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The Sleeping Truth (Short Story) - 7/11/2004 7:58:54 AM
A lot of thought-provoking matters mixed in with a voice all of your own....this is very well-done such explainations wrapped around a simple story....this is art!!!

Happenstance (Short Story) - 10/5/2003 8:23:23 PM
stream-of-consciousness, yet held together by an extraordinary sense of self in space and time...interesting work...dense, yet accessible.

The Big Heavy and Worthmores (Article) - 10/13/2003 6:53:18 PM
Intriguing write, Marvin. I think now, we each have our grains of sand, some may be aware of them, some may not. Some produce physical discomfort, some mental, my discomfort is mental. I hope you can find somewhere to be that will feel like grains of big, heavy, valuable pearls, and not jagged sand.

Meaning of theTimes (Poetry) - 5/21/2012 8:31:14 PM
Loved this, Marvin!! Each line is a paragraph, each idea, a womb.. Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Meaning of theTimes (Poetry) - 5/13/2012 9:24:13 AM
Thanks for the delightful little journey through this or that. Ron

Meaning of theTimes (Poetry) - 5/13/2012 2:43:27 AM
Marvin, i like this, style, expression and point of view john

The Shadow Knows That Numbers Make Familiar Bed Fellows of Strangers Names (Poetry) - 12/28/2011 5:31:02 PM
ha! intriguing journey this poem takes us on... the number the number the more frozen the integer

The Shadow Knows That Numbers Make Familiar Bed Fellows of Strangers Names (Poetry) - 12/19/2011 3:04:05 AM
Well written, Marvin

The Entreprenuer Needs to Laugh (Poetry) - 12/15/2011 5:09:39 AM
enjoyed the read

The Champions' Sorrow (Poetry) - 9/12/2010 10:16:05 PM
I have/had to smile, Eli. I think the chicken came first, also, but he was a she. The egg's been cooked, to death, what about the opposite? Sperm? I think it has to be... Hungry? I think so... Always. If other was what we saw, what would what we see be? Erin

A Magistrates' Paradox (Poetry) - 8/9/2010 2:39:58 AM
Very cute.....This could have been written by any number of politicians or lawyers. I't just confusing enough.. Walt

Across the line (Poetry) - 8/5/2010 5:10:10 PM
very very good (this is why I love poetry) -Paul

A Serving of Justice (Poetry) - 7/27/2010 3:40:55 AM
Very good poem and layout, Marvin

The internist as a glasser (Poetry) - 7/20/2010 1:28:25 AM
Very well penned !

The internist as a glasser (Poetry) - 7/18/2010 4:40:45 PM
introspectively stimulating and well written ...

The internist as a glasser (Poetry) - 7/18/2010 1:33:23 PM
Enjoyable poem, thought-provoking, and fun to follow form ~ Blessings, Christine

An Empty Time in the Shadows in the Valley of Life (Poetry) - 6/20/2010 3:33:17 AM

An Empty Time in the Shadows in the Valley of Life (Poetry) - 6/19/2010 10:49:20 PM
I concur: love it, Eli! Nothing from nothing leaves nothing. If anything after comes to be, let it be. With or without we. YetÖ A revivifying plea/plaint/please poem, with exceptional formatting and shadows of planet-life. I can heave a sigh, combined with another, and feel okay to be how we am now... still striving. Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Sunday Odds at the Tables of Monte Carlo (Poetry) - 9/9/2009 7:39:48 PM
A well written piece,take care EDWIN

The Calendar Maker (Poetry) - 8/10/2009 9:48:08 AM
wow!! I would have to study what colors mean, green stands for or blue and the moods, this really took me on a trip!!! Still deep as ever

How My Springs are Winded (Poetry) - 5/2/2009 11:27:37 PM
Excellent poem,take care Edwin

How My Springs are Winded (Poetry) - 4/30/2009 3:07:34 PM
Like the way you wrote this with the illusion of the breeze, very creative with soothing words of imagination.... Be always safe, Karen

The What and The Wherefore (Poetry) - 3/4/2009 2:58:21 PM
Quite the menagerie.... Be always safe, Karen

A Part on Stage (Poetry) - 2/18/2009 5:45:03 PM
a good hard thinking coming from you to be absorbed by us on the den. Different, but really like it. Need to have things to ponder over in my old age and this surely is one I'll need to read over and over to get it.

A Part on Stage (Poetry) - 2/17/2009 7:32:14 PM
A well written poem,excellent work,take care Edwin

The Same Ole Bank (Poetry) - 2/14/2009 10:04:57 PM
It doesn't matter you're high or low class person, or a whore at the corner of the street; the bank only see the color of the money that you put into their vaults. Work is work, the whore in the corner might have even more money to deposit into the banks than anyone high or low class employees in the bank. Sandie Angel :o)

The Same Ole Bank (Poetry) - 2/14/2009 8:02:03 PM
Marvin, This tells wonderfully of the evil and corruption money can bring our society. Mary

Where You Can Hear Color (Poetry) - 10/25/2008 8:02:21 PM
This is a great poem,I enjoy reading it,take care Edwin

BELIEF SCIENCE and NATURE: Mighty Mouth Gives a Push for your Briefs (Poetry) - 10/14/2008 9:26:14 AM
LOL..this is very funny! I don't necessarily agree with you, because I think you need the input of a few more sciences, like biology and anthropology. And I guess we can say, history is a science too, because it is mostly based on theories about what happened at some time when something happened. Or did anything happen at all? Only history knows. :-) ~ Sara

BELIEF SCIENCE and NATURE: Mighty Mouth Gives a Push for your Briefs (Poetry) - 10/12/2008 5:21:43 PM
Wow, do believe you have said a mouthful, yet very observant words of wisdom running throughout...... Be always safe, Karen

An Aerial : A'round the Ear (Poetry) - 9/17/2008 11:55:24 AM
Interesting perspective of what we choose to see and what the reality is.... Be always safe, Karen

An Honest Parcel (Poetry) - 9/4/2008 2:31:33 PM
Your style is very spoken word, and this is waiting to be performed where it would really live. :)

Can The Circle See A Round ? (Poetry) - 8/23/2008 7:58:02 AM
Sounds like an un-winaable circular argument to me. Cheers, Dan

Can The Circle See A Round ? (Poetry) - 8/22/2008 8:35:28 PM
In many days, I do feel like I'm running around in circles. Is it because of the fact that the world is round. I feel there's a connection to this. I'm glad to see you're posting again! Sandie May Angel :o)

IS THERE A WHO WHAT WHERE WHEN WHY AND HOW? (Poetry) - 7/26/2008 8:23:41 PM

The Stand Alone Philosopher (Poetry) - 7/9/2008 4:20:48 PM
Wise words to ponder over for a while, like your style.... Be always safe, Karen

Whole parts (Poetry) - 6/16/2008 9:13:15 PM
Interesting play on words here, yet there is a bit of truth it in to, well said... Be always safe, Karen

Only the Shadows' Nose (Poetry) - 6/11/2008 11:08:54 PM
Interesting and very creative.... Be always safe, Karen

Only the Shadows' Nose (Poetry) - 6/11/2008 7:10:13 PM
Unique, succincting and aged, Marvin. Your poetry explains/creates your thoughts. Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

A Fertile Siesta Bartered at the Bank With Hay (Poetry) - 4/24/2008 8:30:10 PM
A same name bank could be having lunch, while another same name bank could be close for business at the end of the day at another location another time zone. Same earth sharing space that occupies the sun and the moon. We both could be looking up to the sky at the same time, but one of us see the moon, and the other see the sun. The logic of the matter is we can ask the sun and the moon the same question, but we might get different answers. Sandie May Angel :o)

TIME (Poetry) - 1/27/2008 6:31:19 PM
I was intrigued by this profoundly philosophical piece that also displays a strong scientific leaning on the part of the author. Some parts are poetic while others feel like a treatise on physics. I was fascinated by the handling of time as indiscernible, uncapturable, but inevitable. Interesting work.

DIRT (Poetry) - 10/6/2007 10:26:35 AM
Politicians spills dirts all around us with their lies. The only ones who can probably dance to their tunes are the bankers who reaps more than they should from the working poor. Sandie May Angel :o)

The Prisoner (Poetry) - 10/1/2007 9:16:31 PM
Nuance sweeping and bitterly edged, Marvin, with an opened-up prisoner's sight. Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

THE WINTER DANCE (Poetry) - 9/20/2007 6:08:59 PM
Whew! Winter sure drags on, or so it feels. Kathy

THE WINTER DANCE (Poetry) - 9/20/2007 2:24:37 AM
This will definitly help keep poetry alive!

A Wayout InEquality (Poetry) - 9/12/2007 2:44:33 PM
Equal, unequal -- truly dependent upon the recipient. Kathy

Continuously (Poetry) - 8/3/2007 5:08:10 PM
I truly enjoyed your work! Keep poetry alive!

The Real Issue: The Rules of the Rulers Ruler (Poetry) - 7/5/2007 7:47:34 PM
Heeeheee! Marvin, try finding the answer to the issue is like try finding a needle in a haystack... Sandie May Angel :o)

A Moral Corner (Poetry) - 5/17/2007 8:07:09 PM

A Moral Corner (Poetry) - 5/15/2007 3:12:17 PM

Champion of the Weather (Poetry) - 2/9/2007 7:57:31 PM
Interesting wordsplay with this one, Marvin!!! I enjoyed this!!!!! Sandie May Angel :o)

DIscourse aN Alternative tO lANguAGE (Poetry) - 2/6/2007 4:33:50 AM
...just like a light from out of space is different from the Northern Lights in compare to the space it is acquiring. ...just like the space of the universe is not the same as how we determine the "space" that we have on earth. The sphere of space is not the same as the "space" in the space. Its calculation differs. A theory differs from an anology. A complex theory differs from a poem. The sum of all language does not equal to the sum of the calculations in monetary terms. The sum of language is of sum that cannot be easily understood. The sum of the human intelligence cannot be measured upon in compared to the calculations of objects in the objective values. The complex of the human minds cannot be equal to that of the simple normalities in its comparison. Minds measured in abstract can only be that of an abstract. Findings are that of theories not equal to anologies, in which one differs from another. No theories are the same. Animals waste anen't the same shit in the theoretical measurement of its terms: A pig's fart isn't the same as a bull's fart; as a bull's fart requires more value in space. A bullshit isn't the same as a cowchip in terms of its value of the useage. Anyway...these are just my thoughts on reading yours... Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

dISCOURSE oN aN aLTERNATIVE tO lANGUAGE (Poetry) - 1/24/2007 6:11:27 PM theory is that... Either we receive brightness from out of space, or brightness from the street lights, our shadows are of the same color - black! I'm having a dumb moment, I don't seem to know what you are talking about. Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

ZERO (Poetry) - 12/17/2006 6:44:49 PM

ZERO (Poetry) - 12/17/2006 4:50:27 PM
Nothing's for nothing... This poem is almost like a word-play. Very interesting!!! I wish you all the wonders of a Merry Christmas and the Happiest New Year!!!!! May God bless you always!!!!! Lots of love, Sandie May Angel :o)

ZERO (Poetry) - 12/17/2006 3:38:18 PM
Nice take on 0 and its['] concept. Ron

That Theory Has 65 n-tuples Because I Wrote It That Way (Poetry) - 12/14/2006 9:27:55 AM
interesting, cryptic poem ... excuse my asking, what is an "n-tuple?"

That Theory Has 65 n-tuples Because I Wrote It That Way (Poetry) - 12/13/2006 8:44:03 AM
this just went straight over my head.... i understand about the beginning and the end some gonna have to help me out on this one theory (formula?) very interesting

That Theory Has 65 n-tuples Because I Wrote It That Way (Poetry) - 12/11/2006 4:40:08 AM
Wonderful write!!! Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

PHILADDERY (Poetry) - 12/10/2006 9:46:31 PM
Unique in simplicity, Sincerely, From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm

PHILADDERY (Poetry) - 12/10/2006 9:19:39 PM
Without ladder one cannot climb, and it always takes money to make money... Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Economics-Mysterious Energy Flows-and the Scapegoat Cure for Indigestion (Poetry) - 11/27/2006 2:45:31 AM
Wonderful story-telling! I liked this, Marvin!!! Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)

AIR (Poetry) - 11/23/2006 7:57:42 PM
The magnificent about air is that - it comes free, and we can sum it up in many shapes and forms. If I take a teapot, and empty it to fill it up with air... immediately, the air inside the teapot would take the form of the teapot. Same theory would go to the squares. Love your write. It is always thought-provoking! Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)

A HORSE of TWO COLORS (Poetry) - 11/2/2006 4:42:13 PM
well done

A HORSE of TWO COLORS (Poetry) - 10/30/2006 3:06:30 AM
A bush has been planted deep into the stripes in the black area, as in the blue, is rooted and has been there too deeply rooted and cannot get itself out even when dosed with hot boiling water. Will it see the light as in the white that is just one line away? No. For now it is too deeply rooted into black mud, like a person got both feet into the mud as solid as a cement block and cannot get himself out, so the bush MUST continue on standing there in the dark area within the black stripe and must endure scalding hot water poured down on it, does not know how to get itself out. It is impossible for it to get itself out of there as all the neighbouring plants die when bush led them into what it perceives as "glory", but in fact it was a darkened stripes. Not much glory is there left now. Can't really do much...except that the bush is just standing there - rooted in the bloody mud. Sandie Angel :o) P.S. I cannot sign on with my usual ID yet. I'm still waiting for authorsden to renew it for me so I can get back in.

Les Petite et Les Grandeau (Poetry) - 9/28/2006 4:20:28 AM
Life is a race, often in a circle. The big winner is the one who owns the race track no one else is. If you go around the track properly or if you bet your life properly You might be ahead but no better than others. ~ Sandie May Angel, September 28, 2006

THE CAPTAINS' WAVELENGTH  (Poetry) - 9/25/2006 7:00:52 AM
Your link to "Comples Thinking For You Simple Time," hits the nails on the head for me, although I haven't visited it, just looked at the title, because except for the "Allied Forces" and the "captain in charge" and the "far off somewhere," I have not idea what you are saying, EXCEPT it is quite possible, I mean it is an outside change, it could very well be, that you are speaking of Iraq. Course my simple times may be missing the premise here.

THE CAPTAINS' WAVELENGTH  (Poetry) - 9/25/2006 4:16:01 AM
I can sum it up - "What one hears does not represent what was said." Okay, perhaps I have received the vibes wrongly, but that was my interpretation of this complex poem! Welcome back Marvin! Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Dont let the Morning Rain Catch You Crying (Poetry) - 9/7/2006 11:08:02 PM
This feels of one of the first pieces I read of yours, Marvin, which was in pieces, which I related to with my own pieced clarity's dimness. I see you in all. Keep striving, Marvin, I feel faith, a misnomer, a bit closer to me with your continued presence. Erin PS I love/appreciate the graphic you used. It feels of LA.

Dont let the Morning Rain Catch You Crying (Poetry) - 9/7/2006 9:35:11 AM
You have a mind that engages the morphing of colors and dimensions like a Salvador Dali, and the presentation of personal psyche like the near/far juxtaposing of French Pointillism. And this is only a perspective not an interpretation. Benisons ...

What'd You See (Poetry) - 8/5/2006 6:59:08 PM
Nice poem, Marvin! Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

The Stratus of Status (Poetry) - 7/29/2006 10:15:09 AM
Marvin: The Stratus of Status often confuses the onlookers. It depends on where the onlooker stands and the angle in which he/she looks at the status from stratus. For example, if you are high above where the stratus is, everything you see below is low; but if you are a sailor at sea, and you look up to see the moon and the mountain tops, everything is high to you. There are many angles in which the perspective of one that many can see. Many points of views in viewing one object. There is no high or low, it's just depending on where the point of vision is originated from. Like in life, there are so many people with different points of views, each thinking that he/she is right, but in reality, right can be wrong, and vice versa. That is just my humble opinion. Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Little Ducks GROWLING CAT (Poetry) - 7/25/2006 3:47:46 AM
Marvin: Your poems are always so abstractive and I can only comment according to my own interpretation each time. Poetry are just that. The poet who writes a poem expects interpretation in varieties from readers. Readers who read poems absorb its meaning according to the experience in their own lives. A successful poem can be read and interpreted in many ways to suit the readers thoughts and experience in life. Since the passing of time, men had employed their own wits in survival, just as it is written in the times of history, the human race is flexible to changes as times passed, laboring to keep his world within the nature of the world at his best, conquering what needs to be conquered. Sometimes what he puts into the labour is just not enough. In this world Ė to be honest is just sometimes not the solution. We slaved all our lives, giving into the volume of the time spent that is necessary to build up the time volume of our life, our mateís life, and the passing of the world history and mother nature altogether, pre-written for us by our Creator, yet, we often find ourselves at witís ends, not knowing what to do in the future to make things better. The instinctive survival skill the human race was given to us, no matter how our books were written for us in the past, present, and future. Weíve learned to compromise and/or find ways to make life easier. Some find ways to make money in the least amount of time spent, saving time and labours, pocketing profits, and live comfortably, but some just slave and enjoy their work as it was meant to be as it was written into their lives by our Creator. Was this the reason why some people who are very successful, made lots of money, had shorter lives span than those who did everything by the book? One has to count the time volume that is spent, as well as the time volume that has been saved and stored away to make a life on earth. The fact is the time slot for everyone who live on earth is pre-programmed, as in the movie MATRIX, itís hard to believe that we are not objects of a world that is pre-programmed for us to live in, each of us taking our own spot as it is written. Like a computer system, some met with efficiencies and could work faster, and some slower; and mother nature is just one great big computerized system. Anyway, that is just my thoughts in connection to reading your poem. Your poems are always very thought-provoking, they always give me chains of thoughts after reading them. Love reading your work! Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

At A Meeting in the Square (Poetry) - 7/20/2006 3:59:19 PM
Because our world is round, and we see other objects in the sky as round, so we automantically thought that everything should be round, like rolling along on a wheel... Until one rolls out into a square and then we lose it definition of the rounds, and we wonder where all these other shaqpes comes from. Like people we take them as objects, and expected them to be rounds, only when they turn squarely we realize that our original perception was wrong. How can anything and anyone turns squarely all of a suddenly? Defying its origin, defying any logic that has been laid out before! Suddenly shape shifts and changes, suddenly everything is not what it seemss, suddenly... Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

MIXED UP (Poetry) - 7/16/2006 9:03:23 PM
Okay, you're talking physics... One's perception of a thing or anything is from the angle in which he/she stands; and the light and the sound might travel in the same speed and manner, but the reception ability of the person(s) differs from one to another. Sometimes, due to one person's inability to receive light and sound in the same manner as all others, hence the state of the confusing mind, and yes optical illusions could happen in matters of a delayed reception of light and sound; hence the confused state of mind. Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

THE SCENE (Poetry) - 7/15/2006 9:13:51 PM
No matter whether it is winter and it is snowing, soldiers who go to wars feel the heat, within themselves, or from the scorching heat of the sun or the smokes and the fires. Marvin, this is a thought-provoking write! Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

THE SUM (Poetry) - 7/7/2006 12:13:13 PM
Marvin, this is a gem. (what you smokin' darlin'?) Elizabeth

THE SUM (Poetry) - 7/7/2006 4:08:32 AM
Mirvin: I always like to read and digest your poem. They are very interesting in require much thinking and analysis. One plus one equals the sum of one; the sum of two equals the number of "one". Then "one" is left, so two is now "one" who was "one" once, and now becomes once again "one". Have I got that right? That's what I have analyzed this. Hope I was right. I love reading your cryptic poems! Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

A Dog Eternally For Whom the Finger Points (Poetry) - 6/15/2006 3:14:09 AM
Marvin: You hsve expressed the loneliness and the extensive longings so well in this piece. This is most unusual the way you have written this piece, and I just can't express in words how much I really like this wonderfully-crafted piece. TRULY AWESOME WORK INDEED!!!!! Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

GUIDES the meter man (Poetry) - 4/4/2006 3:25:03 PM
love this stream of free word association well done j+

The Lean Slope and Interest on my Education (Poetry) - 3/24/2006 5:11:54 AM
I am insane too. Onward poet sold yer's!

PHYSIBIOEVOLOCOEMOTION (Poetry) - 2/24/2006 1:14:29 PM
Wow! Lots of words to take in and ponder. I'll be thinking about this for a while. Bobbi

PHYSIBIOEVOLOCOEMOTION (Poetry) - 2/21/2006 5:35:44 PM
Well that darn near covers the dictionary, Marvin. Love it!

PHYSIBIOEVOLOCOEMOTION (Poetry) - 2/19/2006 6:56:07 PM
Love it, Marvin! The passion, the ranting, the sight, I needed this, right now, your rhymes are delicious, your internalism, exquisite, and, read aloud to provide desired preponderance of utmost nothing and everything, and ... well, I guess, mind, saved me from the idoicy of me. I need to write like this, again... Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

PHYSIBIOEVOLOCOEMOTION (Poetry) - 2/18/2006 3:47:07 AM
A great usuage of "poetic license", but in its own way quite imaginative and "explainative" whos using poetic license..;) Ed

MY A+ POEM (Poetry) - 1/14/2006 9:08:43 AM
I see you got a good education because of you advanced articulation Bobbi

THE BIRTH OF PHYSICAL CONFUSIONISM (Poetry) - 12/6/2005 7:46:55 PM
hey this one is a beaut, great stuff, i really appreciate the irony & the style saludos robin

The Missing Leaders' Crow Mein Memo (Poetry) - 11/15/2005 5:02:05 PM
just browsing through i rarely comment because its so rare to encounter that something that has a flare im glad i chanced on this not the way i'd do it personally but definitely got the touch imo i sensed it instantly & decided to save it saludos robin

Flip-Flop Morality and the Shaping of Darkness (Poetry) - 11/6/2005 7:11:35 PM
I Was ONLY in a RACE for breathing SPACE I think we're all there at times. Especially times like these, when our voices aren't heard.

Flip-Flop Morality and the Shaping of Darkness (Poetry) - 11/6/2005 4:50:33 PM
This is a multi-faceted poem that is deep and like an ever-changing kaliedoscope, each layer of emotions is peeled to reveal another. Life is just about that, whether you're standing in the darkness, or in the light, or in between - each phase is different than the last as we are only travellers of space, and the time of the universe counts our blessings and keep that on record. Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

The Wall Street Review on Speeding Wheels and Raceing Death (Poetry) - 10/19/2005 4:29:46 PM
"..."A pondering squanderer squandering ponder doesth spend his relative relations On lesser wonderings..expensive taxicab rides... paying seed greener grasses where always reside a drought..." Love it. (That must have been some bottle of wine.) ROFL

High in the Rio Rancho Desperiodoso Aijo (Poetry) - 10/2/2005 1:31:40 PM
wonderful gifts you share...

High in the Rio Rancho Desperiodoso Aijo (Poetry) - 10/2/2005 8:48:23 AM
Nice story! One last bill for the the peaceful and desperate quiet, and the highest rollingest hills. Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

A Doom of Romping Room  (Poetry) - 8/4/2005 8:17:29 AM
Interesting write....very well written....wonderful n luck....BHUWAN!!!

The Waxed Curves on my Moustache (Poetry) - 7/4/2005 2:42:32 PM
A whore is supposed to melt the wax on your moustache--for a price, that is--so that her pimp can make more than you. Ron

The bend in Athimelbe's seductions (Poetry) - 6/29/2005 5:22:59 AM
You seem to have said a lot here, but I must admit that I'm not wide awake to read all this yet; so I'll be back to read this again later in order to give a better comment that justifies this poem. Thank you so much for sharing! Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)

The Bend in Athimelbe's Seductions (Poetry) - 6/25/2005 7:38:22 AM
I am not smart enough to comprehend your poetic expressions.

One Thousand Ayes' Worth a Night With You (Poetry) - 6/15/2005 5:45:45 AM
This is quite the play on words, so I read it twice too! Great stuff! Lisa

Hayden Corpe's Room Box (Poetry) - 5/30/2005 5:12:34 PM
well done

My Meeting With Willit at Oscars' Cardagory Joint at Flower and Wall (Poetry) - 5/20/2005 5:25:43 PM
Interesting story of a poem... Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Character Joe (Poetry) - 5/16/2005 9:52:04 AM
Character Joe he 'd.... what an expert in names and latin or the extraordinary writing car-a-tractor cracker used to measure empty space in NASA's gone haywire space locker Dear Marvin....greetings from Nepal....I read this poem of yours twice and found it very well n luck....BHUWAN!!!!

The Immaculate Conception (Poetry) - 5/12/2005 8:56:30 AM
You've made me smile, Marvin Eli Kirsh, with delight, for you, your soul and your mind. It seems to be a satiric awakening-awakening song, a realization of impotent bluff as opposed to gained worth, a need to continue the path of an intelligence labeled and branded by those who would keep the world as it is, confused, directed, herded and suppressed. It speaks of determination, ability and willingness to walk the crooked way while managing the crooked wiles in a manner that will help to straighten and smooth the satisfaction of completion of self, and, in the process, help humanity. I think the continuous circle of repetition has been broken, by a man of power and sensitivity. Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

The QED RACE (Poetry) - 5/12/2005 8:38:28 AM
An extraordinary write, Poet/Author Marvin Eli Kirsh, with such a wonderful convolution of years of study and experience simplified into the face of the face in the mirror of the inner mirror. I found this piece an intelligent, refreshing perception of the awareness of the need and use of self to create a reality of worth, inspiration and self-fulfillment. If we don't create our own reality, then others will, with less than caring words and actions, by using what we all have, inner will, intelligence and soul. A brilliant metaphysical truth of importance to the whole Human Race. Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

The Corporal 's Rank Conversion (Poetry) - 4/15/2005 6:52:09 PM
Okay, I can't tell you whether this is good or bad, but I have read it. Some might find this interesting. Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)

When it starts raining them big bills, CALL ME! Ed

Infinities and Additions Edition of a Perfect Ass (Poetry) - 3/21/2005 5:02:06 PM
lol.....yeah well neither do i but i did enjoy this mind twister lol got this one :)

My Plain Plan and the Rain in Spain (Poetry) - 3/15/2005 7:19:19 PM
Very interesting and unique and welcome to the den.

MIne ole long and sweet handyman (Poetry) - 3/11/2005 10:08:50 PM
Very unique and written with authority of one who has been there. Welcome to the den.

Cunning Shorts (Poetry) - 3/7/2005 5:15:58 PM
hahahaha ok got you i agree cleva :)

Cunning Shorts (Poetry) - 3/5/2005 1:18:23 PM
Short, sweet and oh so clever! Nice Marvin. Chanti ;-)

The Investigation in to Scrupulous Schemeatapus (Poetry) - 2/22/2005 2:58:55 AM
not sure either, sounds twisted, different culture escape, lot ppl fall in search of theses lovebirds could be guessing all night (done interesting)

The Investigation in to Scrupulous Schemeatapus (Poetry) - 2/17/2005 10:46:32 AM
I think that I got it and in the end the ultimate revenge.

The Investigation in to Scrupulous Schemeatapus (Poetry) - 2/17/2005 3:27:55 AM
Okay, I'm not wide awake yet, so I'll come back to read this piece again later. Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Board Chair's comment on-whats known about not looking where we don't see (Poetry) - 2/16/2005 9:45:27 AM
can see the men sitting around in their stuffed suits and ties after wards smelling of cigars and brandy enjoyed!!

Board Chair's comment on-whats known about not looking where we don't see (Poetry) - 2/14/2005 6:45:44 PM
some very nice corporate existentialism exhibited in this poem ...

Board Chair's comment on-whats known about not looking where we don't see (Poetry) - 2/14/2005 6:16:03 AM
You know I kind of think this also happens in council meetings. The last one that I attended all they talked about is how wonderful the other one was. Sheesh.

Board Chair's comment on-whats known about not looking where we don't see (Poetry) - 2/14/2005 4:00:41 AM
Sad... Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o(

Caddy Coroners (Poetry) - 2/7/2005 4:42:24 PM
Okay and I know some people who love golf that will like this one.

Out of the Blue? (Poetry) - 2/2/2005 2:20:42 AM
Interesting. M.Rose

Out of the Blue? (Poetry) - 1/31/2005 4:00:40 PM
got a little lost in your poetic verses think i know but not sure help me :|

Out of the Blue? (Poetry) - 1/31/2005 7:11:10 AM
A strong write. I'm glad to know chemists pen poems. :-)

Out of the Blue? (Poetry) - 1/31/2005 5:51:43 AM
Boy this one was interesting and eye opening.

The Heat on the Board Lord Head Master's Asses (Poetry) - 1/21/2005 7:27:03 PM
ditto what JudeAce said (was alittle lost here) sounds troubling though

The Heat on the Board Lord Head Master's Asses (Poetry) - 1/19/2005 8:30:09 PM
interesting ...

The Heat on the Board Lord Head Master's Asses (Poetry) - 1/19/2005 6:15:31 PM
Okay this is different but it was a most enjoyable read.

Just Shadow Boxing in Space": Perfecassole (Poetry) - 1/7/2005 9:41:49 AM
Out standing!!! and loved Andre's comment I agree with him :)

Just Shadow Boxing in Space": Perfecassole (Poetry) - 1/2/2005 6:39:37 AM
A thought-provoking piece. Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)

Just Shadow Boxing in Space": Perfecassole (Poetry) - 1/2/2005 2:26:23 AM
""Just Shadow Boxing in Space": Perfecassole" brings the ideal amount in portions of nourishable goods to feed the mind and the soul to get energy to look for the >> "I" < <. >>"Less we fear leave a name a name we'all be given numbers" < < YES, AND THEY WILL KEEP NUMBERING, until humankind identify their ID. Number and form a circle number three-six-0 - the freedom's number. Healthy Day, Poet! Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

He Who Knows A Case of Basketts..... (Poetry) - 10/19/2004 10:38:49 PM
The poem's main subject seems a bit fast moving, yet fitting for the characterization. blessin's cynth'ya lewis reed

He Who Knows A Case of Basketts..... (Poetry) - 10/19/2004 5:07:08 PM
A Little To Long, But,IT-- Miilions Humans Are BASKET CASES_ Credit For Write! TRASK

Behind the Blackboard at GoodLooking Bluff (Poetry) - 10/6/2004 5:52:02 AM
this is really cute....not sure i uh dot it right but dis is kinda cool!!

A Changed Prediction at the Menches Minion (Poetry) - 9/25/2004 7:42:03 PM
You say so much in these verses. No way one read will do justice. Thank you. Love and peace to you, Marvin. Regis

A Changed Prediction at the Menches Minion (Poetry) - 9/24/2004 12:10:39 PM
Man!!! this is uniquely done love the flow bumped and bruised with all the chances enjoyed!!!

A Changed Opinion at the Menches Minion (Poetry) - 9/21/2004 6:35:25 PM
There is a great sadness, Marvin, or maybe a hopless inevitability, a knowledge of how integrity is supposed to work, and a bitter/sad reality-view of how circumstances, fools and idiocies of life can change/subvert a wearied honest soul into a mind-wracked underling. I enjoy your jabs and slashes of alliterating rhyme and rhythm, there is a unique flow/jumble to your writes that I have seen in myself, at times.

AMORAL REARING OF THE PERFECT ASS  (Poetry) - 9/8/2004 6:46:49 PM
inspiringly entertaining write. -- Jeff

AMORAL REARING OF THE PERFECT ASS  (Poetry) - 9/8/2004 12:22:33 PM
Very creative. Thanks for the laugh.

AMORAL REARING OF THE PERFECT ASS  (Poetry) - 9/8/2004 11:59:39 AM

Awalkened Path  (Poetry) - 8/28/2004 8:35:17 PM
your categorized the malaise of life quite effectively ...

Awalkened Path  (Poetry) - 8/28/2004 6:12:38 PM
Gosh! Thought I'll never see the end of this poem... An honest realistic write. Sandie May Angel

the capitalization of M'SELF-revised 2 (Poetry) - 8/20/2004 3:45:56 AM
You have researched and analyze your SELF really well. A well-written piece. Sandie May Angel

The Capitalization of M'SELF-Revised (Poetry) - 8/15/2004 9:24:45 AM
a very interesting psychobabble (denotative)

The Capitalization of M'SELF-Revised (Poetry) - 8/14/2004 2:59:01 AM
marvin it is ok for you to keep using small letters, but not for me. b i l l

Of Course Aye Sees of a Perfect Ass  (Poetry) - 7/9/2004 3:18:20 PM
crazy eye poetry, to me. a perfect ass? hmmm, I've been told I have one of those. not kidding. ;-)

Of Course Aye Sees of a Perfect Ass  (Poetry) - 6/19/2004 6:10:28 PM
the prototype of how a perfect ass can inspire a poem ... very interesting write ...

Retired head space exports line  (Poetry) - 6/13/2004 9:07:01 AM
well said

Two Thorns In the Side is Worth Less A Horn in the Groin  (Poetry) - 6/10/2004 7:06:13 AM
kinda get lost in the dialect but very interesting (i think) :)

Still Waters Always Lie Deep (Poetry) - 6/2/2004 7:41:02 AM
This is quite a ramble. You have touched on many things, and seem to have learned something from all of them.

Still Waters Always Lie Deep (Poetry) - 6/1/2004 5:32:54 AM
very powerful. excellent write.

Still Waters Always Lie Deep (Poetry) - 5/28/2004 2:29:24 PM
Nicely done. The allusion to Teddy Roosevelt is fitting, as long as youíre willing to use the stick when necessary. Enjoyed.

Still Waters Always Lie Deep (Poetry) - 5/28/2004 2:29:05 PM
Awesome write Marvin Powerful verses ~Linda

The Name of Laughing Face (Poetry) - 5/18/2004 9:46:06 PM
Goodness, Marvin, this is a slippery piece, let me read it,, let's see: a man found he was, though he wasn't in the now, told her he saw her was, she, having been complacent in her omnipresence "isness", lashed out, he booked, to save his face, his 'sight'...because, as ruler, his voice had no meaning to her place, and yet, though he escaped, sadly, even displaced, it hadn't mattered, in the end... Sad piece, with a moral: be true to self who is, was is nothing. Hope you are well, enjoying cigarettes as much as I, and searching yet for the answer to humanity's being.

A Day at the Assembly Plant-1rev (Poetry) - 5/18/2004 11:44:51 AM
Marvin, a poem written from observation of your surroundings. Good work. Bill Murray

A Day at the Assembly Plant-1rev (Poetry) - 5/15/2004 6:57:33 AM
Interesting and thought provoking, loved this one! Reindeer

Odd-Aye-Sees of a Perfect Asss  (Poetry) - 5/1/2004 6:50:28 AM
I can understand the meaning of the first two lines...through this poem!

Odd-Aye-Sees-of a Perfect Ass- Revised-III (Poetry) - 4/22/2004 10:57:09 PM
"The word infinity might as well be of infinite length of infinite letters, so that its' meaning not be ambiguous when we set out to war....." Funny, Marvin, I thought letters said killers... Enjoyed this piece! Time fornicating with earth, or self, or Chaos; it matters not, energy seeks energy. Consumes energy. Produces energy. The cyclic circle, the Celtic knot, the dragon swallowing its tail, the utter lunacy of living is an enigma. Thinking is agony. Neither is hell. Hope your mouth is healing, spring is warming your bones and cigarettes are tasting better, and worse, and you are staying safe and occupied, Marvin.

The Land of my Homeland-revised (Poetry) - 4/10/2004 5:15:10 PM
Iím confused, but I like it. Perhaps Iím having a blonde day. There is a catchy catch here, I just canít put my finger on it.

Of the Light in Mine Eye (Poetry) - 3/30/2004 8:46:36 AM
very interesting like the concept the bend and twist of words enjoyed this

Of the Light in Mine Eye (Poetry) - 3/27/2004 5:06:41 PM
This is a very Powerful poem.

Of the Light in Mine Eye (Poetry) - 3/27/2004 5:29:11 AM
Sometimes the wind just blows in from all directions, and the humans have no shields. Powerful emotional write! ~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~

Catching the Future (Poetry) - 3/27/2004 4:51:41 AM
Don't look back, always move forward. Time will catch up with you in the future. ~ Sandie Angel, March 27, 2004

The Land of my Homeland (Poetry) - 3/24/2004 3:12:16 PM
Wonderful poetry...........

The story of the Opinionated Onion-Revised (Poetry) - 3/8/2004 4:56:37 AM
GREAT write!

LIGHT WEIGHT (Poetry) - 2/19/2004 8:46:35 PM
Profound and thought n luck....BHUWAN

LIGHT WEIGHT (Poetry) - 2/15/2004 5:52:58 AM
Thought-provoking! ~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~

Speechless (Poetry) - 12/16/2003 1:45:11 PM
the stream of your consciousness is indeed interesting ...

A Crowd at the Radio Station on a MIld Spring Morning (Poetry) - 11/29/2003 5:13:42 PM
Marvin, the title alone should win an award. What a fast-moving, intricate, ranting, often funny, always fascinating piece. Thanks!

TIME OUT (Poetry) - 11/13/2003 5:11:10 PM
A nice poem indeed. Greetings from Atlanta.

I knows my lifes' an oldfactory problem (Poetry) - 11/7/2003 9:40:59 PM
Very interesting piece.

Dear Hedonline (Poetry) - 11/5/2003 4:54:55 PM
A most intriguing and interesting write!

Punks, Peons, Kings, Presidents .. and Scholars.....  (Poetry) - 10/30/2003 1:46:51 PM
".. and Scholars..... " That gives me pause, Eli, it's like a beacon. It holds the meaning underlying the piece. The whole resonates, the form strong-arms its nuances, the whole has a bite of despair. Brilliant work! :)

Punks, Peons, Kings, Presidents .. and Scholars.....  (Poetry) - 10/30/2003 6:12:19 AM
very well crafted.

Punks, Peons, Kings, Presidents .. and Scholars.....  (Poetry) - 10/30/2003 5:02:24 AM
Wise and true words...Bravo!

Punks, Peons, Kings, Presidents .. and Scholars.....  (Poetry) - 10/30/2003 5:02:04 AM
Interesting thought-provoking write! May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Punks, Peons, Kings, Presidents .. and Scholars.....  (Poetry) - 10/30/2003 1:30:10 AM
We are of our own making, aren't we? Thought provoking and unfortunately true. Debbie

free'd world zoo (Poetry) - 10/13/2003 7:11:19 PM
This is chilling, Marvin... I feel a sense of dark hollow loss, like pieces of self are seperate and may suddenly come back to fulfill the whole, maybe not without trepidation on the writer's part. Perhaps I'm wrong, the twists and turns lead to other thoughts also, but in its completeness, it walks the knife between sanity and...what? Eternity? Aloneness in a dark hole bold?

HOMEBOY'S Ph.D (Poetry) - 10/5/2003 8:27:19 PM
good questions...what is all the paper me, it's the only thing we can take with us when we go...LOL

The Science of the Clockers' Hand: Part's one and two (Poetry) - 9/21/2003 8:42:49 PM
I do agree with Jessica, most interesting to read! ~Nikki~

The Science of the Clockers' Hand: Part's one and two (Poetry) - 9/21/2003 11:23:51 AM
This was very interesting to read. - J -

Science of the Clockers Hand :PART TWO (Poetry) - 9/18/2003 5:49:19 AM
great job marvin

Field's yellow flower  (Poetry) - 8/30/2003 5:55:40 AM
Wonderful write and flowers are always so beautiful. lady peg

Field's yellow flower  (Poetry) - 8/29/2003 9:35:38 PM
Yellow is also one of the basic "colors" of our souls, Marvin, rays and spashes of Sol's energy, epitomized. Lovely little write. A florist has as much worth as a doctor, each in his own way. :)

Field's yellow flower  (Poetry) - 8/29/2003 5:59:25 AM
This was beautiful, I loved this very much, excellently written! Reindeer

Field's yellow flower  (Poetry) - 8/28/2003 6:32:38 PM
Flowers are beautiful. Great write.

Habits of the Whiler Nest Bird (Poetry) - 8/17/2003 9:41:45 PM
Very interesting write, Marvin. Very interesting form as well.

Habits of the Whiler Nest Bird (Poetry) - 8/17/2003 3:45:19 PM
Brilliant context, Marvin! Enjoyed the convolutions to my mind.

habits of the whileder nest bird (Poetry) - 8/16/2003 9:34:19 PM
Yes, a excellant piece!

habits of the whileder nest bird (Poetry) - 8/16/2003 1:04:09 PM
Needs some formatting, but an excellent piece of work.

The Science of the Clocker's Hand --Rewritten (Poetry) - 7/24/2003 1:11:19 PM
A very original idea. I really enjoyed this one. Best wishes from kay.

The Science of the Clocker's Hand-rewritten (Poetry) - 7/19/2003 6:03:29 PM
Very good!;-) methinks you like conundrums!

The Science of the Clocker's Hand-rewritten (Poetry) - 7/19/2003 6:01:14 PM
hahaha....cleverly done.

SCIENTIFIC LICENSE (Poetry) - 7/6/2003 1:19:39 PM
In the world of science, everything has it logic. Because ......, therefore ......! May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

IS THAT DNA OR AM I JUST BORED SOMEWHERE (Poetry) - 7/6/2003 1:17:25 PM
Okay DNA! You're on the spot, I guess. May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

AN ALLEY WITH SEASHELLS (Poetry) - 7/6/2003 1:09:56 PM
Okay, if only I can understand this poem better, I might be able to enjoy it more. Thank you for sharing! May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

AN ALLEY WITH SEASHELLS (Poetry) - 7/4/2003 3:28:41 AM
A unique well done piece Marvin, although I must admit I am lost...then again is 5am here! lol

SCIENTIFIC LICENSE (Poetry) - 7/3/2003 10:57:07 PM
Ahhh, those seasons. Well done. Love it.

TIME OUT (Poetry) - 7/3/2003 10:55:25 PM
Love it. [sware ?? or swear] I like that Holy Goal.

THE COURTING OF HEAVY REFLECTION (Poetry) - 6/30/2003 2:47:39 PM
In some ocasions, people are made guilty in the eyes of the beholders who see only a reflection from their mind. They see only what their minds tell them to see - an image that they believe to be true. Yet, can their imaginery reflections be taken into judgments? They judge the reflective image in their minds; but then again, who can be the judge of what they see? Seeing and believing is one thing; but to have the truth is to have a true copy of reflection, and who can verify the reflection they see in their mind is the true copy of what they see? Good write! I'm not sure if my comments were appropriate, but that is how I would have reflected on this piece. If I had commented this piece wrong, I'll apologize in advance. .....But I would like to think that my theory can go for anything else in this world, not just this piece. Sandie Angel :o)

THE COURTING OF HEAVY REFLECTION (Poetry) - 6/30/2003 2:45:40 PM
Great write... Trixie :)

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