Recent Reviews for Ben Fowler
After (Poetry) - 7/28/2004 7:46:56 AM|
A painful, emotive write, Ben. Good work.
Line (Poetry) - 4/19/2004 12:08:44 PM
Very good (smiles)
Line (Poetry) - 6/14/2003 3:35:38 AM
fucking hell you suck. im jealous. that rocks =D im gunna beat all these other people that wrote in here and make this the longest review thingy ever =) but wow that poem is really good! how the hell can you write like that? lol =P okay well i suck at writing these things so im gunna stop now. You rock =P
Beloved (Poetry) - 6/13/2003 10:20:05 PM
Ben i really love ya poetry it means something 2 me it make me sad reading them but,i can't help it i love them so much.
love sarah xxxxxxxxooooooooo
Lost (Poetry) - 6/13/2003 10:08:46 PM
Ben i really love lost its amazing its as kool as u love sarahxxxxxxx
Dark (Poetry) - 6/6/2003 4:07:34 AM
Very Very meaningful well done :)
Priceless (Poetry) - 5/23/2003 3:53:17 PM
It's amazing how you can do so well
Line (Poetry) - 5/13/2003 2:47:06 AM
Line (Poetry) - 5/6/2003 8:12:55 AM
Well done, Ben.
Line (Poetry) - 5/6/2003 5:46:33 AM
great poem you got here
After (Poetry) - 5/3/2003 9:48:54 PM
Ben, great work
to serve a life
a captured heart
and reverting back to
a horrifying start
it starts at end
and ends in fear
but I see now
you were never near "
After (Poetry) - 5/3/2003 12:04:47 PM
Very interesting poem.Intriging.Original.Different.I see huge potential here.
After (Poetry) - 5/3/2003 12:00:43 PM
It seems we can miss so much, what was never there in the first place. Hope can be a bitter prism to look through.
Nicely written, Ben.
After (Poetry) - 5/3/2003 11:51:16 AM
always great work from you! i am very proud of you!!
Hide (Poetry) - 5/3/2003 5:32:00 AM
An intresting poem
Spherical Dream (Poetry) - 5/2/2003 4:29:08 AM
Another great poem Ben!!
Keep up the good work!!
Spherical Dream (Poetry) - 4/30/2003 2:39:28 AM
Spherical Dream (Poetry) - 4/26/2003 8:10:52 PM
Most Interestingly So!
Spherical Dream (Poetry) - 4/26/2003 6:51:48 PM
nicely done flow of consciousness...
Spherical Dream (Poetry) - 4/26/2003 6:05:08 PM
Well Done Indeed!
Spherical Dream (Poetry) - 4/26/2003 1:32:53 PM
Well done !!!!
Torn (Poetry) - 4/25/2003 5:16:36 AM
words can't say how i feel.
it's just the best,well done i mean it Ben.It's great just great
Rive (Poetry) - 4/25/2003 5:11:54 AM
Ben how can i say this ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm it's really good.
i wish i could wright poems as good as u.
Martyr (Poetry) - 4/25/2003 5:07:00 AM
It is a bit depressing.
but all the same it is a really great pome .
Well done Ben
Gift (Poetry) - 4/21/2003 10:12:10 PM
Ben your poem was so meaningful just like the others keep on writting like this and you will be sucessful in the years to come.
Beloved (Poetry) - 4/21/2003 10:05:08 PM
It's was so meaning full and sad keep it up
Seamless (Poetry) - 4/21/2003 6:19:56 AM
It's great keep up this work
Seamless (Poetry) - 4/19/2003 11:09:05 AM
Well...I guess that is why it is called seamless. I like it...[smiles] [It does need spellcheck}
Seamless (Poetry) - 4/19/2003 9:19:37 AM
This was too long. I was intimidated by the run-on sentences. Hope a little spell-check and a little re-constructive surgery to this poem will help.
Sandie Angel :o)
Seamless (Poetry) - 4/19/2003 6:44:16 AM
Ok Ben Fowler, my bestest friend.
I nearly died when i read this poem. WHERE ARE THE FULL STOPS? I HAD TO READ IT WITHOUT BREATHING!!!!!
Hahehe. And there were some spelling mistakes also, but, never the less, it was a lovely poem. Beautiful, Melodeous. and i think i spelt that last word wrong, hehe. but, anyway. It was a lovely poem write. Keep up the good work, you have never disappointed me yet in any aspect of your poems, your life, or your friendship:)
Seamless (Poetry) - 4/19/2003 4:38:04 AM
Yes Ben, hopefully the darkness will divide and you will find this is just a dream. Bill
Rive (Poetry) - 4/17/2003 12:05:03 AM
Should i say anymore to what Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben had said?
truly wonderous work ben. One of your best yet.
Rive (Poetry) - 4/14/2003 11:44:04 AM
Wonderful free verse, Ben. Bravo.
Rive (Poetry) - 4/14/2003 8:10:32 AM
I Salute the Author of "Rive".
This poem takes the reader through the sea of imagination under protean eyes, and
brings one back to reality of emotion to think... It happened to me... I have learned
reading the words of "Rive"... The babies of my mind have grown and my heart felt wiser.
"Rive" makes one think of life and gives a message to reasoning.
I must ask Your permission, Poet Ben Fowler, to suggest:
Never rest Your pen; don’t let Your quills dry.
My respect and admiration.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Rive (Poetry) - 4/14/2003 4:25:57 AM
It's most heartfelt write. Emotions well-expressed.
Sandie Angel :o(
Priceless (Poetry) - 4/13/2003 5:21:42 AM
Great Ben how can you do that so well?
Priceless (Poetry) - 4/9/2003 12:50:51 PM
This is painful. Very good job. I enjoy reading you...glad I stopped by. Teresa
Priceless (Poetry) - 4/9/2003 12:15:36 PM
its nice. The opening stansa is quality.
Priceless (Poetry) - 4/9/2003 10:54:44 AM
Nice one, Ben.
Gone (Poetry) - 4/6/2003 12:15:11 PM
Wow... kept me glued all the way through! Quite brilliantly quilled, this was. I really enjoyed reading it. Even though it's topic is very common (*and yet we still love reading about it :) *), you but your own unique expression to it. Beautiful.
Gone (Poetry) - 4/6/2003 10:48:57 AM
Gone (Poetry) - 4/6/2003 9:07:01 AM
very good write...
Gone (Poetry) - 4/6/2003 6:14:53 AM
Ben, this is exceptional in every way. The message, flow and rhyme. Great poem.
Gone (Poetry) - 4/6/2003 5:31:51 AM
Fantastic write Ben! Keep up the great work and have a wonderful Sunday!
Beloved (Poetry) - 3/27/2003 12:39:00 AM
Ben. My dearest friend. I understand how you feel and what your going through. I unfortunately know what you are talking about in this miserable poem. I feel like this everyday most of the time. Welcome, ben, to my world. Where i rule supremé. Haha. I am only joking. Don't worry man. A wise person once told me. "there can be miracles, when you believe". Ok, so i got it off a song, it still applies, I am not the wise man, telling you. Believe, and things will happen, but, just believing won't help, when the chance comes up, you have to help the miracle come true. Another special lady shall enter your life my friend. And you shall rejoice, and love like you had never been hurt:) Namárië, May my blessings follow you in your wanderings, and may those blessings go out to all the people who read your poem of love, grief, and pain. Talk to you soon!
Beloved (Poetry) - 3/26/2003 7:37:38 PM
nice flow of consciousness...
Beloved (Poetry) - 3/26/2003 4:55:32 PM
Fantastic write. ~Trish~
Beloved (Poetry) - 3/26/2003 2:52:27 PM
Someone has lots and lots of pride. This is very well said.....very emotional. Great job on this. Teresa
Beloved (Poetry) - 3/26/2003 11:59:07 AM
Martyr (Poetry) - 3/22/2003 4:30:54 AM
Another great poem Ben. Its a bit depressing but still really good.
Martyr (Poetry) - 3/20/2003 12:10:33 PM
Very very ....oooh sad. Teresa
Martyr (Poetry) - 3/20/2003 10:41:32 AM
Depressing as hell, but well written. [smiles] Bravo. It is also thoughtful.
Martyr (Poetry) - 3/20/2003 5:30:51 AM
Ben...excellent write...clap clap clap....BHUWAN
Martyr (Poetry) - 3/20/2003 5:16:12 AM
Wow.. Ben this is a powerful message of these confused times.. Excellent write that mirrors my own feelings in many ways..
As you are my father..
How do you feel?
Your son is now a martyr.
Free (Poetry) - 3/15/2003 10:02:11 AM
hey ben! well, i loved the poem. im really sad to hear about your friend tho. ttyl hopefully
Free (Poetry) - 3/11/2003 10:11:23 AM
Freedom and love that is it excellent write.
Free (Poetry) - 3/11/2003 3:40:56 AM
And freedom is all we really need... A wonderful poem I loved the read. Oh and hi! from another Aussie. Ty, Dani *Perth*
Alone (Poetry) - 3/8/2003 7:02:01 PM
Well done ! This came across real nicely!
Alone (Poetry) - 3/6/2003 6:07:54 AM
Well expressed ...I have to agree with your last verse; we have to rely on our own strengths ultimately.
Alone (Poetry) - 3/6/2003 2:49:17 AM
Ben, like your poem. Someone wise once said, " No one is with me forever but myself."
Dark (Poetry) - 3/4/2003 12:02:52 AM
Ben, you are in a deep suffering mode. Fully loaded to explode. I am sorry to see this happening. bill murray
Dark (Poetry) - 3/3/2003 9:33:01 PM
Dark (Poetry) - 3/3/2003 8:11:20 PM
Wow...really got into that.
Dark (Poetry) - 3/3/2003 8:00:44 PM
wonderful flow and great message
Dark (Poetry) - 3/3/2003 5:55:23 PM
Very good and very well expressed.
Dark (Poetry) - 3/3/2003 4:24:10 PM
makes you hold out for the end. Its.
Dark (Poetry) - 3/3/2003 4:23:28 PM
It's is nice. Nice flow!
Sandie Angel :o)
Stone (Poetry) - 2/28/2003 2:43:29 AM
This poem has in it feelings that we know. I have been there and you are not alone.
Stone (Poetry) - 2/25/2003 6:31:40 AM
Oh this one is heartfelt and excellent
poets know how to release life to words.
Stone (Poetry) - 2/25/2003 3:46:25 AM
My dear friend.
This poem you have written has shown how you feel at this moment in time. I predict, that how you feel right now shall not continue on for long, your burdens shall be lifted. Your ailments cured. Your heart mended. And your lyrics sung. What you think that is happening that it isn't fair, will shower out from within sight, and your eyes will open unto your new begining.
Rest (Poetry) - 2/20/2003 7:14:54 AM
Rest (Poetry) - 2/20/2003 6:41:29 AM
very good write here
Rest (Poetry) - 2/20/2003 4:03:07 AM
We have all ducked in a hole now and then, but we must get out of the hole and keep on going. Beautiful piece.
Rest (Poetry) - 2/20/2003 1:39:30 AM
Ben...I like this one..you can also dig me a hole...a deep one please!!
Rest (Poetry) - 2/20/2003 1:26:52 AM
I think its a fantastic poem. Not as good as Ben's other poems but still good. I give it a 7/10.
Rest (Poetry) - 2/20/2003 1:23:10 AM
very good... dig me a hole so I can escape the past
Sacrifice (Poetry) - 2/16/2003 3:15:05 AM
that is one of the best poems in the world, mayn.I just want to tell you you have a really good chance of making it big. Love ya!
Sacrifice (Poetry) - 2/16/2003 2:51:35 AM
great poem once again from ben....seen a few and liked them all, would have to be one of his best so far, hope he keeps it up, has a real talent.
Sacrifice (Poetry) - 2/15/2003 6:44:46 AM
BWAAKA BWAAKA BWAA.~!.~!.~!.~!
that is a great poem benji.
hope you keep it up:d
Sacrifice (Poetry) - 2/13/2003 6:04:56 PM
enjoyed this poem very much...
Inside (Poetry) - 2/13/2003 7:14:34 AM
"till when you search
but cannot find
beacuse inside me
is where you always have been"
Lovely lines. I like this very much.
Gift (Poetry) - 2/13/2003 7:08:05 AM
Another good write from you.
Sacrifice (Poetry) - 2/13/2003 7:05:23 AM
A sad poem written in excellent form. Looking forward to reading more of yours.
Sacrifice (Poetry) - 2/13/2003 6:26:38 AM
Excellent ryhme. of verse.
Sacrifice (Poetry) - 2/13/2003 4:06:36 AM
Great rhythm and rhyme. Super job!
Gift (Poetry) - 2/12/2003 8:46:13 AM
I think Tool is one of the most thought provoking bands around and their videos are creepy-cool. They remind me of some of the better groups (Black Sabbath) from my day (the 70s). Anyhow, don't worry about getting the recognition you deserve - as you said in your message to me at my site. Seeking acclaim from the outside can warp your sense of truth. Be genuine. Write what you feel. Be inspired by Maynard, but you needn't copy him. I like how your poem starts out with a hopeless, oppressed tone and then turns for an upbeat end. By the way, check your spelling.
Within (Poetry) - 2/10/2003 1:19:43 AM
Good work ben, if i gave it 1 outa 10 id give u 10 :)
from ya old friend sean
Gift (Poetry) - 2/8/2003 10:41:29 AM
Hey Ben. I really liked this poem, seems like you get better with eveyone you write. One thing though.... Not really important... but you might want to do a spel check... thats about the only thing I saw wrong
Lost (Poetry) - 2/7/2003 7:07:00 PM
Ben is an amazing poet. He really brings out the truth.
Gift (Poetry) - 2/1/2003 9:44:30 AM
Gift (Poetry) - 2/1/2003 6:14:12 AM
It's pretty good Ben. And I can see the obvious Tool influence in almost all of your poems. I also love the negativity of it with that little streak of triumph at the end. Which gives me a more positive outlook on the poem. Keep writing poetry, you've got a talent for it.
Gift (Poetry) - 2/1/2003 6:00:13 AM
Ben that was a great peom just like all the rest of them keep up the good work they just keep gettin betta as they come
Gift (Poetry) - 2/1/2003 5:41:15 AM
Great poem Ben! I'd like to see more like this. Don't force me to write reviews! LOL. Kidding aside, it is a very good poem and I hope to see more in the future.
Gift (Poetry) - 2/1/2003 3:33:58 AM
good.i thought ur style would be a bit darker though
Gift (Poetry) - 2/1/2003 3:26:27 AM
I love it! Great poem. Thanks Ben, for the "Gift"!
Within (Poetry) - 1/29/2003 3:35:02 AM
You never cease to amaze me, you are one hell of a kid and I love ya for it.
Within (Poetry) - 1/21/2003 7:09:35 AM
You know you've always got me to come to if ya got problems mate:P
Well....the ending was ok...
But, i tend to like the whole thing.
your bestest friend
Within (Poetry) - 1/20/2003 12:53:39 PM
Yes the ending was great, and the poem shows much pain. Thank God for the ending. Bill Murray
Within (Poetry) - 1/20/2003 8:19:59 AM
Beautifully written, there is pain deep within you. Turn to a friend one that you can talk with.
Within (Poetry) - 1/20/2003 8:05:19 AM
Wonderful poetry. Love the ending.
Inside (Poetry) - 1/18/2003 6:14:30 AM
Omg ur poem is sooo sweet and adorable ben u keep up the good work u r soo cute!!!! bye
Inside (Poetry) - 1/13/2003 1:49:23 PM
This might have been written by a god... at least, that is how it affected me.
Inside (Poetry) - 1/13/2003 8:38:13 AM
Very good write.
Inside (Poetry) - 1/13/2003 8:18:27 AM
Yes, excellent indeed!!!
Inside (Poetry) - 1/13/2003 7:41:14 AM
Inside (Poetry) - 1/13/2003 7:35:42 AM
This is excellent loved the ending.
Torn (Poetry) - 1/13/2003 6:57:14 AM
Your life as this not not alone. Your pain is felt deep from inside. Great write.
Torn (Poetry) - 1/13/2003 3:59:21 AM
Love makes the world go around.
Love death and hate life.
This is a very good one.
Torn (Poetry) - 1/13/2003 3:18:22 AM
y does everything have to be about love? is love wat makes the world go round? y is everybodyyyyyyyyyy in love when they know it'll hurt them one time or the other? just a query Ben, no offence meant.....nice write, chap!
Trinette (Poetry) - 12/30/2002 2:45:37 AM
Impressive, but then what is my complement to you. What is my significance? My print in the earth is nothing compared with your work. Thus I babble in a range of vocabulary, just to assert my covetousness to you. Basically im stoned, lol.
Trinette (Poetry) - 12/28/2002 3:52:33 PM
Good Work Ben! Even we women can relate to this one too! ;O)
~Happy New Year~
~Gods and Goddesses Bless~
Trinette (Poetry) - 12/28/2002 3:38:19 PM
Trinette (Poetry) - 12/28/2002 8:27:11 AM
Good work, Ben. Can relate to that feeling of some nasty little vampire sucking your life right out of you. I'm "feeling" this one.
Whole (Poetry) - 12/21/2002 7:58:01 AM
damn ur good!! itz excellent!
Whole (Poetry) - 12/21/2002 5:41:58 AM
this poem rocks!!! Dude, this is an awesome poem. U have talent..wanna read more from u in the future :)
Whole (Poetry) - 12/21/2002 4:49:49 AM
wow dude u rok!!!!
thats seriously really really good.
Whole (Poetry) - 12/19/2002 2:58:38 AM
"I was in heaven
shrouded by hell
and made me run
away from life
till the day I die
i will remain
till the end of time"
Pieces (Poetry) - 12/17/2002 11:28:51 AM
Just keep pushing forward,,sooner or later you'll get there,,nice work,,Lisa
Pieces (Poetry) - 12/17/2002 4:47:30 AM
This is very sharp.
Sadness amongst the beauty of
thought ion this