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Recent Reviews for Dayvid Graybill
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Pay Up Please! (Short Story) - 11/20/2011 12:16:36 PM
Kalinsky should have told Moffitt -
who should have Bankrupted Ruck - for being a BASTARD!
good story - in Real life - the Bastards WIN! Tom.
My Response to Dan Johnson (Article) - 12/13/2012 9:02:02 AM
lol loved this and it is scary because it is ppl who believe and raise their children to believe this way another thing the fall of America i believe is coming if so really simple truths aren't addressed so many similarities to Rome.........
My Response to Dan Johnson (Article) - 10/15/2010 5:38:07 AM
I knew many who are that way but we don't move in the same social/spiritual circles anymore. I think preachers have ruined more lives of the honestly faithful than the devil himself ever will.
My Response to Dan Johnson (Article) - 10/8/2010 1:38:19 PM
I am that homosexual woman Proud! I am that woman that has command of her own body...and MIND! I am not a Christian, nor do I want to be. I honor the pagan goddess and carry the Wiccan practitioner pendant. I write about all religions! This is a business and I am good at it. I am LESBIAN! Love to you, Dayvid...have a great time tomorrow in La Junta at your poetry reading.
Love and Free-thinking pastors,
Sage
My Response to Dan Johnson (Article) - 10/7/2010 7:53:07 PM
I'm thinking it's mostly the inbred preachers that have run amok. Yeah, I know, define inbred. Patrick
My Response to Dan Johnson (Article) - 10/7/2010 8:31:28 AM
Gee Dave. Thank you for that last line because you had me scared. We must both be on the same wave today because a group who call themselves Christian just had a thing here. These people burn the flag and hate homosexuals. I am not one but I will not hate.
God bless,
Lew
Sensuality Meets Sexuality (Article) - 9/3/2010 2:28:15 PM
Dayvid, An excellent topic and one I've never thought of...sensual to me is the way a woman carries herself; her walk, way she talks etc. Sexuality is how a woman looks with or without clothing, alluring, takes good care of herself and knows the road ahead of her.
No model since Marilyn Monroe has ever been able to capture the camera the way she did...She made love to the camera everytime.
Always,
Deborah
Jesus Casts Demons to the Swine (Poetry) - 3/11/2013 3:19:02 PM
Fantastic poetry and the picture of Jesus is beautiful. Amen!
John Michael Domino
A Pair of 13s and Acid in Your Contact Case (Poetry) - 2/24/2013 8:49:03 PM
wow Dave --just read this and realized what you had gone through--I am so glad you are ok now....wow
A Pair of 13s and Acid in Your Contact Case (Poetry) - 1/16/2013 11:44:55 AM
I'm so glad you're not stumbling in darkness anymore!
Stay well and Blessings,
Christine
A Pair of 13s and Acid in Your Contact Case (Poetry) - 1/15/2013 6:32:08 PM
Goodness, Dayvid. You need to be more careful about your eyes/contact lenses. You have made a wonderful poem out of a disaster.
A Pair of 13s and Acid in Your Contact Case (Poetry) - 1/15/2013 12:58:21 AM
OH Dayvid, u got to be MORE careful, even though the eyeball may heal easily, it is still one thing you do not want to ever lose...
A Pair of 13s and Acid in Your Contact Case (Poetry) - 1/14/2013 9:24:34 AM
Praises for that! The eyeball has superior healing qualities.
Once, many years ago working in the finishing department of a mobile home factory, I got a piece of steel in my eye that was irritated immensely by my hard contacts. With a scalpel, an eye doctor deftly removed the sliver of steel. After that I didn't wear the contacts during the day in all that dust, only at night.
After returning to college in the fall, I began wearing the contacts all day for the first few days until my eyes became so irritated I went to the doctor that sold me the contacts. He told me that I had worn the surface off my cornea and that I needed to start all over after letting my eyes heal for a few days with training my eyes, a few hours at a time, to wear the hard contacts all day again.
Later, I was stopped by a County Mountie. He came up to my car, and said, “What is the matter, didn't see that speed sign back there?”
I said, “I have contacts and…”
The cop cut me off and replied, “I don't care who you know, I'm giving you a ticket for speeding.” ;-)
Ron
A Pair of 13s and Acid in Your Contact Case (Poetry) - 1/14/2013 5:37:32 AM
Well I have known eye pain and will continue to do so. I am glad that you have were given relief and that all is well. Myrna
A Pair of 13s and Acid in Your Contact Case (Poetry) - 1/14/2013 12:16:24 AM
Yuck, I had a similar thing with a chemical on the contacts that caused my eyes to burn. AGONY! Yet antibios and cream did help until I was next seen. It is a dreadful thing.
A Pair of 13s and Acid in Your Contact Case (Poetry) - 1/13/2013 4:20:35 PM
Good news...you're seeing again. I can't imagine how painful that must have been.
Cheers,
Dan
A Pair of 13s and Acid in Your Contact Case (Poetry) - 1/13/2013 3:53:27 PM
See! Drummers don't die, they just beat the vision! jesus and hopped-up visine turned to wine, pastor!
Acid metal and alice cooper's eyeliner,
Sage
A Pair of 13s and Acid in Your Contact Case (Poetry) - 1/13/2013 3:04:30 PM
Hip-Hip-Hooray for modern medicine!
Is It Real? (Poetry) - 1/5/2013 10:08:13 AM
Wow! There's a lot said in such a short spread...well done!
Cheers,
Dan
Is It Real? (Poetry) - 1/3/2013 6:07:11 PM
Points well made, Dayvid. Love, peace, and Happy 2013 to,
Regis
Is It Real? (Poetry) - 1/3/2013 5:46:30 PM
Lunatic Fringe! "Religion is the opium of the people" is one of the most frequently paraphrased statements of Karl Marx. Masses are led to believe by the neo-cheaters that every book will sell and websites can sell them for you! Well hell, it's taken me twenty years to get 5 books sold and 15 films now in Pre-production. Ask yourself where false propheting is? Bankrupt! Flooded markets and disgraced deceivers licking the empty till. Reality bites! Hea preacher, I voted for you to star in some of my films. You wanna play a preacher? Amish have some nice horse-drawn hay equipment out in the field!
Inspiration & Pink Floyd's Money,
Sage
Bi and Philo (Poetry) - 12/23/2012 9:17:43 AM
Very powerful, mainly due to the very careful and sparing choice of words. Never too many, just enough..
Chip Beregeron
Bi and Philo (Poetry) - 12/22/2012 2:53:01 PM
Very Artistic Poetry
to Water the Senses
from just a Single
drop!
Lady Vivian..
Thanking You for your
visit to my poetry site
Bi and Philo (Poetry) - 12/22/2012 12:23:42 PM
You certainly got my attention in trying to figure this out, Dayvid. Thank you for provoking thought. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Bi and Philo (Poetry) - 12/13/2012 8:55:56 AM
with the help of Sage review (there were things i wasn't quit sure of) history will and do repeat, without hope and blindly following the media the world is certainly a dark place, very interesting piece still research to do!!!!
Bi and Philo (Poetry) - 12/9/2012 7:29:42 PM
A magnified poetic essay drop in the eye of water the philosophy here is to not go dry but keep the daily grind of religion flowing as in your Denver band Denck of which I do follow with a big grin, and to not be a monotonous drip by fucked-up, uneducated generic religion nothings. Many Mennonites survived the Stalinist-Hitler terror and Holocaust and now modern-day conservative Mennos where the rub is that conservative Mennonites as a whole have not yet put into practice a world view that is attractive to both seekers and their own children and grandchildren. It's the rebel Menno preacher that will always entertain new Menno followers enticing them with that which stretches his reach out into the people's music, poetry, art, photography and charitable missions within their own cities and counties so close that need faith healers such as yourself, Day. The Menno adventure seekers is why there's heavenly head on beer at the church brothers and sisters houses and the local pub to hear Graybill's drums of Denck! Bi and Philo abbreviated but long-written history and meditation of religion into mainstream society.
Yellow Duck, Denck, and Drumsticks,
Sage
The Poison of a Broken Heart (Poetry) - 11/30/2012 5:54:25 AM
I brought my blow torch Dayvid
let's light it, after we gather the broken glass
and I will make you a gorgeous glass bead
New Visions & Glass Jewels of The Tigress Eye
Vickie
Armageddon Closing In (Poetry) - 11/29/2012 10:38:46 PM
Good thing they weren't riding a horse...
Morning Love (Poetry) - 11/29/2012 6:23:04 PM
wow-I feel like a Voyeur here-ahem-very passionate
Jesus Hope (Poetry) - 11/29/2012 6:22:12 PM
Excellent!!
The Poison of a Broken Heart (Poetry) - 11/29/2012 6:20:19 PM
Great poetry images
The Poison of a Broken Heart (Poetry) - 11/29/2012 3:58:17 PM
Gritty and earthy and all that jazz. Besides that it spoke to me. Yep, it spoke in words I could well understand.
The Poison of a Broken Heart (Poetry) - 11/29/2012 9:14:36 AM
Powerfully written...well done.
Cheers,
Dan
The Poison of a Broken Heart (Poetry) - 11/29/2012 7:31:30 AM
So poignant and riveting. Beautifully written, and oh, so true.
Ron
The Poison of a Broken Heart (Poetry) - 11/29/2012 5:12:22 AM
All I can say is wow! That last stanza? Oh my.... wel done! Myrna
Walls and Walls of Glass (Poetry) - 11/25/2012 8:43:21 AM
Dayvid...your poem reminded me of a friend's house in So. California in the a 1960's. Almost all glass, each room provided a fantastic view of the San Gabriel Valley. The bathroom was bigger than some apts. I've lived in. A huge deck in the bedrooms and living room provided such a panoramic view. The hardest job they said was keeping the windows clean.
Cheers,
Dan
Walls and Walls of Glass (Poetry) - 11/22/2012 10:40:25 AM
There are a few glasshouses out there and I love them. I love light and bringing the outside in. Unfortunately, sunlight fades bright colors on paintings, furniture, and so on… So you have to protect your valuable, colorful things from the sun. Otherwise, that's my idea of beautiful living. I plan to do that soon with a new home that will also be very energy efficient, making use of the sun to heat the house and provide electricity as well as light.
Ron
Walls and Walls of Glass (Poetry) - 11/22/2012 9:46:16 AM
I have several pair of very nice binoculars
and too a nice telescope...
and the view is nice...opps is that....?
Oh the fireside moonlight...
CONGRATS on Your Sale!
I know from FB you put allot of
love's labor into your home...
Under The Pale Moonlight & The Kissing Stars
Vickie
Where Are We Going? (Poetry) - 11/21/2012 11:59:02 AM
♫Song♫ lyrics to the tune of Ozzy or Judas Priest...drums loud and thunderous guitars metal and heavy! When Black Sabbath charted type of stuff and when Iron Butterfly smoked the stage and Alice Cooper was bat crazy!
rock, roll & sin crazy train,
Sage
Where Are We Going? (Poetry) - 11/21/2012 7:29:26 AM
We still fear the wolf. Although we love our pets, our dogs. Direct descendants from the wolf.
Ron
Head (Poetry) - 11/21/2012 5:42:29 AM
...I am lost in the wilderness
I wonder what they really did out there
Victuls Of Spiritual Beliefs
& The Juicy Fig Leaf(s)
Vickie
Where Are We Going? (Poetry) - 11/21/2012 5:39:04 AM
I Love wandering in the corn fields :)
as you already know...and too inside your poem
were I was grabbed inside the darkness
...but I brought matches & we set that field on FIRE!!
Indiana Blankets & Smoke Signals
Vickie
Where Are We Going? (Poetry) - 11/20/2012 7:28:50 PM
I love the voice in this poem, Dayvid!
What I always hope for is peace. Peace and Love :)
Happy Thanksgiving, Blessings,
Christine
Head (Poetry) - 11/18/2012 7:57:20 AM
Aren't myths fun! This is probably one that King James, the gay one, mistranslated from the ancient scripts like many more because many of the ancient words had many meetings like modern English today, and the translators just plain got it wrong, making some passages peer nonsense.
Ron
Head (Poetry) - 11/17/2012 10:17:28 PM
P o w e r f u l !
Head (Poetry) - 11/17/2012 4:03:45 PM
OUTSTANDING! But then again, you always were the Mennonite who understood the Nature of Religion might it take a turn of Scripture to pull it off! My God, what Dayvid Graybill sir name conjurs in genuflect in prayer of diversity to the Higher Power. Amen!
Leaders & Beer Chuggers,
Sage
Head (Poetry) - 11/17/2012 1:59:00 PM
Wow! That's some thought-provoking vision you have conjured up and shared via these verses, Dayvid. Love and peace,
Regis
Again? (Poetry) - 11/16/2012 3:53:38 PM
History always repeats itself and insanity defined is doing the same thing over and over...someday the government might get it...might...
Enjoyed this one.
I'm Calling You Out! (Poetry) - 11/11/2012 6:40:36 PM
powerful, flows from start to finish.
I'm Calling You Out! (Poetry) - 11/5/2012 11:31:43 AM
Standing up to all murderers, thiefs, rapists, showing love and forgiveness---Great one, Dayvid.
Deborah
I'm Calling You Out! (Poetry) - 11/5/2012 8:38:47 AM
Mighty words, indeed. Nonviolence is the way to go, but there's a certain violence in the force of your words. If you mean that you have a higher force behind you, you may be mistaken and blindsided because there is no higher force there. As Gandhi and Martin Luther King proved, nonviolence only works when you have huge throngs of people participating and some get hurt very badly.
Ron
I'm Calling You Out! (Poetry) - 11/5/2012 7:06:18 AM
Dayvid, What a powerful write to start a Monday monring...or anytime for that matter. Well done!
Cheers,
Dan
Something's About to Happen (Poetry) - 11/5/2012 4:43:26 AM
I generally don't like watching the news, it is often depressing. Nice write David!
I'm Calling You Out! (Poetry) - 11/5/2012 4:42:22 AM
Forgiveness...
I'm Calling You Out! (Poetry) - 11/4/2012 7:53:26 PM
Gutsy! Firebrand! And we call him Dayvid...a Mennonite poet who has inspired me to call religion out! This poet has written some of the finest, most honest, eclectic, and meaningful religious poetry out there today! The self-portrait brands you official renegade, Day...I love it! Your calling...
if James Dean was a Mennonite,
Rebels and Love Punches,
Sage
Something's About to Happen (Poetry) - 11/4/2012 9:08:13 AM
I know what you mean, Dayvid!
Deborah
Something's About to Happen (Poetry) - 11/4/2012 8:51:34 AM
Something like...you gotta go through the fog to see the light, eh?
Nice write,
Cheers,
Dan
Something's About to Happen (Poetry) - 11/3/2012 6:20:08 AM
Sometimes, it's better to stop and clear our heads of all the activities going on and just listen to the “sweet sound of nothing.”
Ron
Something's About to Happen (Poetry) - 11/3/2012 5:00:44 AM
Sometimes we experience events that make us write such poignant poetry! Well done my friend. Welcome back, haven't read you in a long time...Don't be such a stranger!
Peace, love and light,
Amber
Something's About to Happen (Poetry) - 11/2/2012 6:20:02 PM
An impactful experience, well-shared, Dayvid. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Christine (Poetry) - 11/2/2012 9:33:38 AM
Dayvid welcome back! Breakups are hard---a heartening write.
Deborah
Christine (Poetry) - 11/2/2012 8:10:19 AM
A most compelling, honest, and expressive sharing, Dayvid. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Christine (Poetry) - 11/2/2012 6:39:14 AM
I really like the honestly expressed and the metaphor of being “washed away” by the current.
My first thought was about some automobile in a story by Stephen King.
Ron
Christine (Poetry) - 11/2/2012 6:18:38 AM
Dayvid, it's a good thing for me, I don't respond to text's from anyone. Nice writing, no... very good writing.
Cheers,
Dan
Christine (Poetry) - 11/2/2012 1:52:19 AM
some ex's can be friends & some can be harmful
I gather this is somewhere in between letting go & hanging on?
that hurts....someone has been pushing me for many years
I finally said enough is enough
the joys in our heart need to be guarded
against negative people & their contaminant junk
they try to push & dump on us
so let's go swimming & make sand angels
Love & Treasure Hunts
Vickie
Christine (Poetry) - 11/1/2012 9:36:04 PM
Yes, the preacher's wife rocks! Say hi to Gwen. Now about Christine, that's a different story...Day thanks for sharing...get this worked out and you and me will do another collab...texts can be inspiration, and so can ex's. Stay with your music too. I know you love your drums and playing in the band...be well you and your family. Hugs.
Love and watermelon wine,
Sage
Succinct Ethnographies (Poetry) - 10/25/2012 3:40:29 AM
Excellent!! and I leanred a new word!! (Ethongraphies)
I love learning about archaic & ancient cultures, and
you are so correct too as in the interpretation
for all we know the Egyptians may or may not
have seen the first Extraterrestrial Space Traveler
and was just an Egyptian Sci-Fi Author to entertain the Kings
Our Dust Waits For The Wind T Carry Us Away
Vickie xx
Succinct Ethnographies (Poetry) - 5/2/2012 6:59:48 PM
Dayvid, I'm with Christine, but your writings are enjoyable!
Always,
Deborah
Succinct Ethnographies (Poetry) - 4/30/2012 3:50:37 PM
smooth ...
Succinct Ethnographies (Poetry) - 4/30/2012 3:49:14 PM
You explore so much philosophically in so few words!
I must admit you are quite above my head, but I enjoyed this nevertheless :)
Blessings,
Christine
Succinct Ethnographies (Poetry) - 4/28/2012 7:45:04 PM
Human culture compressed in a few words of what tiny man knows of a vast ethereal presence is narrow-minded and ignorant of the mass of creation...Dayvid this poetry is inclusive in your repertoire of theological study of the Mennonites who have long given us a history of devotion that ties us to the rich soil, the land, the crops and binds our souls to a faithful community of helping hands...Blessed Be.
Beer, drums, guitars and Mennonite barn raising
Sage
Succinct Ethnographies (Poetry) - 4/28/2012 11:26:42 AM
Certainly your words provide substance to reflect upon, Dayvid. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Succinct Ethnographies (Poetry) - 4/26/2012 12:05:24 PM
Perhaps a little too deep for my simple mind, but it's really good to see you posting something, (anything…..) again. Dick
Christmas Dove (Poetry) - 1/28/2012 10:24:02 PM
This sounded to me like it could have been Beatle lyrics. Best be calling Paul. Patrick
Christmas Dove (Poetry) - 1/26/2012 2:14:27 PM
Lovely work Dayvid.
Rose
Christmas Dove (Poetry) - 1/21/2012 8:20:08 PM
This is very nicely done, Dayvid. Welcome back! Love and peace to you,
Regis
Christmas Dove (Poetry) - 1/21/2012 11:48:49 AM
Dayvid, Another welcome back! Love in the making...
Always,
Deborah
Christmas Dove (Poetry) - 1/21/2012 8:14:50 AM
Guess we can cancel the APB, welcome back. Nice poem, mystical maybe, not quite sure I have the handle on it yet, but if I read it a few more times, I'm sure I'll get it.
Thanks Dick
Christmas Dove (Poetry) - 1/21/2012 7:00:31 AM
Your words dance beautifully across the page, balanced between tenderness and passion! Missed you.
Blessings,
Christine
Christmas Dove (Poetry) - 1/21/2012 4:45:57 AM
Dayvid,
This is stunning! Certainly have missed you. Welcome back. Such beauty in your poetry.
Peace, love and light,
Amber
Singing Peaceniks (Poetry) - 12/19/2011 3:17:27 AM
I like this poem and its layout, Dayvid
Morning Love (Poetry) - 12/10/2011 7:25:27 PM
Gotta love a DUI between the sheets, not to mention traffic school would be a pleasure. Patrick
The Honorable Doctor (Poetry) - 11/29/2011 12:33:01 PM
I know a couple of folks like that, traveling black holes of amusement. Patrick
Singing Peaceniks (Poetry) - 11/25/2011 7:59:34 PM
singing peaceniks are a mnick off the old block ...
The Honorable Doctor (Poetry) - 11/23/2011 11:51:16 AM
Dayvid, I believe most of us have encountered someone like that.
Always,
Deborah
Singing Peaceniks (Poetry) - 11/23/2011 10:16:52 AM
Well I guess they sang aboard the Titanic too. Parallels abound. Patrick
Singing Peaceniks (Poetry) - 11/23/2011 7:58:10 AM
Over the years the "Singing Peaceniks" have made some great music and it never hurts to hear the "other sides" of a story.
Like this one Dayvid. Thanks Dick
Singing Peaceniks (Poetry) - 11/22/2011 12:47:17 PM
Clever, fresh, and elegantly offbeat!
Blessings,
Chris
Singing Peaceniks (Poetry) - 11/21/2011 6:46:19 PM
And for all their singing, we are still at war 40 odd years later...maybe not the SAME war, but nonetheless...e
Sacred Text (Poetry) - 11/21/2011 4:39:46 PM
Penetrating thought of vaginal walls itching...or etching hieroglyphs (that fish symbol of christians) cast by erections high and hard as pillars of jericho. jesus sure had his hands full, didn't he?
Reading and writing on the wall,
Sage
Morning Love (Poetry) - 11/20/2011 12:31:05 PM
This reminds me of last weekend when I visited my love who is away on a work assignment for two months. Love what you've expressed via your verses here, Dayvid. Love and peace,
Regis
Jesus Hope (Poetry) - 11/20/2011 12:29:38 PM
The vivid images that you share serve to emphasize your theme. Thank you, Dayvid. Love and blessings,
Regis
The Honorable Doctor (Poetry) - 11/20/2011 12:26:20 PM
I've know profs like this. Thanks, Dayvid. Love and peace,
Regis
Sacred Text (Poetry) - 11/20/2011 12:25:32 PM
Sensually engaging... ...and thought-provoking; thank you for sharing, Dayvid. Love and peace to you,
Regis
The Honorable Doctor (Poetry) - 11/20/2011 9:34:38 AM
I love that
He digs is own
Hole
has a double meaning:)
The Honorable Doctor (Poetry) - 11/20/2011 8:14:13 AM
Sounds like that guy, Mr. Ed, just below, LOL...but really, sounds like so many teachers, they talk to hear themselves speak...e
The Honorable Doctor (Poetry) - 11/20/2011 3:53:00 AM
Sounds just like my old boss!
The Honorable Doctor (Poetry) - 11/19/2011 7:45:42 PM
This awesome poem goes by in one fabulously entertaining comic flash! :)
The Honorable Doctor (Poetry) - 11/19/2011 4:55:43 PM
Can't top Sage. Never could. Never will. Enjoyed your poem anyway.
The Honorable Doctor (Poetry) - 11/19/2011 4:53:36 PM
Sounds like ego's synonym of diarrea of the mouth. You know, Dayvid, nothing ever comes from self-centered personalities. They all have boring lives just like they speak in monotone, the same pitch, the same bunch of crap. Now give us a saddlebag doctor who talks about turpentine remedies and the religion of 1800s apothecaries and we'll sit all day and listen. Good poetry and to the point.
Love and White Cloud or Angel Soft,
Sage
Jesus Hope (Poetry) - 11/19/2011 10:59:40 AM
Dayvid, Beautifully done!
Always,
Deborah
Jesus Hope (Poetry) - 11/19/2011 9:22:41 AM
It's a tough world out there on the streets and even neon Jesus can't save them all. Patrick
Jesus Hope (Poetry) - 11/18/2011 9:39:20 PM
Dayvid, very nicely done! Certainly have missed your poetry, welcome back!!
Peace, love and light,
Amber
Jesus Hope (Poetry) - 11/18/2011 9:30:56 PM
This is good.
Jesus Hope (Poetry) - 11/18/2011 6:44:08 PM
Ain't red and blue neon BUDWEISER, Pastor!!!! Coors Extra Gold you are my redeemer Dayvid! Let's get us an endorsement. ZZ TOP Pearl Necklace around our neck! Leaning on you with Bill Withers.
Love and Heavenly Froth,
Sage
Morning Love (Poetry) - 11/14/2011 5:10:30 PM
so beautifully romantic!
Morning Love (Poetry) - 11/13/2011 5:09:32 PM
Very nice, very beautiful.
Morning Love (Poetry) - 11/13/2011 2:57:56 PM
Intoxication at it's best.
Morning Love (Poetry) - 11/13/2011 12:43:37 PM
Your words contain a potent mixture of love and intoxication...truly a pleasure to read this!
Morning Love (Poetry) - 11/13/2011 7:22:20 AM
"..As the last drops From her bottle Pour across our universe Of love." Time to open another,,,, and then another, Dayvid. Can't stop there. Eternity awaits. Dick
Morning Love (Poetry) - 11/12/2011 11:42:58 AM
Truly a romantic write well done so passionate indeed Laura
Morning Love (Poetry) - 11/12/2011 9:51:21 AM
Metaphors splashed across your face, Dayvid! Morning Love gets us to lunch. Encore!
Love and Mennonite menu,
Sage
Morning Love (Poetry) - 11/12/2011 9:35:26 AM
Dayvid, WoW, hypnotic, with tones of erotic interlude---
Excellent!!
Always,
Deborah
Magnified Reflection of You (Poetry) - 10/12/2011 3:48:00 PM
Clever chiastic in the 3rd stanza.
The Pink Floyd, dark side... really works to make the poem work.
Indeed, a lucid and unique write.
Magnified Reflection of You (Poetry) - 10/11/2011 3:29:29 PM
Dayvid, Just beautiful!
Always,
Deborah
Magnified Reflection of You (Poetry) - 10/11/2011 3:25:52 PM
Compelling reflections, and magnificent style!
Blessings,
Christine
Magnified Reflection of You (Poetry) - 10/11/2011 2:39:26 AM
Excellant writing...projects an almost conversational dialogue with reader and the world around him...
fee
Magnified Reflection of You (Poetry) - 10/10/2011 8:41:40 PM
surreal interplay of imagery and concept ...
East Colfax Avenue (Poetry) - 10/10/2011 11:10:07 AM
beautifully painted picture of the street and its atmosphere
Magnified Reflection of You (Poetry) - 10/10/2011 10:58:41 AM
very interesting write!
Magnified Reflection of You (Poetry) - 10/10/2011 5:24:45 AM
Very nice . . . Pink Floyd??
Magnified Reflection of You (Poetry) - 10/10/2011 4:55:48 AM
Very intriguing poetry. Certainly have missed you here on the den...welcome back!
Peace, love and light,
Amber
Magnified Reflection of You (Poetry) - 10/10/2011 4:13:58 AM
Both captivating and thought provoking, Dayvid.
God Hangs Out the Wash (Poetry) - 10/9/2011 7:35:05 PM
Yeah, this is a keeper.
East Colfax Avenue (Poetry) - 10/9/2011 8:54:12 AM
Wonderfully atmospheric, even haunting!
Good to see you posting, Dayvid :)
Blessings,
Christine
East Colfax Avenue (Poetry) - 10/9/2011 7:17:53 AM
It may be the longest "Main" steet, but sadly, every city has one just like it. Nicely done Dayvid, great to have you back. Dick
East Colfax Avenue (Poetry) - 10/9/2011 6:46:05 AM
Been there. Participated in the daily and nightly trashgrab.
A Preacher Wanders (Poetry) - 10/9/2011 5:53:31 AM
I think you and i know this scene all too well dave--well done
East Colfax Avenue (Poetry) - 10/8/2011 4:59:26 PM
Dayvid, You are back...Interesting poem--26 miles long!
Always,
Deborah
God Hangs Out the Wash (Poetry) - 10/7/2011 3:56:20 PM
Laundry day, baby! Good to see you back posting, Dayvid. The religion of clothespin clamps this one on tight, swaying in the heavenly breeze with the one-of-kind poetry style of Menno Graybill. I appreciate the alternative slant...this is LGBT marketable! Hugs Pastor.
Love and a shot of hard cider,
Sage
God Hangs Out the Wash (Poetry) - 10/7/2011 3:43:17 PM
and what a laundry she has....love this one David...Sue
Again? (Poetry) - 4/21/2011 11:24:15 AM
But of course. Didn't you vote for change? Patrick
Heaven (Poetry) - 4/21/2011 11:19:42 AM
Sounds like a blast. I'm told it's actually a long days drive from LA. May have to give it a shot sometime. Patrick
The Crow and the Parson (Poetry) - 4/19/2011 11:06:47 AM
Is Parson arson
the same as
Friar fire?
or just
Pastor disaster?
Patrick
Resurrection Day #2 (Poetry) - 4/14/2011 8:18:20 PM
I love your ending line, it finishes this poem superbly!
Much peace, love and light,
Amber
Resurrection Day #2 (Poetry) - 4/14/2011 5:10:22 PM
cool photo with a strong write. ~ Morgan
Resurrection Day #2 (Poetry) - 4/14/2011 10:37:50 AM
powerful write!
Resurrection Day #2 (Poetry) - 4/14/2011 6:54:50 AM
of charlatans and false-prophets, yes, washington's full of them these days: teleprompter-reading, war-mongering, wall street oligarch mascot empty suits! if i were a rat, i'd head for the sewers too, much nicer beneath the beltway!! good poem man, best wishes always!
Resurrection Day #2 (Poetry) - 4/14/2011 5:03:45 AM
Incredible and powerful imagery Dayvid!
So haunting!
Blessings,
Christine
Resurrection Day #2 (Poetry) - 4/14/2011 2:28:47 AM
Sons of prophets wonder
Why the sky falleth upon us
Quite powerful, my friend.
Resurrection Day #2 (Poetry) - 4/13/2011 2:13:19 PM
Wonderful writing indeed dear man..Hugsss
Resurrection Day #2 (Poetry) - 4/13/2011 10:16:28 AM
And not a moment too soon I might add! Great poem and photo. Patrick
Resurrection Day #2 (Poetry) - 4/13/2011 9:29:11 AM
Very well said, Dayvid.
Resurrection Day #2 (Poetry) - 4/13/2011 9:05:02 AM
You certainly have a unique view of the way things could happen, Dayvid. There is a typo in the second verse of the second stanza (nashing/gnashing). Thank you for sharing this. I love the ending in particular. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Resurrection Day #2 (Poetry) - 4/13/2011 8:07:17 AM
Truly a touching poem and words sure well told great write Laura.
The Crow and the Parson (Poetry) - 4/13/2011 5:16:54 AM
such a desolate scene, well painted
The Crow and the Parson (Poetry) - 4/12/2011 1:19:33 PM
much symbolism in this piece and very fun to read. and what tavern does God hang out in? i wanna' go there for happy hour, drinks on me of course.
The Crow and the Parson (Poetry) - 4/11/2011 12:53:35 PM
We find God in the most unusual places Dayvid!
The Crow and the Parson (Poetry) - 4/10/2011 9:13:38 AM
Truly compelling and darkly meaningful, Dayvid. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis
The Crow and the Parson (Poetry) - 4/10/2011 8:37:53 AM
Great writing indeed sweet man...enjoyed...Hugsss
The Crow and the Parson (Poetry) - 4/10/2011 3:51:48 AM
Well done a clever write indeed Laura
The Crow and the Parson (Poetry) - 4/10/2011 1:02:39 AM
that crow and god have a sense of humor. ~ Morgan
The Crow and the Parson (Poetry) - 4/9/2011 4:33:48 PM
Welcome back-loved it.
Always,
Deborah
The Crow and the Parson (Poetry) - 4/9/2011 4:21:46 PM
God is always there, next door or across the street, he keeps his eye's on us no matter where & when...e
The Crow and the Parson (Poetry) - 4/9/2011 1:17:31 PM
Sparkles with your signature style, Dayvid!
I was going to take some AD time off but had to stop by your den when I saw you came to my last poem. You have not been around for so long that...I wanted to say hi!
Christine
The Crow and the Parson (Poetry) - 4/9/2011 10:15:48 AM
You sacrilegious . . . Oops! Sorry about that. I like it. Wished I'd wrote it. May someday. Say it was mine. Naw. Don't play those games. If it ain't cold, hard cash I don't steal. Haha!!
Tomfoolery aside, this was an in-your-face good'n.
Heaven (Poetry) - 4/5/2011 5:43:29 PM
'Heaven' is not a place nor a destination. It is a stare of Being. I can feel the heaven that your are in this place of your poem. Thank you for sharing that with us.
Heaven (Poetry) - 4/2/2011 6:05:45 AM
LOvely writing sweet man..Hugsss
Heaven (Poetry) - 3/31/2011 6:51:25 AM
Never been to Moab (probably flown over it, a time or two) but Google says it's a paradise for outdoor activities, or as you call it, "HEAVEN"
You should open a travel agency.
Thanks Dick
Heaven (Poetry) - 3/30/2011 5:29:29 AM
Never been that far west, sounds neat though...e
Heaven (Poetry) - 3/30/2011 5:03:00 AM
I like it.
God bless,
Lew
Heaven (Poetry) - 3/29/2011 6:59:35 PM
You have shared the ambiance of the place and the experience very effectively with your words, Dayvid. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Heaven (Poetry) - 3/29/2011 3:26:20 PM
Loved the Rockies when I lived in Cheyenne and Denver. Still think about them.
Heaven (Poetry) - 3/29/2011 3:15:30 PM
Heavenly poem!
Arches Nat Park? Oooohh,I love that place! The beauty of a distant thunderstorm rolling across the desert as seen through the arches has a wondrous end!
Blessings,
Christine
Heaven (Poetry) - 3/29/2011 3:02:27 PM
This is full of the richness of the west...a place where I know heaven reigns. Nicely done, Dayvid.
Heaven (Poetry) - 3/29/2011 2:56:10 PM
Arches make us feel heaven's natural hard creation sheltered within Gaia's womb and when we drink beer we go with the flow. Cultures is a category of diversity, Dayvid. Cheers!
Love and the Big Jesus Beer Tankard,
Sage
Again? (Poetry) - 3/29/2011 2:44:12 PM
Great writing dear man..stay safe and well..Hugsss
Again? (Poetry) - 3/29/2011 12:42:29 PM
Very well written.
God Bless
Tony
You and Elk (Poetry) - 3/29/2011 11:09:36 AM
I can smell the fresh air. Watch out for that high altitude drinkin' Patrick
Again? (Poetry) - 3/29/2011 9:28:49 AM
Sounds like up here in Canada, Dayvid. Thanks for sharing. Love and peace,
Regis
Again? (Poetry) - 3/29/2011 7:27:58 AM
yes, we are a bit of a mess--well expressed!
Again? (Poetry) - 3/29/2011 6:48:24 AM
Sadly it is happening again, and it will happen again, and again until someone says "I'm mad as hell and I'm not going to take it any more." Your thoughts are well expressed.
Cheers with hopes for peace,
Dan
Again? (Poetry) - 3/29/2011 5:14:23 AM
Oh yes and where is that change for the better?
God bless....(we need it)
Lew
Again? (Poetry) - 3/29/2011 4:31:25 AM
A perpetual process of change...and you are so apt and eloquent here!
Christine
Again? (Poetry) - 3/29/2011 3:00:13 AM
Nero is fiddlin'
Again? (Poetry) - 3/29/2011 1:27:39 AM
Very well said, Dayvid.
Again? (Poetry) - 3/28/2011 11:11:32 PM
David, Forever changing...
Always,
Deborah
Again? (Poetry) - 3/28/2011 8:21:03 PM
yes, again unfortunately. the military-industrial complex has essentially become the state. as such, the body follows the head. no money to repair the country, unlimited funds for another CIA post-modern coup in the Middle East. thanks for covering this. hyper-inflation on the way... we're enslaved to the off-shore bankster cartel which seeks to debauch the currency, collapse the economy and buy the remaining assets of the US at firesale prices. Thank the Rothschild-Rockefeller criminal robber-barons to start with.
Again? (Poetry) - 3/28/2011 7:58:09 PM
And it will continue, Dave, I don't see any way around it...e
Life is Love (Poetry) - 3/28/2011 6:50:29 PM
Beautifully written, Dayvid.
Peace
Tony
Life is Love (Poetry) - 3/28/2011 9:55:38 AM
Okay. You managed to turn the world and life and love, never mind lust between the well-written lines of this poem. I can relate to so much.
Life is Love (Poetry) - 3/28/2011 8:12:28 AM
a beautiful write, Dayvid.
God bless,
Lew
Life is Love (Poetry) - 3/28/2011 7:39:04 AM
Creative word painting and so unique!
Blessings,
Christine
Life is Love (Poetry) - 3/28/2011 3:18:49 AM
Nicely done, Dayvid.
Life is Love (Poetry) - 3/27/2011 8:04:15 PM
Love is all! Thank you for expressing it in your own way here, Dayvid. Love and blessings,
Regis
You and Elk (Poetry) - 3/27/2011 8:41:08 AM
enjoyed!
You and Elk (Poetry) - 3/27/2011 5:36:05 AM
I bet after a night of drinking scotch that coffe tastes great.
God bless,
Lew
You and Elk (Poetry) - 3/27/2011 2:42:22 AM
A visit would be nice.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
You and Elk (Poetry) - 3/27/2011 12:29:21 AM
Great write, David.
You and Elk (Poetry) - 3/26/2011 4:54:38 PM
Very well done. I still like city life better.
Peace
Tony
You and Elk (Poetry) - 3/26/2011 1:36:49 PM
What a magical picture you have painted Dayvid! Of a day in the mountains, and a night to remember. Ooooh yeah! xx
Blessings,
Christine
You and Elk (Poetry) - 3/26/2011 1:23:15 PM
Ah, so inviting, Dayvid. It's how I feel when I turn at Twin Lakes and start up over Independence Pass to Aspen where I've seen elk many times coming down from Leadville. Be well. Blessed Be.
Love and Menno prayer
You and Elk (Poetry) - 3/26/2011 1:17:42 PM
I love the mood that your verses have created, Dayvid. Most inviting. Love and peace to you,
Regis
You and Elk (Poetry) - 3/26/2011 12:39:55 PM
Hot coffee & some brandy sounds better on the deck...:-)e
Clashing Ideals (Poetry) - 2/3/2011 9:17:36 AM
Dayvid, This is how changes occur and
how God uses us as 'pawns'. Great write!
Always,
Deborah
My Dimmed Soul (Poetry) - 2/1/2011 9:57:21 PM
Schizophrenia is like poetry. Patrick
Early Morning (Poetry) - 1/30/2011 2:12:54 PM
I really like it when I can get corned beef hash too. Patrick
Eve and God (Poetry) - 1/30/2011 2:09:59 PM
They didn't teach like this in Sunday school. If they had I might have stuck around. Patrick
Clashing Ideals (Poetry) - 1/29/2011 10:58:26 PM
It is bad enough when good ideals clash, but when stupid ideals clash we are in for a shitstorm. Patrick
Clashing Ideals (Poetry) - 1/29/2011 11:41:31 AM
Indeed, Dayvid. And your words express a universal and timeless theme of the human condition in this world/life. Thank you. Love and peace,
Regis
Clashing Ideals (Poetry) - 1/29/2011 10:14:09 AM
Ah what fools us soldiers were, for the causes we fought were lost from within.
George
It’s Over (Poetry) - 1/29/2011 8:03:56 AM
i agree with Victoria-the truth is always best! i love the truth in your write!
Clashing Ideals (Poetry) - 1/29/2011 7:47:38 AM
poignant write-well done!
Clashing Ideals (Poetry) - 1/29/2011 3:59:14 AM
I really like what Peter said!
I am taken by this visual piece
into the relationship of man and woman
involved inside their personal power struggles
we all do it (have our own perceptions)
Finding The Middles
the happy mediums
Vickie
Ray of Love (Poetry) - 1/29/2011 3:55:09 AM
one of the best places to be!!
Embracing Love
Vickie
It’s Over (Poetry) - 1/29/2011 3:53:27 AM
"She cries
He doesn’t"
If I were her, I would want to be hurt
with the truth
rather than destroyed with a lie
and this piece of heart speaking poetry
really speaks of a loving heart which
does not need to be torn...
Love's Bounty
Vickie
Early Morning (Poetry) - 1/29/2011 3:47:49 AM
I love it too
wish I could join you & talk shop
poetic shop that is!!
Saigon Cinnamon & Vanilla
Vickie
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