Do Bees Poop In The Honey? (Book) - 6/8/2004 12:59:56 PM
Such a catchy, fun title - sounds like it would be so much fun to read!
Do Bees Poop In The Honey? (Book) - 5/28/2004 12:14:38 PM
Lol!! Good question....hehehehhe!!
Would love to read more about the poop thingy!!
Love Tinka
Sketches From Life (Book) - 9/16/2003 4:23:43 PM
Looks like a super book...and I love the cover...good luck and I'll go check out your poetry section ...
Sketches From Life (Book) - 6/1/2003 4:25:15 PM
Both of the excerpts are great. My old bugaboo, "..these waters for [it is] own." needs to be edited out.
A Cydonian Mission (Short Story) - 1/3/2007 6:31:29 PM
A Cydonian Mission (Short Story) - 6/17/2005 1:30:32 AM
Most interesting story Londis...this reminded me of Justin....and the aliens!!
Thank you for sharing another great excitting story!!
You do like the UFO's huh...they scare the shit out of me..do they use bathtubs for beds too....lol!!
Love Tinka
A Cydonian Mission (Short Story) - 6/16/2005 9:06:10 AM
inteeresting yet fascinating, londis; very well done! bravo!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
A Cydonian Mission (Short Story) - 6/16/2005 6:41:38 AM
A truly interesting story, Lonnie; and very well done. Liked the ending very much, and your Audio Presentation, too.
A Cydonian Mission (Short Story) - 6/15/2005 3:50:57 PM
Then I read the first sentence I almost did not read this story. I would have missed out on a very well-written, GOOD tale of revenge had I not. You tend to your craft well, very well, Mr. Carpenter, I could find nothing I would change. Of course, I am also the worlds worst editor. What I found so endearing about this story, besides the fact that you are a hell of a short story writer, is that you did not fall into the trap that so many writers would have with this story. That trap being that these are aliens but they are good and mean us no harm. In this story, they indeed, did mean harm. Congratulations on a good story!
Showdown At Shamrock (Short Story) - 12/25/2004 7:20:01 PM
Love a good western vignette and this one was very good! I can relate to that boy somewhat, having been raised on a big ranch with a long history of western lore. I will be reading more of your work, keep it up. -Lonesome Phil
Showdown At Shamrock (Short Story) - 10/4/2004 4:39:27 PM
Very interesting work. Quite enjoyable.
Showdown At Shamrock (Short Story) - 3/8/2004 10:29:59 AM
Very good write, Londis; enjoyed very much! Very well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Gravity (Poetry) - 10/13/2008 10:59:26 PM
braap fucking yes
Andre (Poetry) - 6/10/2008 11:13:00 AM
Well written! Andre is a master of his words and you have given hime a wonderful honour in the writing field. He must be very humble to receive such words from you. Well done!
Smiles,
Dorothy
The Language Of The Trees (Poetry) - 6/26/2007 3:31:18 PM
You know what Lon? I actually think the trees do have a language all of their own. If we could only pick up the vibrations, we could hear what they say to each other. This is a sweet poem of imagination, and remeberance of what was done beneath 'the ole oak tree'. Thank you, Lon, for sharing this part of your life and mind.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your sister, Barbie
The Little Christmas Tree (Poetry) - 12/17/2006 3:52:59 PM
What a wonderful Christmas (tree) story.
Chrissy
The Little Christmas Tree (Poetry) - 12/15/2006 6:46:21 AM
A lesson of Perseverance through the wise and magnificent verse-lines of "The Little Christmas Tree"... A poem that honors the language and enriches the pages of the history of Poetry.
Long healthy creative life through a blissful living, Poet.
In gratitude and admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
The Little Christmas Tree (Poetry) - 12/15/2006 3:19:44 AM
Truly enjoyed this Christmas tale, Lonnie!
The Little Christmas Tree (Poetry) - 12/14/2006 3:48:33 PM
Bruce has so much personality, you gotta love him.
CJ is right, it should be a story. If I were a kid, I would want to read it over and over.
I'm happy for you, Bruce!
Connie
The Little Christmas Tree (Poetry) - 12/14/2006 10:40:58 AM
Nice write
Sleeping In The Bathtub (Poetry) - 12/14/2006 10:30:33 AM
I'm fast becoming a fan of your work, Londis -- this is well written, and your rhyme and meter make it an excellent song. Very well done.
Love,
CJ
The Little Christmas Tree (Poetry) - 12/14/2006 10:30:25 AM
Lon, you have painted a very good picture of what a Christmas tree should be. This is really beautiful, thank you for sharing. Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year too.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."
Honky Tonk Laptop Girl (Poetry) - 12/14/2006 10:28:31 AM
Excellent, and I love the beat to it!
Love,
CJ
Mike The Minnow (Poetry) - 12/14/2006 10:26:39 AM
Very nice poem, Londis -- children will love this!
Love,
CJ
The Little Christmas Tree (Poetry) - 12/14/2006 10:18:30 AM
Most excellent Londis!!
Good to read you again!!
Still sleeping in the Bath???
Happy Holidays to you and yours!!
love Tinka
The Little Christmas Tree (Poetry) - 12/14/2006 8:21:58 AM
Excellent, Londis -- this would make a dynamite short story, you know. Again, excellent poem, and I really enjoyed this.
Love and Happy Christmas,
CJ
Along Came You (Poetry) - 7/2/2006 2:55:10 AM
Lovely sentiments, it is nice to see such heartfelt words! Sandi
Mike The Minnow (Poetry) - 3/19/2006 1:59:38 PM
hehehhehe, cute...
love joanne
Mike The Minnow (Poetry) - 1/20/2006 12:07:21 PM
Cute write!!
Love Tinka
Mike The Minnow (Poetry) - 1/9/2006 8:18:08 AM
ROFL...precious
Mike The Minnow (Poetry) - 1/7/2006 8:46:37 AM
Very easy to imagine Aesop reading this delightful poem parable and smiling at how very good and true and wise it is:-) Thank you.
Mike The Minnow (Poetry) - 1/7/2006 8:35:05 AM
I picture this as a great 'learn from your experience' allegory for a children's book. Do you know a good illustrator?
Mike The Minnow (Poetry) - 1/7/2006 5:36:41 AM
Seems Mike wised up just in time LOL
Along Came You (Poetry) - 1/7/2006 5:01:27 AM
What a happy poem, Londis.
Mike The Minnow (Poetry) - 1/7/2006 4:59:46 AM
So cute.
Mike The Minnow (Poetry) - 1/6/2006 11:15:43 PM
Who says the influence of Mother Goose and Grimm's Fairy Tales in long is the past? Not here! This is neat. . .sharing it with my grandson.
blessin's Minnow Muse,
cynth'ya lewis reed
Mike The Minnow (Poetry) - 1/6/2006 7:44:19 PM
Wise message through the lines of "Mike The Minnow".
I have enjoyed the reading of "Mike The Minnow", and have learned
a soul building lesson.
You are a Sublime Poet always complying with Poetry's tasks.
May the Mother-Poet keep smiling to You.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
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