Recent Reviews for penelope jayne hornsey
Let me be me (Poetry) - 11/12/2003 7:28:17 PM|
a nice poem. great job.
Let me be me (Poetry) - 11/11/2003 2:29:14 PM
I hear you....
Say it like it is....
Let me be me (Poetry) - 11/11/2003 11:35:43 AM
It is very important to be able to be your own person. It's very clear here that you are reaching to be heard. Good write. Lisa
Tormented soul (Poetry) - 9/9/2003 6:17:29 AM
wow! very well done.
Psychiatrist (Poetry) - 8/15/2003 4:40:41 PM
My first Pdoc acted like an ADHD child on speed. I don't think he ever heard a word I said. Needless to say, I know your feelings of abject frustration.
SOS (Poetry) - 7/20/2003 12:28:18 PM
Bravo! This captures the emotions well.
SOS (Poetry) - 7/20/2003 11:06:24 AM
You've capture some fantastic imagery with this work. Bravo.
Writers block (Poetry) - 7/14/2003 2:24:50 PM
It's nice to know I'm not the only one who feels this way from time to time. Nicely put, bravo!
Happy Hour? (Poetry) - 7/6/2003 7:47:38 PM
This is a well written, strongly emotional piece...Very Well Done!
Happy Hour? (Poetry) - 7/6/2003 9:50:22 AM
Yup...drunks are somethin' else again. Well done. Could never see the point of 'happy hour' if your life is on the right track. You're already there.
Happy Hour? (Poetry) - 7/6/2003 9:13:45 AM
Oh yes, this was sad.
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Happy Hour? (Poetry) - 7/6/2003 9:03:58 AM
This is so terribly sad.A very well written, emotive piece, Penelope. Excellent.
Broken (Poetry) - 7/6/2003 3:19:44 AM
Broken (Poetry) - 7/5/2003 1:38:37 PM
Wow! Yes, powerful lines....more powerful than the clenched fists.
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
Broken (Poetry) - 7/5/2003 1:24:59 PM
Wow, this one is short and to the point... thank you for sharing...
Broken (Poetry) - 7/5/2003 1:00:24 PM
o, this one grabs the heart...WOW
short, but so vivid in intensity and imagery...well done!
(((HUGS))) and love,
Ocean view (Poetry) - 6/1/2003 5:05:51 AM
I could feel this, great imagery.
Ocean view (Poetry) - 6/1/2003 2:00:46 AM
Ocean view (Poetry) - 5/31/2003 10:25:37 AM
Really good imagery. Love it.
Ocean view (Poetry) - 5/31/2003 10:06:35 AM
Lovely sweet write
Ocean view (Poetry) - 5/31/2003 5:04:41 AM
Good visual effect!
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Bipolar Battles (Poetry) - 4/26/2003 11:28:33 AM
this is totaly relate to...!!! I am reading a new book titled:
"The Natural Medicine Guide To Bipolar Disorder..It's by: Stephanie Marohn..In it is packed with tons of issues about cranial osteopathy, amino acids, fish oils, ect..It's the most comprehensive info I've ever come across in the months of intense research I've done to get me off lithium.....You can get it through Amazon. Com..I left you a message on your board too..Thanks so much Penelope..Peace and healing to you..
Bipolar Battles (Poetry) - 4/25/2003 6:20:11 PM
a very well balanced poem on the heights of depths of your emotional state...
Bipolar Battles (Poetry) - 4/25/2003 11:03:23 AM
Diet can trigger episodes too. Well written about a serious problem. Bravo.
Bipolar Battles (Poetry) - 4/25/2003 9:06:21 AM
There is an ebb and flow...hold on tight. Honest portrayal...good writing.
Bipolar Battles (Poetry) - 4/25/2003 6:45:56 AM
I can empatise, my best friend has bi polar,my next poem is going to be about it, called freeze.
You will get out of Dantes 7th circle, takes a little time, but you will be stronger for it....honest, although life seems dark on the brightest day at times.
Love and prayers
Sea Harvest (Poetry) - 4/25/2003 6:26:29 AM
So beautiful, I so felt as though I were there at that harvest of the sea! Lots of details and lovely imagery...
Writers block (Poetry) - 4/13/2003 4:10:04 PM
Read my poem the wall, its like this in many ways!
Writers block (Poetry) - 4/13/2003 11:11:42 AM
Well you certainly did beautifully with this composition ! Bravo.
Writers block (Poetry) - 4/13/2003 10:53:22 AM
Oh hate it writers block
Writers block (Poetry) - 4/13/2003 8:17:12 AM
Wonderful composition! "Writers Block" sounds a little like a Pantoum. At least on its musicality. I have enjoyed the reading of "Writers Block" in everyway poetry goes on.
I Salute the Author of "Writers Block".
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Psychiatrist (Poetry) - 4/11/2003 12:24:17 PM
Hypnotherapy is much better, and you get to the problem much quicker. Visualization helps you to get over whatever is bothering you and helps you problem-solve in the future too.
Very good work.
Psychiatrist (Poetry) - 4/11/2003 10:48:28 AM
i know how it is to go to someone and not be helped. i went to a psychologist long ago while in high school (had problems dealing with people teasing me, also had problems at home), and he didn't do me any good. he also spoke very little in the way of english, or what english he DID speak, i did NOT understand him AT all. so i left. the best one i ever had was a woman i saw while i was in junior high school; she really helped me a LOT! but now i don't go to see anyone; the best one i have is one i can go to anytime, and he is free: JESUS. i count on him to help me through my troubles, and he has helped me tremendously. he is better than any doctor here on earth, and he DOES work! :) (((HUGS)))
Lost Mariner (Poetry) - 4/9/2003 12:02:31 PM
Lost Mariner (Poetry) - 4/9/2003 6:45:23 AM
Very good description, Penelope!
Afloat (Poetry) - 4/8/2003 10:28:35 AM
"...On the horizon
A collection of vessels,
Bobbing cork like
Grace the sky line..."
Well done. Great imagery.
Afloat (Poetry) - 4/8/2003 10:05:29 AM
i love poetry referencing the sea!
A different reality (Poetry) - 3/28/2003 11:58:31 AM
A different reality (Poetry) - 3/28/2003 6:58:34 AM
a good exploration of
what it means to be different
A different reality (Poetry) - 3/28/2003 6:03:17 AM
you keep coherence and sensibilities together
Tears (Poetry) - 3/26/2003 8:58:59 PM
sorrowful, well written!
Tears (Poetry) - 3/26/2003 6:49:59 PM
So sad and painful.
"Wet blankets of feelings
Numbness, thought patterns inane."
Tears (Poetry) - 3/26/2003 2:13:51 PM
So very sad. Good job Penelope! Teresa
Messy head (Poetry) - 3/26/2003 1:01:37 PM
I love the flow in this piece. Wonderful write. I truly enjoyed this poem.
Saturday nights (Poetry) - 3/26/2003 12:37:08 PM
This is a brilliant poem about society's ills. Anyone who uses drugs is such a loser.
Body Count (Poetry) - 3/26/2003 12:21:51 PM
Yes, the war is going really "well". I just read this today in the Pakistan Tribune. This refers to about 500 bodies of US and British soldiers killed in Afghanistan. Why are their bodies kept in Pakistan?
Bodies of 500 US, UK soldiers lying in Jacobabad
Wednesday March 26, 2003 (0229 PST)
ISLAMABAD, March 26 (Online): Around 500 dead bodies of American and British soldiers killed during military operation in Afghanistan after September 11 blitz have been lying in a morgue at Shebhaz Airbase in Jacobabad.
American and British authorities because of fear of strong reaction from their masses had kept the dead bodies of as many as 500 soldiers in a morgue established at Jacobabad Airbase instead of shifting them to their own countries, credible sources informed Online here Tuesday.
The bodies of these soldiers, who were killed during last five months in Afghanistan, were brought from Baghram Airbase and other areas of war-ravaged country, sources disclosed.
Sources said American and British authorities, which were planning to shift these dead bodies from their own countries, delayed the decision after eruption of war in Iraq.
American and British authorities feared that shifting of dead bodies at this moment would affect the ongoing campaign of coalition forces in Iraq, sources pointed out.
They maintained that dead bodies would be kept at Shebhaz Airbase until US and British authorities take the final decision.
Sources revealed that security had tightened in and around the Airbase to keep this matter secret.
Body Count (Poetry) - 3/26/2003 11:50:32 AM
the price of war is steep...excellent imagery and powerful, profound write...(((HUGS))) *tears* and love, karla. :(
Body Count (Poetry) - 3/26/2003 11:36:18 AM
very powerful!! I can see this in my mind.. You have painted a picture of this war and price that will be paid.
Kneel to pray.
DNA (Poetry) - 3/24/2003 9:55:39 AM
I think you've done very well. DNA is indeed a hard subject for poetry but you've tackled it well, excellent.
Day break (Poetry) - 3/23/2003 11:53:04 AM
Penelope this was very good..Floria
Day break (Poetry) - 3/23/2003 8:43:58 AM
Might as well not turn on the TV and the radio. Good work!
Sandie Angel :o)
Inimitable self (Poetry) - 3/23/2003 7:56:20 AM
Should never be recurring... never... never... never.
Inimitable self (Poetry) - 3/23/2003 7:44:21 AM
Tis a pity but that is the way it goes first your money then your clothes.
Televised war (Poetry) - 3/23/2003 6:56:03 AM
I think it is sick to televise the war, I do not think mothers, fathers, and family need to see their sons and daughters die. It is not Sweeps Week!
Televised war (Poetry) - 3/23/2003 6:56:00 AM
Wars looks nice on TV. They never show the true horrors of war. Powerfully expressed!
cold light of day (Poetry) - 3/23/2003 6:28:53 AM
you are right, that is exactly what it feels like to have mental illness
cold light of day (Poetry) - 3/23/2003 6:16:00 AM
This is excellent!
The raging sea (Poetry) - 3/21/2003 5:25:24 PM
excellent sea poem...
The raging sea (Poetry) - 3/21/2003 9:39:10 AM
Wonderful. I love nature poems.
Well done !
Kindred souls (Poetry) - 3/18/2003 7:01:17 AM
war (Poetry) - 3/18/2003 6:02:13 AM
War is like a forest fire, it will first perge the earth of it's beauty, allowing new life to come forth.
Fantastic Plastic (Poetry) - 3/16/2003 2:18:02 PM
Plastic, in it's many forms...is the greatest invention ever. However, it does use up resources even thought it is recyclable. The greatest problem is that we as consumers always lose to the benefit of large corporations and government. There would be more recycling if we would get back for recycling what we pay out for redemption value. But we don't and therefore subsidize the recyclers costs when they pass it in higher costs back to us.
Fantastic Plastic (Poetry) - 3/16/2003 8:49:11 AM
It's like pantyhose and lipstick. What will we every do without it?
Fantastic Plastic (Poetry) - 3/16/2003 7:57:55 AM
Fantastic Plastic (Poetry) - 3/16/2003 6:34:13 AM
A blessing...and a curse. In a world of responsible people, plastic would stay in it's place, in a dreamworld... Good write, Penelope!! :)
Lands end (Poetry) - 3/16/2003 6:05:01 AM
This is excellent write from you...very very descriptive and the flow is nice...superb...BHUWAN
Olfactory Ramble (Poetry) - 3/16/2003 1:47:23 AM
Excellent imagery in this one.
Olfactory Ramble (Poetry) - 3/16/2003 1:39:58 AM
Beautiful images in this write.