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Recent Reviews for G.A. Mercer
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Egg Tooth (Short Story) - 6/16/2003 4:39:52 PM
G.A.
Excellent short story! You developed the characters and the plot to perfection and loved the ending. All very difficult to do in just a few words. Makes me want to go check out your book now!
Sherry
Only a Game
www.publishamerica.com
Egg Tooth (Short Story) - 5/22/2003 2:49:05 PM
This would make a good picture book for reading aloud to young children. You made good use of elements such as suspense, (what's in the box?) a simple lesson, (learning responsibility) and relating Audrey's growth to the ducks', and I think it would be a story young children would want to hear over and over. Good job!
Egg Tooth (Short Story) - 5/22/2003 7:04:16 AM
Excellent read and also an educational story, this is perfect for children (and 33 year old men who do not know what an egg tooth is...like myself).
Thank you for inviting me to your den!
Tyrone Vincent Banks
"Under The Melting Pot"
www.tyronebanks.com
www.authorsden.com/tyronebanks
Egg Tooth (Short Story) - 5/21/2003 10:35:55 AM
this is a delightful write, g.a.; really enjoyed reading it! (((HUGS))) and love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. :)
Egg Tooth (Short Story) - 5/21/2003 6:07:30 AM
Dear friend,
Read your story Egg Tooth
Very good indeed. We would like to publish this one or such type of story in our forthcoming print anthology Passion (An Anthology of World's Great Short Stories). I invite you to contribute your story for Passion so that it may be published. If you are interested in getting your short story published in it please send by logging on to
http://cyberwit.net/story.htm
WITH REGARDS
YOURS SINCERELY
RADHA AGRAWAL
http://www.cyberwit.net
4/2B, L.I.G.
Govindpur Colony,
Allahabad-211004 (U.P.)
INDIA
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