M.H.S (Poetry) - 8/24/2011 9:04:20 PM
Very deep, sincere, and moving piece to write of one that you will forever carry in your heart...
Be always safe,
M.H.S (Poetry) - 8/23/2011 11:51:27 PM
Heartfelt depiction of your love!
M.H.S (Poetry) - 8/23/2011 11:20:46 PM
I liked how you pour out the words with this narrative of a write... to the reader... I did see a typo in the word "Sence", "Sense", but a minor detail to say the lease... May be a space in-between the lines for readability... also... but all in all you did a good job with this verse... Also, you were inspired by someone to let this all flow from your mind and heart to the pen... Thanks for sharing...