Recent Reviews for Star Fire
Forgiveness (Poetry) - 9/28/2010 12:00:46 PM|
How easily our words can hurt those we care about most. Your writing well expresses the regret that follows. I especially like "Please do not take heed, my selfish heart had no control."
May all your disagreements be lovingly settled, and all your hurts dissipate into that open air.
Forgiveness (Poetry) - 8/14/2010 11:15:46 AM
Truly contrite and honestly open; I find your verses very compelling. Thank you for sharing, Star Fire. Love and peace,
My Hearts Cliche' (Poetry) - 8/9/2010 5:26:06 PM
I like it
For All Time (Poetry) - 6/9/2010 6:07:09 PM
Peace, love and light,
Ahoy! (Poetry) - 5/30/2010 10:11:16 AM
Thought provoking, yet confusing. The confusing part is not bad. It makes a person pause and think harder about the words before them. Nicely written.
Ahoy! (Poetry) - 5/20/2010 12:43:46 PM
Star Fire.... short,precise and original! keep writing....)
New Day (Poetry) - 5/11/2010 11:30:22 AM
Very lovely and well said!
Enjoy each day with each breath that we breathe...
Much peace, love, and light,
Tears (Poetry) - 4/30/2010 5:47:40 AM
Soft, yet full of emotion... A sadly reflective piece. You write beautifully.
Ahoy! (Poetry) - 4/30/2010 5:45:14 AM
Your words make me think...and I find much truth in them. Welcome to the den.
Tears (Poetry) - 4/29/2010 9:04:48 PM
This is tenderly sad...Crying tears cleanses the soul, my friend!
Much peace, love, and light to you,
Ahoy! (Poetry) - 4/29/2010 1:07:38 PM
Very nicely done..I shall look forward to more of your work. Welcome to the den, Star Fire.
Much peace, love, and light,
Ahoy! (Poetry) - 4/29/2010 4:38:48 AM
So, point blank - Friends no matter what they do! That would take a bigger heart that my human body has. More forgiveness than my small brain can give. I would definitely need Divine Intervention and Instruction. I've just seen too much corruption.
A Great Faith and Hope indeed you have.
Being able to take angry and turn it into Love.
May it always stay inside you.
And who knows, who else may learn it too - from you!
Ahoy! (Poetry) - 4/28/2010 9:58:30 PM
Many have commented about this being open to interpretation, I guess I should take the mystery away. It is written in the positive sense, standing by your word and friend, even though you are totally pissed off at them. (excuse the french) Thank you all for reading my poem, I feel very welcome here and look forward to reading more.
Ahoy! (Poetry) - 4/28/2010 7:21:49 PM
Nice! A few very powerful words.
Ahoy! (Poetry) - 4/28/2010 12:33:20 PM
Very interesting. Many interpretations possible. Welcome!
Ahoy! (Poetry) - 4/28/2010 11:25:38 AM
This suggest many possibilities to me, Star Fire. Thank you for sharing. Welcome to AD. Love and best wishes,
Ahoy! (Poetry) - 4/28/2010 10:23:08 AM
this has such a strong mood
of defying life's animosity...
"Allegiance Be Eternal"
what an imaginative line!!!
i love this poem...
Ahoy! (Poetry) - 4/28/2010 10:12:15 AM
Uplifting is the word that pops into my mind when I read this. Well done.
Ahoy! (Poetry) - 4/28/2010 9:49:26 AM
Very interesting Ku, without knowing what the inspiration behind it is the reader can interpet in many ways...origianal and thought provoking for sure. Welcome to the Den...