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Tears that Bleed (Poetry) - 1/22/2010 10:20:37 AM
Nicely done and in a form that makes the content more interesting that it is, if that is possible. Because pain and suffering, mental pain and suffering has been a well-tried method of self flagellation probably since there were more than one person in this world. I think there is one word that shouldn't be in the poem, "Screaming, I loathe for freedom," / It is the loathe word. I imagine it is just me, but either I just don't understand the connotation of it. Maybe it would sound better and make more sense if loathe were left in and "for" removed. I know you have already published this, so maybe I shouldn't have spouted off, but . . .

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