Honeymoon with Joe (Short Story) - 4/4/2009 1:06:13 PM
You get across very well the eerie cut off from reality necessary for any addicted gambler to slash their own throat. That this harrowing human failing destroys a woman's most sensitive dream, her honeymoom, only adds poignancy to our dread of that mystifying ability in so may of us to utterly degrade ourselves for no good reason. Your story's moving and good luck with your next.
Bennett Kremen
author of Savage Days Haunted Nights,
a novel availabe at Amazon.com
Jill's Job (Short Story) - 6/8/2007 5:51:20 PM
I love this story. There is so much realism here. This is exactly how it goes.
Brett
PHOENIX? LOUDOUN? GERMANY? RUSSIA? USSR? AFRICA? CONGO? ISRAEL? WHERE YOU B (Short Story) - 4/3/2007 4:16:05 AM
I know what you mean. The qoute sounds like it is from the great Canadian philosopher Red Green. When viewing the modern world he also advises.."Keep your stick on the ice." Much wisdom in that man's words.
IRIS: drug abuse program (Poetry) - 8/28/2008 7:15:50 PM
Your powerful words ring true to me, drug abuse and desperately trying to become clean is a dangerous battle for many. People are people regardless of the circumstances they find themselves in.
Thank you for highlighting the plight of many, with your sincere and caring write.
