Things To Do Today (Poetry) - 1/9/2011 2:05:58 AM
Of the three of your well conceived poems, this one's my favorite. My favorite lines:
"tell summer it's over
make time for echos
get hammer back from Heathie's
bury hammer behind Joe's
go by storage; move bodies for ghost"
It's like something I would write-
If I were as talented.
I go (Poetry) - 9/3/2010 6:52:09 AM
A wonderfully written obsession.
Random Spectacle (Poetry) - 9/2/2010 2:52:09 PM
Words of a life who has journeyed long only to find there is no rainbow, solace, or peace in the end. Stay strong and have faith...
Be always safe,
Random Spectacle (Poetry) - 9/2/2010 11:38:21 AM
Your writing is a medicine for your soul...keep it going an know that we care...God Bless! Sue
Random Spectacle (Poetry) - 9/2/2010 11:14:27 AM
Oh my..very interesting indeed sweet man..stay safe and well..Hugss