Recent Reviews for Fawn E Caldwell
This Sorrowful Day (Poetry) - 5/12/2013 4:08:45 PM|
That is the greatest expectation of them all...to see our loved ones again someday...and we shall remember clearly them to the last detail.
This Sorrowful Day (Poetry) - 5/12/2013 9:17:54 AM
A wonderful eulogy for a lost loved one.
This Sorrowful Day (Poetry) - 5/12/2013 2:53:13 AM
a fine write of the sorrow of such a loss
This Sorrowful Day (Poetry) - 5/11/2013 3:01:13 PM
There is always the hope of forever since love never dies. Thank you for sharing, Fawn. Love and peace to you,
Angels Cry Too (Poetry) - 5/11/2013 2:51:51 PM
A sad and respectful tribute, Fawn. Love and best wishes,
Turn Around (Poetry) - 5/11/2013 2:51:03 PM
Well, if the ending of this poem is any indication, there is light and hope. Thank you for sharing, Fawn. Love and best wishes to you,
The Final Angel (Poetry) - 5/11/2013 2:49:53 PM
Bittersweet thoughts and feelings arise from my soul as I read your verses, Fawn. Honestly, I do not know where I'd be today if angels had not saved me time and time again along the way (often from myself). Love and best wishes,
Forever in a Song (Poetry) - 5/11/2013 2:48:25 PM
I know this "song's" theme intimately. I have not given up although I did come close. I can relate, Fawn. Love and best wishes,
For Fia (Poetry) - 9/12/2012 10:46:42 AM
I thank everyone for their comments--At this time I will NOT be getting another dog or any other pet as it just is too painful to lose them when the time comes! However, if it is meant to be that another comes my way then so be it, but for now...
For Fia (Poetry) - 9/9/2012 10:31:33 AM
She lived a very long life under your loving care. It is probably time to follow Mr. Ed's advice and go to the local dog shelter and rescue another little puppy that will love you just as much as ever.
For Fia (Poetry) - 9/8/2012 6:25:25 PM
Completely soul-reaching in thought and emotion awakened. My sympathy to you. Love and best wishes,
For Fia (Poetry) - 9/8/2012 4:14:15 PM
they are our dearest of friends and their loss so painful because of it
For Fia (Poetry) - 9/8/2012 3:45:48 PM
To loose a beloved dog of so many years.
Fond memories in a loving tribute to Fia.
Lady Mary Ann
My Greatest Love (Poetry) - 8/19/2012 8:53:08 AM
Truly sad piece but the sentiments were expressed so well and so vividly. I know of which you speak through experience and what we once had and lost can never really be brought back to life again once the passion wears off. The vows we kept must be honored unless you are being completely ignored or abused for the sin of our thoughts destroys the validity of our own integrity and self respect. Beautiful expression, Fawn...you do this so well.
The Return (Poetry) - 8/19/2012 8:48:37 AM
Very beautiful romantic piece of praise, however I am uncertain how it ties in with its title...It may be an inside thought perhaps that the reader may not be privy to?...I was hoping for an explanation in the ending as I read it and found it (as if it were missing), at least, one more stanza to balance it out. This is such a heartwarming poem just the same.
The Return (Poetry) - 8/17/2012 10:54:26 AM
Heartfelt tribute...loved it!
The Return (Poetry) - 8/16/2012 8:40:11 PM
This is a fine tribute to the one who merits it. Thank you for sharing, Fawn. Love and best wishes,
The Return (Poetry) - 8/16/2012 2:38:44 PM
i thought this was a beautiful offering and related to by so many...i would have chosen this above others if i had been looking for a love reminder in a note card to my love
The Return (Poetry) - 8/16/2012 1:53:10 PM
When you say “you,” I hope that you are talking to “me.” But I really think that you're not. So, forget about it. ;-)
The Return (Poetry) - 8/16/2012 12:25:34 AM
very nicly done
My Secret (Poetry) - 8/8/2012 9:53:48 AM
The quandary that you are expressing in this poem is probably the result of a forbidden kind of relationship or the fear that love will not be returned. I guess that if someone has these kinds of thoughts, they should refrain from trying to establish a relationship until circumstances change–and they often do. Well written.
My Secret (Poetry) - 8/6/2012 10:45:46 AM
This is precious, Fawn! And remember, there are signs... just watch for the signs. =))
My Secret (Poetry) - 8/2/2012 8:24:27 PM
Sweet... ...and your theme is a timeless and universal one, Fawn. Nicely expressed. Thanks for sharing. Love and best wishes,
A Letter To You (Poetry) - 7/29/2012 10:10:15 AM
For I shall love you through all time
even though not once were you ever mine.
And so this letter I write today
reflects all the things I wanted to say.
This is a timeless and universal theme of this life/world, Fawn. You have shared and expressed it effectively through your verses here. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Tucked Away (Poetry) - 7/18/2012 8:43:07 AM
we all can relate to this special place that we go...every now and then.
A Letter To You (Poetry) - 7/12/2012 1:33:31 PM
Now that you ask. ;)
Seya in the potting shed. lol
Unrequited love is a dire pain!
A Letter To You (Poetry) - 7/3/2012 1:44:02 PM
a 'connection'...bittersweet, lasting and treasured. thanks for sharing.
A Letter To You (Poetry) - 6/29/2012 3:09:59 PM
Flows like honey..sentiments sing~
A Letter To You (Poetry) - 6/29/2012 10:10:02 AM
Sometimes the ones who we think do not see or share the love we offer are often the ones who love us the most. It is easy to relate to this one...thank you.
A Letter To You (Poetry) - 6/29/2012 6:40:30 AM
I hope He can see and know this.
All That Remains (Poetry) - 11/17/2010 5:31:36 PM
Heck, it is terrible and I totally empathaise. Spending time oer a couple of decades ago on USAF bases, only when the guys from nam were drunk did I hear much that will die with me. Such a thankless task!
I hope they find closure, many fail to grasp why it is so necessary.
All That Remains (Poetry) - 11/17/2010 12:23:59 PM
I only wish it were possible to bring every one of our hero-warriors home but I appreciate your sentiments expressed beautifully in this write on reminding us we must never forget those left behind. Thank you, Fawn
All That Remains (Poetry) - 11/16/2010 8:42:11 PM
Reverently sentimental and beautiful words to share as there were many who never returned...
Be always safe,
All That Remains (Poetry) - 11/16/2010 8:03:06 PM
Thankfully, the soul lives evermore and your poem is testimonial to that since "he" has not been forgotten. Thank you for sharing this apt and timely write, Fawn. Love and best wishes,
Deep Down Inside (Poetry) - 11/7/2010 12:24:13 AM
Very nicely done, Fawn
Deep Down Inside (Poetry) - 11/2/2010 1:46:28 PM
Beautiful expressions of love and romance.
Do you ever... (Poetry) - 11/2/2010 11:12:39 AM
I most certainly do, Fawn. I appreciate where your verses take me. Love and best wishes,
Deep Down Inside (Poetry) - 11/2/2010 11:11:21 AM
Your verse express a universal and timeless theme in this world/life, Fawn. I am sure many of your readers will relate to what you have expressed; I know I do. Love and best wishes,
Tucked Away (Poetry) - 8/16/2010 9:13:51 PM
I think we all have a secret place we turn to from time to time to soothe the soul...
Be always safe,
I've dreamt you (Poetry) - 8/16/2010 11:34:52 AM
I have to agree with Andy that, when it comes to love, it is not true as so many claim that "time heals all wounds." Thank you for sharing this meaningful write, Fawn. Love and best wishes to you,
Tucked Away (Poetry) - 8/16/2010 11:32:01 AM
I find your verses very much soul-reaching, Fawn; meaningful and easily to relate to as they express a universal and timeless theme in this life/world. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,
Tucked Away (Poetry) - 8/16/2010 11:26:10 AM
Wonderful poetry, wistful thoughts placed in a book that opens your heart whenever you look.
The Soul Plane (Poetry) - 6/20/2010 5:53:49 PM
wow fawn...words wreaking of pain to ponder... could be many inspirations behind this...compelling write...nice...patmedlin
Empty love (Poetry) - 6/19/2010 9:37:33 PM
I find your verses (what they express) very compelling, Fawn. Sadly, I think that you express a universal and timeless theme in this world/life. Well done. Love, peace, and best wishes to you,
Prince of Darkness (Poetry) - 6/19/2010 8:11:25 PM
Evil is ever present and you are right, Fawn; we must ever be vigilant. Love and best wishes,
The Soul Plane (Poetry) - 6/19/2010 8:09:10 PM
You have caused me to pause and to reflect upon your verses, Fawn. A most engaging write. Love and best wishes to you,
Sanskrit Love (Poetry) - 6/12/2010 9:41:46 PM
we journey many times on many planes----may you be united in the here and now-----if not on another-----
Sanskrit Love (Poetry) - 6/10/2010 7:14:11 AM
Oh, Oh, Oh, this is perfection, I can't think of what else to say, just I do praise it, highly~
Sanskrit Love (Poetry) - 6/10/2010 3:12:45 AM
Very well achieved, Fawn
Sanskrit Love (Poetry) - 6/9/2010 7:25:03 PM
Wow, what a sad poem. I remember those times. It was excruciatingly painful! I'm so glad I got that divorce! Life is so much better!
The Final Soul (Poetry) - 6/9/2010 6:47:23 PM
Soul-stirring in scope of emotions and meaning expressed, Fawn. Love and best wishes,
Sanskrit Love (Poetry) - 6/9/2010 6:46:21 PM
Somehow sad; personally, I do not like "alone." A compelling write, Fawn. Love and peace to you,
Nothing Will Ever Be (Poetry) - 6/9/2010 6:45:25 PM
Your verses certainly provide substance to reflect upon, Fawn. Love and best wishes to you,
Lost (Poetry) - 3/14/2010 4:52:45 AM
Great. Simple and touching. Love it.
The Final Soul (Poetry) - 3/14/2010 4:51:00 AM
Great use of words - feels like I could her experince those feelings.
I've dreamt you (Poetry) - 2/7/2010 2:17:59 PM
A hole in your soul. No bloke can ever fill it, maybe anaesthetise it for a while, but the hole in the soul will remain.
Lost (Poetry) - 1/17/2010 5:08:45 AM
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Falling (Poetry) - 1/2/2010 10:25:35 PM
How sad, and the honesty is raw and on the surface in this emotional poem. I think we all feel like this sometimes, but we have to fight on. :)
Falling (Poetry) - 1/1/2010 3:13:58 PM
Nope, you are not alone.
The last stanza is miles from the truth. However I can understand why anyone can feel so abandoned by mankind.
- all there is, is lust and greed - grrr I so understand this, you want friends but all they want is covert.
yes we do care, fall in to our arms where there is a place beyond commerce of right and wrong and in this field is where such innocence belongs.
Amazing poem, poignant, however it is only a small part of the story.
Falling (Poetry) - 1/1/2010 12:56:51 PM
Its hard work to have a human heart. Very nice Fawn.
Falling (Poetry) - 12/31/2009 9:17:55 AM
Accurate observations. Well spoken. You must find your "caring" niche in life.
A Wife's Rebellion (Poetry) - 9/28/2009 12:59:50 AM
A very straightforward and honest poem.All women should be appreciated and respected by their husbands/boyfriends.Its hard enough for a woman to give birth among other things.take care
A Wife's Rebellion (Poetry) - 9/26/2009 5:12:50 PM
Sounds like family law and mediation loom in the future. Love it.
A Wife's Rebellion (Poetry) - 9/25/2009 6:10:50 PM
Assertive and clearly expressed; nicely done, Fawn. Love and best wishes to you,
A Wife's Rebellion (Poetry) - 9/25/2009 5:13:50 PM
Seems I have been there before...
Be always safe,
A Wife's Rebellion (Poetry) - 9/25/2009 3:33:43 PM
lol. You said it. Been there done that and better for it. Liz
Just garbage (Poetry) - 8/30/2009 3:35:26 PM
Cleverly concocted, Fawn. Be well. Love and best wishes,
What are wishes for... (Poetry) - 8/30/2009 3:34:25 PM
Where would we be without dreams, Fawn? Nicely expressed. Love and best wishes to you,
The Visit (Poetry) - 7/9/2009 6:08:57 PM
I have a daughter who is always late. She takes after my ex much to the frustration of her sister. I love them all anyway. Thanks for sharing, Fawn. Love and best wishes,
A quiet stillness (Poetry) - 7/8/2009 4:43:06 PM
Beautiful tribute,I enjoy reading it,take care
A quiet stillness (Poetry) - 7/6/2009 8:10:49 PM
You have captured his essence so delicately and profoundly....
Be always safe,
A quiet stillness (Poetry) - 7/6/2009 5:09:56 PM
Sad but very good tribute. God Bless!
A quiet stillness (Poetry) - 7/6/2009 9:29:22 AM
YOUR TRIBUTE, FILLED WITH VERY GOOD PHRASES, IMAGERY AND RHYME IS WELL DONE. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE
A quiet stillness (Poetry) - 7/6/2009 9:15:51 AM
Sad yes... ...but a fine tribute, Fawn. Love and best wishes to you,
Refrigerator Poetry (Poetry) - 6/30/2009 7:35:35 PM
Excellent poem,take care
Agingless (Poetry) - 6/30/2009 7:32:55 PM
Excellent poem,Great work,take care
Agingless (Poetry) - 6/28/2009 7:23:04 PM
I find your verses real and impactful, Fawn. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Bugs and things (Poetry) - 5/24/2009 10:27:33 AM
Thank you for sharing this informative write Fawn. I appreciate it. Love and best wishes,
Tap-Tap (Poetry) - 5/24/2009 10:25:00 AM
Me too, Fawn. I can empathize. The night can do strange things. I love this. Thanks for sharing. Love and best wishes,
To The End (Poetry) - 4/18/2009 9:10:18 AM
I get it. It is sad though. Love and hugs,
Whimsical nonsense (Poetry) - 4/18/2009 9:09:15 AM
Cool poem. Dreams do that. Thanks for sharing, Fawnie. Love and best wishes,
Refrigerator Poetry (Poetry) - 4/12/2009 8:07:38 PM
we store memories in various emotional receptacles ... no better place than a poem ...
Refrigerator Poetry (Poetry) - 4/12/2009 5:18:30 PM
I liked this much..the title caught my eye as I used to write my dad poems as a child and leave them on the fridge...but this was far better...well done
Garden of Sleep (Poetry) - 4/12/2009 12:50:43 PM
This is enchanting in tone and meanging gleaned. Thank you, Fawn. Love and best wishes to you,
Refrigerator Poetry (Poetry) - 4/12/2009 12:49:47 PM
This reminds me of when I was a child and girls used to love it when I chased them through the woods. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you, Fawn,
Refrigerator Poetry (Poetry) - 4/12/2009 12:25:54 PM
Intriguing. Nice journey. Liz
Garden of Sleep (Poetry) - 4/12/2009 10:38:52 AM
I feel very relaxed after this read. Over all, there seems to be a sense of letting Fate work its magic, and trusting in it completely. A great poem. Happy Easter:)
Twila Twilight (Poetry) - 4/9/2009 10:48:15 AM
This is a nice "teaser," Fawn. Love and peace,
The Veteran (Poetry) - 4/9/2009 10:47:31 AM
I went to fight the Vietnam War
And it destroyed me to the core.
So true, Fawn. This poem expresses it very effectively. Love and best wishes,
Never more than a friend (Poetry) - 4/9/2009 10:45:52 AM
I can completely relate to the sentiments that you express within your verses here, Fawn. True friendship is a treasure but sometimes, the friendship seems mostly one-way; and that is sad. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Twila Twilight (Poetry) - 3/29/2009 3:20:01 AM
Hi Fawn,a well written piece,I enjoy reading it,take care
Never more than a friend (Poetry) - 3/24/2009 1:54:54 PM
Your words express such a sweet sadness and things such as this happen more than we care to admit, beautiful writing...
Be always safe,
The Visit (Poetry) - 3/21/2009 5:36:21 AM
Beautiful writing - are you related to another talented Caldwell I know (Janet)? Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
The Visit (Poetry) - 3/20/2009 10:51:47 PM
A very prolific poem, natural and refreshing in its simple style and lines, very enjoyable to read. Yes, the humor is great too
The Visit (Poetry) - 3/20/2009 2:35:15 PM
I can relate, sounds like my daughter. ;) Great poem.
Fear (Poetry) - 1/6/2009 8:00:04 AM
Wow, Fawn, you really touched a nerve with me, as like yourself, I have a number of allergies to medications and am always worried when I have to go to the dentist, etc, God bless you and keep you, I will keep you in my prayers-Michelle
Fear (Poetry) - 1/5/2009 7:51:56 PM
overcoming our fear guarantees our survival ... good luck ...
Fear (Poetry) - 1/4/2009 12:27:52 AM
Fawn this poem really touch my heart.I am going to pray that the surgery will be alright and that you will come out alive.You are in my thoughts.take care of yourself
Fear (Poetry) - 1/3/2009 11:22:24 AM
Expressed so well. I feel for you going into the unknown. The fear must be unbearable. I wish you well, and my prayers are with you.
Song of Angels (Poetry) - 12/27/2008 2:50:01 PM
So tremendously beautiful!
Tap-Tap (Poetry) - 9/24/2008 8:14:28 AM
I've been there! LOL! Well told!
Song of Angels (Poetry) - 9/24/2008 8:12:03 AM
The Fat (Poetry) - 9/23/2008 2:56:07 AM
I hear ya. I am so sick of this "get-healthy, lose-weight; you'll-never-fit-in-unless-you're-skinny" mentality, I could just VOMIT!! If people can't accept someone for their inner self instead of focusin' on what's on the outside, then SCREW 'em, is what I have to say!! I am no skinny minnie (have health issues, and NOT because of weight!!); was there once (went down to 100 pounds; got sick, that's why I lost the weight; NOT a good way to diet, folks!), but have gained 50 pounds (and then some); I no longer look like I'm dyin'! GREAT rant; I hear ya!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend (who's been on both ends of the spectrum), Karen Lynn. :D
The Fat (Poetry) - 9/22/2008 8:20:50 PM
You tell 'em!!! I cannot stand people who judge people because of their weight, and I will never understand it and believe it is their loss, truly, as they can't see a person but a weight. As a former anorexic, that kind of thinking is sad to me. Now, I am damn proud of my curves, and like yourself, if someone wants stick thin, they can find someone else. Good message, and there are many people out there who will love you just as you are.
The Fat (Poetry) - 9/22/2008 6:41:52 PM
Actually, some thin men DO prefer fat women. It's always the opposite attracts. But I know what you mean by the public eyes. People see somebody who's fat and immediately they think he/she eats like a pig. People are too quick to judge and forget that these people were once thin people and they DO have feelings.
A wonderful write and a great message!
Sandie Angel :o)
The Fat (Poetry) - 9/22/2008 6:24:46 PM
Concur with Sue, below: it's not what's on the outside that counts. Well said!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
The Fat (Poetry) - 9/22/2008 5:27:23 PM
It's a shallow, shallow soul who fails to see beauty in all sizes.
For Keeps (Poetry) - 9/13/2008 1:22:13 PM
Hey Fawn,this is a very good poem.take care
My little sleeping beauty (Poetry) - 9/10/2008 12:04:25 AM
Beautiful and heartfelt that almost makes me cry...
For Keeps (Poetry) - 9/7/2008 9:30:46 PM
Hello Fawn - hopefully this is not a duplicate as I finger flubbed the keyboard. Hope you are speaking metaphorically - if not, I am here for ya sistah - you wanna vent - I got yer back - I am living the same freaking XY challenged life you reference. It is all about living and learning and making fun of it all - my mantra is "I'm a happy pig" - cuz if your not laughing you're crying. And escape is should never be an option - otherwise how will we grow. If you need someone, you throw me a message and we can chat. Take care - someone is thinking of you. Ms. BEEDS
The Whispering Moment (Poetry) - 9/2/2008 8:31:03 PM
This is a really tight poem, it never misses a beat, really shows your skill.
The Whispering Moment (Poetry) - 8/28/2008 7:10:41 PM
So very sweet and wondrously beautiful, leaving much to the imagination....
Be always safe,
The Whispering Moment (Poetry) - 8/28/2008 10:56:19 AM
Hi Fawn,this is a well written poem,very nice.take care
Desperation (Poetry) - 8/28/2008 10:09:08 AM
I'm so sorry you feel that way. I think we all do at times. But perhaps writing about it will help. Take care.
The city of dark eyes (Poetry) - 8/19/2008 6:05:15 AM
A good write on despair and hopelessness.
My little sleeping beauty (Poetry) - 8/19/2008 6:04:03 AM
A sad and heartfelt poem, indeed.
But what of love (Poetry) - 8/19/2008 6:02:54 AM
Very nice, Fawn. I can feel the longing in this.
But what of love (Poetry) - 8/18/2008 4:44:25 AM
Nice work on this poem...the longing to have a lasting and fulfilling love is one that many strive and wish for...
My last moment (Poetry) - 8/17/2008 9:34:12 PM
I'm pretty sure you haven't met me... Fawn. Just teasing but not really. Love and best wishes,
My little sleeping beauty (Poetry) - 8/17/2008 9:32:32 PM
Sad and real. Love and peace to you,
But a moment in time (Poetry) - 8/17/2008 9:31:26 PM
I get it. Your verses speak to my soul. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
My little sleeping beauty (Poetry) - 8/7/2008 5:10:11 PM
Beautiful, heartfelt writing! Rosalie Lombardo is almost mystical as if God blessed this child more than most. Her expression frozen in time still holds such a loving aura....
Be always safe,
My little sleeping beauty (Poetry) - 8/7/2008 3:53:44 PM
Beautiful and sad.
My little sleeping beauty (Poetry) - 8/7/2008 2:06:22 AM
A sad thought but remember, one day she will awaken again. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
My little sleeping beauty (Poetry) - 8/6/2008 5:38:00 PM
Sad But Right On!
My little sleeping beauty (Poetry) - 8/6/2008 4:03:21 PM
Hey Fawn a sad writing but a great poem.I enjoy reading it,take care
Do you ever... (Poetry) - 1/10/2008 6:03:57 PM
A beautiful mind active in dreaming is one of creativity....
Do you ever... (Poetry) - 1/9/2008 3:36:22 AM
Wow! Your questions are all spot on my friend. I've been to all those places, feelings and many more. A very down to earth, gentle and beautiful write. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
The one who hears me (Poetry) - 10/30/2007 12:23:23 PM
Imagine if dreams really did come true?? Nice write...
The one who hears me (Poetry) - 10/29/2007 8:53:15 PM
"never compromise your dreams"
Love that touches my heart-the one (Poetry) - 10/28/2007 8:23:11 PM
So good. Loved this one. A melody of glorious mystery.
Bugs and things (Poetry) - 10/28/2007 8:18:16 PM
Big smiles. Ingenious write.
The one who hears me (Poetry) - 10/28/2007 8:15:14 PM
A thoroughly captivating dream of the perfect lover. So beautiful.
Where the little boy napped (Poetry) - 9/14/2007 3:06:51 PM
Awwww the poor little tyke, needs a little tender loving care to help make him well again. Fantastic imagery.....
Where the little boy napped (Poetry) - 9/14/2007 2:19:02 PM
You are a good samaritan > who knows what may have happened to the little boy napping by the tree.
For a child who reads this [as I see it] there are two valuable lessons:
(1) don't over-indulge
(2) always help strangers in need
Where the little boy napped (Poetry) - 9/14/2007 9:39:53 AM
A whimsical poem that leaves me wanting to know if he's okay!;-)
Garden of Life (Poetry) - 6/18/2007 10:11:56 AM
The cicle of life is in your garden. The saddness diminshes when you realise it was with you that they wished to share their garden life. That's why we must save the plantet, for it is not only ours.
Good Bye Miller
Best wishes fellow clansman!
Love that touches my heart-the one (Poetry) - 4/8/2007 2:11:40 PM
Thanks for sharing this.
Love that touches my heart-the one (Poetry) - 3/24/2007 5:13:37 PM
I understand that of which you write here, Fawn. Your verses connect with me on a level I don't usually allow. Thank you. Love and peace,
Bugs and things (Poetry) - 3/24/2007 3:37:31 PM
A great help for friend and your readers,made into an excellent poem!Sounds like a must read, if you own home or business.
Love that touches my heart-the one (Poetry) - 3/24/2007 9:47:14 AM
Lovely, truly. I really enjoyed the earnestness.
The Entertainer part 1 (Poetry) - 3/4/2007 11:41:32 AM
Bittersweet and compelling, Fawn. I can relate to these feelings and thoughts. Thank you. Love and peace,
Soul mate friend (Poetry) - 3/4/2007 11:40:11 AM
You write of a recurring theme, Fawn. It is a sad theme but you express it well in these verses. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Soul mate friend (Poetry) - 2/26/2007 1:36:51 PM
Nicely done. And with Class.
Soul mate friend (Poetry) - 2/22/2007 9:25:42 AM
that is just it it is so hard meeting good people
people who fits with what your ideal of life and love and happiness is it is always a sad thing to say goodbye to those
like you said so well in here it is better to have had you here
enjoyed the feelings here
Soul mate friend (Poetry) - 2/22/2007 7:35:01 AM
Well written. It is knowing when to quit, then hold the memories but move on with the imagination..
Soul mate friend (Poetry) - 2/21/2007 4:44:38 PM
If it works out for you to see each other after the split then that's great,my situation she say's it's to hard to do,Friend's forever,You must move on if it's not right,Thanks for sharing,
The Entertainer part 1 (Poetry) - 2/20/2007 11:07:00 PM
I really enjoyed your picture of loves memory.
The Entertainer part 1 (Poetry) - 2/20/2007 4:00:22 PM
You never know what will happen,give love a chance or try to grow
with this person,Looking for a reason...
Just you-n-me (Poetry) - 2/3/2007 11:53:49 AM
Just you-n-me (Poetry) - 1/18/2007 2:49:06 AM
A romantic love (Poetry) - 1/17/2007 7:09:36 PM
Sad but uyopu never know when love will come your way,
Just you-n-me (Poetry) - 1/17/2007 7:07:25 PM
Song or poem it's still a very good write,
Just you-n-me (Poetry) - 1/17/2007 6:58:18 PM
Setting you free (Poetry) - 1/12/2007 3:07:54 PM
Sad, powerful, hopeful and filled with emotion...all in all a good poem...Wishing you well..
The Entertainer part 2 (Poetry) - 12/7/2006 6:37:53 AM
Well I think it is beautiful verse.
Warm and loving and full of promise.
Can't beat that!
If I went on strike (Poetry) - 11/16/2006 7:18:30 PM
Well said and written Fawn. Lots of things and people we take for granted.
A romantic love (Poetry) - 11/16/2006 4:40:47 PM
Oh...this is so sad. I know that there is someone out there for 'everyone'. Sometimes we just don't know where to search.
A romantic love (Poetry) - 11/15/2006 3:46:59 AM
Ones pleasant dreams are anothers fond awakenings.
Setting you free (Poetry) - 11/11/2006 1:13:38 PM
A strongly emotive and meaningful write, Fawn. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,
I don't notice (Poetry) - 11/11/2006 1:11:59 PM
It's funny how things go like this at times, Fawn. You are observing of human nature. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace,
At work at Christmas time (Poetry) - 11/10/2006 2:08:27 PM
Ha! You haven't had Christmas until you see a Sugharo cactus with Christmas lights.
Love you poem.
The Clock (Poetry) - 11/4/2006 7:14:28 PM
Thank god for night lights.
Love this...the rhyme is perfect.
I don't notice (Poetry) - 10/27/2006 8:20:08 PM
Cleverly put, Fawn.
I don't notice (Poetry) - 10/16/2006 12:11:18 PM
Is he looking? Funny how we pretend not to notice...
I don't notice (Poetry) - 10/13/2006 12:14:40 PM
You nailed it Fawn. He noticed you big-time. Nice little ditty.
Cyrano's Shadow (Poetry) - 9/27/2006 11:11:16 AM
My Greatest Love (Poetry) - 9/27/2006 11:10:01 AM
Love found and lost.
I don't think I could be so brave.
Moon Trip (Poetry) - 9/27/2006 11:08:57 AM
Love the rhythm and the sense of play.
My Greatest Love (Poetry) - 8/20/2006 2:45:52 PM
Oh, so sad at the end!
Garden of Life (Poetry) - 8/3/2006 5:12:12 AM
The cycle of life.
Garden of Life (Poetry) - 8/2/2006 2:58:32 PM
I hadn't thought of this, though I see dead birds etc. in my own garden at times.
Garden of Life (Poetry) - 8/2/2006 12:33:19 PM
A highly original and novel view of the constant life and death battle that daily rages around us..
Garden of Life (Poetry) - 8/2/2006 11:14:34 AM
Wow! This is dark and creative look at death Fawn. You do it well,chilled me! Good to read you again. Eileen
Setting you free (Poetry) - 7/26/2006 12:03:53 PM
Setting you free (Poetry) - 7/24/2006 9:37:33 PM
Wonderful heartfelt write…we sometimes let go because we love…but memories made so sweet last for eternity…God Bless
Maidens Death (Poetry) - 7/23/2006 9:53:49 PM
Another artful muse from a pen that flows with a magical touch. Another work of art. Thanks for a great experience.
Death is cruel (Poetry) - 7/23/2006 9:49:16 PM
Superb!! Wish I had written this myself. Life in the blink of her cosmic eye.
Shadowed Friend (Poetry) - 6/14/2006 9:34:24 PM
Powerful, from the pen of a master poet. Thank you for allowing me the opportunity to experience this masterpiece of poetry. I am glad I happened upon your site. Looking forward to more.
The Clock (Poetry) - 6/4/2006 6:25:15 PM
I can imagine this poem hanging on the wall in a movie based on a Stephen King novel...
She's moving out today (Poetry) - 7/1/2005 2:44:02 PM
Hard to let them go to grow...Well written.
She's moving out today (Poetry) - 5/2/2005 11:48:11 AM
Fawn, I can sense your troubled spirit! It is
a sad parting, but hopefully things will be
better after they settle down a bit.
My thoughts and prayers are with you for the
adjustment that has to be made.
She's moving out today (Poetry) - 5/2/2005 9:23:50 AM
at least she moved...I didn't think mine would ever leave home...its stressful when they go, i know, but it is a necessary part of growing up. you expressed the mom's pain well
The Clock (Poetry) - 4/23/2005 2:32:18 PM
uh oh! this sounds like frightnight! Hope it's just a poem fawn!
wonderful scary write!
Maidens Death (Poetry) - 11/23/2004 12:20:24 AM
Nice write. I kind of like those all hours of the night strange words.
Maidens Death (Poetry) - 11/22/2004 8:25:42 PM
Lost and lonely feeling to this sad poem but beautifully told!
The hope is in the fact that the passionate desire is alive!;-)
The sum of the day (Poetry) - 11/19/2004 5:45:32 PM
very nice feel and rhyme ...
The sum of the day (Poetry) - 11/16/2004 11:56:39 AM
I love this Fawn, a rant done in fantstic rhythm and rhyme
as good as it gets;-)!!!
The sum of the day (Poetry) - 11/16/2004 4:24:43 AM
Wonderful touch of humor and Christmas Spirit. Potpourri makes me sneeze I would have never got through that portion of your tasks.
The sum of the day (Poetry) - 11/15/2004 8:45:16 PM
Brought a smile to this old man...;) ED & Rufuz (w00f)
Of many thoughts... (Poetry) - 9/29/2004 5:48:17 AM
Usually I locate a broken pencil or a pen that skips and that "once in a liftime" thought quickly gets doubled clicked to the recycle bin of the brain. Great write which many of us can relate to!..
(Maybe even Martha Stewart keeps big fluffy thirsty towels in strategic locations about her home just in case she comes up with a way to make meatloaf glow in the dark.)
Best Wishes & Take Care,
Of many thoughts... (Poetry) - 9/3/2004 7:16:57 AM
Excellent, I've done this myself - and my lovely spouse and pets think I'm absolutely nuts when they see me streaking by. But one has to do what one has to do!
The Spider (Poetry) - 9/3/2004 4:36:02 AM
I'll play with snakes, gators, or even frothing mouthed dogs. As for spiders, I kickem, squishem, and flushem. This mostly due to having a Banana spider take up residence on my face once. If only for one spine shocking moment. Loved the write
Prince of Darkness (Poetry) - 9/3/2004 4:31:46 AM
You said it well, He's a prince who'll never be King. Control you're own destiny, leaving him to the souls he managed to ruin
What became of me? (Poetry) - 9/3/2004 4:24:33 AM
We often search for ourselves, Only to find we're right behind us, propping our selves up. Great write
Lights of Love (Poetry) - 9/3/2004 4:22:11 AM
Written by a warm heart. graceful
Of many thoughts... (Poetry) - 9/3/2004 3:43:27 AM
I think you've penned the thoughts of many. Too bad the human brain doesn't have a floppy drive.
Of many thoughts... (Poetry) - 9/3/2004 2:47:49 AM
I know they sell pens that write under water but I don't think they solved the paper situation yet.
Of many thoughts... (Poetry) - 9/2/2004 9:57:39 PM
I can relate to this. I usually have my voice activated recorder close at hand.
Of many thoughts... (Poetry) - 9/2/2004 8:33:54 PM