Poem from my second book (Poetry) - 10/13/2010 7:08:49 PM
Now this is elegant wit and a fun imagination ~
Unexpected subject matter, so fresh!
Poem from my second book (Poetry) - 10/13/2010 3:20:32 PM
Whoops, as I read the last lines I said out loud. "Heck man this is brilliant." What a clever write, one which many of us relate to.
Love the line "Scratches on a page" And the build up; appreciation for every new breath. Top work!