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Recent Reviews for Susan Barton
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Joy (Short Story) - 12/9/2006 10:51:13 AM
Hi! friend, Susan, I thoroughly enjoyed the poem,"Joy" There is a kind of sweetness to it that brings back times of when I was younger and would pick flowers for my mother. This is an aptly named poem. Keep up the kind of writing we all need to read once-in-awhile. It teaches us just to stop and take the time to 'smell the roses' kinda thing. Please feel free to visit my site at www.freewebs.com/kendoo/
Who Are You? (Short Story) - 9/20/2006 10:11:27 AM
Delightful story, Sue! I've got some catching up to do, reading your bits here on AD, especially the childrens stories...yeah! I'm just a kid at heart :o)
Micke
Stormy Night (Short Story) - 3/31/2006 6:00:48 PM
I agree with Carol, very charming story.
Who Are You? (Short Story) - 2/27/2006 5:06:14 PM
And those were the BEST costumes. We used to do the angels and fairies by using cardboard cutouts covered in tin foil. Then, there was always the sheet to play ghost. ROFL. Love this.
Princess Selena (Short Story) - 1/3/2006 7:39:26 AM
A great story!
Birgit and Roger
The Wagon Wheel Bunk Beds (Short Story) - 12/15/2005 1:11:02 PM
I like this story. Hopefully Rob will learn to climb without the 'boo boos'
Who Are You? (Short Story) - 12/15/2005 1:06:58 PM
This is a cute story! And...tell your brother he was right about the mask being 'evil'. I once had an 'evil' bunk bed that caused me to cut a gash above my eyebrow when I jumped off of it backwards (under the influence of a 'Pippi Longstocking' novel)when I was ten.
The Wagon Wheel Bunk Beds (Short Story) - 12/6/2005 9:49:11 AM
Aww, sweet story. It reminds me of my own childhood when I had to share bunk beds with my own brother ( I was the younger though so I got the bottom bunk)
Who Are You? (Short Story) - 7/6/2005 8:40:19 AM
Ah, Susan, made me laugh!
Rural Life (Short Story) - 3/9/2005 9:08:16 PM
good one
The Wagon Wheel Bunk Beds (Short Story) - 3/9/2005 9:05:07 PM
excellent!
Once Upon a Cat Tail (Short Story) - 3/9/2005 9:02:31 PM
i like this
Who Are You? (Short Story) - 3/4/2005 2:58:02 PM
chuckle
Who Are You? (Short Story) - 10/15/2004 2:02:27 PM
Very funny. I have similar memories of past Halloweens. Nicely done.
M.Rose
Who Are You? (Short Story) - 10/14/2004 6:22:49 AM
A delightful nostalgic write, Sue, which reminded me of just how much fun I had as a kid trick or treating. Always made my own costumes, too, and I often stole (borrowed) old sheets from my grandmothers - but they didn't mind, I guess, because by some odd coincidence, they usually left them laying around in the open - just before Halloween.
Who Are You? (Short Story) - 10/13/2004 4:35:16 PM
(((sueb)))
LOL--i would love to see a pic of THAT LOL o, what a riot--an absolute riot LOL GREAT WRITE!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla dorman, lady of the Lights :)
Who Are You? (Short Story) - 10/13/2004 2:56:57 PM
Cute ending to a delightful story! LOL SueB, you are a riot! LOL Thanks for the grins!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
The Wagon Wheel Bunk Beds (Short Story) - 10/9/2004 5:32:01 AM
You captured the relationship between brother and sister extremely well. Thank you for such a beautiful sharing!
The Wagon Wheel Bunk Beds (Short Story) - 10/8/2004 9:29:42 AM
nice story, sueb; well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
Princess Selena (Short Story) - 9/29/2004 4:14:29 PM
Da Princess...rather...the Princess should have known not to trust a "big stinky, green and gray dragon with snaggly teeth"! :o). Good moral, and clever write, Sue!
The Hurricane (Short Story) - 9/29/2004 4:00:50 PM
A very interesting twist on the debris of hurricanes! Entertaining and imaginitive!!
Princess Selena (Short Story) - 9/29/2004 2:17:41 PM
Very cool story! LOL. I loved it...
The Hurricane (Short Story) - 9/29/2004 2:13:11 PM
What a fun story! Much enjoyed!
The Hurricane (Short Story) - 9/28/2004 2:58:58 PM
Interesting, and entertaining story. I enjoyed the read.
Carmen :-)
The Hurricane (Short Story) - 9/28/2004 9:38:04 AM
A very interesting twist to the Hurricane possibilities. Great imagination shown in this write.
I'll Never Forget the First Time... (Article) - 3/29/2007 4:18:04 AM
March, 2007
The above article is incorrect. The two elephants mentioned are Shirley and Jenny. Jenny recently passed away. You can still check on Shirley (Linda in the story above)....at www.elephants.com.....website of The Elephant Sanctuary in Hohenwald, Tennessee as well as the other 17 rescued elephants in this wonderful sanctuary.
My life is an Open Book (Article) - 6/27/2006 6:12:02 PM
100 words or less...I think I could make it in the less.
To be me, you have to be crazy. A life full of ups and downs, two steps forward, three steps back and the attention span of a two year old. Loves deeply, savors the moment and then lets it fly away.
Simply put, very simple.
Under 50...
Have a great evening, Sue!
Debbie
The Sun Will Come Out Tomorrow (Article) - 3/4/2005 2:56:34 PM
good one
The Sun Will Come Out Tomorrow (Article) - 9/15/2004 2:10:08 PM
Nice one! Well done, SueB!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your Tx. friend, Karen Lynn. :D
The Sun Will Come Out Tomorrow (Article) - 9/15/2004 1:53:30 PM
yip the sun will shine again!!
Love Tinka
The Sun Will Come Out Tomorrow (Article) - 9/15/2004 9:07:50 AM
I like it, Sue!
Labor Day Picnic (Article) - 9/7/2004 9:27:58 AM
Wonderful write, SueB! Thanks for sharing!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Thanks for your review on my new story; it is much appreciated! :)
My Writing Place (Article) - 9/5/2004 2:25:53 PM
Nice write, Susan! Well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Flights of Fancy (Article) - 8/5/2003 6:03:22 AM
Wonderful, uplifting story. Thanks for the sharing.
I'll Never Forget the First Time... (Article) - 7/28/2003 6:40:50 PM
Sue - what a great article! Thank you for reminding us of one of many of the wild animals we do not protect from extinction. Deforestation effects way too many of the animals on this earth...and, in turn, effects the human animal as well. Like you, I don't have the answer...God bless those who work to find one.
I'll Never Forget the First Time... (Article) - 7/28/2003 6:35:29 PM
Sue I love this story and I love Elephants. I share your views.A beautiful write! I really don't think we have to worry though for in India they are working elephants, and I heard on a program that they make sure there will always be Elephants to do the jobs they need.At least we can hope
so;-)
I'll Never Forget the First Time... (Article) - 7/28/2003 2:38:01 PM
Lovely story about Linda and Jenny, I'm glad they were reunited, family is important to elephants. They need each other just as we do. I have always had a special affinity for elephants and one day, I watched six of them being unloaded from a huge circus truck on the far side of the rail station yard in the town where I lived. A trunk went up like a periscope, scenting the air, then the elephant took off, making a beeline through the crowd for me, followed by the others. I stood my ground and was surrounded by them, all smelling and touching my body and hair, they were so gentle. I was wearing a white lace summer dress that didn't stay white for long! The keeper came rushing over, quite alarmed, but there was nothing to worry about. I wonder why they picked me, out of all the people there, it is an experience I will never forget. Jackie <> <
I'll Never Forget the First Time... (Article) - 7/27/2003 11:22:41 AM
Excellent story Sue
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