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Recent Reviews for Jaimey Perham
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Star Controllers (Article) - 1/28/2010 12:19:56 AM
Very Interesting and with truth Thanks Jaimey for your contribution. I am using the internet in The marketing of My Books it almost 100% of my effort. The Authorsden is one such vehicle
Keep Up the good Work Jaimey
Crazy Uncle Pete (Poetry) - 4/5/2013 11:31:18 AM
That's quite a story! But it does have crazy written all over it. A fool and his money are easily parted. But in this case, the fool lost a bit more.
Ron
Hollywood Marbles (Poetry) - 2/21/2013 8:47:25 AM
He stared at his starry eyed honey? A very improbable tale… But that's Hollywood.
Ron
Hollywood Marbles (Poetry) - 2/20/2013 2:14:34 PM
a different version of this tale
budd
To Understand Life (Poetry) - 2/18/2013 5:28:58 AM
A tribute to a seeker of truth. It is an honor to be honored this way.
Ron
Grandfather Funeral Speech (Poetry) - 2/8/2013 6:30:58 AM
Jaimey,
A beautiful tribute to your Grandpa, my Grandparents are gone also, but very much alive in my heart.
Blessings to you,
Linda+
Silent Christmas Vision (Poetry) - 12/22/2012 10:40:54 AM
Love the Christmas humor in this piece, Jaimey.
Peace,
Dayvid
Silent Christmas Vision (Poetry) - 12/17/2012 11:13:50 PM
A great vision of Christmas!
Have a merry one!
John Michael
Silent Christmas Vision (Poetry) - 12/17/2012 7:09:17 AM
he is one busy larger elf
budd
Thanksgiving Grace 11-22-2012 (Poetry) - 11/29/2012 3:49:39 PM
Good words Jaimey!
Peace,
Dayvid
Blue Beam (Poetry) - 8/3/2012 5:13:44 AM
Interesting and unique, well done.
Blue Beam (Poetry) - 7/27/2012 6:12:06 AM
An interesting and well penned piece of poetry. Nice flow of wording and rhyming.
Donna
Blue Beam (Poetry) - 7/26/2012 11:23:36 AM
A macabre piece of fantasy straight out everyone's idea of a horror film. Of that makes it easy to get the picture so sorry that you had to die to prove it ;-)
Ron
Waves of Perception (Poetry) - 6/4/2012 7:50:30 AM
There is a pattern of perception here, and it is one of disappointment. May I suggest that you avoid getting down on one knee until you find the one that really matters.
Ron
Silent Starter (Poetry) - 6/3/2012 8:43:26 AM
Now that is truly great poetry! I'm not sure why others aren't picking up on pure genius. But I am, and I hope that's enough.
Ron
Reality Shift (Poetry) - 5/30/2012 1:14:35 PM
This type of poem is rather common. However, you have taken it to the edge nicely. I hope it isn't true.
Ron
Reality Shift (Poetry) - 5/30/2012 2:46:13 AM
A beautiful pen, heartfelt with a strong voice.
Behind Closed Doors (Poetry) - 5/19/2012 6:13:36 PM
Spooky and illicitly written erotic verse. Subtle and well spoken.
Starman
Keen Understanding (Poetry) - 5/17/2012 10:02:56 AM
a poet speaks...with understanding. thanks for sharing
asa
Keen Understanding (Poetry) - 5/16/2012 8:28:06 AM
You cover a lot of ground with this piece but it comes together quite nicely. It rocks me gently down by the creek. While I sit on the porch and listen to the rocking chair creak. ;-)
Love the openness and honesty present.
Ron
Keen Understanding (Poetry) - 5/16/2012 12:16:59 AM
You capture too well how easily the human race has become pawns to the jurisdiction of technology and few except the very young or the very old are immune to it. I recently posted a story about my observances of people at a local coffee shop and yes I actually saw teens texting each other from across the table...sad
fee
Cold Wind (Poetry) - 4/19/2012 11:25:49 AM
I'm sorry, too.
Ron
No Privacy (Poetry) - 8/30/2011 5:36:08 PM
A very nice retake on the truth, "we are never really alone." Kudos!
No Privacy (Poetry) - 8/21/2011 7:12:55 PM
Well, that was a different way to look into something... You wave a transition of the outside and inside world within the lines of the verse... How can we have privacy when this is both an enter and exit door to a home... after all... Thanks for sharing...
2010 Thanksgivings Day Grace (Poetry) - 8/12/2011 9:09:16 PM
Great prayer. Even grater coming from an agnostic.
I'll be looking for 2011 thanksgiving prayer.
Thanks,
Janna
You Make Me a Better Man (Poetry) - 8/12/2011 8:39:30 PM
A meek yet seductive tribute to some lovely lady. Nice.
Janna Hill
Download Dream (Poetry) - 8/5/2011 9:18:05 PM
Very cool, great ending, didn't see it coming even though you looped the poem around perfectly.
Breath of Sound (Poetry) - 7/20/2011 8:35:54 PM
I like the way your writing is like a punch in the face in each line, a great quality to have. Enjoyed alot.
Breath of Sound (Poetry) - 7/15/2011 9:36:40 AM
Interesting piece. Liked it a lot.
Retirement Home Blues (Poetry) - 7/5/2011 7:41:05 AM
Clever little write...enjoyed.
Cheers,
Dan
Fox Trap (Poetry) - 6/20/2011 8:15:54 PM
Interesting piece, as if a moral to a larger story...
Be always safe,
Karen
In the Game (Poetry) - 6/11/2011 3:19:26 AM
Well written, Jaimey
Weather Gods (Poetry) - 5/19/2011 7:07:03 PM
Perhaps itis a prophetic message, well said...
Be always safe,
Karen
Perfect Thoughtless Zombies (Poetry) - 5/16/2011 10:32:08 AM
Zombie freak poem..lmfao loved it..keep writing.lol
Just Fine in the End (Poetry) - 12/28/2010 8:01:35 AM
Fine, just fine.
A New Year toast to you!
Ron
Microscopic Meltdown (Poetry) - 12/27/2010 7:41:42 PM
different but neat reading.
Personal Mental Torture (Poetry) - 12/27/2010 7:41:02 PM
The rememdy, take thinks day by day and don't worry, be positive and things will be great.
Just Fine in the End (Poetry) - 12/27/2010 7:39:04 PM
happy New Year to you.
Dance, Dance, Dance Around (Poetry) - 12/19/2010 5:51:09 AM
Great poem
Tapped (Poetry) - 12/15/2010 12:44:49 AM
So true, well described.
Microscopic Meltdown (Poetry) - 12/13/2010 8:07:23 PM
love the alliteration
Once Again (Poetry) - 12/12/2010 1:09:13 AM
I love your style-however, the scansion could be tickled up a little. If you 'count the beats' as you read the lines, it can help alot.
This is in no way a stick to beat your poem with, no! The story, the sentiment and the flow of thoughts going into this piece are very nice indeed. And another poet is born.
2010 Thanksgivings Day Grace (Poetry) - 11/29/2010 9:45:44 PM
Amen indeed and I pray your day was blessed...
Be always safe,
Karen
Twist of Time Trip (Poetry) - 11/19/2010 7:07:48 AM
Street of carnage. Good imagery. The last line seemed different from the rest however.
Glimpse of Sanity (Poetry) - 11/18/2010 1:10:51 AM
Delightfully done.
Personal Mental Torture (Poetry) - 10/6/2010 3:28:06 AM
Great writing indeed..stay safe and well..Hugssss
Personal Mental Torture (Poetry) - 10/5/2010 9:30:21 PM
Ohh' such a misery..lol loved it..
Personal Mental Torture (Poetry) - 10/5/2010 5:26:23 PM
You have written of this in an engaging way, and I hope you can find the remedy for this suffering.
Blessings to you,
Christine
Subtle Moods of the Moment (Poetry) - 9/13/2010 2:14:37 PM
Interesting you mentioned Internet/digital reality. I was thinking this could all be accomplished virtually!
Towers of Blue Light Reflecting Forward (Poetry) - 9/11/2010 6:48:12 AM
May all religions respect each other
Towers of Blue Light Reflecting Forward (Poetry) - 9/11/2010 5:06:26 AM
Great words of wisdom. Peace.
You Make Me a Better Man (Poetry) - 9/9/2010 9:40:57 PM
:) How can one not smile when reading this? Really sweet!
You Make Me a Better Man (Poetry) - 9/5/2010 7:19:52 AM
Jaimey,
Wonderful write. Your sweetheart is a lucky woman.
Mary
You Make Me a Better Man (Poetry) - 9/5/2010 3:45:49 AM
Lovely writing dear man..have a wonderful and safe day..Hugss
Chili Mind Shaft (Poetry) - 8/31/2010 1:59:37 PM
Oh my..very well written indeed enjoyed....stay safe and well..Hugsss
Chili Mind Shaft (Poetry) - 8/29/2010 1:05:10 AM
Can't the USA or somebody lend a faster drilling machine ?
Chili Mind Shaft (Poetry) - 8/28/2010 2:42:07 PM
Wonderful message and sentiment.
Chili Mind Shaft (Poetry) - 8/28/2010 6:20:23 AM
Jaimey,
you've described this horror so well. It seems so much of this is happening lately, there must be some way to fix it.
Mary
Quick Looks (Poetry) - 8/19/2010 9:03:41 AM
Wireless power energetically driving your verses.
Tainted Painting (Poetry) - 8/18/2010 6:19:57 PM
This is a moving piece of poetry ~
Quite wonderful!!!
Blessings,
Christine
Mathematical Veracity Maze (Poetry) - 8/12/2010 12:22:55 PM
Poet. The cosmos is a wonder. Your poem is sure to increase that wonder, every time I look up like I did at midnight to see the Perseid meteor shower, and grand and glorious Jupiter on the rise to command the skies.
Head Workers (Poetry) - 8/12/2010 3:17:50 AM
Clever!
Mathematical Veracity Maze (Poetry) - 8/9/2010 5:14:29 AM
Wise indeed, enjoyed.
Tornado Tongue Twister (Poetry) - 7/4/2010 3:10:40 AM
NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Black Spill (Poetry) - 6/15/2010 12:22:43 AM
Powerfully written. I think it is long overdue that we move to more sustainable forms of energy.
Circles of Smoke (Poetry) - 5/23/2010 12:09:03 AM
You have really evoked the atmosphere very well
Circles of Smoke (Poetry) - 5/19/2010 6:08:40 AM
so compellingly visual------a lovey poem indeed-----
Circles of Smoke (Poetry) - 5/18/2010 10:00:41 AM
Sounds like a wonderful gathering of soulful conversation.
Peace,
Dayvid
Liberty Bell of Freedom (Poetry) - 5/15/2010 12:54:24 PM
Jaimey,
Hits home. It is indeed to easy to forget the past then repeat it. Very enjoyable
and thought provoking poem.
Mary
Liberty Bell of Freedom (Poetry) - 5/15/2010 6:40:22 AM
my respects to the armed liberty bell of freedom
Who does she think she is? (Poetry) - 5/12/2010 3:15:45 AM
Nicely achieved poem, Jaimey
Slave to the Pill (Poetry) - 5/10/2010 10:34:16 AM
Jamey i found this to be so true keep up the Good Work
Tuchy
We Are Mars, Mars Is Us! (Poetry) - 5/9/2010 8:48:59 AM
Hey the subject matter was just great. Very informative and expertly crafted.
GOD BLESS YOU
Tony
We Are Mars, Mars Is Us! (Poetry) - 5/8/2010 10:10:48 PM
I like this one. Well done!
We Are Mars, Mars Is Us! (Poetry) - 5/8/2010 5:17:57 PM
YES! Yes! Yes! Although we may not know our connection with Mars, we will when we get there. Maybe Wars will be our connection to the entire universe!
Peace,
Dayvid
Questions and Answers Within? (Poetry) - 5/5/2010 2:04:51 AM
Fascinating work, Jaimey
Slave to the Pill (Poetry) - 5/2/2010 6:14:11 AM
Jaimey, well done, enjoyed the read.
Cheers,
Dan
Slave to the Pill (Poetry) - 5/2/2010 1:14:33 AM
Well written, Jaimey
Slave to the Pill (Poetry) - 5/1/2010 7:23:10 PM
Jaimey,
The metaphor of "the pill of life" is so clever and so true. Very well written and thought out.
Mary
So Sorry, My Angel (Poetry) - 5/1/2010 6:46:49 PM
Romantic, serene, sensual, how could the answer be No. Beautiful.
Be Well, Carin' Spirit
Strange Silent Sounds (Poetry) - 3/31/2010 12:12:52 AM
Well written poem, Jaimey
Strange Silent Sounds (Poetry) - 3/30/2010 3:56:41 PM
Perhaps you are GIFTED in the ways of hearing sounds from the spirit world?
Think For Yourself, Not Others (Poetry) - 3/22/2010 2:04:14 PM
However, once you know who you are, you have the ability to reach out to others, nice writing...
Be always safe,
Karen
Think For Yourself, Not Others (Poetry) - 3/22/2010 3:37:41 AM
Very nice message.
Love Loss and Gained (Poetry) - 3/15/2010 10:53:48 AM
Beautiful pen, enjoyed
Love Loss and Gained (Poetry) - 3/15/2010 2:00:20 AM
Nicely done, Jaimey
Ways of a wise wayward woman (Poetry) - 2/25/2010 8:40:01 PM
Such heartfelt beauty in your words...
Be always safe,
Karen
Hockey Goalie Mask of Protection (Poetry) - 2/22/2010 2:25:08 PM
Interesting way to face what needs to be faced...
Be always safe,
Karen
You're Face (Poetry) - 2/20/2010 5:13:43 PM
cleaver wording...i like it ,,,thanks pmedlin
Collective Consciousness Awakening (Poetry) - 2/16/2010 11:25:36 PM
me too!
Born Again Hired Hand (Poetry) - 2/15/2010 4:03:06 PM
I certainly hope not.
Healing Time (Poetry) - 2/15/2010 12:42:27 AM
We al need healing thanks for the reminder
Your pal Tuchy (YPT)
Somewhere in Between (Poetry) - 2/15/2010 12:40:23 AM
You got it
YPT
Troubled Mind (Poetry) - 2/15/2010 12:38:11 AM
Jaimey We all have had our heart broken lets hope they mend for all of us sooner than he
Very Creative
YPT
Back to Night! (Poetry) - 2/15/2010 12:35:36 AM
Very creative
Keep it up
Tuchy
Confused dreams brought into consciousness state (Poetry) - 2/12/2010 10:00:53 AM
Jamiey This is great work You have a gift
Your pal
Carl (Tuchy)
Old thought memories now in the moment image (Poetry) - 1/28/2010 12:13:52 AM
Jaimey I love it, and I am Impressed with The depth of your words give us more
Your Pal
Carl/Tuchy
Out of my mind and into my heart (Poetry) - 1/26/2010 11:19:20 AM
Great Jamiey give us more one at a time
Your pal Carl/Tuchy
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