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Recent Reviews for ira eden
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revealed (Poetry) - 12/5/2004 1:53:18 PM
love as been said before...is just a four letter word.
good write!
in-laws (Poetry) - 1/2/2004 6:37:31 PM
Teehee oooo this is a excellant true good one!
Happy New Year
~Nikki~
in-laws (Poetry) - 12/31/2003 10:22:16 PM
Know the feeling! Great write.
in-laws (Poetry) - 12/31/2003 4:07:09 AM
My in-laws are very nice people; but I agree with you, absence makes the heart grows fonder.
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
in-laws (Poetry) - 12/31/2003 3:46:52 AM
Ira, very funny but sometimes they do overstay their welcome.
revealed (Poetry) - 12/30/2003 6:19:35 AM
Such a powerful and soulful write.
revealed (Poetry) - 12/29/2003 8:30:09 PM
love is strange until we become familiar with it ...
excellent poem!
revealed (Poetry) - 12/29/2003 7:46:50 AM
Intense and powerful write!
revealed (Poetry) - 12/29/2003 2:35:54 AM
It's a large world, but so revealing. Wonderfully written Ira. Lisa
sleep (Poetry) - 12/24/2003 7:57:07 PM
well done ...
sleep (Poetry) - 12/22/2003 3:22:26 PM
Very interesting work! Your words kept me scrolling down to the finale. Enjoyed it!
Gary
sleep (Poetry) - 12/22/2003 7:57:56 AM
Eerily moving work. Gave me chills.
sleep (Poetry) - 12/22/2003 6:01:54 AM
I really loved this one too.....
magic (Poetry) - 12/19/2003 12:05:32 AM
Most interesting concepts. Excellent write.
magic (Poetry) - 12/18/2003 8:49:15 PM
awesome! can't tell you how much i have an affinity with this ...
magic (Poetry) - 12/18/2003 11:07:32 AM
We are responsible for all we do this is excelleny Ira.
fragile betoken (Poetry) - 12/16/2003 6:41:30 PM
Great write!
fragile betoken (Poetry) - 12/16/2003 3:56:10 PM
A beautiful write and great expression.
Greetings and thanks.
Goreja.com
upon awakening, My Beau (Part I) (Poetry) - 12/13/2003 6:25:09 AM
A nice thought.
Greetings.
Goreja.com
upon awakening, My Beau (Part I) (Poetry) - 12/11/2003 3:05:03 PM
Excellent write.
upon awakening, My Beau (Part I) (Poetry) - 12/5/2003 10:35:31 PM
Excellent poem and thoughts.
upon awakening, My Beau (Part I) (Poetry) - 12/5/2003 9:51:31 PM
It makes me think so that cannot be bad. Thank you. Love and peace, Regis.
upon awakening, The End (Part IV) (Poetry) - 12/5/2003 8:11:06 PM
I had to read all the parts before reviewing and I must say these left me in awe!!! There is a lot going on and I will be reading them again but my initial word is bravo sir!
upon awakening, My Beau (Part I) (Poetry) - 12/5/2003 4:43:26 PM
very well done ira
upon awakening, My Beau (Part I) (Poetry) - 12/5/2003 2:04:08 PM
Fantastic expression, Ira. Great work.
Amor
upon awakening, My Beau (Part I) (Poetry) - 12/5/2003 1:22:57 PM
Great write!
upon awakening, Evil (Part III) (Poetry) - 12/3/2003 7:51:29 PM
This is excellent I loved the visuals Ira.
upon awakening, Evil (Part III) (Poetry) - 12/3/2003 6:24:51 PM
Great write!
upon awakening, The End (Part IV) (Poetry) - 12/3/2003 3:07:38 AM
Very deep and profound!
upon awakening, The End (Part IV) (Poetry) - 12/2/2003 9:33:30 PM
Vey sad but so well written.
upon awakening, The End (Part IV) (Poetry) - 12/2/2003 9:25:22 PM
So sad... and with much beauty! So visual it takes me to the ocean which I miss...Lovely write!
Antoinette
lost (Poetry) - 11/29/2003 7:37:48 AM
We have never met, you and I... yet, you seem to have read my mind... and you have proven beautifully that it does, indeed, pay to read the small print! I shall carry this with me today. katy xox.
underground reality (Poetry) - 11/14/2003 4:28:54 PM
Spoooooooky. "But good." :)
underground reality (Poetry) - 11/11/2003 12:40:01 PM
Brooding and even slightly dark...I like the tension you have transmitted through these words. Really good stuff.
underground reality (Poetry) - 11/6/2003 6:51:56 AM
Thought provoking write.
underground reality (Poetry) - 11/6/2003 3:31:13 AM
Great write, a chill atmo'
the land of wane (Poetry) - 11/5/2003 6:41:40 PM
in the third verse it knits tho not clearly it was still unhapiness,
sensitively written,
the land of wane (Poetry) - 11/5/2003 12:27:09 PM
I agree with Kate on every note of her review. Excellant work Ira!
~Nikki~
the land of wane (Poetry) - 11/3/2003 7:17:53 PM
This has a haunting feel about it. The last sentence speaks volumes!
g-string spaghetti girl (Poetry) - 11/3/2003 6:09:45 AM
Dreamy write...well done!!!
starfish painting (Poetry) - 11/3/2003 3:42:09 AM
..and a wondrous painting it is indeed...
Excellent write..food for thought..ty
vesna :)
starfish painting (Poetry) - 11/3/2003 2:15:51 AM
Positive write...i adore your spirit!!!
g-string spaghetti girl (Poetry) - 11/2/2003 8:26:36 PM
I am lost in your dreamworld again.
Nice to get away from reality
Taylor
g-string spaghetti girl (Poetry) - 11/2/2003 6:54:52 PM
Very imaginative write.
g-string spaghetti girl (Poetry) - 11/2/2003 6:35:29 PM
Apparently, your writing is on a good leg as well. Very nice job.
witch of endor (Poetry) - 10/31/2003 7:54:29 PM
FAntastic poem ,great form!
witch of endor (Poetry) - 10/31/2003 7:53:53 PM
Likewise...I don't recall the Witch of Endor but this will be a good reason to locate her. Great write.
Susan
witch of endor (Poetry) - 10/31/2003 7:45:08 PM
Great write and I love the way you ended it.
witch of endor (Poetry) - 10/31/2003 7:19:59 PM
Great work...I really do not remember the story of the Witch of Endor, but this is a wonderful poem.
a love-hate relationship with sticky things (it's a sickness i think) (Poetry) - 10/31/2003 1:15:32 PM
Yes I'm guilty!! What a unique write. Well penned.
a love-hate relationship with sticky things (it's a sickness i think) (Poetry) - 10/31/2003 10:25:20 AM
This poem was just darling!
Julie
a love-hate relationship with sticky things (it's a sickness i think) (Poetry) - 10/31/2003 9:34:50 AM
Great!...heheheh...ya gotta love it. I too remember putting clue on my hands and peeling it off like a snake shedding its skin...this is a wonderful bit of nostalgia.
a love-hate relationship with sticky things (it's a sickness i think) (Poetry) - 10/31/2003 8:29:03 AM
LOl i used to feel that way when i was a kid!
lol ty for the memory
stream train (Poetry) - 10/30/2003 3:45:56 AM
Mmmmmm what a wonderful piece, and I agree with Lady Peg..."Reading you IS like going through a dream!"
~Nikki~
stream train (Poetry) - 10/29/2003 11:08:04 PM
Memerizing write...wonderful!!!!
stream train (Poetry) - 10/29/2003 9:06:18 PM
This one is as moving as the others..I agree with the others it is fascinating.
stream train (Poetry) - 10/29/2003 7:13:40 PM
So not about Casey Jones:)) love the imagery, nice one
stream train (Poetry) - 10/29/2003 7:05:59 PM
wonderful poem ira
bakersfield...? doesn't merl haggard have something to do w/ bakersfield?
lines of distractions (Poetry) - 10/29/2003 6:29:21 AM
BRILLIANT work!
lines of distractions (Poetry) - 10/28/2003 10:49:31 PM
This is an awesome and moving write...very well done.
Allen
a kiss in the dark (Poetry) - 10/28/2003 6:33:32 AM
this makes me want to embrace what I push away
a kiss in the dark (Poetry) - 10/27/2003 9:59:32 PM
OH Ira! You did so good. This is excellent passion and I am a good judge of such. Thoroughly and utterly enjoyed this fantastic piece!
a kiss in the dark (Poetry) - 10/27/2003 8:20:07 PM
Beautiful emotional poetry.
'in a dream you are moving back again
and you always make me
want to return
cold winter nights
the fall foggy breath
in front of my face"
reconstruction (Poetry) - 10/27/2003 11:49:03 AM
This is one to slowly peel back the layers and relish each part! Bravo!
~Nikki~
reconstruction (Poetry) - 10/27/2003 8:33:11 AM
a dream with layers to peel back and examine...upon awakening
reconstruction (Poetry) - 10/26/2003 9:59:47 PM
Intriguing write, Ira, I almost read it as a song, which I think it could be. This would make a great refrain:
"and she said that the year
would be one of reflection
but i see it's importance
as so much more"
:)
reconstruction (Poetry) - 10/25/2003 11:37:42 PM
Very well done.
reconstruction (Poetry) - 10/25/2003 10:20:46 PM
Liked this one a lot Ira!
inside the rain (Poetry) - 10/25/2003 9:41:49 AM
Profound and compelling write.
inside the rain (Poetry) - 10/24/2003 6:45:38 PM
This is a wise embraced in poetic form that leaves the reader with much to ponder!Superb!
inside the rain (Poetry) - 10/23/2003 8:20:54 PM
Very interesting form, nicely done!!
inside the rain (Poetry) - 10/23/2003 7:10:14 PM
I love the form and the way the words pured out!
inside the rain (Poetry) - 10/23/2003 6:37:04 PM
Ira, this is a great piece and the flow is exceptional. It leaves a lot to think about. Outstanding!
JC xoxoxo
inside the rain (Poetry) - 10/23/2003 6:29:52 PM
Brilliant idea..excellent structure..Well executed work!
firelight dance (Poetry) - 10/22/2003 11:43:50 PM
Excellent work in this poem.
firelight dance (Poetry) - 10/22/2003 10:01:03 PM
Seriously good work Ira.
Great images, wording, and pace!
firelight dance (Poetry) - 10/22/2003 10:02:41 AM
Wonderful work..Awesome imagery!
venomn (Poetry) - 10/20/2003 10:07:52 PM
Wow this one leaves alot of thought.
venomn (Poetry) - 10/20/2003 7:58:43 PM
Excellent insight in this one of relationships.
venomn (Poetry) - 10/20/2003 6:53:50 PM
Very well penned and I can totally relate to what your saying! ~Z~
an otherwise peace (Poetry) - 10/20/2003 4:21:32 PM
Yea, I agree with Taylor, very mysterious... Thanks!
an otherwise peace (Poetry) - 10/20/2003 2:41:13 AM
Outstanding write Ira..
an otherwise peace (Poetry) - 10/19/2003 9:32:19 PM
Excellent reading in this one.
Touch of rushing and mystery too.
undercurrent (Poetry) - 10/19/2003 5:40:26 PM
Breathtaking write, Ira! :)
undercurrent (Poetry) - 10/19/2003 12:22:09 PM
Excellent piece.
undercurrent (Poetry) - 10/19/2003 11:34:36 AM
I am intrigued with this one excellent.
undercurrent (Poetry) - 10/19/2003 8:55:20 AM
Excellent capture of one of the dark dreams that sometimes infests our sleep.
Best regards,
Leland
undercurrent (Poetry) - 10/19/2003 8:09:47 AM
Very compelling write..Brilliant!
undercurrent (Poetry) - 10/19/2003 6:17:39 AM
Most Interesting write!!
Love Tinka
undercurrent (Poetry) - 10/19/2003 4:44:55 AM
Very intriguing write. Enjoyed it immensely.
undercurrent (Poetry) - 10/19/2003 1:42:56 AM
Ira - glad you visited my site and now I know of you and your lovely work :0) I enjoyed the composition of this poem - thanks for sharing.
undercurrent (Poetry) - 10/18/2003 11:10:45 PM
Brilliant. A triumph.
undercurrent (Poetry) - 10/18/2003 9:19:01 PM
Very emotional, well written poem! ~Z~
may before (Poetry) - 10/18/2003 2:12:21 PM
Very well drawn. Loved it.
may before (Poetry) - 10/18/2003 5:08:13 AM
This is very well done Ira!!
Love Tinka
may before (Poetry) - 10/18/2003 2:56:12 AM
Excellent write....BHUWAN
may before (Poetry) - 10/18/2003 12:56:47 AM
This is so well done.
Tay
may before (Poetry) - 10/17/2003 9:44:54 PM
Beautiful write...
God Bless
~Michelle~
confession (Poetry) - 10/17/2003 4:41:07 AM
Intense and so real, a heart venting write.
confession (Poetry) - 10/16/2003 11:56:26 PM
this is so powerful
confession (Poetry) - 10/16/2003 10:35:36 PM
Wow, this does make its case. This was good..
Allen
Tributary Flood (Poetry) - 10/16/2003 7:40:27 PM
i like it!
Tributary Flood (Poetry) - 10/16/2003 7:26:40 PM
Very interesting imagery in this poem. Liked it very much.
confession (Poetry) - 10/16/2003 7:20:39 PM
good vent!
Tributary Flood (Poetry) - 10/15/2003 6:15:00 PM
this is a beautiful, important piece of work...not often the two go together
jewel (Poetry) - 10/15/2003 11:37:26 AM
Uplifting insightful write Ira!!
Love Tinka
jewel (Poetry) - 10/15/2003 12:00:03 AM
Brilliant insightful work!
jewel (Poetry) - 10/14/2003 11:20:05 PM
Your poetry is a jewel
"search
to be this jewel
that you are
~the jewel~
glittering in light
of its own"
Taylor
jewel (Poetry) - 10/14/2003 10:58:46 PM
Brilliant work..
jewel (Poetry) - 10/14/2003 10:49:59 PM
Love the ending of this poem excellent.
jewel (Poetry) - 10/14/2003 10:37:46 PM
Very beautiful piece on letting ones light shine. "Uplifting"
Allen
tranquility (Poetry) - 10/13/2003 12:13:04 PM
Amazing write Ira!!
Love Tinka
tranquility (Poetry) - 10/13/2003 8:08:41 AM
Ira this is amazing imagery. Beautiful work.
tranquility (Poetry) - 10/12/2003 12:31:36 PM
Gorgeous piece.
:Through the blue i see your kingdom,
and nothing falters, nothing here.
When you close your eyes in dream,
can you see her tranquility?"
tranquility (Poetry) - 10/12/2003 11:57:56 AM
Some hot imagery in this amazing write..I especially impressed when you said--
"Lightly caressing the rising mass,
then receeding back into itself."
Justin D'Souza
through the mist (Poetry) - 10/10/2003 7:25:40 PM
There is something here of quality...may you find the magic within those misty places. Bright blessongs to you, Jim.
through the mist (Poetry) - 10/9/2003 1:54:36 PM
This poem is very deep. You evoked much feelings and emotions into this one. Excellent work!
others (Poetry) - 10/7/2003 5:43:43 PM
I...feel this. Feel I can relate. Wonderfully written.
-becca
intoxicating (eros) (Poetry) - 10/7/2003 5:41:33 PM
Aaaaah yes....
through the mist (Poetry) - 10/4/2003 7:48:34 PM
Yes, the last verse really brings it all home. Mist is one of my favorite things to write about. It lends a poem a haunting quality.
through the mist (Poetry) - 10/4/2003 3:22:35 PM
I love the last verse in particular..
through the mist (Poetry) - 10/4/2003 2:02:57 PM
Enjoyed reading this!!
Well penned!!
love Tinka
through the mist (Poetry) - 10/4/2003 12:48:22 PM
Such a lovely poem to read today! Beautiful!
Reindeer
spinning (Poetry) - 10/4/2003 8:16:09 AM
I like the "spin" you put on this...it keeps the reader going....
stay strong...
In Spirit,
Bear
spinning (Poetry) - 10/3/2003 11:31:57 PM
Very thought provoking write Ira!!
Love Tinka
HEAR (Poetry) - 10/2/2003 9:53:36 AM
Inspiration couched in eloquence and wisdom, Ira, wonderful write! It puts me in mind of my quote on my bio page:
"Make visible what, without you, might never have been seen."
Robert Bresson~French film director
:)
HEAR (Poetry) - 10/2/2003 3:50:37 AM
outstanding write!!!
hello? (Poetry) - 10/1/2003 1:56:12 PM
most interesting write Ira!!
love Tinka
HEAR (Poetry) - 10/1/2003 1:49:36 PM
Thought provoking write Ira!!
Welcome to my page!!
Love Tinka
HEAR (Poetry) - 10/1/2003 8:27:51 AM
Very nice. A wake up call of sorts.
HEAR (Poetry) - 10/1/2003 6:31:11 AM
an excellent write ira
HEAR (Poetry) - 9/30/2003 3:38:06 PM
Very profound verses and thoughts.
HEAR (Poetry) - 9/30/2003 3:07:11 PM
(((ira)))
profound, thought provoking, beautiful write
i hear you, loud and clear--thank you for sharing this outstanding piece
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :)
HEAR (Poetry) - 9/30/2003 2:32:25 PM
Excellent write.
shine (Poetry) - 9/29/2003 1:36:19 PM
This is absolutely astounding, Ira. It is lyrically haunting ~ not of this world.
shine (Poetry) - 9/28/2003 10:30:57 AM
So passionate and beautiful this shines.
Taylor
shine (Poetry) - 9/27/2003 6:05:56 PM
Lovely passionate expression in this poem...
shine (Poetry) - 9/27/2003 2:08:57 PM
Now this is intense, romantic and beautiful
others (Poetry) - 9/23/2003 11:51:08 PM
An artists mind sees it so well! Great work!
intoxicating (eros) (Poetry) - 9/23/2003 1:25:16 PM
This is beautiful, I love the word usage and imagery within it!
~Nikki~
intoxicating (eros) (Poetry) - 9/23/2003 10:50:22 AM
Very nice! Quite a moment to be in...
intoxicating (eros) (Poetry) - 9/23/2003 2:41:51 AM
Absolutely exquisite.
~Alexandra~
intoxicating (eros) (Poetry) - 9/22/2003 6:01:48 PM
A wonderful moment!
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
intoxicating (eros) (Poetry) - 9/22/2003 3:14:06 PM
Exquisite imagery! wonderful word usage!
lack (Poetry) - 9/21/2003 8:41:47 PM
So sad, yet insightful and wise...very fine work!
~Nikki~
lack (Poetry) - 9/21/2003 11:27:41 AM
Very insightful and well delivered! poetry that provokes one to think is what it's all about;-)!
the see girl (Poetry) - 9/21/2003 4:41:01 AM
Well written piece!!
tinka
lack (Poetry) - 9/21/2003 4:38:20 AM
Most interesting read!!
Tinka
lack (Poetry) - 9/20/2003 5:22:10 PM
Ira, music is the greatest passion of my life. come sing me a song? ok? Bill Murray.
Maybe you can even sing one of mine. Do you like a little country? Bill
lack (Poetry) - 9/20/2003 10:50:46 AM
How sad that most of us fail to read between the lines. I love this poem.
lack (Poetry) - 9/19/2003 10:25:55 PM
Makes want to grab a paint brush. Nicely done!
the see girl (Poetry) - 9/18/2003 2:32:48 PM
Some vivid images here, Ira,
and a well-evoked atmosphere.
I caught a glimpse of 9/11....
first in the shaft of light and the black hole,
then in the powerful elevator sequence...
not sure if that was your intent?
Nice work!
:)
Lary
others (Poetry) - 9/18/2003 2:23:09 PM
Hi Ira,
it's nice to meet you!
I really enjoy your ponderings here...
some familiar feelings, well expressed...
:)
Lary
a choice (Poetry) - 9/16/2003 9:27:00 PM
Well said,excellent points...
a choice (Poetry) - 9/16/2003 7:26:40 PM
It sounds as though you're talking to a
friend in this wonderfully written poem.
Excellent write. :o)
others (Poetry) - 9/16/2003 5:58:04 AM
This is one emotionally powerful write, felt the pain and frustration.
others (Poetry) - 9/16/2003 4:07:09 AM
lovely!!!!
others (Poetry) - 9/15/2003 7:17:17 PM
Beautifully written. I'm digging the flow.
:o)
for you (Poetry) - 9/14/2003 7:14:25 AM
A lovely poem Ira, and thanks for your kind
review on mine as well, and welcome. :o)
for you (Poetry) - 9/14/2003 3:59:45 AM
Ira...I loved this sweet write of yours....cheers....love n luck....BHUWAN
for you (Poetry) - 9/13/2003 10:13:22 PM
An interesting poem Ira - I don'tknow if I have welcomed you to the Den or not.. But in case I haven't.. Welcome hun.
Melanie
alright (Poetry) - 9/13/2003 5:19:52 PM
"the mouth that used to taste
the shimmering waves
of this body
that same mouth ranted
that mouth screamed concepts
that i thought were long dead"
Great description of a relationship gone sour. Very well done.
as usual (Poetry) - 9/13/2003 11:21:52 AM
I like this very much, the sensual yet surreal feeling it has.
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