The Longest Night (Poetry) - 1/26/2013 1:03:00 PM
Let us hope those nights do not come often and that they do not result in your end. I'm sure most of us have those nights from time to time. Mine came when I was tormented by my bosses at work to quit and I kept finding out ways in the night to foil them. Eventually I did, but not through my dreams.
The Longest Night (Poetry) - 1/25/2013 4:45:55 PM
very well written of those long lonely nights we some have at times
The Longest Night (Poetry) - 1/25/2013 4:34:08 PM
Perhaps we have all had some horrible nights. You brought this one to life. The repetition enforces the strength of the poem.
The End (Poetry) - 1/25/2013 7:57:21 AM
Very dramatic. A silent scream that no one can hear from within. I hope it isn't true and just good poetry writing.
The End (Poetry) - 1/25/2013 7:22:46 AM
I can relate to this. For those who have gone on there is peace, but for those who remain, there is the burden of that loss, and the many cogitations and emotions as they struggle to make peace with it.
The End (Poetry) - 1/25/2013 4:19:36 AM
so sad and yet there must be a memory keeping you there