Fractured Fairy Tales Part 2 - Hansel & Gretel (Short Story) - 6/29/2013 8:35:10 AM
Fractured is the word. Not the usual suspects, but a rather usual story of the good guys winning and revenge.
I saw a couple of typos and some of the sentences could be tightened up a bit to make the story flow better.
I'm not into crime stories, based on nursery rhymes or not, so I wasn't turned on.
Spring Heeled Jack (Short Story) - 7/2/2012 6:39:30 PM
Very enjoyable; love the description of floating in space above the earth. It would be helpful if the verb forms were consistent: it keeps changing from past to present tense.
Spring Heeled Jack (Short Story) - 6/20/2012 1:37:14 PM
Great story.I love SHJ.So much so that I wrote a book about him. The Bones of Jack. About a chimney sweep and rat catcher who find the remains of the infamous villain and bring his legend back to life.
Martians (Short Story) - 2/5/2012 9:00:41 AM
Extremely interesting. I'm so glad I stumbled arcoss your well-written and informative story.
Martians (Short Story) - 2/4/2012 6:53:52 AM
absolutely incredible information in your richly described story...which is story, which is truth... but then truth is often the strangest..well done!
A Tale Of Tails (Short Story) - 7/2/2010 7:32:08 AM
A truly delightful story. One that could be read over and over to your child. I especially liked that King Leo was a good king and brought happiness to the animals of his kingdom.