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Recent Reviews for Susan Bergeron

Who Knows What Lurks..... (Poetry) - 10/27/2011 8:33:18 PM

Who Knows What Lurks..... (Poetry) - 10/26/2011 2:23:48 PM
I'd be upping the ante in catnip rations. Fun. Patrick

Love (Poetry) - 10/11/2011 5:20:21 PM
Susan, Right on! Love does change for most of us and the years fade by. A few are fortunate enough to keep that love...for for most of us...its not. Many blessings, ~Linda

Love (Poetry) - 10/9/2011 4:46:49 AM
I love this piece! These are playful words about love. Peace, Dayvid

Love (Poetry) - 10/5/2011 11:28:49 AM
Indeed, it does take a crossroads, either it matures like a fine wine, or the bottle smashes in to a million shards.

Love (Poetry) - 10/5/2011 8:19:16 AM
Very clever ~ I enjoyed this whimsical take on love!

Love (Poetry) - 10/5/2011 5:43:04 AM
Susan, Beautiful write. Love can indeed be a fickle thing. Mary

Fall Showers (Poetry) - 10/5/2011 5:11:02 AM
Very good poem Susan! I can truly visualize a clear distinction of raindrops dripping off yellow ash leaves evolving into fall showers then soon to follow winter snowflakes and I love it! :) Debbie

Sad Notes (Poetry) - 10/5/2011 4:52:48 AM
Aw this definitely ended on a sad note! Love it! Another great write Susan and thanks for sharing it! :) Debbie

Love (Poetry) - 10/5/2011 4:46:39 AM
Awesome write Susan! Your description of love is so vivid here and I love it! Thanks for sharing such a beautiful poem. :) Debbie

Love (Poetry) - 10/5/2011 1:17:58 AM
Oh how observant this is. Love only lasts whilst the games are fun. Then it is off in a flash. I think people are losing the art of long term relationships as the skills required to maintain them fade away along with the desire to do so.

Sad Notes (Poetry) - 10/3/2011 7:39:42 AM
Well crafted and haunting story and perspective ~ of a wrong done by someone who should have loved him the most. Blessings, Christine

Sad Notes (Poetry) - 10/2/2011 6:45:06 AM

Fresh Clam Chowder (Poetry) - 10/1/2011 11:53:20 AM
I wish I had known you back then. Maybe you would have gotten me to like clam chowder...Like then poem, LOVE the poet! Chip Bergeron

Fall Showers (Poetry) - 9/28/2011 8:57:08 AM
Poignant and whimsical with images I just love. Blessings, Christine

Fall Showers (Poetry) - 9/26/2011 6:31:07 PM
Mayflowers,,,, snowflakes.... Some how, that just seems to follow... Surprising we've never heard it til now... You're way ahead of your time Girl, but I'm bustin my butt to catch up..... Very thought provoking. Thanks Dick

Fall Showers (Poetry) - 9/26/2011 5:23:33 PM
Interesting take on an old proverb...Like the npoem, LOVE the poet. Chip Bergeron

Fresh Clam Chowder (Poetry) - 9/25/2011 8:48:25 AM
a wonderful menu of warm memories ...

Fresh Clam Chowder (Poetry) - 9/22/2011 5:36:11 PM
Clam chowder - now that's food! Nice one, Susan. John

Fresh Clam Chowder (Poetry) - 9/22/2011 12:16:48 PM
This sounds scrummy, and I hope you kept that recipe! Blessings, Christine

Fresh Clam Chowder (Poetry) - 9/21/2011 8:17:56 PM
Clam chowder,yummy! Been to many a clam bake and each one was very special too. You bring back many memories... Be always safe, Karen

Fresh Clam Chowder (Poetry) - 9/21/2011 7:40:40 PM
Susan, you have a very detailed and vivid recollection and you've done an excellant job of taking me there to witness it all first hand. Love it, thanks Dick.....

Under The Apple Tree (Poetry) - 9/21/2011 7:18:43 PM
Perhaps leaving a clue for the spirit of Roy Orbison...he has some lyrics pretty ribbon...wonderful vision, Sue... Sage

Fresh Clam Chowder (Poetry) - 9/21/2011 7:12:45 PM
Delicious! Memories we, your dear readers can savor along with you, Sue! Sage

Do Cats Get Brain Freeze? (Poetry) - 9/19/2011 2:57:21 PM
I know one thing there ESP is very powerful. My cat Giuseppe can wake me from a deep medicated sleep without touching me. It happens every day I awake and see him sitting about 10 feet away just staring at me. This was an excellent writing. GOD BLESS YOU Tony

911 2011 (Poetry) - 9/11/2011 5:49:05 PM
Nicely stated Susan, everyone has their memories of that day and that time in our lives. You've only scratched the surface here, but it's some damn fine scratching. Thanks Dick

911 2011 (Poetry) - 9/11/2011 7:02:45 AM
And nbothing has been the same since.....Like the poem, LOVE the poet. Chip Bergeron

Babysitting Big Time (Poetry) - 9/10/2011 9:14:20 PM
I always like to read about things that you did before I met you. Like the poem, LOVE the poet. Chip Bergeron.

The Greeter (Poetry) - 9/8/2011 6:13:09 AM
This is incredibly beautiful, bittersweet but so beautiful!!! A healing poem that needs to be read by all. Blessings, Christine

The Greeter (Poetry) - 9/8/2011 5:38:26 AM
A touching remembrance Susan. Nicely done. Dick

The Greeter (Poetry) - 9/7/2011 5:02:06 PM
Excellent and heartfelt....Like the poem, LOVE the poet... Chip Bergeron

Walter, The Great White Hunter (Poetry) - 8/31/2011 4:06:45 PM
Blessed be the rednecks, for they shall remain clueless. Your dad was quite a guy. Like the poem, LOVE the poet. Chip Bergeron

The Honor Guard (Poetry) - 8/31/2011 9:44:53 AM
This is just so beautifully written, Susan! Blessings, Christine

The Honor Guard (Poetry) - 8/24/2011 9:01:48 PM
A reverent and touching tribute to one of our finest... Be always safe, Karen

The Honor Guard (Poetry) - 8/24/2011 6:26:54 AM
Susan, a deeply touching tribute. Cheers, Dan

The Honor Guard (Poetry) - 8/24/2011 6:16:31 AM
This one leaves a lump in the throat ... powerfully penned sadness, Susan. :( Like the Warrior who gave all, his companion is always faithful ... well done. (((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

The Honor Guard (Poetry) - 8/23/2011 7:02:14 PM
Nice tribute Susan. They all know the price that they might be asked to pay, yet they willingly agree to risk it. Where do we find men such as these? Thank you for caring. Dick

The Honor Guard (Poetry) - 8/23/2011 4:11:49 PM
A poem with a lot of heart....Like the poem, LOVE the poet.... Chip Bergeron

Wiggles and Giggles (Poetry) - 8/18/2011 3:13:22 PM
A joyful piece! Happy wiggle your toes day to you, too! ~Best, Elizabeth

Walter, The Great White Hunter (Poetry) - 8/16/2011 6:36:09 AM
"... Shit eatin’ grin on his Face..." Where you from, girl? I thought that was a mid Michigan line... Very entertaining and enjoyable read. Thanks, Dick.

Walter, The Great White Hunter (Poetry) - 8/15/2011 4:36:51 PM
Nice one, Susan! John

Walter, The Great White Hunter (Poetry) - 8/15/2011 4:19:27 PM
Interesting tale and keen insight... Be always safe, Karen

Walter, The Great White Hunter (Poetry) - 8/15/2011 1:52:46 PM
Such a pleasure to read this...fresh and high-spirited poem! Blessings, Christine

Wiggles and Giggles (Poetry) - 8/8/2011 9:14:34 PM
I am all for the smiley faces on them. Have to try that sometime :) Enjoyed!

Wiggles and Giggles (Poetry) - 8/8/2011 3:17:19 AM
Great sense of fun, Susan, and with pulses of energy. John

Flames (Poetry) - 8/7/2011 11:28:35 AM
WOW!!!!! Like the poem, LOVE the poet!!! Chip Bergeron

Wiggles and Giggles (Poetry) - 8/7/2011 11:21:21 AM

Wiggles and Giggles (Poetry) - 8/7/2011 7:01:14 AM
What will they come up with next?.... You can’t be serious!!!! Is this seriously a nationally recognized day, or are you just funnin with us? You've written a little ditty that seems commensurate with the seriousness of the day. Thanks,,,,, Wiggle on, Dick

Commitment to Disconnect (Poetry) - 8/7/2011 5:35:54 AM
Funny, true, sad at the same time! And I like what Chip said! Axilea

Wiggles and Giggles (Poetry) - 8/6/2011 1:37:17 PM
Funny, funny, really funny! yet, I honestly think that wiggling can keep the toes fit too, Susan. God bless!

Wiggles and Giggles (Poetry) - 8/6/2011 1:12:08 PM
Wiggling as I write; wish you were here--I know you'd wiggle and giggle with me--I'm fairly sure that Bill will not join in. Connie

Wiggles and Giggles (Poetry) - 8/6/2011 10:36:57 AM
Cute, fun poem...Makes me want to take 'em out and wiggle 'em!!! Like the poem, LOVE the poet!!! Chip Bergeron

Commitment to Disconnect (Poetry) - 7/25/2011 4:33:19 AM
I absolutely love this humorous insight, Susan, perfectly crafted for powerful irony! Blessings, Christine

Commitment to Disconnect (Poetry) - 7/25/2011 1:44:04 AM
I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Commitment to Disconnect (Poetry) - 7/24/2011 6:50:08 PM
Unfortunately true....I'm glad we decided so many years ago that wasn't going to happen. Like the poem, LOVE the poet. Chip Bergeron

Baby Brother (Poetry) - 7/22/2011 3:42:41 PM
Hahahaha!! This is such a cute sibling story! I had a baby brother too, so I can relate. I love how you contrast the innocence of his baby blue eyes with his "loud and clear" and rather precocious message!

Heat Index Rising (Poetry) - 7/22/2011 3:41:07 PM
This poem articulates just what it feels like today! Well done!

Heat Index Rising (Poetry) - 7/22/2011 7:00:07 AM
Yes, you said is so eloquently Susan, one hundred degrees here today, and I'm really more of a cold weather girl. I love snow!!! Christine

Heat Index Rising (Poetry) - 7/22/2011 3:11:43 AM
I guess it must be that global warming we hear about when things get too cold or too damn hot. But all that hot air only adds to my discomfort. George

Heat Index Rising (Poetry) - 7/21/2011 7:18:21 PM
Here it's just the opposite at the moment. Nice alliterations in your verses. Axilea

Heat Index Rising (Poetry) - 7/21/2011 4:46:49 PM
That's how it feels sometimnes....Like the poem, LOVE the poet... Chip Bergeron

Baby Brother (Poetry) - 7/20/2011 6:32:53 AM
Cute... Cheers, Dan

Baby Brother (Poetry) - 7/20/2011 3:39:05 AM
So funny! That's some personality!!! Blessings, Christine

Baby Brother (Poetry) - 7/20/2011 12:52:53 AM
Good work, Susan

Rumpled Sheets (Poetry) - 7/19/2011 10:50:21 PM

Shimmering Moonlight (Poetry) - 7/19/2011 10:33:59 PM

Flames (Poetry) - 7/19/2011 9:43:03 PM

Baby Brother (Poetry) - 7/19/2011 7:42:03 PM
Sounds about like your brother....Like the poem, LOVE the poet Chip Bergeron

Embers (Poetry) - 7/19/2011 6:44:34 PM
I was there when it happened. Too bad I wasn't "there" when it happened. Liked the poem, LOVE the poet. Chip Bergeron

Embers (Poetry) - 7/19/2011 6:39:32 PM
You're excellent at 'those moments' poetry, Susan, capture that makes the reader sit up and pay attention and chuckle with you John

Under The Apple Tree (Poetry) - 7/19/2011 3:52:32 PM
You are really making wonderful strides in your craft....Like ther po0em, LOVE the poet Chip Bergeron

Under The Apple Tree (Poetry) - 7/19/2011 3:35:04 PM
An 'after' moment, methinks, lover departed, soul aching but knowing. Deft expression, Susan. John

Under The Apple Tree (Poetry) - 7/19/2011 2:52:07 PM
winsome loose some, and so the ribbon falls there is a wistful sense to this... a fond farewell... an aching adieu... a sense of sorrow... maybe loss... oh if I only knew. sometimes less really is more! Roger

Under The Apple Tree (Poetry) - 7/19/2011 2:34:24 PM
Wondeful poetic glimpse into love and whimsy ~ Blessings, Christine

Shimmering Moonlight (Poetry) - 7/18/2011 3:05:59 PM
This is a visual snapshot of a small moment in time, normally insignificant, but you make it magical.

Rumpled Sheets (Poetry) - 7/18/2011 3:04:54 PM
I like the idea of sheets holding on to dreams! Nice concept.

Rumpled Sheets (Poetry) - 7/17/2011 12:01:07 PM
Evocative. I like the sight of rumpled sheets. Axilea

Rumpled Sheets (Poetry) - 7/16/2011 5:53:57 AM
Rumpled sheets make a nice canvas for the imagination! Blessings, Christine

Rumpled Sheets (Poetry) - 7/16/2011 2:41:56 AM
And the reader knows also.

Rumpled Sheets (Poetry) - 7/15/2011 3:35:32 PM
Harlequin Romances wants to sign you to a cvontract....Like the poem, LOVE the poet...

Shimmering Moonlight (Poetry) - 7/15/2011 11:00:20 AM
Sweet and playful!

Shimmering Moonlight (Poetry) - 7/15/2011 10:44:18 AM
Whoah!!!! Like the poem, LOVE the poet... Chip Bergeron

Flames (Poetry) - 7/14/2011 4:51:10 AM
What an impressively effective style and metaphor, Susan! Blessings, Christine

Flames (Poetry) - 7/14/2011 3:50:50 AM
Smooth and sensual, this poem is pure delight to read!

Ahhhh.... (Poetry) - 7/14/2011 3:44:50 AM
lol! The kitty said not tonight! :) Cute thanks for sharing! :) Debbie

The Slasher (Poetry) - 7/14/2011 3:28:32 AM
Reading this brings back memories of my past and as the oldest I use to get it on my brothers and sister's behalf when they were disobedient. I was always held responsible for their actions. Ugh! But I've grown to learn from those disciplinable teachings really has made me a better person, its funny though I can't say the same for them. Thanks for sharing! :) Debbie

Flames (Poetry) - 7/14/2011 2:39:46 AM
Awesome! Very well written as I looking into the flame of my candle feeling the essence of your poem! Thanks for sharing! :)

Flames (Poetry) - 7/14/2011 12:12:54 AM
Well sustained metaphor, Susan, with passion and resonance. John

A Deal's A Deal... (Poetry) - 7/13/2011 4:21:35 AM
Awww, what a sweet poetic story! You paint a vivid image here, I an see the boy just staring at those lobsters! Well done.

Ahhhh.... (Poetry) - 7/11/2011 12:58:36 AM
Who's the naughty one here? Nicely delivered, Susan. John

Ahhhh.... (Poetry) - 7/10/2011 12:25:51 PM
A wonderfully playful and whimsical write Susan! Blessings, Christine

Ahhhh.... (Poetry) - 7/10/2011 7:42:15 AM
that's it, you made up my mind about getting a cat ;)

The Golden Nugget (Poetry) - 7/10/2011 12:11:40 AM
This is fabulous! What a marvellous viewpoint and unique too. typo? Suddenly her[he] heard The turn of the knob best wishes Ruan

Beyond The Shadow (Poetry) - 7/10/2011 12:06:00 AM
Living in Europe and not being an American, I don't know the story. Having said that, I totally agree that the sensationalism that follows any case of this ilk (which I am guessing involves a small child and some kind of a monster)should not be pandered to. We should all, as human beings and regardless of race, keep our eyes just beyond the shadow.

Cat Alley, Manch Vegas (Poetry) - 7/9/2011 11:57:26 PM
Fabulous tale of a hero fighting for his love, overcoming the evil Gumdrop and comforting his Sweet Molly. Great imagery. Ruan

Ahhhh.... (Poetry) - 7/9/2011 10:05:41 PM
I can relate! Late to bed, I'm always "interrogated" by the mutts. Patrick

Ahhhh.... (Poetry) - 7/9/2011 4:07:59 PM
You naughty, naughty girl!!!!! Like the poem, LOVE then poet... Chip Bergeron

Summer Dreams (Poetry) - 7/9/2011 3:12:52 PM
How tender a love escapade satisfied in dreamland.

Summer Dreams (Poetry) - 7/9/2011 3:09:33 PM
Highly sensual, Susan, with rich image and suggestion. John

Summer Dreams (Poetry) - 7/9/2011 2:53:31 PM

Summer Dreams (Poetry) - 7/9/2011 2:40:26 PM
You naughty, naughty the poem, LOVE the poet!!! Chip Bergeron

Beyond The Shadow (Poetry) - 7/7/2011 6:39:32 AM

Beyond The Shadow (Poetry) - 7/7/2011 4:12:30 AM
Susan, I am heartbroken by the verdict. Yes, HOW CAN THEY???? Blessings to you, ~Linda

Beyond The Shadow (Poetry) - 7/6/2011 4:23:17 PM
I couldn't agree more.

Crash, Bang, Boom (Poetry) - 7/6/2011 6:09:43 AM
LOL oh my goodness thank you for the laugh but I hope he's safe!

Crash, Bang, Boom (Poetry) - 7/4/2011 12:11:28 PM
Wonderful, high-spirited eloquence, Susan! Blessings, Christine

Crash, Bang, Boom (Poetry) - 7/1/2011 5:09:17 PM
Luv it, Susan! Flying feline and humbled mate.. no better way to kick the day off. John

Crash, Bang, Boom (Poetry) - 7/1/2011 9:30:38 AM
Aside from the air conditioner, the only thing hurt was my pride....Like the poem, LOVE the poet Chip Bergeron

Crash, Bang, Boom (Poetry) - 7/1/2011 2:49:31 AM
Hah! Doesn't take much to startle us our of her solitude and reverie, huh? The cat. I can just picture in my mind that flying ball of hair/fur/whatever streaking for his "safe" place. Thanks for starting off the day with a chuckle.

Second Best (Poetry) - 6/17/2011 6:28:48 PM
Not a hockey fan and didn't watch, but the papers were full of the crazy things that the idiot fans did.... what a black eye for the city, the team and the sport. We humans are a stupid lot, not counting you, of course. Nicely penned Susan. Thanks Dick

Second Best (Poetry) - 6/17/2011 4:32:00 AM
Can't agree with you any more, Susan. Losing to a team that, in that particular series of games, were better, or got the breaks, or any number of things that resulted in coming in second best is no shame. The shame is our culture. Would they have rioted if their team had won? Maybe. It has happened. I think the fans of the Chicago Bulls of the NBA rioted even though they had won. Sometimes rioting is a coverup for criminal activities. Whatever it is, it is shameful, but the world has lost the ability to feel shame about anything. Think Weiner. He isn't/wasn't/never will be, shamed by his acts. Now I hear they are talking a reality television show for the idiot.

Center Ice (Poetry) - 6/16/2011 6:56:20 PM
I don't think the cannucks are losers for certain, they will come back next year...but their fans that went on a rampage and rioted, they on the other hand are consummate losers...ed

Center Ice (Poetry) - 6/16/2011 5:11:03 PM
What a gripping series this has been, Susan! It has been nearly forty years and suddenly I'm finding myself surrounded by Bruins fans :) Blessings, Christine

Center Ice (Poetry) - 6/16/2011 3:40:31 PM
That is one big cup, Susan, the biggest trophy in all sport i'm told. John

Center Ice (Poetry) - 6/16/2011 1:04:28 PM
That was a fun game to watch together....Like the poem, LOVE the poet. Chip Bergeron

Center Ice (Poetry) - 6/16/2011 11:34:45 AM
the better team won, roberto luongo as canucks goalie is finished....

Center Ice (Poetry) - 6/16/2011 10:57:51 AM
The Cannucks may not be losers, I know how we don't like for anyone to have to lose anymore, but the fact is they are losers in this game. I think the final score bears me out. But then I suppose I'm just thinking with a Neanderthal mindset.

Is God Green? (Poetry) - 6/11/2011 11:07:50 AM
Beautiful idea behind these words! Questions that we have never been able to answer. Axilea

The Slasher (Poetry) - 6/11/2011 11:06:06 AM
This piece is sad for its content and effective because it is short and only gives the essential details. I like that, well done! Axilea

Hot Diggity Dog (Poetry) - 6/8/2011 12:20:06 PM
You have me laughing, Susan, thank you so much, as you implement this so well! Blessings, Christine

Hot Diggity Dog (Poetry) - 6/7/2011 10:21:43 PM
Wicked and funny, Susan. Well said! John

Hot Diggity Dog (Poetry) - 6/7/2011 2:44:07 PM
Generally them what brag about it trhe3 most hazve the least to brag about...Like the poem, LOVE the poet. Chip Bergeron

Hot Diggity Dog (Poetry) - 6/7/2011 5:46:16 AM
Hah! I was thinking the same thing. I guess he thought it was the Giant Staff of Life. Dumbass.

Parade of Memories (Poetry) - 5/31/2011 6:15:29 PM

Parade of Memories (Poetry) - 5/29/2011 9:49:33 AM
These are very powerful memories. I'm glad you sharedf them....Like the poem, love the poet... Chip Bergeron

Parade of Memories (Poetry) - 5/28/2011 7:18:51 AM
Susan, thank you for that trip to 'back when...' it was very touching and very real. Cheers, Dan

Parade of Memories (Poetry) - 5/27/2011 3:58:30 PM
And lovly memories they are Susan, nicely transcribed. Thank you, Dick

Parade of Memories (Poetry) - 5/27/2011 11:52:01 AM
When I think of the title you have given us I can think of so many things that I have been through. Good write!

Parade of Memories (Poetry) - 5/27/2011 11:08:07 AM
Memorial Day is no like it used to be. You wrote of it the way it was. Now it is just a government day off.

Angel Boy (Poetry) - 5/24/2011 3:05:38 PM
It was tough watching all this play out on T.V. At least now we know who he is. Unfortunzately wer may never know why. Like the poem, Love the poet. Chip Bergeron

Angel Boy (Poetry) - 5/19/2011 9:08:28 AM
Sad, but some times we humans can be so in-humane. Thank you Susan. Dick

Angel Boy (Poetry) - 5/18/2011 7:25:25 PM
Another child whose life was cut short and he was sent back to God's house to finally live in peace. What a sad shame! You are right, he is an "Angel Boy" and I am so sorry he had to suffer as he did. Be always safe, Karen

Angel Boy (Poetry) - 5/18/2011 5:50:47 PM
Rest in peace, Camden, innocent child. Thank you, Susan, for your love and sharing. John

Angel Boy (Poetry) - 5/18/2011 9:02:33 AM
This is sad. I hope they find who is responsible.

The Slasher (Poetry) - 5/12/2011 7:22:37 AM
Susan, A nicely written piece about a time in our history when this was the norm rather than abuse. Although it's sometimes hard to believe, we are making progress. Thanks for this little reminder. Dick

The Slasher (Poetry) - 5/11/2011 10:20:34 PM
A sad memory of the way it once was, but you have blossomed in beauty ever since, moving tale... Be always safe, Karen

The Slasher (Poetry) - 5/11/2011 9:06:51 PM
I'm glad you finally moved......on, the right move. Patrick

The Slasher (Poetry) - 5/11/2011 6:24:34 PM
Been there. Took that. Raised in a family where the mother was a monster, father was milquetoast, no wonder it took the kid sixty years to halfway figure things out.

The Slasher (Poetry) - 5/11/2011 5:13:42 PM
After that there's not a whole lot to say.....I do love you... Chip Bergeron

Prisoner of the Mind (Poetry) - 5/9/2011 8:14:46 AM
Susan, you know I'm a big fan of your work, but this poem speaks of a much bigger story, which I sense you have yet to write. If my take is even close, I believe you’d be doing yourself a favor to take the time to write it, even if you never share it. But then, who am I to say. Thanks for all you’ve offered in all your postings. I just love your work. Dick

Prisoner of the Mind (Poetry) - 5/9/2011 4:58:48 AM
If parents only realize how words can wound. Well penned.

Prisoner of the Mind (Poetry) - 5/6/2011 10:12:18 AM
Hi Susan, the last verse wraps around it very nicely...the tears say it all. Makes the reader want more.... =) Thank you for sharing... In Spirit, Bear

The Golden Nugget (Poetry) - 5/5/2011 7:02:31 PM
Timely...Like the poem, LOVE the poet... Chip Bergeron

Prisoner of the Mind (Poetry) - 5/5/2011 5:44:57 PM
What a poignant write this is, Susan. Incredible despair accompanies the feelings of abandonment for a child. Blessings, Christine

Is God Green? (Poetry) - 4/30/2011 11:51:17 AM
Well, He promised me a new body---like His glorious body---so I don't think I will become a fetus again. (Once was enough; that birth canal is not a happy place. :( It was a rough ride!) It's an interesting idea, and again, a unique poem, but it's clear from Jesus' own words that those who die "in the Lord" will be with Him, and I don't want anything less!

The Golden Nugget (Poetry) - 4/30/2011 11:46:51 AM
You have given a very unique perspective on the royal wedding. Nice work! Connie

The Golden Nugget (Poetry) - 4/30/2011 10:15:45 AM
Susan, this is so neat. Well done young lady. I like it a lot. Dick

Is God Green? (Poetry) - 4/28/2011 8:48:01 AM
That could take recycling to the highest order, eh? Cheers, Dan

Is God Green? (Poetry) - 4/28/2011 3:50:48 AM
Something i've thought about, Susan. have a look at the years of birth and death of some of the great composers..makes interesting thinking. John

Celebrate (Poetry) - 4/27/2011 9:22:27 AM
Indeed, a great time to celebrate. Cheers, Dan

Celebrate (Poetry) - 4/27/2011 4:33:11 AM
LOVELY!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Celebrate (Poetry) - 4/27/2011 4:19:19 AM
Ya had me going there, Susan. Never saw it coming. Apple/Cherry Blossom's. Miss it, but we have Orange/Grapefruit blossom's here in Florida. Close, but no cigar. Thanks Dick

Celebrate (Poetry) - 4/26/2011 3:17:39 PM
So in touch, Susan, with the sensuousness of burgeoning. John

Celebrate (Poetry) - 4/26/2011 1:22:26 PM
Glorious eloquence! Blessings, Christine

White Diamond (Poetry) - 4/25/2011 8:05:32 PM
Like the poem, love the poet.... Chip Bergeron

White Diamond (Poetry) - 4/25/2011 5:43:17 PM

Snowbound Muse (Poetry) - 4/7/2011 9:02:31 AM
all will awaken soon, including many muses, enjoyed.

Snowbound Muse (Poetry) - 4/1/2011 7:42:38 PM
Sorry girl, No snow here in south Florida.... My muse can't use that as an excuse, but there is still nothing new pouring out of my pen. Wish I could offer you more support, but we all have to face our Demons. Dick

Snowbound Muse (Poetry) - 4/1/2011 12:41:32 PM
Yes it was sure April Fools Day today! It's such a light snow, though, just a dusting. Be well, Christine

The Woman In The Window (Poetry) - 3/20/2011 10:39:44 AM
You give the apt impression that she flew away–well done. Ron

The Woman In The Window (Poetry) - 3/19/2011 6:00:59 PM
This is such a gracious poem, with lingering thoughts of the woman in the window waiting, and waiting, and . . . for what? Not a suitor of course, no, she is waiting for the precise time to play that one particular song. I loved this poem, Susan.

The Woman In The Window (Poetry) - 3/19/2011 1:39:29 AM
NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

The Woman In The Window (Poetry) - 3/18/2011 5:45:15 PM
Interesting yet bittersweet in tone, well said... Be always safe, Karen

The Woman In The Window (Poetry) - 3/18/2011 5:18:59 PM
Lovely, Susan. -gene.

P F Flyers (Poetry) - 2/27/2011 12:16:23 PM
Too much listening to TV commercials can be hazardous to your health. Like the poem, love the poet!!! Chip Bergeron

P F Flyers (Poetry) - 2/27/2011 2:24:15 AM
VERY SAD!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

P F Flyers (Poetry) - 2/26/2011 5:52:52 PM
Well said, Susan, and a painful lesson for the little one. John

P F Flyers (Poetry) - 2/26/2011 1:58:38 PM
An exciting gem of a poem! But Yikes! Poor little guy... Christine

Rock Hard Landing (Poetry) - 2/24/2011 10:18:52 AM

Rock Hard Landing (Poetry) - 2/24/2011 3:02:28 AM
WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Rock Hard Landing (Poetry) - 2/23/2011 1:05:09 PM
This is so oving....Reminds mne if places I've been....Youve been with me...Like the poem, LOVE the poet. Chip Bergeron

Rock Hard Landing (Poetry) - 2/23/2011 12:23:31 PM
How lovely...I've been there, and although sometimes the choice is hard...I'd choose the soft, warm Loving hands any day...Skilfully written... Best wishes, Diana...

Rock Hard Landing (Poetry) - 2/23/2011 12:02:04 PM
Beautiful thoughts. We must accept- and in turn- be warm soft hands willing to help. John

Spring Cleaning (Poetry) - 2/20/2011 6:57:24 PM
....the earth completes another revolution, the master completes another stroke of the brush...... the cycle continues. Nicely done Susan. Thanks Dick

Spring Cleaning (Poetry) - 2/20/2011 3:46:52 PM
Stir, movement and promise combine beautifully and seamlessly here, Susan. This is fine writing. John

Spring Cleaning (Poetry) - 2/20/2011 12:18:18 PM
Bless Mother Nature and you, Susan, for this lovely tribute to same. -gene.

Spring Cleaning (Poetry) - 2/20/2011 9:00:21 AM
I know EXACTLY what you mean, Susan. My coastal heathland landscape is positively buzzing with this sense of breakthrough at the moment and the turf is literally springing beneath my feet. Fresh air feather-dusting is definitely MY kind of spring-cleaning! :)) xx

Spring Cleaning (Poetry) - 2/20/2011 8:41:29 AM
Sounds like we're both 'thinking spring' for me it is the four plants that set out on my balcony...nice write. Cheers, Dan

Spring Cleaning (Poetry) - 2/20/2011 2:41:48 AM
VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Spring Cleaning (Poetry) - 2/19/2011 6:57:18 PM
Great IS windy tonight....Like the poem, LOVE the poet!!! Chip Bergeron

Chasing Tails (Poetry) - 2/19/2011 6:16:28 AM
Evidently written by a true Nascar fan. Well done. Donna

Seeking Love (Poetry) - 2/19/2011 5:11:52 AM
VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Chasing Tails (Poetry) - 2/18/2011 7:11:39 PM
And all they have to practice, is left turns.... Well, maybe there's more to it than that, but it sure looks easy from where I sit. Nicely done Susan. Thanks Dick

Seeking Love (Poetry) - 2/17/2011 5:02:41 PM
Amazing, thoughtful....Makes me want to cry...Like the poem very much, LOVE the poet. Chip Bergeron

Seeking Love (Poetry) - 2/17/2011 3:59:13 PM
Susan thank you for sharing, it's true - we are born pure with not pre-thoughts of any other human being other than sharing, and caring. We hope that others share our special treasure, and we depart seeking that last gasps of pleasure -that we call love.

Freedom Gained and Lost (Poetry) - 2/16/2011 6:46:36 AM
Very good, Susan

Freedom Gained and Lost (Poetry) - 2/14/2011 3:44:10 AM
VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Freedom Gained and Lost (Poetry) - 2/13/2011 7:44:50 AM
Freedom also has a price...your poem is nicely done. Cheers, Dan

Freedom Gained and Lost (Poetry) - 2/12/2011 4:52:26 PM
Insightful, thoughtful and very timely, Susan. John

Freedom Gained and Lost (Poetry) - 2/12/2011 3:29:01 PM
Intimate and wise point of view Susan, so well done and timely. Christine

Freedom Gained and Lost (Poetry) - 2/12/2011 3:07:05 PM
Well done Susan. I think the man should read this in the plane. The whole world must support the Egyptian people who fought for freedom and ultimately gained it. But they should not let it slip off their hands. Thanks again.

A Deal's A Deal... (Poetry) - 2/9/2011 8:09:53 AM
I like this one a lot, Susan. Well done "Mom." Thanks Dick

A Deal's A Deal... (Poetry) - 2/9/2011 1:42:43 AM
Nice one, Susan, positive re-enforcement and nurturing. John

A Deal's A Deal... (Poetry) - 2/8/2011 6:27:18 PM
Boy, weren't those the days.....I wonder what he'd say if he could see us now....Like the poem, LOVE ther poet... Chip Bergeron

A Deal's A Deal... (Poetry) - 2/8/2011 4:17:55 PM
Memories of great times! cute poem~

Bubbles (Poetry) - 2/8/2011 2:12:06 PM
Winter getting to you????? Likwe the poem, LOVE the poet.... Chip Bergeron

Some Days (Poetry) - 2/8/2011 8:06:01 AM
Great writing sweet lady..enjoyed very much..Hugss

Some Days (Poetry) - 2/7/2011 9:00:44 PM
Well, whats stopping ya? Life is short, live it. Now!!!! Easily said, I know, but it's the thing to do... For all of us. We know it, but what would people think???? And if we all did, where would this world be? Not a pleasant thought, but neither is what we're facing now. Nice write, Sue. It made me think and I enjoyed it, Thanks Dick

Some Days (Poetry) - 2/7/2011 8:41:24 PM
Can I join you????? Like the poem, LOVE the poet!!!!! Chip Bergeron

Frozen In Fear (Poetry) - 2/1/2011 8:08:11 AM
Take little steps, I get your fear. Cheers, Dan

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