Recent Reviews for Vicky P Mize
Boyfriend (Short Story) - 3/22/2005 1:30:06 PM|
Welcome to the Den, Vicky. I hope you stay awhile.
I believe before we can "find" someone to share our lives with, we first have to "find" ourselves. The moment you detach yourself from "finding" a boyfriend, the boyfriend will find you. In the meantime work on yourself and your life, learn, grow, be.
Best to you,
Boyfriend (Short Story) - 3/21/2005 7:34:00 PM
Before you can give to another, you have to learn to love being with just you. Take some time to celebrate the person you are and let the relationships come later. Go party and enjoy!
IMHO, since you asked.
Boyfriend (Short Story) - 3/21/2005 4:52:48 AM
You're probably very young. Don't date anyone who's married, or who has an ex-wife. The finance won't be good for either one of you after you got married; and he will always have a tie with his ex because of the children.
Start fresh, and look around for eligible young man. There's lots of them who will love you for who you are.
Well...can't help with giving the advice. Okay, this is a thought-provoking piece that attracts the feedbacks.
Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)
Parents (Short Story) - 5/12/2003 11:20:59 AM
You will understand even more, once u have kids of your owne...
A Missed Uncle (Short Story) - 3/15/2003 10:09:56 PM
love conquers all little buddy =-))
Parents (Short Story) - 2/12/2003 11:17:33 AM
and so glad you do; not many people are as fortunate as you are! and i am glad you love them even when they aren't being nice to you; that's what makes them parents! they have a right to let you know if you have displesed them! just try to respect their authority, and be glad they care for you! that's why they may yell or act unreasonable. if they didn't then they wouldn't even talk to you or care for you! so be glad they yell, and be glad they do care! love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)
A Missed Uncle (Short Story) - 12/31/2002 12:23:33 PM
so sad. sorry for your loss. no, it was god's decision to take your uncle james; satan is just filling your head with lies and anger; and you shouldn't give in to that. trust in god; and let him give you a sense of peace and comfort that passes all understanding. i know; i lost my mother almost 13 years ago, and i was angry at god, but then i learned to let go and heal, and i was able to go on, even though i still miss mom today. (mom died on st. patricks' day, march 17, 1990.) she was just 59, a month and a half shy of her 60th birthday. too young, but i know god took her for a reason. ((((HUGS)))) to you, vicky; may you find the strength to heal and go on. i did, and you can, too, although you never stop missing them! love, your friend, karen lynn. ((((more hugs)))) :( >tears <
A Friend (Poetry) - 4/9/2008 4:20:19 PM
i like this poem you can tell you meant what you said
The person (Poetry) - 11/26/2007 6:30:38 AM
This is a great poem I feel the same way about a certain person!
The person (Poetry) - 9/16/2007 2:32:58 PM
This is a really really amazing poem... I'm positive that loads of people can relate to it, no matter how old they are.
The person (Poetry) - 3/26/2005 9:29:11 AM
yes how many times have we been there
this explodes with a realness that gives me chills
for i know far to well
what this poem is...........
The person (Poetry) - 3/22/2005 3:39:25 PM
Those last two lines summed it up...there was an old country song..why do i fall for those crazy blue eyes, the ramblers that won't settle down. that is it though we usually do
Pit (Poetry) - 3/21/2005 7:56:15 PM
sometimes love is like an ravine without a bottom ...
well versed ...
Pit (Poetry) - 3/21/2005 4:12:31 AM
We all can relate to this feeling at one time or another. Good job on this piece!
Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)
A future predicted (Poetry) - 5/22/2003 2:02:41 PM
Please Go (Poetry) - 5/12/2003 11:18:45 AM
Please Go (Poetry) - 3/21/2003 8:46:37 PM
That's the way to tell em
Please Go (Poetry) - 3/21/2003 8:04:42 PM
Oh this one is so sad.
Please Go (Poetry) - 3/21/2003 8:01:34 PM
cong o o long! i long o vong e i tong!!!!! wong a a a a a hong o o o o!
Holding (Poetry) - 3/21/2003 7:56:39 PM
oo vizicky, very good. ::applauds::
September 11th (Poetry) - 3/2/2003 3:08:35 PM
i like it, its well written, i can feel something when i read it, although i havent experianced something like that, so its really good.
September 11th (Poetry) - 2/18/2003 11:00:05 PM
Thus poem was extremly sad but very well written!
September 11th (Poetry) - 2/18/2003 10:02:08 PM
I feel the pain in this profound poem.
Feelingd I didn't show (Poetry) - 2/18/2003 7:01:01 PM
Oh Vicky, I surely hope you haven't lost him forever. Bill Murray
Feelingd I didn't show (Poetry) - 2/18/2003 6:58:34 PM
A pretty and sad at the same time write. Well done.
I love him.. (Poetry) - 2/15/2003 12:26:00 PM
Beautiful Vicky ..tender words and emotions.
I love him.. (Poetry) - 2/15/2003 5:14:06 AM
Awwwwwww loverly write :) J & J
I love him.. (Poetry) - 2/14/2003 11:21:28 PM
Vicky...that is such a beautiful poem. Very heart warming and touching. Makes me want to cry. keep up the awesome work that you do girl. Love your "older" sis, Nadia
I love him.. (Poetry) - 2/14/2003 11:21:13 PM
its a great poem- really expresses how ya feel about that special someone- someday yall will be back together
I love him.. (Poetry) - 2/14/2003 11:19:53 PM
kool.. me like... i know who it is about... and yea... makes sense.... :)... but if you are sad... cheer up.... (:
I love him.. (Poetry) - 2/14/2003 11:19:27 PM
what will he do (Poetry) - 2/12/2003 5:07:30 PM
don't bother looking (Poetry) - 2/12/2003 1:54:38 AM
Vicky, I do not know about him, but you were awake, wern't you? Bill Murray
don't bother looking (Poetry) - 2/11/2003 9:07:58 PM
The piece of the gun is a real reality kicker. Nice job, its good to wake people up about being honest about emotion.
don't bother looking (Poetry) - 2/11/2003 6:56:43 PM
Ha ha, nice little joke at the end... well, I hope it was a joke ;)
don't bother looking (Poetry) - 2/11/2003 6:28:44 PM
nice work...keep it up!
don't bother looking (Poetry) - 2/11/2003 5:23:21 PM
Nice write Vicky!
don't bother looking (Poetry) - 2/11/2003 4:57:30 PM
Bought Love (Poetry) - 1/5/2003 12:08:19 PM
A soft and sweet romantic piece!
Bought Love (Poetry) - 1/5/2003 12:06:24 PM
You got what you want. Great! Deb
Bought Love (Poetry) - 1/5/2003 12:41:43 AM
Very nice poem Vicky.
Bought Love (Poetry) - 1/5/2003 12:11:34 AM
Love at first sight... what a wonderful belief.
Bought Love (Poetry) - 1/4/2003 10:53:43 PM
Love the love.
Bought Love (Poetry) - 1/4/2003 10:20:15 PM
My Life Without You (Poetry) - 1/3/2003 12:01:26 PM
Lovely Work Vicky!
~Gods and Goddesses Bless~
My Life Without You (Poetry) - 1/3/2003 3:35:48 AM
Vicky, this is good. A natural flowing song. I was singing it. Bill MUrray
A future predicted (Poetry) - 1/2/2003 1:33:29 AM
So beautiful and tender.
this is heaven.
Older Sister (Poetry) - 1/1/2003 2:36:55 PM
Wonderful dedication to your sister.
A Friend (Poetry) - 12/31/2002 5:53:31 AM
Vicky, I agree with Lisa, this poem kicks ass.. Thanks for sharing it with us.
Fought Feelings (Poetry) - 12/31/2002 1:12:39 AM
This is a nice piece of work all in all. Your feelings come across very clearly and its very insightful. Your work impresses me
A Friend (Poetry) - 12/31/2002 12:51:42 AM
That poem kicks ass. It's very heartfelt and it's nice that you're not ashamed of that fact. I'm always too embarassed and scared to reveal anything heartfelt so I respect the kind of person who conveys a meaningful message. You found a unique method of using the language in "A Friend" and it flowed really well. All in all, it kicks ass.
If only (Poetry) - 12/30/2002 10:12:34 PM
AWWWWWWWWW THIS IS NICE,YOUR GOOD MY CHILD.:)
Fought Feelings (Poetry) - 12/30/2002 9:50:10 PM
Whence You Look To Hard, i.e. He Will Never Find You!
If only (Poetry) - 12/30/2002 9:25:26 PM
sigh, yes, if only.... I can relate to this one as I am sure many other people can.. and amazingly enough you are able to express this on paper. you have talent, and you are a very lucky girl!
Dreamer (Poetry) - 12/30/2002 9:22:56 PM
I very much so like this one as well, u r a very talented young writer, maybe that is ur dream.. u should pursue it if it is!
Fought Feelings (Poetry) - 12/30/2002 9:18:26 PM
**awww** it's -so- pretty and the feelings are really intense and descriptive, like being inside your head... very good creativity and an enjoyable read. Keep up the good work!
Fought Feelings (Poetry) - 12/30/2002 9:17:40 PM
oo I like I like! sounds very intelligent
Fought Feelings (Poetry) - 12/30/2002 8:45:02 PM
Fought Feelings (Poetry) - 12/30/2002 8:38:42 PM
Ooh, you're climbing the ladder Vicky! I liked this. It's so youthful and charming :)
Warm Love and Happy New Year,
*- Brittany -*
Dreamer (Poetry) - 12/30/2002 6:36:17 PM
Slowly drift off, go to a place of the unknown
A place where only dreams can take you.
In dreams, nothing is impossible, you can have anything you want.
Thats why everyone needs to dream a little"
Dreamer (Poetry) - 12/30/2002 12:30:42 PM
Surely, I am not. Alas, most of the world does, and sometimes their dreams aren't always good :*(
Your expression was very good though Vicky!
Warm Love and Happy New Year,
*- Brittany -*
If only (Poetry) - 12/30/2002 9:01:14 AM
<Sigh> How sad to lose someone so precious and even more so that perhaps this person never knew of your affections. :O( A sad but simply lovely piece!
If only (Poetry) - 12/30/2002 5:51:21 AM
Very pretty write.
If only (Poetry) - 12/30/2002 1:30:09 AM
Aww that is so pretty. I like it a lot ^_^