Recent Reviews for Morgan B Merriweather
In the Garden (Poetry) - 12/7/2013 7:20:56 PM|
cryptic scents of a magical moment steer you poem craftily ,,,
In the Garden (Poetry) - 12/6/2013 12:20:20 PM
I've often wondered about the true source of all those lovely, freshly released garden scents, Morgan, and now you have given me answers. There is so much more to gardens than meets the naked eye. Lovely mystery and mysticism here. xx
In the Garden (Poetry) - 11/26/2013 12:22:45 PM
Deeply compelling and meaningful, Morgan. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes,
Mist (Poetry) - 11/26/2013 7:30:26 AM
Wonderful...enjoyed it most :)
Best wishes, neerja
In the Garden (Poetry) - 11/25/2013 11:52:04 PM
Life can be a rose filled with thorns. Well done and expressed Morgan!
In the Garden (Poetry) - 11/23/2013 7:00:19 PM
So sad, Morgan. We all have our own thorns holding us down. Enjoyed!
Love and blessings,
High Flight (Poetry) - 11/23/2013 3:46:43 PM
Thank You, Morgan, for sharing
such inspiration!!!! applying
to any Day..letting Freedom fly
November (Poetry) - 11/23/2013 2:20:43 PM
Nostalgia so tangibly written!
In the Garden (Poetry) - 11/23/2013 5:56:15 AM
so well done and expressive
In the Garden (Poetry) - 11/22/2013 5:25:08 PM
This one luxuriates in itself, kind of like a wallow in the pain...
In the Garden (Poetry) - 11/22/2013 4:54:21 PM
In the Garden the veiled wings envelope her soul.
A tale of sheer depth in sadness for this sweet fairy.
Beautiful renderings and lovely sketch by michael parkes.
Lady Mary Ann
In the Garden (Poetry) - 11/22/2013 9:46:21 AM
Sad that so many go through life never realizing how their actions and behavior have the ability to slowly, but surely, reduce the breath rate of another. Beautifully rendered.
In the Garden (Poetry) - 11/22/2013 9:37:41 AM
This fairy's inability to escape such a demise saddens me. Great play on words here.
In the Garden (Poetry) - 11/22/2013 8:47:21 AM
Methinks she is so fragile that she fades away from the mirror thought of being trapped.
Wonderful image and written imagery.
In the Garden (Poetry) - 11/22/2013 8:11:21 AM
She leaves without the joy of sharing her inner beauty as it fades within. Powerful metaphor.
Sombre poem, written with a lonely tone.
In the Garden (Poetry) - 11/22/2013 5:04:35 AM
Stunning bit of wordplay here. I have it fixated in my mind the tragedy unfolding. Smelling the "fragrance in the shadows" and it smells like decaying leaves where the angel will repose.
In the Garden (Poetry) - 11/22/2013 3:10:16 AM
Your words give such a view to the tragedy
of this poor Fairy and more in the sentiment...
Love and Light,
In the Garden (Poetry) - 11/21/2013 10:03:09 PM
You say so much in just four lines! GREAT!
In the Garden (Poetry) - 11/21/2013 9:26:26 PM
Four lines of sheer bliss
In the Garden (Poetry) - 11/21/2013 8:54:28 PM
Marvelous poetry that grabs your attention to the marvelous sketch by Michael Parkes and how you make it shine with your words.
In the Garden (Poetry) - 11/21/2013 8:51:58 PM
profound and beautifully composed
Peace be with you
Elation (Poetry) - 11/15/2013 8:30:25 AM
"In a sudden thrust of a freefall" Your poetry is on fire! To know love like this...ah, the wonder of it all!
Joy L. Hale
High Flight (Poetry) - 11/15/2013 7:30:16 AM
Taking the lofty idea and wordsmithing it into palpable and inspiring verse. Thank you.
High Flight (Poetry) - 11/14/2013 2:52:40 AM
Very nice, indeed!
High Flight (Poetry) - 11/13/2013 6:14:04 AM
High Flight (Poetry) - 11/12/2013 10:24:38 PM
I would hear this each night at the end of the broadcast day so fitting so beautiful even still
Elation (Poetry) - 11/12/2013 12:56:35 PM
Interacting with fire
Love does not burn...
High Flight (Poetry) - 11/12/2013 10:04:08 AM
I loved how John Denver sang this. That was how I first heard it and became so touched by this amazing write.
Thank you for sharing!
High Flight (Poetry) - 11/12/2013 8:17:31 AM
A most wonderful poem about the freedom of flight granted to warriors in warplanes as well as peacetime explorers of the heights.
High Flight (Poetry) - 11/12/2013 7:40:01 AM
A Veterans Day piece that resonates to the heart.
High in the sunlight silence.
"Put out my hand and touched the face of God."
Lady Mary Ann
High Flight (Poetry) - 11/11/2013 8:48:09 PM
O How lovely Morgan ,The last line says it all....The good God made them all- inspiring words, Jk
High Flight (Poetry) - 11/11/2013 6:32:30 PM
Thank you for posting this memorable story on Veterans Day. I have read it before, but it brought to mind the famous last line..."Put out my hand and touched the face of God." So powerful. This is the writing of a hero touched by the wings of an angel.
Joy L. Hale
High Flight (Poetry) - 11/11/2013 5:52:15 PM
This poem hangs on the walls where it captures the imagination of ground crews and fighter pilots alike across the far reaches of this planet. Inspired by angels and penned by a lad of 19 years. He lost his life over England in WWII.
High Flight (Poetry) - 11/11/2013 5:02:25 PM
Stunning. Is Douglas Bader only a hero in the UK or did the yanks know of him and his winning tactics, even after losing both legs, he still fought in the Spit until shot down and, was the ever annoying prisoner...
November (Poetry) - 11/9/2013 9:46:51 PM
Thanks and best wishes, neerja
November (Poetry) - 11/9/2013 9:15:10 PM
The beauty of nature like wordsworth you capture so well- roseline
November (Poetry) - 11/9/2013 12:32:39 PM
You've wrapped November up in a few short words… Let's go hunting.
November (Poetry) - 11/9/2013 11:47:34 AM
November turns into December - a thrilling time of the year. And with the new year comes a new start - hopefully.
November (Poetry) - 11/9/2013 11:47:01 AM
I love the descriptors in this...the imagery takes me so many places
November (Poetry) - 11/9/2013 9:54:26 AM
Renewing a Norman Rockwell keepsake. Loved it.
November (Poetry) - 11/9/2013 8:23:23 AM
You decriptives in this piece are great! I can almost feel the textures!
November (Poetry) - 11/9/2013 5:44:18 AM
Could be by Maine Vermont New Hampshire,yeah very true thanks jerry
November (Poetry) - 11/8/2013 5:28:32 PM
Love this my friend, really "see" everything and I smile as I do. Been many, many years since I've worn a red checkered flannel. May go look for one. his is a goody, and I'm-a saving it.
Elation (Poetry) - 11/6/2013 5:50:17 PM
Woww...simply loving !!!
Elation (Poetry) - 11/6/2013 2:21:02 PM
I can feel the free-fall with his heart in my hand.
Beautiful with passion unleashed.
Lady Mary Ann
Elation (Poetry) - 11/5/2013 1:12:59 PM
Oh, baby! You got me in the first line!
Elation (Poetry) - 11/5/2013 9:03:06 AM
...right from your first simile to the last white hot symbol, this poem sizzles with more than a modicum of meaty meaning... nothing short of total immersion in the object of your passion... good gig if you can get it...
Elation (Poetry) - 11/5/2013 9:00:47 AM
OMG! Would I love to meet someone like that! Abandoning everything for the burning desire of the flame!
Elation (Poetry) - 11/5/2013 7:40:08 AM
As your poem exemplifies, enigmatic conundrums remain the abstract world most willing to be evaluated and explored. This is no exception.
Elation (Poetry) - 11/5/2013 5:04:26 AM
NOW I have a favorite of yours.
I see the light.
Elation (Poetry) - 11/5/2013 3:33:14 AM
Elation (Poetry) - 11/4/2013 11:08:19 PM
Beautiful expression of the artist in you painting with your feelings!!-
Elation (Poetry) - 11/4/2013 5:20:53 PM
Damn! Tell it like it is and then some. I like this, and what it represents. Yes!
Soccer (Poetry) - 11/3/2013 9:20:54 PM
Score the point..
Soccer (Poetry) - 11/2/2013 5:36:50 PM
I like to think of the "demons between" as a kind of muddle-of-the-road mediocrity we should all avoid at all costs... unfortunately, as the "lingering fog" shrouds and obscures our view, sometimes it is only mediocrity that appears as an "empty goal" before us and our "effortless" efforts make those goals both certain and vain. Your poem is so allusive and alive with potential. Superbly crafted, Morgan.
Soccer (Poetry) - 11/2/2013 9:52:24 AM
Beautiful metaphoric lesson for all to heed as the reality some bury, others embrace.
Soccer (Poetry) - 11/2/2013 8:21:41 AM
It is nice to be in solitude and use your
imagination as you wish. I enjoyed, Morgan.
Soccer (Poetry) - 11/2/2013 6:05:17 AM
I enjoyed this one a lot! Thank you.
Soccer (Poetry) - 11/1/2013 9:35:10 AM
Really put me in the mood to kick it.
Soccer (Poetry) - 11/1/2013 8:04:13 AM
Wonderful analogy of life facing the approaching winter.
Soccer (Poetry) - 11/1/2013 3:59:20 AM
A brilliant move of the soccer ball and the demons are conquered.
Finger's crossed. Remembering grandson Codey playing soccer.
Lady Mary Ann
Soccer (Poetry) - 11/1/2013 3:55:19 AM
It seems everyone has their own set of demons. The trick is to disarm them. We can never quite kill them, so disarming them is the way to fight them.
Soccer (Poetry) - 11/1/2013 2:21:48 AM
we should all conquer them
Hot Day (Poetry) - 10/29/2013 8:50:50 PM
You seem to be swaying with the heat , well expressed, thanks for this-roseline
Another Sky (Poetry) - 10/29/2013 7:33:07 PM
beautifully crafted lines and the meanings powerfully brought across
Another Sky (Poetry) - 10/28/2013 4:35:51 PM
Loved how the wordsmithing merged the real and the imagined, brought the warrior to coalesce with the dove's wing, understanding there is a oneness to everything, unless, of course, you choose to be unconscious. Well done, Morgan.
Another Sky (Poetry) - 10/23/2013 11:48:04 AM
Loved the ride, Morgan
within depth of thoughts
Another Sky (Poetry) - 10/22/2013 2:30:36 PM
Beautiful poetry. A flowing mane peaceful as a dove's wing,
riding in on your white horse from another sky. Enchanting.
Lady Mary Ann
Another Sky (Poetry) - 10/22/2013 6:45:46 AM
I love the lines you used in this work Beautiful is the last line
Another Sky (Poetry) - 10/21/2013 11:55:56 AM
absultely a gem of a write
Love & peace be with you
Another Sky (Poetry) - 10/21/2013 9:20:52 AM
This is enchanting! I will read it many times. In fact, I'll save it.
Another Sky (Poetry) - 10/21/2013 3:48:16 AM
Wow, this is cool.
I'll be reading this for quite a while- taking it all in.
It is what it is.
Another Sky (Poetry) - 10/21/2013 2:27:13 AM
Another Sky (Poetry) - 10/20/2013 3:58:42 PM
Save me, not as a fierce warrior in a chariot,
but with a flowing mane peaceful as a dove’s wing,
riding in on your white horse from another sky
I love these verses in particular but the whole poem is most meaningful; thank you for sharing this gift, Morgan. Love and best wishes,
Another Sky (Poetry) - 10/20/2013 3:39:29 PM
Ahhh . . . The guy riding in on that fabled white horse to save the day, I desperately hope he arrives in time.
Liquid Flight (Poetry) - 10/10/2013 11:32:32 AM
This has to be the most romantic phone call of all time!
OK I guess I've just revealed the difference between a poet and an economist. :)
Liquid Flight (Poetry) - 10/10/2013 8:16:10 AM
of beauty, Morgan
Liquid Flight (Poetry) - 10/8/2013 6:07:46 PM
Let it be so. Your verses inspire me and give me hope, Morgan. Love and best wishes to you,
Liquid Flight (Poetry) - 10/7/2013 9:57:29 PM
a beautiful piece thanks for sharing this wonderful read
Love & Peace be with you
Liquid Flight (Poetry) - 10/7/2013 7:31:44 PM
What a beautiful work this is, Morgan
Liquid Flight (Poetry) - 10/7/2013 8:58:38 AM
Liquid Flight (Poetry) - 10/7/2013 8:02:37 AM
Lady Mary Ann
Liquid Flight (Poetry) - 10/7/2013 5:34:14 AM
Levitating the weight that so often pins us down, allowing the breath of imagination to flourish as simple spirit, lifts this piece into the essence of sublime.
Liquid Flight (Poetry) - 10/7/2013 4:53:52 AM
so nicely put together
Liquid Flight (Poetry) - 10/7/2013 3:40:03 AM
Well constructed poetry, Morgan. Always keep the attitude that true love is there as you turn the corner in you journey in this life.
Liquid Flight (Poetry) - 10/7/2013 2:26:51 AM
i hope you are found
Liquid Flight (Poetry) - 10/7/2013 1:45:51 AM
Very sweet images.
This was a wonderful Monday morning heart lift.
Liquid Flight (Poetry) - 10/6/2013 11:30:59 PM
Oh, how beautiful! I can just visualize this poem as if you had painted a picture............and such a lovely one!
Slower than the Speed of Sound (Poetry) - 10/3/2013 11:44:27 AM
Some never face real life, maybe stuck in the clouds is a better attitude? Well penned Morgan, enjoyed.
Heart (Poetry) - 9/28/2013 11:50:37 AM
THE FRAGILITY OF HAPPINESS IS TOTALLY EXPOSED WHEN NATURE 'CONNECTS' WITH THE TRUE PURPOSE OF ITS EXISTENCE; WHICH IS TO ESCALATE THE HEART TO ITS HIGHEST LEVEL OF CONTENTMENT AND APPRECIATION, THUS PRODUCING JOY...THE MIRACLE OF HOPE! I TOLD YOU...'YOU' TAKE ME THERE, MORGAN. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Slower than the Speed of Sound (Poetry) - 9/28/2013 11:34:27 AM
SOMETIMES WE NEED A 'LIFT'. IT MIGHT BE A SONG OR MELODY, OR A BOOK, OR...A POEM - MAYBE JUST A PHRASE. BUT WE ALL NEED SOMETHING! BECAUSE...IT'S NOT EASY...LIVING - FACING DISAPPOINTMENTS TIME AFTER TIME. AND THOUGH OUR INABILITY TO FACE THE PAIN OF BROKEN DREAMS ARE SOMETIMES ALLEVIATED BY THE REALITY OF WHAT'S REALLY GOING IN THE WORLD(WHICH IS MUCH WORSE)...STILL, IT'S EASIER(WHAT WITH ALL THE 'AVENUES' MODERN TECHNOLOGY HAS AFFORDED US)TO GO 'SAILING ALONG'(STUCK) ON MAKE BELIEVE CLOUDS. YUP...THAT'S WHY I KEEP TRYING TO TELL EVERYBODY; THE ONLY THING 'REAL' IS JESUS! MORGAN, YOU KNOW I HAD TO GO THERE. ALWAYS A PLEASURE TO READ 'YOU'. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Slower than the Speed of Sound (Poetry) - 9/27/2013 5:10:34 PM
excellent enjoyed the read
Peace be with you
Slower than the Speed of Sound (Poetry) - 9/27/2013 9:47:32 AM
Wistful drifting over these images- some becoming clear to me.
Finding what I need lately.
Slower than the Speed of Sound (Poetry) - 9/22/2013 4:56:23 PM
Excellent movement "stuck".
Lady Mary Ann
Slower than the Speed of Sound (Poetry) - 9/21/2013 8:10:15 PM
Looking for love in all the wrong places..
Slower than the Speed of Sound (Poetry) - 9/21/2013 9:40:03 AM
As my latest few hours of writing addresses as well, delusions are for those with consciousness asleep. Well penned succinct warning.
Slower than the Speed of Sound (Poetry) - 9/17/2013 7:49:24 AM
An eclectic vision. Why I like your poetry so much. Got me thinking about my ex-wife… wannabe beauty queen. During our courtship I sent her handwritten letters and poems. She sent me a drugstore card every day.
Slower than the Speed of Sound (Poetry) - 9/17/2013 2:15:22 AM
many have been like that
Slower than the Speed of Sound (Poetry) - 9/16/2013 5:46:38 PM
Ah, all that ambition on those drugstore shelves will bring about beauty queen scenes........"hose memorialized fictitious lives".....
Slower than the Speed of Sound (Poetry) - 9/16/2013 4:03:09 PM
Beautiful work...not lost in the cloud(s)
Slower than the Speed of Sound (Poetry) - 9/16/2013 3:34:22 PM
As I read for the second time, you have me thinking, Morgan. Love and best wishes to you,
Slower than the Speed of Sound (Poetry) - 9/16/2013 3:26:06 PM
We make our memories when and how and where we can. Even if we have to lie about them, they still ring a smile to her faces as we lie there in the dark.
Heart (Poetry) - 9/12/2013 3:39:17 PM
You've reached inside the biological to extract an ethereal appreciation of love's reserved reward for those who will pay attention.
Heart (Poetry) - 9/11/2013 6:31:45 PM
Heart (Poetry) - 9/10/2013 9:52:08 PM
Music from the heart casting
overflowing mountain stream..
thanks for the sharing, Morgan
Heart (Poetry) - 9/10/2013 6:07:08 AM
Hearing and seeing the beautiful arrangement of wordplay, an amazing write Morgan!
Hope is the beat of our hearts these days...
Heart (Poetry) - 9/9/2013 3:24:41 AM
very well done
Heart (Poetry) - 9/8/2013 9:22:17 AM
A pretty piece of imagery... sensitive and sonorous... nicely done!
Heart (Poetry) - 9/8/2013 7:54:12 AM
I was picturing a mountain stream with its water trickling down… the sound always hopeful and pleasant in the autumn air.
Couldn't seem to put the “heart” in it.
where (Poetry) - 9/8/2013 7:15:25 AM
My friend..beautiful the walks in sync.
Sweet renderings for inspiration.
Lady Mary Ann
Heart (Poetry) - 9/8/2013 7:10:52 AM
Music so charming for the heart..hope for all things.
Lady Mary Ann
Heart (Poetry) - 9/8/2013 5:28:14 AM
I can hear and see it all right now. I love to go sit down by the river during autumn to enjoy what you have described to a "T". Beautiful!
Heart (Poetry) - 9/8/2013 4:15:06 AM
As long as there is hope within, the heart can overcome its deleterious ways.
Heart (Poetry) - 9/7/2013 8:22:19 PM
Your poetic thoughts much like the sound of music , the words rsonate powerfully
where (Poetry) - 9/4/2013 12:24:25 PM
Trippin' we go as we read
not displaced by time..
where (Poetry) - 9/3/2013 2:21:03 AM
very well done
where (Poetry) - 9/1/2013 7:50:12 PM
I love tales about the the ocean shore.
I love poetic stories even more.
Your poetic adventure touched me to the core.
Multiple Blessings to you Morgan, you poem, I adore!
John Michael Domino
where (Poetry) - 9/1/2013 4:27:33 PM
This piece suggests the phenomena of inspiration is most often not where we direct our attention, but where the unknown sneaks up on us from behind.
where (Poetry) - 9/1/2013 2:07:10 PM
I hope your friend wants to go to the arctic circle to watch the Northern Lights. I had fun traveling with you. Thank you!
where (Poetry) - 9/1/2013 12:22:12 PM
...inexplicably unique... a roundabout adventure in few words... enjoyable itinerary of rare delight!
where (Poetry) - 9/1/2013 10:14:08 AM
Ahhh . . The phantom friend . . . I liked your excursions, especially the "to be on city time" one. Well, this is one phantom friend who delights in you poetry so I'm staying right here wherever it takes me.
That's Funny (Poetry) - 8/31/2013 11:13:54 AM
good the medicine..
That's Funny (Poetry) - 8/29/2013 1:07:48 PM
HA HA!! YEa!!
We all need more moments like this.
Thank you Morgan!
That's Funny (Poetry) - 8/29/2013 1:00:19 PM
Sweet precious the laughter and giggles of children!!
Thank you for this belly laughter and fun!
Lady Mary Ann
That's Funny (Poetry) - 8/29/2013 10:36:45 AM
Children bring out the best in us. I couldn't help but laugh as I was reading this. Very good!
That's Funny (Poetry) - 8/29/2013 7:40:46 AM
Laughter is infectious. Ever noticed that when someone is laughing uncontrollably, other people can help laugh along? When one is close to a children's playground you can hear laughter ringing out constantly as they play. If only adults can do that, we'd all be happier.
That's Funny (Poetry) - 8/29/2013 2:16:08 AM
cute and cool
That's Funny (Poetry) - 8/29/2013 1:51:59 AM
I would go out on a limb and not question the fact that THAT was funny.
That's Funny (Poetry) - 8/28/2013 5:44:42 PM
cute write and child
Love & Peace be with you
Renewal (Poetry) - 8/27/2013 3:58:55 PM
Wonderful metaphoric romp into disparate realms of the "changes conundrum." Indeed, why? Being a firm believer in all of life is paradoxical in essence, it doesn't confound me that your depiction would suggest nothing is as it seems, until you delve into the subtext of that which tries to appear empirical. Oh how we try to foster pedantic and steel-forged meaning into the nature of change and multiple meanings of so many misnomers. Few elements are not paradoxical, i.e., the triangle et al.
Renewal (Poetry) - 8/26/2013 12:22:29 PM
The seasons for chase to renewal.
Lady Mary Ann
Renewal (Poetry) - 8/26/2013 5:01:29 AM
very welll written
Renewal (Poetry) - 8/25/2013 11:12:17 AM
Relying on each other,
answers to beget..
Renewal (Poetry) - 8/24/2013 3:51:40 PM
A poem of pure delight and majestic imagery.
Indeed, autumn does seem to be too short in sharing it's momentary beauty.
Renewal (Poetry) - 8/24/2013 2:53:55 PM
Love the exuberance in this... the contrasts and the energy, resignation with an air of optimism... I opt for renewal!
Renewal (Poetry) - 8/24/2013 9:07:28 AM
Nature teaches us a lot. If we follow the seasons, we can be renewed every year. On the other hand, if you're stuck in Houston with two seasons, it's hard to renew again.
Renewal (Poetry) - 8/24/2013 8:35:23 AM
The seasons are like a color show for sure until winter comes along and lets everything rest up for the next show under a soft blanket of white.
someday you'll fade away (Poetry) - 8/23/2013 8:54:16 PM
The uniqueness of YOU, Morgan
Renewal (Poetry) - 8/23/2013 6:32:43 PM
Ah, a case of once bitten twice shy...beginnings after endings to begin again, Morgan. The cycle of the ouroborous...Renewal indeed.
Renewal (Poetry) - 8/23/2013 5:46:38 PM
Substance to reflect upon; however, for me, autumn seems to connect right into my soul. Your verses remind of that and they also remind me vividly of my childhood and loving the wood in the very bried fall of northern Alberta. Winter dominated there. Thank you, Morgan. Love and best wishes,
Renewal (Poetry) - 8/23/2013 4:41:08 PM
Ah, I'd get a headache trying to come up with the answers to your questions. It's just easier to say that's just the way they are. Gotta watch that giddy, pigtailed girl. She's a fireball
someday you'll fade away (Poetry) - 8/20/2013 4:23:01 PM
Astute and insightful of that which most would shy away from. Wonderful.
someday you'll fade away (Poetry) - 8/17/2013 6:13:52 AM
I love the simplicity the creativity and the sentiment!
Very nice my sweet friend!
Love and peace,
someday you'll fade away (Poetry) - 8/16/2013 11:35:56 AM
how clever...very much liked this
someday you'll fade away (Poetry) - 8/16/2013 11:09:21 AM
Reminds me of something other than a raindrop. ;-)
someday you'll fade away (Poetry) - 8/16/2013 6:04:21 AM
Clever you! I enjoyed the style. None of us get out of this alive.
someday you'll fade away (Poetry) - 8/15/2013 5:03:48 PM
Unique concrete poetry to express your message, Morgan. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes,
Shelter (Poetry) - 8/14/2013 11:18:50 AM
Oh my this is sensual perfection, Morgan.
The Porch (Poetry) - 8/3/2013 4:47:31 PM
There is an every man/woman sense to this interruption of what seems to be an anticipation of total relaxation and peace. But, hey, anyone who's bought into the Long Island get-a-way for the summer knows--unless you're Montauk Point bank-rolled--the summer experience is a crap shoot.
The Porch (Poetry) - 8/2/2013 8:05:40 AM
Lov'n the imagey and poetry 'musty summer rental'...hilarious...
Close to the beach is good..OopS!! on the slimy outdoor shower cement
after the beach!! A few summer's ago.
Lady Mary Ann
The Porch (Poetry) - 8/1/2013 3:03:53 PM
Morgan, This is well done, descriptive, and one of your best!
I thoroughly enjoyed!
The Porch (Poetry) - 8/1/2013 5:52:04 AM
Fun poem. A shot-gun blast of imagery and a rousingly robust (and very human) look into another day in the life. 'musty summer rental' reminds me of some of the cabins we've rented up in the mountains the last few years. Hoping all is well MM. Peace... r
The Porch (Poetry) - 8/1/2013 3:21:06 AM
oh morgan i really enjoyed this one...was picturing arriving on a sort of a grey, not too friendly a day, at an old familiar rented cottage. descriptive words like dusty, rusty, old, scuffed, ugly might have been more 'quaint' than tired in bright friendly sunshine....luvd it...pat
Shelter (Poetry) - 7/30/2013 8:58:22 PM
Gorgeous be Your "Shelter"
petaled with sensuousness
of love's scent, Morgan
The Porch (Poetry) - 7/30/2013 8:16:25 AM
All those rusty castoffs relegated to the porch of someone else's summer rental have been the fodder for a wonderful poem that brings back sights and smells and the wonderment of youth. Got me thinking of the boathouse at my parents' cottage where old things were new again.
Very enjoyable reading…
The Porch (Poetry) - 7/30/2013 7:44:28 AM
Oh, those musty summer rentals! This brought back many memories. Thank you.
The Porch (Poetry) - 7/30/2013 3:13:48 AM
Oooh, what a conglomeration of "odds nâ€™ends" you walked, and tripped across, Morgan. Spider webs and baseball cards.
Hot Day (Poetry) - 7/30/2013 3:07:10 AM
inhaling the air, enjoying the sights as one sighs
Peace & Love Be with you
The Porch (Poetry) - 7/30/2013 3:04:19 AM
kool write Morgan
love those summer time blues
love & peace be with you
Shelter (Poetry) - 7/29/2013 6:19:41 AM
Shelter (Poetry) - 7/28/2013 10:20:26 PM
sensuousness at its best
a pleasure to read
Love & Peace be with you
Shelter (Poetry) - 7/28/2013 8:35:14 PM
Very romantic, Morgan...thoroughly enjoyed!
Shelter (Poetry) - 7/28/2013 5:59:33 PM
Ahhhhhh!!!! Just the way a suave creature would deliver me....that's for sure!
Lilac (Poetry) - 7/28/2013 5:35:47 PM
How humbling is nature, is existence, is our own being!
Shelter (Poetry) - 7/28/2013 5:34:18 PM
Love is one subject about which mankind can never grow tired of hearing!
Shelter (Poetry) - 7/28/2013 4:35:32 PM
Your poem paints a romantic picture coupled with that photo of roses makes for icing on a most excellent cake.
Shelter (Poetry) - 7/28/2013 4:25:54 PM
Said quite well, Morgan, you set the mood with "Send me a loverâ€™s note slipped under my door to be found," and every verse thereafter cemented the glory home. I liked this.
Shelter (Poetry) - 7/28/2013 3:54:50 PM
beautiful expressions Morgan, well done! and the picture so lovely
Hot Day (Poetry) - 7/21/2013 10:24:28 PM
Awesome illustration by your photo
that compliments your poem, Morgan
Hot Day (Poetry) - 7/21/2013 5:02:10 AM
This makes me want to go find a pond today and spread a blanket to observe these things. I love doing this!
Hot Day (Poetry) - 7/20/2013 11:59:23 AM
Dragonflies do flybys..a breeze is a hit..
hot lazy hazy and free. Cute poem.
ribbits from lily pad
Lady Mary Ann
Hot Day (Poetry) - 7/20/2013 11:48:56 AM
my vacation is in the last week of August and the first week of September but I will be relaxing and enjoying myself --LOL--tho as much as I love the warmth this heat wave is too much--this poem seems to be a hit with a lot of us
Hot Day (Poetry) - 7/20/2013 11:27:43 AM
Oh, those dog days, fishing at the pond.
Hot Day (Poetry) - 7/20/2013 11:14:22 AM
this just puts a sip of lemonade in my mouth...nice morgan
Hot Day (Poetry) - 7/20/2013 10:19:36 AM
I can feel the lazy hazy day of summer!!!!
Nicely said. Lovely photo indeed....
Peace love and light my sweet friend,
Hot Day (Poetry) - 7/20/2013 8:53:20 AM
If only such freedom didn't also sanction the extremes of its ability. Succinct and without dread or apology to the unbridled power of its wildness.
Hot Day (Poetry) - 7/20/2013 8:42:56 AM
Perfect poem for the day. Heh.Heh Loved the expression frog ribbits.
Heart Tango (Poetry) - 7/8/2013 1:56:42 AM
I read this and the first thing that comes to my mind is that we should never stop dancing... :)
Heart Tango (Poetry) - 7/1/2013 6:38:15 AM
I need a cigarette and I don't smoke....I think I better go for a shower instead....a romantic poem full of passion and desire
Heart Tango (Poetry) - 6/30/2013 4:18:22 PM
Woah, Morgan what have YOU been up too?!!!
This is gorgeously done, and so musical :)
Heart Tango (Poetry) - 6/30/2013 11:51:23 AM
an excellent passionate write
Love & Peace
Heart Tango (Poetry) - 6/30/2013 4:17:44 AM
Absolute romantic and sensual perfection, Morgan!
Heart Tango (Poetry) - 6/29/2013 9:10:46 AM
A very erotic and visual aspect of love.
Well done, Morgan!
Heart Tango (Poetry) - 6/28/2013 3:10:13 PM
Just as I imagine you to be, Morgan
sensual and free as in your poetry
Heart Tango (Poetry) - 6/28/2013 12:35:29 AM
Cool! But kinda hot!
Well done Morgan!
Heart Tango (Poetry) - 6/27/2013 11:02:10 AM
This is luscious and full of sensuous innuendo. Got me thinking of all those times dancing cheek to cheek. Especially with my girlfriend, a professional dancer that could make me look good as I felt every inch of her body caressing mine.
Heart Tango (Poetry) - 6/27/2013 9:27:35 AM
An original metaphoric keyhole peek into the realm of imagined perfection of passion. Well done.
Heart Tango (Poetry) - 6/27/2013 7:26:39 AM
a soulful dance indeed
Heart Tango (Poetry) - 6/27/2013 6:38:40 AM
The dance of romance, ah, yes!
Heart Tango (Poetry) - 6/26/2013 3:41:33 PM
Tango of breathless passion. Lovely musical whisper.
Lady Mary Ann
Heart Tango (Poetry) - 6/26/2013 3:28:21 PM
Sensually inviting; thank you for sharing this gift, Morgan. Love and best wishes to you,
Cobalt Blue (Poetry) - 6/17/2013 4:56:57 PM
tho I am older than you I miss your poetry and want to see a lot more of it
Found (Poetry) - 6/1/2013 1:48:23 PM
to read your poetry is to read the words of a Passionate woman...were your poetry to be a disease I would not wish for a cure for your words captivate my senses
Pleasing (Poetry) - 5/25/2013 6:53:59 PM
the poem is light and carefree but seems very romantic to me
Record (Poetry) - 5/22/2013 5:01:02 AM
beautifully gorgeous poem Morgan!!
gives all us dreaming romantics visions
& promises wrapped with hope
Record (Poetry) - 5/18/2013 4:22:00 PM
Echoes, like a few lines from different songs, different places. Evocative and mysterious. I still wonder where the key is, but most of all, I hope I can choose the right door.
Record (Poetry) - 5/13/2013 11:29:24 AM
Very medieval feel to the imagery here, Morgan. Perhaps there's a quest, a Holy Grail, an imprisonment of circumstances or the heart. Chance is the spinning dime; perhaps freedom and heaven equate and depend on it. I like the boldness of and confidence with the abstract in this piece. xx
Record (Poetry) - 5/12/2013 4:12:29 PM
What a fascinating vision through this kaleidoscope
Record (Poetry) - 5/12/2013 6:40:35 AM
A colorful and mysterious insight, MM. I can imagine, here, the Mausoleum at Halicarnassus, rich of marble and gold inlays, and the echoes of visitors trying to tread quietly through the memories of those gone on. Peace to you ... r
Record (Poetry) - 5/6/2013 8:47:49 AM
Your words most certainly awaken the thinking process, Morgan... ...and leave the reader to reflect. Thank you. Love and best wishes,