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Recent Reviews for Jim Corbin
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Fields of Grain (Book) - 8/7/2007 11:34:47 AM
COngratz on your book Jim..geeeeee long time no see!!
Hope all is well with you my friend!!
Love Tinka
It's Not Just A Job... (Short Story) - 4/8/2005 1:30:06 PM
Yes Sir Nice Story!!
Love Tinka
It's Not Just A Job... (Short Story) - 4/8/2005 9:36:48 AM
compelling story, jim; very well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :(
Raging Shadows (Poetry) - 5/16/2005 11:00:00 AM
This truly says it all, Jim. I agree with Kate in that we all have our reasons for writing, letting go mainly, I think. A sad, yet powerful and real write. Great work.
Jill :)
Raging Shadows (Poetry) - 5/15/2005 3:56:48 AM
Acute and graphically described, Jim. Guess we artistic-types all have degrees of such a temperamental framework - perhaps creativity is fed by it; we have, after all, to have a "disturbance" within that prompts us to write. A roller-coaster ride for sure, but having the heart pierced by the angelic shaft of warmth and abiding vision must help to keep perspective and to keep standing strong until the shadows are past again... no mountains without the valleys, I suppose. Neat and defined. TY Kate xx
Raging Shadows (Poetry) - 4/16/2005 11:44:08 AM
This is beautiful and I cried reading it...I am speechless and that never happens...
Raging Shadows (Poetry) - 4/8/2005 1:36:53 PM
Awwwwwww Jim this is beautiful my friend!!
Love Tinka
Raging Shadows (Poetry) - 4/8/2005 9:50:47 AM
i have seldom found someone who can cope with the depression for very long, i hope that you have found her...it is really hard for a person suffering from this affliction, i know, although i was diagnosed in my twenties the symptoms have been life long, i remember the depression as a child
A Christmas Blessing (Poetry) - 1/30/2004 9:08:49 AM
Yes, it was. Christmas is my favorite holiday of the year, which is why I have so many Christmas poems posted here on the Den.
The Ballad Of Captain K. (Poetry) - 1/27/2004 8:49:03 PM
Jim you did this beautifully! A delightful remembrance in the style Capt K. would haved loved!
The Ballad Of Captain K. (Poetry) - 1/27/2004 4:48:37 PM
I grew up with captain Kangaroo. Wonderful tribute!
The Ballad Of Captain K. (Poetry) - 1/27/2004 3:17:19 PM
i loved watching kaptain kangaroo on tv; oh, how i remember him! i was sad to hear of his passing; bob keeshan was a very good and gentle man who cared for children and their welfare! tv for kids has seen to fallen by the wayside; not much worth watching nowadays aside from "Sesame Street" and a few others...sad.
wonderful tribute to the captain! he will be missed by many!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :( >tears <
The Ballad Of Captain K. (Poetry) - 1/27/2004 1:45:49 PM
(((jim)))
i've missed you...captain kangaroo was my friend, too, and he shall be missed :(
beautiful tribute to a gentle soul :(
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :(
The Ballad Of Captain K. (Poetry) - 1/27/2004 1:03:37 PM
Jim, Captain Kangaroo made our childhood very special. I watched every episode that I was able too. (Even after I was married) Thanks for this very meaningful tribute to very derserving man! Lisa
The Ballad Of Captain K. (Poetry) - 1/27/2004 12:40:19 PM
Thanks for this, Jim. I loved this guy as a kid, and Mr. Green Jeans. And as Floria mentioned, we just lost Ray Rayner, too.
Two great losses; one fine tribute you've penned.
The Ballad Of Captain K. (Poetry) - 1/27/2004 12:29:51 PM
Oh yes Jim..this was such a nice tribute...I surely do remember him...my kids loved him...And now Ray Rayner too...sad...nice write..floria
The Ballad Of Captain K. (Poetry) - 1/27/2004 11:28:34 AM
Wonderful tribute Jim!!
Thanks for your kind reviews buddy!!
love Tinka
The Ballad Of Captain K. (Poetry) - 1/27/2004 11:27:17 AM
I was in my office at work and seen it on tv their it was so sad....
He was such an inspiration and wonderful welcome in the mornings....
A good babysitter before school too that moms loved....
Excellent tribute Missed you {{{JIM}}}
Lady Peg
The Ballad Of Captain K. (Poetry) - 1/27/2004 10:40:41 AM
Hey Jim, Welcome back! Yes, I, too, grew up with Captain Kangaroo and was very saddened to see that he had passed away. All of the good members of children's programming seem to be leaving us: Mr. Rogers, Shari Lewis, and now, our beloved Captain Kangaroo. T.V. for kids will never be the same. Thank goodness for reruns and syndication.
Wonderful tribute, Jim.
Much Love,
Jill :)
A Christmas Blessing (Poetry) - 12/22/2003 7:21:16 AM
I've missed you Jim, this is exquisite poetry.
A Christmas Blessing (Poetry) - 12/21/2003 6:32:57 PM
I've said it before and I'll say it again..... flawless work!! Welcome back, even if only for a little while. Have a very Merry Christmas.
Love,
Jill
A Christmas Blessing (Poetry) - 12/20/2003 9:10:47 PM
Jim your rhyme and meter are perfection, and I don't use that word lightly. I love to read your poetry. Thank you for sharing!Happy holiday's to you and yours!
A Christmas Blessing (Poetry) - 12/19/2003 10:11:04 PM
What a JOY {{JIM}}}
This is beautiful and you have been missed.
Hugs
Happy Holidays.
"Come gather ye, sweet spirits fine,
to banish thoughts that sorrow sends,
and when all living memory ends,
my life was blessed with you -
my friends."
Lady peg
A Christmas Blessing (Poetry) - 12/19/2003 2:34:39 PM
(((jim)))
now i know where you've been! i've missed you, friend
a most beautiful holiday wish and write--BRAVO, well done
(((HUGS))) and happy holidays to you and yours
love,
karla. :)
A Christmas Blessing (Poetry) - 12/19/2003 10:16:41 AM
Welcome Back!!
Insightful write Jim!!
Happy Holidays to you and your family!!
Love Tinka
A Christmas Blessing (Poetry) - 12/19/2003 8:22:27 AM
Touch of the christmas carol spirt here very nice indeed..
A Christmas Blessing (Poetry) - 12/19/2003 8:13:18 AM
This was so lovely, I have missed your beautiful poetry so much!
Reindeer
A Christmas Blessing (Poetry) - 12/19/2003 7:16:26 AM
Jim, I was so pleased to see your name appear this morning. I've missed your wonderful talents and your smiling face.
I know it's hard to manage time and spread it to meet everything, and sometimes it's just not possible. It's so good to see you. Happy Holidays Jim. Lisa
A Christmas Blessing (Poetry) - 12/19/2003 6:20:37 AM
This is a fantastic insightful write. Just thinking......balance is what is needed in all situations. When you consider the strength of love that is in the world at Christmas is it any wonder that the darker emotions become so apparent? I see your blessed with the Christmas Spirit :-)
The Death of Camelot (Poetry) - 11/6/2003 12:47:17 AM
I love the legend of King Arthur..
Camelot is one of my favorite musicals..
and yet this bespeaks not only of a grander
time or mythical place in history..
It brings back a black day in November 1963
nice flow and story told.
Donna
A Message (Poetry) - 11/4/2003 2:18:45 PM
(((jim)))
i'm awed by this one...BRAVO, dear friend
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :)
A Message (Poetry) - 11/4/2003 10:14:15 AM
Very insightful write indeed Jim!!
Love Tinka
A Message (Poetry) - 11/4/2003 7:47:20 AM
Very well done not a messenger nope a Hearalder {{JIM}}}
Peggy
A Message (Poetry) - 11/4/2003 7:44:12 AM
Jim, very well written poem. As far as the Red Sox. I've been a fan for 50 years and they always find a new way to disappoint. Guess I'm a glutton for punishment. I hope to never see the day when the battles are fought on our turf.
A Message (Poetry) - 11/4/2003 7:20:26 AM
Very insightful write.
A Message (Poetry) - 11/4/2003 6:51:50 AM
Wow! Nothing else needs to be said, Jim. Wow! How truthful and very thought-provoking.
Great work, as always. I am convinced you could not write a bad poem if you were required to do so.
Take care.
Jill :)
A Message (Poetry) - 11/4/2003 6:45:48 AM
Well penned and thought provoking.
A Message (Poetry) - 11/4/2003 5:44:04 AM
An excellent insightful write. Well penned!
A Message (Poetry) - 11/4/2003 5:39:12 AM
Jim, this is quite the awakening call. War is hell,,no matter where it is. Lisa
Princess (Poetry) - 11/4/2003 5:12:54 AM
This is one of your best.
Princess (Poetry) - 11/3/2003 3:11:40 PM
Fantastic write, Jim. Lost loves never leave us -- of this I am convinced. Been there, felt that, a few hundred times in my almost 23 years, it seems.
Take care.
Jill :)
Princess (Poetry) - 11/3/2003 12:42:09 PM
Awesome write Jim!!
"Too" beautiful!!
Love Tinka
Princess (Poetry) - 11/3/2003 12:28:59 PM
The story of real love never grows old. Beautiful poem, Jim.
Princess (Poetry) - 11/3/2003 9:26:00 AM
A very poignant poem, beautifully written.
~Chrissie
Princess (Poetry) - 11/3/2003 8:42:50 AM
A truly romantic write. Enjoyed this. Thanks for the birthday wish LOL.
Princess (Poetry) - 11/3/2003 8:22:40 AM
A beautiful dream and memory.
Princess (Poetry) - 11/3/2003 8:20:47 AM
It was not meant to be... but I know why you wonder.. only if this..only if that.. Memories.. regrets.. then we let go.. to our lives we have now.. our destiny.
Princess (Poetry) - 11/3/2003 8:19:34 AM
A beautiful sad romantic story. Great write!
Princess (Poetry) - 11/3/2003 8:17:06 AM
I got lost in this Jim! Every word captured the tender heartstrings of the true romantic! Wonderfully written piece. Lisa
Quiet Time (Poetry) - 10/31/2003 8:56:37 PM
Beautifully done, Jim. I really like this one.
Bobbi
Quiet Time (Poetry) - 10/31/2003 10:09:15 AM
Very stunning Jim!!
Love Tinka
Quiet Time (Poetry) - 10/31/2003 9:01:57 AM
Damn nice verse Jim... Damn nice...
Quiet Time (Poetry) - 10/31/2003 4:35:08 AM
A stunning write...Enjoyed!
Quiet Time (Poetry) - 10/30/2003 11:11:46 PM
Very stunning poetic work.
Quiet Time (Poetry) - 10/30/2003 6:06:31 PM
i luv the gentle fabric of a most delightful flow of imagery...
Quiet Time (Poetry) - 10/30/2003 5:23:33 PM
wow...beautiful.... Sigh...
Marlene
Quiet Time (Poetry) - 10/30/2003 3:54:29 PM
well done. beautiful.
Quiet Time (Poetry) - 10/30/2003 12:33:39 PM
Jim this is a gem of the highest quality! So good to see you back. A stunning write!
Quiet Time (Poetry) - 10/30/2003 11:54:28 AM
{{{Jim}}}}
Beaitiful, breathtaking and captivating poetry in these verses of yours!!!! A gem of gems!
~Nikki~
Quiet Time (Poetry) - 10/30/2003 10:53:55 AM
Such soothing and glorious words from your pen always, Jim. Soft spoken goodness.
Beautiful!
Jill :)
Quiet Time (Poetry) - 10/30/2003 10:31:29 AM
How beautiful and softly flowing with passion and romance. I love this one, Jim.
Quiet Time (Poetry) - 10/30/2003 10:24:16 AM
This one left me breathless in the emotions {{{JIM}}}
"Pray bring me softly to the place
Where love and passion waits for me."
Peg
Quiet Time (Poetry) - 10/30/2003 8:47:54 AM
Words of beauty, Spoken softly.
For The Blessed (Poetry) - 10/30/2003 6:42:40 AM
The bigger their warts, the better I like them.
For The Blessed (Poetry) - 10/29/2003 6:19:13 PM
A truly exceptional write. Enjoyed!!!
For The Blessed (Poetry) - 10/29/2003 4:06:47 PM
OUTSTANDING and quite frankly in this witches eyes...PERFECT!!!!
~Nikki~
For The Blessed (Poetry) - 10/29/2003 10:25:51 AM
Well written Jim!!
Love Tinka
For The Blessed (Poetry) - 10/29/2003 6:13:50 AM
Great work!
For The Blessed (Poetry) - 10/29/2003 6:00:19 AM
Fantastic write and gives me thought to a poem I will write and dedicate to you for getting me started on something that has been playing in the back of my mind. Thanks!
For The Blessed (Poetry) - 10/29/2003 5:30:02 AM
I love it too, everything about it! I'm sure all the bitches and witches will approve.
For The Blessed (Poetry) - 10/29/2003 5:24:29 AM
Jim, I loved it! I must admit, I am only a bitch 364 days a year,,,and a witch but only 1.
Great write,,truly wonderful for the season. Lisa
For The Blessed (Poetry) - 10/29/2003 5:23:16 AM
Jim, like this. We were sorta thinking on the same lines this morning.
Come n' Knock On My Door (Poetry) - 9/14/2003 6:45:24 PM
This was a beautiful tribute to a fine actor and person,
Reindeer
Come n' Knock On My Door (Poetry) - 9/14/2003 9:51:49 AM
A great tribute to a fine actor, a gentleman, and a great person.
Best regards, Jim.
Leland
Come n' Knock On My Door (Poetry) - 9/14/2003 7:48:46 AM
Wonderful tribute for a class act.
Come n' Knock On My Door (Poetry) - 9/14/2003 7:35:25 AM
Tragic
Come n' Knock On My Door (Poetry) - 9/13/2003 12:51:22 PM
John Ritter was a true comic genius. He did not stoop to dirty jokes or gestures. He was clean and fall-down-laughing-funny. He was my favorite. He was my hero. I will miss him terribly.
Come n' Knock On My Door (Poetry) - 9/12/2003 11:06:19 PM
Love this tribute Jim! He was a great guy. Like you say he's on to better things!
Come n' Knock On My Door (Poetry) - 9/12/2003 10:41:11 PM
Sigh...I loved this guy so much... he always brought a smile to my face... This is a lovely tribute.
I am also a huge fan of Johhny Cash.. may they both rest in peace..
Jenni
Come n' Knock On My Door (Poetry) - 9/12/2003 3:41:57 PM
Me too...I really like him...how sad he was so young...nice write Jim...floria
Come n' Knock On My Door (Poetry) - 9/12/2003 3:27:59 PM
Great tribute!
Come n' Knock On My Door (Poetry) - 9/12/2003 3:05:21 PM
Such a kind-hearted soul he was, Jim. One of Hollywood's true "nice guys". He never had to fake being kind. John Ritter was a great one and I was shocked this morning to learn of his tragic death. It's a real shame. My thoughts and prayers to his family and I commend you on writing a much deserved and very fitting tribute.
Take care.
Jill :)
Come n' Knock On My Door (Poetry) - 9/12/2003 1:52:46 PM
Amen. Yes.
Come n' Knock On My Door (Poetry) - 9/12/2003 1:21:55 PM
well written Jim!!
Love Tinka
Come n' Knock On My Door (Poetry) - 9/12/2003 11:11:24 AM
Poor John ritter, he couldn't even die on day all his own.
Come n' Knock On My Door (Poetry) - 9/12/2003 11:09:46 AM
Excellent write. Enjoyed. My father's fav.
Come n' Knock On My Door (Poetry) - 9/12/2003 10:56:18 AM
(((jim)))
i'm sure gonna miss him, too (and johnny cash and all of the other greats that have passed from death to life)
great tribute--well done
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :(
Come n' Knock On My Door (Poetry) - 9/12/2003 10:43:01 AM
He was one of my favorite actors. Too young to be gone. But as I always say. Ya just never know.
Thanks Jim. Lisa
It's Just Sad (Poetry) - 9/11/2003 4:34:26 AM
Jim, this is an excellent write. Love the ending.
It's Just Sad (Poetry) - 9/10/2003 7:22:38 PM
Jim! Thank you for this! an excellent write full so well expressed!I'm so sick of the news, I use it just to get headlines lately, can't stand the negative rhetoric, from every station. I do believe the anti-american faction is taking over every media outlet and skewing the news against anything patriotic! The Media caters to leftist polititions and the ACLU, protect them both! Agree with Ted on this!
It's Just Sad (Poetry) - 9/10/2003 3:58:31 PM
An unexpected ending with a powerful punch. Great write.
It's Just Sad (Poetry) - 9/10/2003 12:56:14 PM
It is sad. Yet I have a feeling that there are many, many more of us who feel as you and I do. I tried to watch the democratic candidates debate last night -- got ill, had to change the channel.
It's Just Sad (Poetry) - 9/10/2003 9:59:21 AM
well written piece Jim!!
Love Tinka
It's Just Sad (Poetry) - 9/10/2003 9:38:18 AM
AMEN! (((HUGS))) and love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. :( >tears < (remembering september 11, 2001)
It's Just Sad (Poetry) - 9/10/2003 9:02:06 AM
(((jim)))
AMEN AND AMEN--powerful, powerful write--well done
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :(
It's Just Sad (Poetry) - 9/10/2003 8:00:43 AM
Jim, Thank You! I've not read anything that touched me like this has, in a long while. I appreciate your honesty and openess and patriotism for America. Bless you and our Troops! Lisa
It's Just Sad (Poetry) - 9/10/2003 7:13:33 AM
Jim, it is indeed sad. We've lived this hell somewhere's in our lifetime. Although we don't have the range and power of the media, we will have to become the teachers. One might think, by now, that time would have taught something. It is scandalous, but good deeds do not sell newspapers or boost ratings. We are unfortunate to live in an age of the uninformed. Your poem is very truthful and enlightening.
It's just sad,- we walk on rice paper again.
It's Just Sad (Poetry) - 9/10/2003 7:01:20 AM
Jim, grat attack you post on those who attack. Your voice is heard. Bill Murray
It's Just Sad (Poetry) - 9/10/2003 5:59:29 AM
Amen Brother, though you preach here to he choir, I suggest that the greatest of all the terrorist is CNN, ABC, CBS, NBC, and let's not forget the one that takes public tax dollars but swings so far to the left when reporting the news that it can't see the center good ol' PBS. They never report the good and positive, but choose to invoke fear and disgrace on the American people. Thank God for people like you, who know the truth about this great President and our country.
It's Just Sad (Poetry) - 9/10/2003 5:45:37 AM
Amen, Jim.... Amen!
Luv ya,
Jill :)
It's Just Sad (Poetry) - 9/10/2003 5:43:22 AM
Way . . . To . . . Go!
The Death of Camelot (Poetry) - 9/4/2003 5:37:31 AM
I love this Jim, the rhyme and flow are flawless, the message timeless.
The Death of Camelot (Poetry) - 8/30/2003 5:48:37 PM
This was wonderful and so excellent, I loved it very much!
Reindeer
The Death of Camelot (Poetry) - 8/30/2003 12:17:04 AM
JIm.....excellent write...good question my friend!!!!
The Death of Camelot (Poetry) - 8/29/2003 9:23:16 PM
Camelot is certainly elusive... well done!
The Death of Camelot (Poetry) - 8/29/2003 7:05:31 PM
Splendid write Jim! We all mourn the idea of Camelot!
The Death of Camelot (Poetry) - 8/29/2003 3:08:41 PM
Fantastic write, Jim. Thanks again for saving me from the dead!
Hugs and Love.
Jill :)
The Death of Camelot (Poetry) - 8/29/2003 2:43:05 PM
(((o, jim)))
i love the flow and message therein--i, too, miss camelot
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :)
The Death of Camelot (Poetry) - 8/29/2003 1:09:38 PM
This one flowed perfectly. Great write!
The Death of Camelot (Poetry) - 8/29/2003 12:57:27 PM
Jim,
A wonderful poem of fanasty I like this one.
Lady peg
The Death of Camelot (Poetry) - 8/29/2003 11:49:36 AM
Excellent poem.
The Death of Camelot (Poetry) - 8/29/2003 11:48:17 AM
Most excellent Jim!!
Thanks for your kind reviews!!
love Tinka
The Death of Camelot (Poetry) - 8/29/2003 11:48:14 AM
Very nicely written. How sad Camelot is lost to us all.
Candida
The Death of Camelot (Poetry) - 8/29/2003 11:39:39 AM
This is an excellent write..Floreann
The Owl's Call (Poetry) - 8/25/2003 1:27:10 PM
What a truly lovely and moving poem Jim. Very personal tale of two people whose life together apparently brought them happiness and more than their share of pain. How wonderful that you could be there with your Aunt on the farm as she celebrated fifty years of days, nights, and a wealth of emotion.
The Owl's Call (Poetry) - 8/25/2003 7:38:40 AM
Wow.
The Owl's Call (Poetry) - 8/19/2003 10:22:04 PM
An excellent piece of work Jim. Bill Murray
The Owl's Call (Poetry) - 8/19/2003 7:43:03 PM
This was so lovely and wonderful to read..a beautiful tribute to someone so special in your heart..outstanding,
Reindeer
The Owl's Call (Poetry) - 8/19/2003 6:15:04 PM
Oh Jim this is truely a perfect precious write of tribute, so touched I have been by this splendid piece!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~
The Owl's Call (Poetry) - 8/19/2003 4:37:20 PM
Good god, Jim, I've got goose bumps flashing up and down my arms and neck...this is magnificent, truly a joy to read, bringing out emotions with every turn, but always with faith at its heart. I applaud you, and bow to this amazing song of heart! Have you submitted this anywhere? I've recently been sending poetry to Chicken Soup for the Soul and I think this would set them on fire!! Check out Chickensoup.com, if accepted they pay $150.00 with all your rights kept by you, but it's not about the money, Jim, this piece needs to be read by many, not stowed away where it may fade from sight... In fact, it would probably blow a similar piece I did for my husband's parents 50th Wedding Anniversary out of the water! I'd love for you to read it, if you are so inclined. It's called Amazing Strength, I presented it to them on July 23rd when we were back in Wisconsin on vacation, it brought tears to their eyes, the best accolade I could have had! Whew, man, you really got me going, really, though, I am so moved, I'm blabbing...unusual, that!? ;)
The Owl's Call (Poetry) - 8/19/2003 4:37:16 PM
This is a touching and excellent tribute. Wonderful!
The Owl's Call (Poetry) - 8/19/2003 2:46:12 PM
Beautiful tribute. Very heart touching!
The Owl's Call (Poetry) - 8/19/2003 2:41:02 PM
Jim, I know your Aunt holds these words next to her heart. They were very beautiful. ~SH~
The Owl's Call (Poetry) - 8/19/2003 2:05:25 PM
(((jim)))
another beauty--enjoyed your story-poem
excellent form, presentation, meter, rhyming...all combine to make a perfect write *BRAVO*
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :)
The Owl's Call (Poetry) - 8/19/2003 2:00:05 PM
A fabulous write, Jim! This is a charming write indeed!
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
P.S. I have sent you 2 e-mail, submitted 2 poems to your site. I hope you'll get them in time. If not, next issue will be alright with me too. :)
~ SA ~
The Owl's Call (Poetry) - 8/19/2003 11:28:20 AM
Splendid write Jim!!
love Tinka
The Owl's Call (Poetry) - 8/19/2003 10:48:01 AM
A wonderful story-poem. A pleasure to read, Jim.
The Owl's Call (Poetry) - 8/19/2003 10:10:46 AM
Great Write.
Kudos!
tony
The Owl's Call (Poetry) - 8/19/2003 10:10:02 AM
Fabulous rhyme and flow, Jim. You are a master poet and I admire your work very much.
Hugs and Love,
Jill :)
The Owl's Call (Poetry) - 8/19/2003 10:05:57 AM
jim,
an excellent job ---
it flows well -- solid craftmanship
good write
john+
The Owl's Call (Poetry) - 8/19/2003 9:05:37 AM
Jim, this is done with love and excellence. Beautiful write.
The Owl's Call (Poetry) - 8/19/2003 9:05:32 AM
An absolute joy to read. I love the rhyme and flow also.
~Chrissie
The Owl's Call (Poetry) - 8/19/2003 9:00:34 AM
This is a splendid write, a joy to read!
The Owl's Call (Poetry) - 8/19/2003 8:56:21 AM
excellent write, jim; truly enjoyed~ (((HUGS))) and love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. :)
Tona's Song (Poetry) - 8/18/2003 5:49:47 PM
A wonderful, exceptional write.
Tona's Song (Poetry) - 8/18/2003 4:21:12 PM
Jim this is such exceptional writing, so touching...a whispering lullaby!
~Nikki~
Tona's Song (Poetry) - 8/18/2003 10:08:17 AM
Very beautifully written Jim!!
Love Tinka
Tona's Song (Poetry) - 8/18/2003 9:39:46 AM
Exceptional write!
Kudos!
tony
Tona's Song (Poetry) - 8/18/2003 9:03:08 AM
lovely write, jim; thank you for posting this beautiful poem! :D (((HUGS))) and love, your texas friend, karen lynn.
Tona's Song (Poetry) - 8/18/2003 7:05:09 AM
Jim, like this. You could make it into a lullaby. Well done.
Tona's Song (Poetry) - 8/18/2003 6:44:19 AM
This touches the heart.
Tona's Song (Poetry) - 8/18/2003 6:03:55 AM
A beautiful write..Floreann *****
Tona's Song (Poetry) - 8/18/2003 5:55:49 AM
Jim, this is a beautifully thought out write. One that will touch the heart of any Mother. ~SH~
Tona's Song (Poetry) - 8/18/2003 5:52:18 AM
Fantastic write, Jim. Beautifully written and I, too, love the story tellers!
Peace and Love,
Jill :)
Tona's Song (Poetry) - 8/18/2003 5:49:06 AM
I love this Jim, exceptional write.
A Lover's Diary - The Melody (Poetry) - 8/13/2003 8:16:38 PM
Oh my Jim this read like a page from a diary or a momento etched in head and heart...absolutely breathtaking!!!!
~Nikki~
A Lover's Diary - The Melody (Poetry) - 8/13/2003 5:54:03 PM
{{{{{{{TEARS}}}}}}}
Oh this was a writing in a diary yes....
Excellent emotions flows in these verses JIM.
PJ
The Cheshire Cat (Poetry) - 8/13/2003 4:47:08 PM
*grinning*
o, jim, this is precious! well done!
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :)
A Lover's Diary - The Melody (Poetry) - 8/13/2003 1:33:38 PM
Oh!! Jim you pulled me right into this one...please read my poem"One More Time"
It flows so nicely with this one of yours!!
Love tinka
A Lover's Diary - The Melody (Poetry) - 8/13/2003 10:59:13 AM
Lovely warm read, so very well done, take care...Mark
A Lover's Diary - The Melody (Poetry) - 8/13/2003 8:27:59 AM
(((jim)))
what a joy to read this this morning--just beautiful!
(((HUGS))) and i love your website--i'll be posting some of my children's poetry on it, okay?
love,
karla. :)
A Lover's Diary - The Melody (Poetry) - 8/13/2003 8:09:07 AM
This is so beautiful!
A Lover's Diary - The Melody (Poetry) - 8/13/2003 7:50:34 AM
This made me cry, such soft passionate beauty. What a pleasure to read, and feel.
A Lover's Diary - The Melody (Poetry) - 8/13/2003 7:40:44 AM
that was wonderful to read, a loving story told in short form... great write
A Lover's Diary - The Melody (Poetry) - 8/13/2003 6:57:51 AM
Jim, awesome write. This is my all time favorite of yours. What a beautiful, gentle feeling the whole scenerio plays. This can surely captivate anyone's heart. Well done.
A Lover's Diary - The Melody (Poetry) - 8/13/2003 6:45:53 AM
Gorgeous write..Floreann
A Lover's Diary - The Melody (Poetry) - 8/13/2003 6:35:58 AM
This was so beautiful, so lovely to read this morning, outstanding,
Reindeer
A Lover's Kiss (Poetry) - 6/22/2003 5:22:32 AM
Oh this is breathtaking!! Soft sensual and romantic.
A Lover's Kiss (Poetry) - 6/21/2003 10:29:43 PM
This is such a beauty in every way, you excel in rhythm and rhyme
A Lover's Kiss (Poetry) - 6/21/2003 8:36:34 PM
Great One, Jim!
tony
A Lover's Kiss (Poetry) - 6/21/2003 7:13:20 PM
Indulgingly beautiful and sweet. A sensitive gentleness that only a strong love and man could write. This is whimsical and romantic. Truly beautiful.
Warm Love
*-Brittany-*
A Lover's Kiss (Poetry) - 6/21/2003 3:49:50 PM
Jim,
so beautiful gentle this one is.
"
If only for a moments dream,
To softly close long opened eyes,
And ride upon rose velvet skies
To where her gentle lover lies
And waits, with heart and soul serene."
Peggy
A Lover's Kiss (Poetry) - 6/21/2003 2:56:02 PM
Jim this very good!!!!
A Lover's Kiss (Poetry) - 6/21/2003 12:21:56 PM
Nice write...keep on hugging and kissing!!
A Lover's Kiss (Poetry) - 6/21/2003 12:03:29 PM
Jim I bet he'll come back for another night in her dream. This love story will then begin. Keep hugging and kissing friend. Everything will be alright. Bill
The Cheshire Cat (Poetry) - 6/20/2003 10:46:30 AM
Hi Jim...welcome Back,,,,geeezzz and thanks for this warning....I will take it IN!!
Them Cats are nasty!!!!!!!!
Love
Tinka
The Cheshire Cat (Poetry) - 6/20/2003 10:01:15 AM
{{{{JIM}}}}
I have missed you!!!!!
This is excellent yes they can be dangerous luring and very attacking.
HELLO.....
{{SMILES}}}
Lady peg
The Cheshire Cat (Poetry) - 6/20/2003 9:29:57 AM
I've known some of them kitties!! Some don't even wait til you're out of earshot to verbally attack you. Good poem.
The Cheshire Cat (Poetry) - 6/20/2003 8:12:37 AM
hahahaha...love it.
The Cheshire Cat (Poetry) - 6/20/2003 7:33:52 AM
Excellent..more please!!!hmmm...seems to me you need to stay clear of such cats...er...perhaps a mouse may interest you..No?...hmmmm
Vesna
The Cheshire Cat (Poetry) - 6/20/2003 7:32:45 AM
Wonderfully written, Jim. Thanks for all the help on my work!
Jill :)
The Cheshire Cat (Poetry) - 6/20/2003 7:13:14 AM
Jim, excellent poem. Glad to see you back. Love the rhyme and flow. Excellent story. Reminded me of a ritzy place like Beverly Hills.
Under The Gun (Poetry) - 5/3/2003 7:01:35 PM
Perfect rhyme, meter and content. And so true!
Under The Gun (Poetry) - 4/26/2003 3:43:52 AM
We have to ear right? Take a walk through the woods..or a park. Well written! :)
Under The Gun (Poetry) - 4/24/2003 4:10:33 PM
Excellent work as always, I was forced to get out from under the gun. Somehow we make it if we care enough to expend the energy to go in a different direction...
Under The Gun (Poetry) - 4/24/2003 4:07:06 PM
Hey not all us skirts are deadly! ;O)
Nicely Done!
~Nikki~
Under The Gun (Poetry) - 4/24/2003 3:37:15 PM
This was great..I work with some very arrogant people, and you have described this so perfectly!
I loved this!
Reindeer
Under The Gun (Poetry) - 4/24/2003 1:53:45 PM
Jim not only is this great reading but your meter is perfect....what a wonderful read...it just flowed....don't we all feel under the gun at times.....floria
Under The Gun (Poetry) - 4/24/2003 1:51:54 PM
well written!!
Under The Gun (Poetry) - 4/24/2003 1:10:06 PM
Enter the rat race .. enjoyed :) J & J
Under The Gun (Poetry) - 4/24/2003 1:05:02 PM
Hi Jim, Great write about the back stabbers of the corporate world.
tony
Under The Gun (Poetry) - 4/24/2003 12:22:00 PM
Okay, who's been talking to Forest Gump ?
Nicely done, Jim. Having been in the corporate world, I know of the indigestion. Bravo. A splendid read.
Under The Gun (Poetry) - 4/24/2003 11:29:17 AM
My philosophy: A bad day's fishin' is better than a good day's workin'! Great write!!
Jill
Under The Gun (Poetry) - 4/24/2003 9:48:03 AM
would love to chat, but can't being one of those "skirts" my ownself no can do, gotta blow some smoke off my gun ha
Under The Gun (Poetry) - 4/24/2003 9:16:51 AM
Jim, really excellent. Those hours of critique had to help some. (lol)You have to know which side your bread is buttered on. Such is life for most.
Under The Gun (Poetry) - 4/24/2003 9:04:43 AM
Excellent write
You told it like it
is, my friend.
~~Linda~~
Under The Gun (Poetry) - 4/24/2003 8:54:01 AM
LOL... Great poem to read while i'm here at work, can more than relate :)
--Karissa
Under The Gun (Poetry) - 4/24/2003 8:40:23 AM
Boy do I understand this one,, I feel like I am always under the gun. Great write. Take it in stride!
Under The Gun (Poetry) - 4/24/2003 8:25:23 AM
Great write...
Trixie :)
Under The Gun (Poetry) - 4/24/2003 8:02:00 AM
work sux, plain and simple... very good write...
Under The Gun (Poetry) - 4/24/2003 7:40:56 AM
Jim}}}}}
Yes it is and it is a tough one to do all of the above but you penned the
antedote to making it a little bit
easier.
Hugs morning
Peg
Under The Gun (Poetry) - 4/24/2003 7:40:26 AM
That is why I am self employed, I like to know whose finger is on the trigger and if the damn thing is loaded.
Lady Belle (Poetry) - 4/23/2003 12:55:01 PM
You write with expertise Jim and I enjoy all of it, you should do well with children's stories, never say never;-)!
Lady Belle (Poetry) - 4/23/2003 12:45:13 PM
fine job there
i tried this once ended up with a bunch of short little "diddies for kiddies" buried somewhere in my pile, actually showed them to a publisher at a writers conference she said "these are good, but not great. If you could just come up with an overall theme character we might could do something with them" alas they stay buried. check em out ifn you the time or inclination.
Lady Belle (Poetry) - 4/23/2003 12:45:03 PM
absolutely beautiful !!
Lady Belle (Poetry) - 4/23/2003 10:08:55 AM
I'll read this to my Ashleigh Rae....She'll love it....you've a lovely way with words Jim...Ty, Dani
Lady Belle (Poetry) - 4/23/2003 9:34:26 AM
Ahhh, this is sweet. I think everyone remembers mother say "wake up or you will be late for school." I sure heard it often enough. [smiles] Bravo.
Lady Belle (Poetry) - 4/23/2003 8:36:38 AM
An absolutely beautiful child's story ...I'll echo the others and say what a very versatile writer you are.
Chrissie
Lady Belle (Poetry) - 4/23/2003 8:32:57 AM
pure gold! :) (((HUGS))) and love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. :)
Lady Belle (Poetry) - 4/23/2003 8:17:49 AM
Beautiful sharing of a wonderful dream :-)
Lady Belle (Poetry) - 4/23/2003 8:08:04 AM
Jim, I thought this was awesome. Love the flow. Everything just melted into itself. Great job.
Lady Belle (Poetry) - 4/23/2003 7:35:23 AM
This is perfect!
Jill
Lady Belle (Poetry) - 4/23/2003 7:20:04 AM
I love this and I agree with everyone, you are such a versatile writer.
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