Recent Reviews for Shelley L. Moss
The Child Within/Chapter 3 (Short Story) - 4/21/2012 11:03:09 AM|
I never knew u had a site I know your gone grandma I seen what u have been threw I love and miss u
The Child Within/Chapter 3 (Short Story) - 11/24/2003 1:47:58 AM
Shelley this is an excellent piece, i look forward to reading more of your writings
While you Sleep/Chapter 2 (Short Story) - 11/24/2003 1:45:32 AM
Another great piece,keep up the wonderful work...
A Wounded Soul/Chapter one (Short Story) - 11/24/2003 1:43:49 AM
This is a great start to this story, I look forward to reading more of it...
The Flower (Short Story) - 11/24/2003 1:34:15 AM
This is an excellent piece, keep up the great work...
The Child Within/Chapter 3 (Short Story) - 5/2/2003 5:55:42 PM
Hi Shelley welcome to AD...your story is beautifuly told, I'm glad I had the opportunity to read it,I'm sure I'll be reading more of you in future, you have a lovely gift to share;-)!
The Child Within/Chapter 3 (Short Story) - 4/29/2003 7:33:58 PM
Hi Shelley, your writing is wonderful! I enjoyed reading your short stories very much! You are a talent to be sure! (Welcome to Authors Den).
The Child Within/Chapter 3 (Short Story) - 4/29/2003 2:22:11 PM
(((shelley))) welcome to authorsden.com...i hope you'll like it here...as for this story, this is absolutely beautiful! i'll be reading more of you, i'm sure...well done! (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
A Wounded Soul/Chapter one (Short Story) - 4/29/2003 12:58:51 PM
Enjoyed this, will be reading the rest of it.
The Child Within/Chapter 3 (Short Story) - 4/29/2003 12:51:13 PM
Very interesting story Shelley. I really enjoyed reading this. Kind of reminds me of some points in my life of developement.
The Child Within/Chapter 3 (Short Story) - 4/29/2003 10:13:30 AM
Welcome to the Den Shelley. This is VERY nice! I'm going to have to go back and read more of your work.
A Wounded Soul/Chapter one (Short Story) - 4/29/2003 10:08:30 AM
This is a really good write! I am left with a sense of wanting to know more about the woman and what happened to her. Great job!
- J -
The Child Within/Chapter 3 (Short Story) - 4/29/2003 10:01:18 AM
shelley, this is a beautiful and heartfelt piece! i enjoyed it emmensely! thanks for sharing! (((HUGS))) and love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. :)
A Wounded Soul/Chapter one (Short Story) - 4/25/2003 11:39:16 AM
good start to a story that appears to draw the reader in. it sure held my rapt attention! can't wait to read more! :) (((HUGS)))
Bloody Tears of Confusion (Article) - 7/4/2010 7:17:55 PM
I'm really proud of you MOM! I just wish that you was still here. I love you very much
When she Walks (Article) - 11/24/2003 1:52:52 AM
This was a powerful piece and very informative...
Dying for Drugs (Article) - 11/24/2003 1:50:43 AM
This is very informative..Well researched and well written keep it up
Tiny Whispers in the Dark (Article) - 7/30/2003 4:39:36 PM
This is very good information that many parents need to see. Thanks for sharing it.
Bloody Tears of Confusion (Article) - 7/16/2003 6:22:57 AM
This is a disturbing issue. You are brave to bring it up. Thanks for the comments on my article.
Bloody Tears of Confusion (Article) - 6/30/2003 6:51:45 AM
Hi, this is a really good piece. I've done SI for along time now, and everything you've said is amazingly correct. Thanks
The Forgotten Ones (Article) - 5/20/2003 7:35:03 AM
What we do to them will be done to us. All of us will one day be in their places, lie in their beds, feel their emotions. There is such beauty in the elderly, such wisdom, such wealth... yet our society is so stuck on youth... much to our own loss.
Dying for Drugs (Article) - 5/17/2003 8:11:49 AM
Well-written, well-researched, and you bring up many good points. Too often drug abuse is treated as a criminal (or worse, political) problem. There seems to be a great deal of denial involved- people do not want to accept that there is a part of our psyche that is attracted to the way drugs make them feel. It is far easier to blame the drug problem on bad parenting, bad schooling, and MTV. Keep writing, keep the torch burning.
Dying for Drugs (Article) - 5/10/2003 4:12:50 PM
I think this is a good article. I also read your article about your daughter. It was also good. Thanks for the review. I regret that time won't allow me the luxury of teaming up. I am interested in your writing and will try and keep up and will give you support in any way I can.
Dying for Drugs (Article) - 5/5/2003 7:03:40 PM
I just toured the CSI labs here in Phoenix. The drug culture is amazing. It's hard to realize how anyone could screw up their lives so badly. I get my high just waking up every day and seeing the sunshine. Well written article, Shelley.
PCP was developed for the military as a pain killer. It had a dis-associative effect on the brain, and patients started pulling out stitches and opening incisions, not knowing what they were doing. Then, it found it's way to the streets.
Dying for Drugs (Article) - 5/4/2003 9:10:57 AM
Your article is well-researched and well-written. Thanks so much for sharing!
Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$
Dying for Drugs (Article) - 5/3/2003 5:54:13 PM
Shelly this is a EXCELLANT ARTICLE...very VERY informative and well written!
Education and Awareness are the first two most important steps in any issue or such BUT every step which follows thereafter is just as equally important!
Dying for Drugs (Article) - 5/2/2003 6:00:02 PM
Shelly - What an amazing amount of information. You've done your research well. May I make a suggestion? For someone who has so much information, if you do not have a degree in any field that would lend further credence to your knowledge (sorry, but that's the way it is in our society) try to team up with a physician, drug rehab personnel, police officer, or some such other person to co-write a full-length nonfiction a book. This is information in simple, understandable words and much easier to understand than technical texts, and more likely to be read by families who should know about these drugs. Valuable information.
Dying for Drugs (Article) - 5/1/2003 12:45:01 PM
Hi Shelley....Well, I finally made it here to read something for you. This article is very informative, but I have several edits sitting in an email note which I will send to your AD email address. Hope they help out. Great research here...also, I agree that I would like to see a detailed write on the other drugs as well.
The Forgotten Ones (Article) - 4/30/2003 6:52:18 PM
A lot of people fear working with the elderly because they don't like being reminded of their own mortality. Because of this, health care enterprises often welcome in unsavory people who exhibit a superficial compassion for the infirm. It's such a difficult problem. One thing's for sure, the penalties for this crime should be a lot stiffer.
By the way, welcome to AD. I look forward to reading a lot more of your posted works.
When she Walks (Article) - 4/30/2003 6:46:06 AM
Shelley, the poem was haunting and realistic. Thank you for your carefully chosen words. Perhaps breaking the poem up into rhyming lines would make it read better, but the message is clear and beautiful. Would like to see more about your subject after the poetry - perhaps a personal story or quote from an abuse survivor? Great write! Thank you!
Dying for Drugs (Article) - 4/30/2003 6:42:15 AM
Shelley - wow. I was attracted to this article hoping to learn something, and I sure did! As the mom of a 14 yr. old, this is scary stuff. Thank you for informing all of us.
As a writer, I would love to see a full-length article about each and every one of the drugs you mentioned - it's availability, its dangers, etc. Breaking up this piece into several would make an excellent book! I wish you all the best!
Dying for Drugs (Article) - 4/29/2003 11:04:03 PM
Shelly: You asked for honest reviews, so I will be brutally honest, okay? Your heart is certainly in the right place and I think you're a force for good, but if you're going to write, you must pay more attention to the details. Examples: In the forum request, you wrote "your" when you meant "you're", and in this article '60% (of) youngsters who use...go' (not goes). Also, how about the convention that numbers ten and below are usually written out? (one, six, but 23 and 117). These seem like trivial things, but they give the impression that you're not serious about writing well, and I think you want to be a serious writer, right? I wish you well!
Dying for Drugs (Article) - 4/29/2003 7:38:56 PM
Thanks for posting this Shelley. It's a very informative article!
Looking Beyond the Package/Part 3 (Article) - 4/29/2003 5:12:09 PM
You have excellent points to ponder. People should be held responsible for thier children. I am very interested in helping out teens. Just not sure where to start.
Dying for Drugs (Article) - 4/29/2003 5:08:11 PM
A well written article, but I would take the are out of the second line. Your article is very informative. I've never heard of the OXY drug, and it sure sounds deadly. It's ashamed at what can be sold, or put on the internet. Thanks for coming my way and your comments. I'm a father of 4, 2 still home. My 2nd born girl smokes the weed, but she said she does nothing else. I hope not.
Looking Beyond the Package/Part 2 (Article) - 4/29/2003 5:02:40 PM
This really hurts me to read how lonely, sad and scared these kids are. I get angry at the fact that parents aren't there to be with the children they brought into this world. Oh I cannot get started on talking abou this it angers me so much.
You have great points in your writings and I pray for these children.
Looking Beyond the Package/Part 2 (Article) - 4/29/2003 2:25:11 PM
YIPE. chilling, horrifying write...where are our children...and where are the parents that are supposed to be watching them...thank you for this, every parent should be REQUIRED to read this...you may have saved many lives today...(((HUGS))) and love, karla. *tears* "what if your parents found out/they wouldn't care as long as i am out of the way" HEARTBREAKING, but oh, so true...