Recent Reviews for Walter William Safar
The Devil's Architect (Book) - 9/13/2011 4:58:32 PM|
Wow, what a plot, what reading this would be!!! Your onto it Walter! :)
LITTLE DIME (Poetry) - 11/17/2012 10:27:58 AM
Which way shall I take the course to my readerís hearts,
What scale and tools do I collect with,
What voyeurís wrap I claim in readiness.
Are the ages of my father come to bear,
Or will be for next generationís benefit:
And for sure hope luck to smile a lot,
Unless I weaken in devotion,
That I harbor this pretext,
Where course is subject to a wanton age.
Gather, flock with us; examine all to beyond:
Valiant person have surpassed our time.
LITTLE DIME (Poetry) - 6/13/2012 4:06:32 PM
Such a profound,thought provoking write, Walter; I have never considered the sound made by a single dime dropped into a tin box,but now, that you have brought it to my attention, I sense the poverty,and the desperation; imagine what feelings are evoked by the sound of a red cent dropped into such a tin!
This is poignant,and I thank you for sharing.
Barbara J. Henry
MY FRIEND (Poetry) - 12/15/2011 9:32:53 AM
I find your verses very compelling and thought-eliciting; as well, they give rise to deep emotions. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace to you,
THE LAST VOYAGE (Poetry) - 12/15/2011 8:18:58 AM
William, all 3 of these are masterful. I think I like Voyge the best because I can relate to it the closest. Patrick
HOPE (Poetry) - 11/1/2011 2:56:29 AM
Once again yuo write ith depth One can feel the solitary lonely feeling if dispair I think one needs hope to survive and go forward . Set a goal for yourself and try to move forward. Have yuo thought of putting your poems into a book and publishing it? I published my childrens story on Create Space. Its a do it your self site and is not expensive at all....M
NEWBORN VERSE (Poetry) - 11/1/2011 2:49:52 AM
Yes, your poems do awaken compassion! They do more than that, They reach out and draw the reader into your world. They reach out and touch ones inner soul! You have a special gift so keep writing and sharing....M
LITTLE DIME (Poetry) - 11/1/2011 2:45:13 AM
Dear Walter , Your poems have such depth ! One can feel the utter lonelness and dispair, yet the message given is pure and eleoquent.
The imagery in all you write takes the reader there.....M
NEWBORN VERSE (Poetry) - 10/6/2011 12:42:50 PM
Walter Your Poetry Is Amazing!
Thank You for sharing your beautiful gifts!
I feel like I have discovered a sacred vault!
Through Love's Bounty We Become...
HOPE (Poetry) - 9/21/2011 5:25:13 AM
A raw glimpse into the world of the hungry and homeless. I also write for them, Walter, but you do it with much feeling. The reality is there in your write. I love your style and your compassion.
THE LAST VOYAGE (Poetry) - 9/21/2011 5:22:41 AM
Such preception you have to the rawness of homelessness. You caputre the essence of their lives and I can feel myself drawn into their world with your words. You are indeed a gifted poet. I will be tracking you.
LITTLE DIME (Poetry) - 9/17/2011 8:11:31 PM
I've enjoyed your poems even though they seem filled with pathos. Comparing myself with your picture, I am probably farther down the road than you, but we share the same feelings about a final ending to what is our life--what is!
One wonders WHY we are here? Seems like there is no purpose other to live on through regeneration.
I enjoy your writing.
NEWBORN VERSE (Poetry) - 9/13/2011 5:00:21 PM
Too beautiful to be overlooked is your work Walter. Keep writing, your words are soothing..enlightening, enjoyable..Ty. Ch'erie
NEWBORN VERSE (Poetry) - 8/6/2011 2:14:26 PM
beautiful work. beautiful soul expressed in your work.
keep creating -