The Sleeping Truth (Short Story) - 7/11/2004 7:58:54 AM
A lot of thought-provoking matters mixed in with a voice all of your own....this is very well-done such explainations wrapped around a simple story....this is art!!!
Happenstance (Short Story) - 10/5/2003 8:23:23 PM
stream-of-consciousness, yet held together by an extraordinary sense of self in space and time...interesting work...dense, yet accessible.
The Big Heavy and Worthmores (Article) - 10/13/2003 6:53:18 PM
Intriguing write, Marvin. I think now, we each have our grains of sand, some may be aware of them, some may not. Some produce physical discomfort, some mental, my discomfort is mental. I hope you can find somewhere to be that will feel like grains of big, heavy, valuable pearls, and not jagged sand.
Sunday Odds at the Tables of Monte Carlo (Poetry) - 9/9/2009 7:39:48 PM
A well written piece,take care
EDWIN
The Calendar Maker (Poetry) - 8/10/2009 9:48:08 AM
wow!! I would have to study what colors mean, green stands for or blue and the moods, this really took me on a trip!!!
Still deep as ever
How My Springs are Winded (Poetry) - 5/2/2009 11:27:37 PM
Excellent poem,take care
Edwin
How My Springs are Winded (Poetry) - 4/30/2009 3:07:34 PM
Like the way you wrote this with the illusion of the breeze, very creative with soothing words of imagination....
Be always safe,
Karen
The What and The Wherefore (Poetry) - 3/4/2009 2:58:21 PM
Quite the menagerie....
Be always safe,
Karen
A Part on Stage (Poetry) - 2/18/2009 5:45:03 PM
a good hard thinking coming from you to be absorbed by us on the den. Different, but really like it. Need to have things to ponder over in my old age and this surely is one I'll need to read over and over to get it.
A Part on Stage (Poetry) - 2/17/2009 7:32:14 PM
A well written poem,excellent work,take care
Edwin
The Same Ole Bank (Poetry) - 2/14/2009 10:04:57 PM
It doesn't matter you're high or low class person, or a whore at the corner of the street; the bank only see the color of the money that you put into their vaults. Work is work, the whore in the corner might have even more money to deposit into the banks than anyone high or low class employees in the bank.
Sandie Angel :o)
The Same Ole Bank (Poetry) - 2/14/2009 8:02:03 PM
Marvin,
This tells wonderfully of the evil and corruption money can bring our society.
Mary
Where You Can Hear Color (Poetry) - 10/25/2008 8:02:21 PM
This is a great poem,I enjoy reading it,take care
Edwin
BELIEF SCIENCE and NATURE: Mighty Mouth Gives a Push for your Briefs (Poetry) - 10/14/2008 9:26:14 AM
LOL..this is very funny! I don't necessarily agree with you, because I think you need the input of a few more sciences, like biology and anthropology. And I guess we can say, history is a science too, because it is mostly based on theories about what happened at some time when something happened. Or did anything happen at all? Only history knows.
:-)
~ Sara
BELIEF SCIENCE and NATURE: Mighty Mouth Gives a Push for your Briefs (Poetry) - 10/12/2008 5:21:43 PM
Wow, do believe you have said a mouthful, yet very observant words of wisdom running throughout......
Be always safe,
Karen
An Aerial : A'round the Ear (Poetry) - 9/17/2008 11:55:24 AM
Interesting perspective of what we choose to see and what the reality is....
Be always safe,
Karen
An Honest Parcel (Poetry) - 9/4/2008 2:31:33 PM
Your style is very spoken word, and this is waiting to be performed where it would really live. :)
Can The Circle See A Round ? (Poetry) - 8/23/2008 7:58:02 AM
Sounds like an un-winaable circular argument to me.
Cheers,
Dan
Can The Circle See A Round ? (Poetry) - 8/22/2008 8:35:28 PM
In many days, I do feel like I'm running around in circles. Is it because of the fact that the world is round. I feel there's a connection to this.
I'm glad to see you're posting again!
Sandie May Angel :o)
IS THERE A WHO WHAT WHERE WHEN WHY AND HOW? (Poetry) - 7/26/2008 8:23:41 PM
"IS THERE A WHO WHAT WHERE WHEN WHY AND HOW?"
"no"
ed
The Stand Alone Philosopher (Poetry) - 7/9/2008 4:20:48 PM
Wise words to ponder over for a while, like your style....
Be always safe,
Karen
Whole parts (Poetry) - 6/16/2008 9:13:15 PM
Interesting play on words here, yet there is a bit of truth it in to, well said...
Be always safe,
Karen
Only the Shadows' Nose (Poetry) - 6/11/2008 11:08:54 PM
Interesting and very creative....
Be always safe,
Karen
Only the Shadows' Nose (Poetry) - 6/11/2008 7:10:13 PM
Unique, succincting and aged, Marvin. Your poetry explains/creates your thoughts.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
A Fertile Siesta Bartered at the Bank With Hay (Poetry) - 4/24/2008 8:30:10 PM
A same name bank could be having lunch, while another same name bank could be close for business at the end of the day at another location another time zone.
Same earth sharing space that occupies the sun and the moon. We both could be looking up to the sky at the same time, but one of us see the moon, and the other see the sun.
The logic of the matter is we can ask the sun and the moon the same question, but we might get different answers.
Sandie May Angel :o)
TIME (Poetry) - 1/27/2008 6:31:19 PM
I was intrigued by this profoundly philosophical piece that also displays a strong scientific leaning on the part of the author. Some parts are poetic while others feel like a treatise on physics. I was fascinated by the handling of time as indiscernible, uncapturable, but inevitable. Interesting work.
DIRT (Poetry) - 10/6/2007 10:26:35 AM
Politicians spills dirts all around us with their lies. The only ones who can probably dance to their tunes are the bankers who reaps more than they should from the working poor.
Sandie May Angel :o)
The Prisoner (Poetry) - 10/1/2007 9:16:31 PM
Nuance sweeping and bitterly edged, Marvin, with an opened-up prisoner's sight.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
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