What Scares You? (Article) - 10/6/2012 6:38:19 AM
Ooh, I can't wait for the finished project! I understand your point, you want to conclude something horrendously unpredictable! Best wishes on your finished book.
Debbie
That House at the End of Carver Street (Poetry) - 10/31/2012 12:13:20 PM
Growing up in a changing neighborhood, there were houses like that. Using a little imagination like you did, these houses become greater than their derelict look. They began to harbor deep secrets and dead souls from past occupants trying to get out.
Nicely conjured up.
Ron
That House at the End of Carver Street (Poetry) - 10/30/2012 6:20:19 AM
Very creepy. Would make a great YouTube production. Your last two lines effectively open the piece into the realm of metaphor. r
Teddy Bear Heads (Poetry) - 10/28/2012 8:24:08 AM
It looks like an imaginary friend is getting very real. The human brain is a wonderful thing until it gets a little psychotic and starts hearing voices from its teddy bear friend.
Ron