Recent Reviews for Toni Davis
Echoes of a Dream (Short Story) - 1/15/2007 5:20:51 PM|
A very interesting and well-written story. I liked it. A lot.
Indelible Stain (Short Story) - 11/6/2006 1:09:25 PM
I remember it well...born and raised in the OHIO area.
Pillar of Salt (Short Story) - 12/8/2004 11:04:58 AM
This one got me hooked and you should keep going with this one. This one has the taboo about being dark about that day in there somwhere; if you want to play around with it -- try to see how dark you want to get with this one, the delivery is there. This story is one that will be a masterpeice if it isn't one already.
The Death Sitter - A Drabble (Short Story) - 12/3/2004 8:31:58 AM
That must have been awful! I am praying for you today, and I pray God gives you peace after witnessing such a horror! God bless you; thank you for sharing this gripping, taut story! Well done, Toni!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( >tears <
The Death Sitter - A Drabble (Short Story) - 12/2/2004 9:27:08 AM
And now I'm crying. That was poignant...heartfelt. Thanks for sharing, April
The Death Sitter - A Drabble (Short Story) - 12/1/2004 9:18:30 PM
Peace to you Toni...
D a n a oxo
Pillar of Salt (Short Story) - 11/8/2004 8:12:52 PM
So, you are still writing... and doing it very well I might add.
As far as continuing, the first thought that came into my head
when I finished was, well, what happened to her next? Where did Tovi take her and how did she find out what was happening? Or did she? Was he the one who explained to her what was transpiring or
did she learn of it later?
I'm not sure if that helps... but you had me hooked. My curiosities were piqued as to the natural order of what happened to her next; her next memories if you will.
T C Toni -- D a n a
Huginn and Muninn (Poetry) - 11/5/2007 3:05:57 PM
Very startling imagery, Toni. A lovely and disturbing write.
Huginn and Muninn (Poetry) - 10/20/2006 8:18:25 AM
Enjoyed the great imagery.
You take the reader along with you.