this rock (Poetry) - 7/20/2010 1:14:40 AM
Very well achieved poem
this rock (Poetry) - 7/19/2010 8:06:27 PM
True, sound advice but there are times when you must stand your ground and speak out...
Be always safe,
bringer of laughter (Poetry) - 7/19/2010 6:45:04 PM
A beautiful tribute to an unnamed friend. I've enjoyed your bio and a few of your poems now. Don't know why you don't have more comments. Perhaps you don't ever comment on other people's work? Try it.
At any rate, I'm glad I saw your poem of today and satisfied my curiosity. I think you're good!
what i don't know (Poetry) - 2/16/2010 5:11:58 PM
I can relate and I really enjoy this write. Thankkkk youuuuuu
what i don't know (Poetry) - 2/16/2010 3:34:01 PM
I know that you are lamenting something here,
and that the undercurrents reflect deep emotion,
but the flow is great and the poem would lend itself
nicely to being a song. Good job Lainey!