/9/2004 2:49:39 PM
LOVE your name, first of all. mansfield, ohio, was my birthplace :)
second, welcome to author's den. :)
third, i believe you know pain--powerful expression here. i know pain, too...thank God for writing, it has really helped!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
The Lesson (Poetry) - 11/9/2004 2:48:19 PM
welcome to author's den--you're among friends :)
enjoyed this one--powerful message--love the flow and rhyme, may the children listen!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :) *i'm karen vidra's twin*
The Lesson (Poetry) - 11/9/2004 2:39:51 PM
Crack -- Why Those Meek (Weak) Inheirt This Holy Hell Earth!
The Lesson (Poetry) - 11/9/2004 2:30:32 PM
powerful write and a good message in it, mansfield; thanks for the sharing! enjoyed talking with you earlier; what a pleasant surprise! thanks for making my day!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
Pain (Poetry) - 12/14/2002 9:41:34 AM
so sad, mansfield! hope you can put the pain behind you as i am learning to do. writing is great therapy; i know! welcome to the den! love, a new friend in texas, karen lynn. ((((HUGS)))) p.s.: i love your name; mansfield, ohio, is where i was born; and i moved here to texas 3 1/2 years ago!