Past Perfect (Poetry) - 4/19/2011 12:04:54 PM
If he was female instead of male, I'd say it was pms.
Seriously, I like the poem and sympathize with this man, whose imperfection is suddenly revealed. It must have been a blow to him.
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Past Perfect (Poetry) - 4/17/2011 8:17:49 AM
i would think he's lost in his senses ...
interesting poem ....