Recent Reviews for Elizabeth Evelyn Stember
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Sorcerer Beginnings (Short Story) - 2/9/2009 4:39:24 PM
I love it, grabs the attention from the first and builds in excitement and cunning type of fear that the girl and demon seem to swap from one to the other...Well done.
Fee
Innocent Trespass (Short Story) - 4/17/2008 6:22:57 AM
Dear Elizabeth
Allow me to tell you that you are going to win the Booker's if you ever write a novel. You have a rare combination of KING (for creating details) and KUNDERA (for painting the tragedy). The way you paint details is really superb. I wish you were my co-author on my under-pen novel "Original Sinner", that is basically about the history of SATAN.
Masood
Innocent Trespass (Short Story) - 3/27/2008 11:48:14 AM
A nice one - engrossing from start to finish. Good imagery.
Richard
Porn (Poetry) - 11/29/2009 11:36:27 AM
it is alway the horror that falls from the pen that drains the heart of much needed pain..masterly writen..Eugene
Dear Lucifer (Poetry) - 10/26/2009 9:52:32 PM
it is the light barer that brings the light with in the making of ones purpose as you say it is "They haven’t changed
Only a white streak on their frings
Shows that time has passed" that is beyond all i ever hoped to hear..
Porn (Poetry) - 11/7/2008 12:38:43 PM
You released the stress of the office with this one. It is on the dark side, but we need to hear all sides too. It is wonderfully written. Don't give up the ship, stay with your job.
Porn (Poetry) - 10/16/2008 4:16:57 PM
Great poem. I've had my share of blood sucking boss's.
Porn (Poetry) - 10/15/2008 10:16:34 AM
A well thought out concept that shows your ingenuity and brilliance with words.
Porn (Poetry) - 10/14/2008 2:42:02 AM
well done
Porn (Poetry) - 10/13/2008 11:41:24 PM
This has a dark feel to it which I loved.
Porn (Poetry) - 10/13/2008 4:56:04 PM
Loved it, a little on the dark side but that is okay for the imagery is brilliant. I too used to write and do a lot of my personal writing at my office in between assignments in fact wrote one of my published works there. Great writing here kiddo...enjoyed.
fee
Porn (Poetry) - 10/13/2008 1:56:45 PM
Very interesting and innovative...
Be always safe,
Karen
Porn (Poetry) - 10/13/2008 1:38:18 PM
A very interesting poem and well written,I enjoy reading it,take care
Edwin
The Unsolvable Riddle (Poetry) - 9/18/2008 8:07:10 PM
i cannot guess what you are this is the answer no no is the aswer no i cannot guess what you are but is no a guess see even just saying no i cannot guess could make it a paradox but at the same time i could say no i casnnot guess for i know the answer no is correct anyone fallow that? very nice poem though very nice
Dear Lucifer (Poetry) - 9/2/2008 7:15:34 AM
I do not see this Lucifer as the devil we know from the Bible but possibly a victim of abuse and the narrator is his friend--maybe even his lover or alter ego--a split personality like Jekyll and Hyde.
"Why cower in fear? ... You warned me to stay away" is why I saw Lucifer the way I did. I've read Sybil and it sounds here that the narrator and Lucifer may be the same person. One runs to the other after suffering abuse.
The Unsolvable Riddle (Poetry) - 8/16/2008 5:04:48 PM
Since you are asking with an interrogative word "What", I assumed that the answer is my theory about duality. From this duality or pairing, all things in the universe came into existence, where even God is only a part of the evolution of creation...AOUIE
Poor Erik (Poetry) - 7/15/2008 8:56:22 PM
A love that transcends time is one eternal to the joined souls, a wonderful piece of purity....
Be always safe,
Karen
Dear Lucifer (Poetry) - 7/15/2008 3:46:16 AM
The intrique between good and evil, white and black, God and the Devil is a special one we all sometimes balance on the line of. As Lucifer was actually an Angel at one time could he still have some redeeming qualities? Who knows but he is definately an amazing figure who has fueled the imaginations of writers for eternity. I am an agnostic and do not believe in any organized religion so as such I cannot believe in Licifer any more than I can believe in a virgin born savior but I do believe in good and evil. Keep on writing Ms. Stember, I find your outlooks refreshing.
Hugs
Fee
A little reminder (Poetry) - 7/15/2008 3:38:23 AM
Very deep and intense look back on the stage we call life. Your sentiments are true and real although I sense a lot of pain or anger in your words or between them. I may be wrong just a feeling. Myself when I die I have decided to have the silliest picture of me they can find enlarged and free booze for all. Maybe one of me in my motercycle leather but nothing on under but my bare butt sticking out through my chaps. lOl
hugs
Fee
Poor Erik (Poetry) - 7/15/2008 3:16:58 AM
Very intense as a lover looking non judgemental at a life she knows and in some regards respects but also feels sadness over. Well done.
Fee
The Unsolvable Riddle (Poetry) - 6/3/2008 2:03:49 PM
I think its an oxymoron!
A soldier is a soldier (Poetry) - 4/21/2008 3:40:31 PM
the soul is an a mercenary of war and peace, the bitterness of war is the voice of the dead, no matter what is said, the dead are silence and the voices of the apst live on in the hearts and soul of the living, I wished I could give you hope in ending the war, but our shallow voices are not heard, yes you have wore you soul on your shoulder and the tears you seek will be a scar forever, good piece rich
This Story is Wrong (Poetry) - 4/17/2008 6:04:57 AM
"justice is a whore"
"Love only is the illusion..."
All this makes the "human story wrong". The words of wisdom seem to come very easily out of your PEN but if one cracks the shell of your muse, it contains anger more than PAIN. i have heard that PAIN makes the PEN but i think ANGER makes STEMBER. :) The way you hit straight into the eyes makes your work extra-ordinary. brilliant!!!
masood
An Invitation (Poetry) - 4/16/2008 9:29:53 AM
Forget the awards! Just keep writing, because you're very talented.
This Story is Wrong (Poetry) - 3/25/2008 5:29:37 AM
This is beautiful and I can see why Lois wanted us to meet. It was her way of saying we would like each others work. AND I do like yours, lovely write. Best regards, Bonnie May
This Story is Wrong (Poetry) - 3/20/2008 12:30:00 PM
Dear,
You might like to get into Bonnie May's blog and site. She write very good children's books for all ages too and many lovely poems. She is a good friend and I'd like you to meet her if you will.
The Goddess (Poetry) - 3/20/2008 12:28:02 PM
Good writing and I am so glad you are so fortunate to have the opportunity to write poems and win awards. You are young adn will go far in life. Keep on the right path and do for others and always keep the faith and be uplifting. Lois
The Unsolvable Riddle (Poetry) - 3/2/2008 3:50:20 PM
i think it's the air
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