Like Gnats (Poetry) - 9/10/2010 6:38:02 AM
I enjoyed this! I love the part about the why the sky is blue ironically we claim we feeling blue all the time. That's crazy! but I would say your message is right on because we do not have time for each other. I've experienced this in a lot of my relationships and hell I'm not even married. It seems we all trying to grind for stuff thats temporary and we gonna spend most our life working trying to make a dying instead of a living. It's a shame but maybe we can turn it all around and your poem gives a lot of hope to encourage us to live each second to the fullest! Again Great Read and God bless!