Recent Reviews for Masood Lohar
Qalandar Lal Shahbaz (Article) - 12/12/2004 7:33:51 PM|
This was a very informative article and covered many topics. I was quite intrigued by the one of the poet philosopher,~ sorry can't spell his name.~ That's really intersting to hear about them and all they did and contributed. Thank You.
Have a Wonderful Day.
Too late the rescue operation (Article) - 8/12/2003 3:30:51 PM
Thanks for posting this. It is an excellent article and a horrendous situation.
The Personality Caves (Poetry) - 11/10/2012 9:17:22 AM
It talks and as it talks truth came alive! deep liked.
Fakhre Hyder (poems reciter)
I have fallen in love again (Poetry) - 10/17/2012 11:48:45 AM
In sweet poetry is such art
saving care and love of heart. Very expressive!
Did we ever deserve you? (Poetry) - 6/5/2012 3:40:22 AM
a sad reminder
Are you made of silk? (Poetry) - 4/24/2012 11:50:05 PM
If someone wants to know, what can a poem do? it must come to read this poem "Are you made of silk?" then he/she must have his/her answer on the smile. It is an initiative good effort to spread awareness about global warming through poetry. good stuff to be here.
Are you made of silk? (Poetry) - 10/11/2008 3:45:00 AM
Well, how did you know...(Giggles)lovely writing....Hugsss
Are you made of silk? (Poetry) - 9/7/2008 3:03:40 AM
MY God, it is so romantic... you know how to priase your woman. any woman would like to be seen like that...excellant!!
Did we ever deserve you? (Poetry) - 9/7/2008 3:01:05 AM
It is an excellent poem Masood. very touching and wise. no doubt it is a fitting tribute to Benazir Bhutto. please keep writing...
Slaves of modern times (Poetry) - 3/13/2008 7:21:05 PM
Jackass slaves to modern times....
Very much the nature of the beast and it's a damned if you do damned if you don't situation. My english teacher might like this.
Your curves shape my ecstasy (Poetry) - 8/4/2007 9:42:04 AM
You are my reason to live, o woman!
You make me plural from the one
Life seeks passion, life seeks you
Come find me, sans you I am none
indeed dear poet you seek/await your twin soul..the one that is you and you she..my kinda poetry..wow!!!
Your curves shape my ecstasy (Poetry) - 7/21/2007 12:08:13 PM
'Come find me, sans you I am none'
This poem holds many things, such great masood...............
Your curves shape my ecstasy (Poetry) - 5/6/2007 5:25:00 PM
'You make me plural from the one'
Lovely lively write! Ultimately, we're All One!
Love and Friendship
Slaves of modern times (Poetry) - 5/6/2007 8:29:10 AM
"The kids are writing new tragedy
Baby sitter can not be a mother
“Day-care” can not be a daddy"
Tragedy indeed. Unfortunately for many in modern society it's a necessity for both parents to work, and for more hours than in past times, just to supply basic human needs. A sad commentary on our times. Unfortunately it is the children who suffer the most. There is the other side of the coin where many pursue careers without thought to anything else. True "jackass slaves" to modern times. I like this poem and agree with the sentiments expressed.
Your curves shape my ecstasy (Poetry) - 5/6/2007 2:02:39 AM
This poem holds romance in a beautiful poetic form........
Your curves shape my ecstasy (Poetry) - 5/5/2007 9:02:57 PM
Hardcore lust! I like it.
Your curves shape my ecstasy (Poetry) - 5/5/2007 8:22:18 PM
Slaves of modern times (Poetry) - 4/29/2007 10:48:17 AM
Seems like you hit the nail on the head! Too many who care too less about the issues that are truly pertinent in a family unity. But society has changed so dramatically and values and morals oftentime devalued. A sad but true reflection of where humanity is heading.
Very well written plenty of food for thought.
Hugs and love
In her curves I was last seen! (Poetry) - 4/27/2006 9:06:20 PM
E x c e l l e n t. That sound you hear is applause!! 'Pea' <3 ~~ PS: If you haven't read The Da Vinci Code, do. It is very
relevant. . .understand when you read it. Be well & stay you!!
In her curves I was last seen! (Poetry) - 2/7/2006 6:25:42 AM
This sis great poetry, Lohar. Enjoyed reading it.
In her curves I was last seen! (Poetry) - 1/8/2006 11:03:01 AM
I LOVE POETRY, IN THIS POETRY MASOOD WRITE:Do you see me here today?
For I don’t know where I may
What I know is clear and clean
In her curves I was last seen
Round her curves, moves the universe
Forget Newton, this is new Physics
“A woman is the only best sight”
WHEN I READ THESE LINES EVRY TIME, I FEELING THAT WOMAN ARE REALY A
In her curves I was last seen! (Poetry) - 1/6/2006 3:39:03 AM
You have some very interesting thoughts and concepts. I really like some of your phraseology. You really took your woman from an angel, out of heaven, and placed her right in the arms of hell, didn't you?
Good write. Thanks.
Tragedies (Poetry) - 1/5/2006 6:16:22 AM
This one is so powerful the created lines bring so much depth and provacation.
Frustration (Poetry) - 1/5/2006 6:15:26 AM
Frustration it is overwhelming this is full of wise words.
I have fallen in love again (Poetry) - 1/5/2006 2:52:37 AM
The rhyme and lyrical way you did this one leaves fasciating lines. Very expressive once again.
Each day is your birthday to me (Poetry) - 1/5/2006 2:50:46 AM
I also felt this to be a poem of dedication the visuals and expressions are very beautiful.
In her curves I was last seen! (Poetry) - 1/5/2006 2:49:25 AM
Captures women on all levels the ending was outstanding. Thankyou for posting.
In her curves I was last seen! (Poetry) - 1/3/2006 7:08:08 PM
"Her curves are the poetry of nature" Now THIS is an inspired line if ever there was!! Absolutely wonderful Masood - you've indeed captured the "feminine mystique"!
I only wish that all men could read and appreciate your words. Women too for that matter.
So good to read you again my friend.
Each day is your birthday to me (Poetry) - 1/3/2006 7:05:42 PM
What a delightful, almost whimsical view of woman - and what an inspiration to read such sweet nectar from one so talented.
I've missed you very much my friend!
Each day is your birthday to me (Poetry) - 1/2/2006 12:36:46 PM
A beautiful poem and wonderful dedication to someone who holds a very special place in your heart. May she always inspire you to compose such beauty.
Men and Women (Poetry) - 12/28/2005 12:11:59 PM
We can't live with each other, but yet we can't live without each other - the greatest irony of life. Lol. Great write, Masood!
Why don't Women Understand (Poetry) - 9/29/2005 5:45:16 AM
That was very interesting. Gave me some more insight on the difference between men and women.
But: Are you sure that it is only women who go for the long, lasting, exclusive love?
Enjoyed reading this.
Men and Women (Poetry) - 9/29/2005 5:43:44 AM
Nice comparision with colors. Assume there are far more than in a rainbow?
As long as she only breaks your knee.....
I have fallen in love again (Poetry) - 9/29/2005 5:42:13 AM
Wonderful write - lucky you.
Hold her tight and never let go again.
Frustration (Poetry) - 8/6/2005 10:53:56 PM
A play on words? nevertheless, either way a wise and sound composition with much to think about Masood. A good write.
Men and Women (Poetry) - 8/6/2005 10:39:48 PM
Love and passion through the eyes of a romantic. Pak mohabbat never tires, it is a circle of forever learning never satiated.
Ajmal kavya :)
The Personality Caves (Poetry) - 8/6/2005 5:55:09 PM
Part/most of humanity is certainly based on what you term the "personality caves" how slow or how fast is not a factor, in your last line are very sage words. Another thought provoking gem Masood.
Why don't Women Understand (Poetry) - 8/6/2005 5:30:57 PM
A most interesting concept, your enquiring mind has crafted an excellent thought provoking poem intricately penned Masood. A question I have however: had it not been for a woman initially admiring a rose's beautiful bloom, would man ever have been intrigued, or stopped to savour its perfume? In savouring its perfume, does man not look closer, and begin to admire the beauty of the bloom? Just an observation :-) Thanks for sharing.
I have fallen in love again (Poetry) - 8/4/2005 7:17:45 AM
A marvelous piece of work!
Eternal Bliss (Poetry) - 7/31/2005 7:09:01 AM
The beauty and joy of eternal bliss, only a loving heart could understand and write so beautifully about the love that reaches within, yet there is a saddness within these lines.
I have fallen in love again (Poetry) - 7/21/2005 10:05:01 PM
You have captured the true essence of love, and so beautifully expressed in this loving poem. May you always feel that fluttering "like and amateur chick"
Tragedies (Poetry) - 7/21/2005 9:49:51 PM
Superb poetry, thought provoking write from one who has taken the time to look beyond the depths of tragedies provocations.
Your love is like a water fall!! (Poetry) - 7/21/2005 9:38:26 PM
Your words flow just like the waterfall, beautifully soft and alluring. The following lines are quite exquisite, and so full of meaning. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem.
"Ships crash on the reefs of your love
Survivors fall prey to the pirates of your eyes
The lotus on your lips enslaves the rest
Those who have passed the previous test"
Your love is like a water fall!! (Poetry) - 7/12/2005 12:42:49 AM
This is lovely! Yes love gives one the feeling of witnessing a magnificent waterfall!
Why don't Women Understand (Poetry) - 7/11/2005 5:34:40 AM
Excellent Writing. You have the gift of a true poet!
Tragedies (Poetry) - 7/11/2005 5:33:04 AM
Excellent write. I like this.
I have fallen in love again (Poetry) - 7/11/2005 5:32:32 AM
Each word in your verses speaks of love. Well done!
I have fallen in love again (Poetry) - 7/9/2005 9:25:51 AM
There's nothing like falling in love. You express it well in your verses, Masood. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace. Regis
I have fallen in love again (Poetry) - 7/7/2005 8:52:14 AM
How beatiful, romantic and sincere Masood! Beautiful sentiments! A beautiful write!
I have fallen in love again (Poetry) - 7/6/2005 7:06:54 PM
What a lyrical write - so alive with positive energy and the river of strong sentiment that rides through is beautiful!
The imagery you evoke with your words is delightful.
Hope you are well, PLEASE keep in touch!
I have fallen in love again (Poetry) - 7/6/2005 9:22:51 AM
wonderful write, masood; very well done! :)
Tragedies (Poetry) - 5/29/2005 1:54:01 AM
EXCELLENT..... its one strong write!
Your love is like a water fall!! (Poetry) - 4/19/2005 10:37:51 AM
when i read massod's this poetry, my heart is ful of motion, realy
i enjoy when i read massod's poetry or artical. i hope massod will
carry his best poetry
Eternal Bliss (Poetry) - 4/8/2005 3:03:02 AM
mmmmm beautiful romantic write. I am thoroughly enjoying your work and discovering your versatility as I go on.
The Personality Caves (Poetry) - 4/8/2005 3:01:39 AM
More wise words from your insightful mind. I wholeheartedly agree with your observations.
Men and Women (Poetry) - 4/8/2005 2:59:58 AM
This one was written a certain amount of cynical humour and wit but I suspect that you are a lover at heart. There is a romantic soul in there. Your last poem is proof of that.
May love bloom forever in your heart.
Why don't Women Understand (Poetry) - 4/8/2005 2:58:08 AM
Masood, the title of this poem attracted me. Naturally being a woman, I am curious. lol
Interesting thoughts here. I especially enjoyed the lines
Women want a long exclusive love
Men try some quick abrupt move
Women look for the rose’s bloom
But men just care about its perfume
You really are a great poet.
Tragedies (Poetry) - 4/8/2005 2:56:25 AM
Excellent poetry Masood. You are talented. It has been a sensory treat to read some of your work. The wisdom in this piece is a reflection of the depth of your soul.
Your love is like a water fall!! (Poetry) - 4/8/2005 2:54:08 AM
This is an exquisite poem, filled with insight and beauty. Your writing seems to flow easily from you. I will be looking forward to reading more of your poetry and being inspired.
Your love is like a water fall!! (Poetry) - 3/10/2005 6:05:48 PM
Wow, I like this a lot. Simple, to the point, yet profound. Well-done!
Your love is like a water fall!! (Poetry) - 2/4/2005 9:09:12 PM
waterfalls can be both dangerous and refreshing...much like love. ~ sara
Your love is like a water fall!! (Poetry) - 2/1/2005 12:51:05 PM
This flows really well, and it is a lovely poem. The last three lines are really well done, especially the one about the pirates, very original.
Your love is like a water fall!! (Poetry) - 1/30/2005 10:34:19 PM
I absolutely love this, very romantic and full of heart.
Your love is like a water fall!! (Poetry) - 1/16/2005 9:30:16 AM
I really like the theme you use here and continue to use the flow of water as the flow of love. And as flowing water, never knowing in which direction it will lead you. Excellent thought as well as imagery.
Your love is like a water fall!! (Poetry) - 1/13/2005 7:01:13 AM
A very loving sensual way of expressing your love for your lady, well done.
Tragedies (Poetry) - 12/30/2004 7:36:34 PM
This is all so very true. You are Magnificent and so deep and strong in your poems and thoughts all so wonderfully written.
Welcome home here to the den. Lossa super duper nice caring fokes here.
Heaven's Love, Always
Frustration (Poetry) - 12/30/2004 7:28:08 PM
Wow. You really captured this emotion. Very, very good. Perfection!
Peaceful Days everyday for you and your family,
The Personality Caves (Poetry) - 12/30/2004 7:22:27 PM
This is really nice. And at the virtue of self we grow.
Coz I know when I know what to know.
We tend to hide into ourselves. Very true. This is so Very nice. Thank You so much. I like this alot.
Why don't Women Understand (Poetry) - 12/30/2004 7:17:59 PM
This is wonderful and so true. You really hit the nail on the head here and so beautifully written too. I never thought about the Day of Judgement when God will tell who's right. I like that alot. But I know most 94% of the time I am right. - LOL - I think.
Thank you for this : )ing & wonderful poem.
Many Blessings for you and your family
Your love is like a water fall!! (Poetry) - 12/12/2004 6:55:22 PM
Really romantic and a love held high for her. Really beautiful way to express your undying love.
Your love is like a water fall!! (Poetry) - 6/5/2004 12:15:15 PM
Passionate and loving! Great offering, Masood. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace to you. Regis
Tragedies (Poetry) - 5/26/2004 11:29:29 AM
The sad thing is when two civilizations clash, as did the Turks and the Byzantines, the barbarians and the Romans, the Hindu and the Moslem in India, and the great clash of civilizatoins now occurring between the Moslem and Christian worlds, spiked by U.S. intransigeance in Iraq and Moslem insanities through Al Quaida and the like. I am to the point where I don't see an end to it in our lifetimes, which could be much shortened if another World War comes out of this. You are right about tragedies, but they don't have to be localised. They can be world wide and unstoppable.
Your love is like a water fall!! (Poetry) - 3/17/2004 7:45:00 PM
beautiful poem for your lady!
Your love is like a water fall!! (Poetry) - 3/17/2004 1:20:57 PM
Excellent! Very well written. Bill Murray
Your love is like a water fall!! (Poetry) - 3/17/2004 11:03:59 AM
excellent write. Very passioned.
Your love is like a water fall!! (Poetry) - 3/17/2004 9:25:48 AM
BRILLIANT work, exquisite word canvas is this page, Poet!
Eternal Bliss (Poetry) - 8/25/2003 12:42:20 PM
Most beautiful poem,Masood.
Tragedies (Poetry) - 8/25/2003 12:39:26 PM
Beautiful poem, Masood.
A great write.
Blessings and WasSalam.
Ashraf Gohar Goreja
Tragedies (Poetry) - 8/22/2003 11:36:01 AM
A unique perspective on tragedies.
Tragedies (Poetry) - 8/15/2003 8:43:36 PM
Outstanding my friend, also thank you for visiting me.
Eternal Bliss (Poetry) - 8/11/2003 10:57:20 AM
This is just lovely. You have a wonderful style. Thanks much!
Tragedies (Poetry) - 7/30/2003 10:00:42 AM
if no one has welcomed you to author's den, let me be the first
much truth in this excellent write--well done
(((HUGS))) and love,
Tragedies (Poetry) - 7/30/2003 9:57:41 AM
Much truth in this write, Masood. Very good write, my friend! (((HUGS))) and love from America, your new friend, Karen Lynn in Texas. Thanks for the prayers; that was kind of you! I shall pray for you too! :)
Why don't Women Understand (Poetry) - 7/30/2003 9:42:32 AM
I agree wiyh Peggy about the last 2 lines but also thing we'll find that neither of us is right. I really liked "Women look for the rose’s bloom But men just care about its perfume" So beautifully put and true! Lisa
The Personality Caves (Poetry) - 7/30/2003 8:03:31 AM
Tragedies (Poetry) - 7/30/2003 1:28:41 AM
True, society needs both.
Tragedies (Poetry) - 7/29/2003 11:38:55 PM
Very true write, well done! ~Z~
Frustration (Poetry) - 7/29/2003 12:12:37 PM
<Smack> yep this one's powerful truth and wisdom just smacked me right upside the head...EXCELLANCE!!!!
Frustration (Poetry) - 7/29/2003 9:09:08 AM
very good write! well done, masood! :) (((HUGS))) and love, your new friend in america, karen lynn.
Frustration (Poetry) - 7/29/2003 6:47:11 AM
In the haze of work I saw
The elixir of self was raw
Creativity of mind was fluctuating
And the strength of self was nothing
Frustration broken down to it's basic element.. Great write