Old Mother Hubbard (Short Story) - 1/28/2011 7:21:08 AM
This is a good story, well-written. The conversation flowed naturally. It was as it I was there in the kitchen with John and Cindy as they worried about the 'toothache of the neighborhood'. Good job!
The Candles (Short Story) - 12/28/2010 11:27:50 AM
Yikes! What an ending! I was NOT expecting that! And this of course, is exactly what a good story is supposed to do ... keep the reader interested and end the story by making the reader want more. Good job.