Bother the Children (Book) - 10/4/2004 12:33:11 PM
I look forward to reading the finished product!!
In your excerpt I have my theories about the unseen foe but I would like to read the rest to see if I'm even close.
After the Fall (Book) - 7/16/2003 10:53:29 AM
Your visuals are vivid and your words include a lot of detail that coerces the reader to move forward. I like the way the scene is being set up. One object at a time like a painting that starts off like a line drawing with more details to follow.
This is an obsession taken to a new level. Although I am of the Male gender, I can certainly "feel" her pain and urge to blame herself for something that was probably not her fault.
Good luck my fellow PA author...
The Ones that Expire (Short Story) - 9/27/2004 11:58:22 PM
I agree with the others on here, this is a horrifying write and you have an imagination for this kind of horror. If I didn't have all the places filled for Tabloid Purposes you would of been one of the writers in there. You are a very talented horror writer. You definately have a voice. Stay with it.
The Ones that Expire (Short Story) - 8/30/2004 1:55:25 PM
This is absolutely gross and creepy! Gees...good write...very descriptive
The Ones that Expire (Short Story) - 5/8/2004 10:33:14 AM
YIKES! This chilled me to the bone! HORRIFYINGLY good write! BRRR!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(